【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 A3 s( K. V+ K  nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& r4 S$ C0 u* k+ T. l' l; ~) zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# K0 P. {9 v3 N3 N  s+ G% b) a% \But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 G$ R. z2 L# ]' C$ fIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) d5 C4 P+ L3 W# B' bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ b* `( |1 {& o1 Z& @! UI want to confess that I love you,
2 i- f* I; `& a  X& h, a3 g, t* xBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ h" E6 t* r& C7 b+ wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- o9 x' O1 H( U' F/ s  ^, }Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* }' s' x2 A+ c* BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! D) d0 u  N% b/ G7 aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 `: g3 C1 E+ k# FEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 E- ]- e0 F' J8 E- |9 Z. ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" k% H# V, x3 M( n& y& k( h<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' E% p' S  |1 K; v* o/ T7 k: M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 `6 m. c$ j" w: z; y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& R* I7 N, K$ y$ D* \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 e/ T. g/ |7 e3 `4 u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# u2 E' C; q) a* X" ]: w; }2 c<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' [# A9 x9 U2 ^8 \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 [) Y' a+ ]& K" D, E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 d0 U, ~' u) f1 |/ b& R2 P2 y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, t+ {; n  w; F- L' j. o<P>但我不会</P>
( U9 U1 T, ]7 f% ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 w+ C! x! L5 N0 I2 _' t% f* y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 \7 d  l8 F0 D2 c* A  g4 V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- {8 ^, Q* d5 X6 G4 R( S4 h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, _% J; q7 P4 e0 S& y3 G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ N0 G( Y( P8 `, W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& V, x, [. s, R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 Y" Y, u$ c3 D+ t( s/ j* p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. Y, _8 n- j, q* s. u" w) H2 k<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 U& E4 j5 o6 A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 `# v5 U8 ?& X' I8 ^+ {# K( U<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# a# n+ m( H+ e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ w- R5 D+ t; q5 b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 S1 N/ h* w0 r! i' ^- f# S+ n* y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# k  `& G( [% k9 H* x" s: C" Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! U* i1 O& Z3 d# t1 L9 r$ ^( X, m& j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, |* x" \7 b4 Q. ?# @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 G5 C7 H6 R" i# Z6 z: X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  b1 j$ i1 v$ g5 w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  Q2 v+ {# K2 L: H7 y: I 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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( H3 Q- `3 p/ m) e6 W9 X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' a* Q! j5 K( c, X% m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>