【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 j$ ~+ }1 z3 Y& U我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( x7 H, Z* t" {( _! E: M) }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 r: h9 Z) D. C, m# Q. M2 d; {: qWe meet and talk everyday,
0 W' W2 |/ j/ ?/ lBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- b# s; K+ u  b$ B; E' pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) r" N5 }8 d5 `; eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 ^: o$ I5 j1 |- F) ]If today isn’t too late,
4 L: P% T+ S  k: ^4 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 ^+ x; |3 m7 \1 }Entrust my love within your heart
9 [7 d6 _( Q7 QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 x0 _7 g5 O' O. E$ IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! G2 I/ e/ s9 p& J& F. b0 h& NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" B/ r' Q( @0 m% N+ K0 ]' t; w" eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 X2 m& k6 x) y. K+ f9 _4 ~Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 S9 Q! Z) N+ c4 J: f; N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 i# X" w! N5 e1 S. B7 v! @5 _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 g7 G: I  I( h4 I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 f/ d7 Q! l4 s2 u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* s: k2 q5 x# t0 z7 e. O# U. O<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 e% }/ `5 f3 Y  t) P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 I9 w6 P: P( t( ^8 i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) @2 G- V1 G( E# f% ^" V( o0 {. F<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; {+ ]& }4 |' `8 h0 H, \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 q9 P, F* ~1 G, \# s0 {5 x<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ U1 \9 u9 x1 `6 E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  e" b' e3 b. q$ L4 ~4 e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ p  r! U4 |6 E9 _6 L<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 T, h9 |0 b) {; a& R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( J7 I+ _: \$ g- J0 K" i- K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; Q& f$ J0 r8 q% @+ G! n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 Y, g: n& n0 v: b" l' I, }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 j% d5 S1 e" `5 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ ^; I/ S# |! \; B8 U( c% }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* s; E' J# f* v; i6 K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& g6 ?$ u. i7 T3 h0 P" L: r<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& G% y0 j" v8 C" }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 N! L/ b( _# s" \0 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. c! {' b0 w) e6 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 ~- g- m' E  f9 i3 Z% j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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( H+ j, z9 M$ e$ J* e& f; ]" w这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* Y7 M1 O2 O$ q6 j( b- ~( z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>