【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% M. s5 r* H; q1 V" W& K/ H# i  z9 i我另将歌词附在此。
: M' w/ \1 n0 Y6 RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) N2 y: H" X, k/ v! j, bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ \. v+ h5 Z, E3 xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 L% {, ^7 \5 ]. J0 {( lI would probably know how you feel
2 m+ u  |- \& r+ P% g  gLove… just the word love
& N1 K$ Y( B# nWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ s8 [  Q5 W9 V1 sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% i; R% q5 \* H. t7 k8 r6 mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; k* T+ y1 {8 o# ]9 mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 h% }; a, O9 y* P& g+ D- ]! OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' n  e5 m' r6 f' _' a( uWhy is it so difficult to express?
* N1 u9 |0 R# g$ r" B- ~; i& N" bI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 f6 z, p. M0 E. `1 eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 U$ ]+ N5 H; e/ V" @# }8 {7 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, O4 o( f5 q9 \Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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. o) y2 }$ [7 y' S2 Y6 R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. q8 I: t4 `8 q: _) M$ l2 D<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) H3 r; A4 T) ~3 G$ ^$ t<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 `) u& u% B+ d* }' q4 k3 W+ L<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: I, d: H) @) e/ a3 T' h7 F7 _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: W; ?: m/ G# u4 @5 Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, H$ h2 p4 O) [$ E* T. [% ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% K  W& @+ x5 q4 b: H0 o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 ?( _3 @, U3 @5 _$ Q" Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 L* P5 o; K8 W6 y' n1 G! N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  Y: z" y8 @$ Q) X0 {<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) h) _9 a0 o% a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 G* h6 n) i' T- L7 X<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 i. K! g) o  Y! b- z2 O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' D2 F4 j) ^: Z% a1 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* \/ S& Y: j2 P0 ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 x7 P0 S! s% t% t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 E" r" N1 T% T% ?* u' Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 h* b8 E8 I, N2 v! m& q; l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& g$ n( O; a, O; c! Z6 c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! B$ l8 G* p& B5 t, R- p0 V7 q$ _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 [2 A7 I8 L; Z( e+ |$ y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# J2 d3 {! G7 Q- k* |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 e. h3 q4 W6 H3 T) ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 o2 \0 Y9 y: p: b; \) ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# y: N2 z; {8 r2 ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( e  S  w' A. E- [5 L4 j! Z2 V) q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: E( R4 o4 ]+ u5 E2 r# C, `( A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 l1 z9 R. L7 P5 y7 o2 `  s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 B& a) \0 Y6 H- w* R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ u. Z" ?$ Z# S4 t/ o3 W8 q/ Q8 n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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2 I/ \; y4 h/ z" b# j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 Q' J1 k  E+ I- b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>