【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 [& k7 N9 T) ?4 y" r& sThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ E6 K, n" G: S) ~  O# K! m9 s3 R+ F, zI already loved you with all my heart
& e3 ]5 j8 R8 v# f$ g: R8 pWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' ^$ j) f( J. [# tIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! C* Z. s2 f5 l" e# Q- {' t3 aI would probably know how you feel
* K+ F5 u; p, Q' RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ B1 M7 X7 f/ G, G; dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% y1 O5 {5 R" [2 e0 z3 XIf today isn’t too late,
5 E9 f- U" v/ j; VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" [6 m% O- M  i! y7 ^9 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# h4 w. l  D# V+ qEntrust my love within your heart
9 ]% |/ V! U7 z2 E5 g$ XLove… just the word love
! Z' T/ Y/ T9 _3 Q9 P8 u$ cWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 A6 h% K1 D, W0 l) P) _- K5 QI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, h7 m  e- W/ e" t% @: `$ kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 _! b* [9 g1 m  TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( X: M: U5 {; ^: f* S4 l2 aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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& Y8 m/ ?- W$ t* `1 s% I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 Y/ P1 U. F: L' q  i& H4 a# e4 Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 o+ f/ ?: X: J<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" Q5 Y* `! e/ N) F2 a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 S& }' U/ o6 x5 f2 B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- n" q) k( o- V0 q8 @& {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( }/ s4 K+ d4 ]2 [, z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 {, N( T; O4 f0 n5 b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 h9 J% R& t$ O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- r7 E; N* K1 U8 K0 p<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  h. w9 E: A8 \" b% V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( h. ?% Z- a. m3 y# H* u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! J/ `! F. l* L( V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. ]! j! f, ^! ]( P& `; N<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: `2 o$ ~( l& A* m8 b<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 _( D. A0 |2 q# i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' t/ z0 i) }7 [+ v# o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  q3 k& J( H3 p" a4 _8 f4 Y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( ~7 t+ x( w, n) g6 B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" l% |& s" |6 @' o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ @4 u0 D# @$ u1 u* B7 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 k0 w' T9 l+ p2 f: s* e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" r8 p! I! B! K3 b% G" A7 P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 s4 `. h  Q  h. X: M: _; Y$ T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( _2 K6 c% f# I! o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. `/ e- [+ i  g) `' g, i9 N6 V9 R<P>But I never did </P>
: K9 i# G& j( ~: |  Y<P>但我不会 </P>
+ b; K- P9 {. U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( n) l( F! Q0 J" F& L- p, s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) ~# T9 L+ U( r; t- N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" M/ [$ O& c6 P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' Z3 q1 o7 \, r1 k9 ]  F, f" n# C9 H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; D' v0 N+ A9 }8 u$ Z3 `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" b, S" B5 r# \1 ?, W# o. P* L. K. @* J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# F2 I5 n3 j1 D4 D/ o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 X% p! h4 p  V7 \" v) {9 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 @1 O8 Y; E" ~  ^2 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; Y# v! x# f+ Z' Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) P- F9 w2 ]4 n. }& W 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ n+ k+ T" ~5 @5 I  p: a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ K' i- L7 C! j6 I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>