【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( x+ d2 Z. V5 M2 {8 V, ]我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 D% t, ^' @; w2 A9 }# oFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 s3 g8 |2 w6 a. j5 Q8 cWe meet and talk everyday,
! q* j) J7 O  @1 ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 t7 C6 o0 Y7 s, K; M  l7 H5 T( z$ E* nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! w) j; W" W5 B4 x/ z- _1 cI would probably know how you feel
% }! Y/ s% Q9 L$ ]( @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 f0 w( e2 T/ g5 @- E/ y  a2 G" LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 W5 D% ^. i% nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 ]- p7 z4 l( R$ J* `8 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% U+ F% Q$ S9 R, R  i/ P5 z2 TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 E) E6 v9 U  K: vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 Q( p/ n1 ^8 b+ \, J0 o' ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, r9 t/ \* s2 c% rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 I( p" w2 f: {3 Z8 \8 W" HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 F6 Z  @5 n5 i% L% gCan I entrust it to you?
4 ]2 j' a$ V* ~5 qEntrust my love within your heart
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( I! s! N3 x  t( w6 M  F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 P3 F. v% h2 R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& `# U5 Z! M9 c2 p1 d2 v; z. |8 J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& @  \/ f% c0 O  P% j<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) g3 z4 ?* {. J5 ]) G- `, R6 g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 ?% b- U0 S' T' j# Z9 W$ x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ S9 V' g2 V3 A  ?3 Y. s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 L% E- B1 u7 f6 z: i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 z  J% Q$ t9 S! D& [<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ G1 b/ ^1 U. ?2 P. e# E  U2 d# h' |<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 T- A4 i0 p, [" U% N( P<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* ~3 i$ _- X0 H" t4 F  X<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 F( O: w2 ?% n% Z$ j+ R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 W5 y$ h" p4 k" A/ v3 S. e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 q" @- m6 ~9 s+ S$ [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% f- Z" x. P# j$ n6 C2 v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( U5 H3 z" b: [( ?9 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 U3 Y1 L/ C( C1 {3 p% e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 [. T. [2 z! w& W2 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% O; |/ c, W, F! G2 g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* K" K* y0 k( E$ D1 T  P- {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 d7 T7 r$ H5 R8 [8 }0 a7 {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ ]9 Q2 M6 }+ j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 m, J8 R' G) U% i- F<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 a: M2 l: a  |0 J8 U<P>But I never did </P>
6 Q2 c  R7 }* j% \+ y9 p! d<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" O1 q5 ?6 v# P9 E! o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 h) L( W& A. Z) V4 v! q2 Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 D+ k, p% @4 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 q$ K; M! N9 u; h5 {+ K9 t6 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, w7 d( Y$ K' l, K& j, T2 {  p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# F8 t2 h/ ^- r/ n) K. G0 O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( m& S" ]- C6 O, ?" R5 H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 O% }) ?9 ]# \. J这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& v: M6 P$ p1 w0 z; F( r1 s; _<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>