【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# E! a. Z% W% h/ a5 j+ L2 iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 B1 u8 Q' R3 L9 yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# W* R  _1 {/ V3 r8 E* CI already loved you with all my heart
- L; Q7 p. f. c3 Q* I* Y# m. KWe meet and talk everyday,
% h) D& H2 V9 JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 F3 I* B9 ]" g, d8 P) ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 W& m; r# h+ Y* F- Y  J' _Why is it so difficult to express?
( L/ o2 E0 P3 b7 ^" ~+ O9 D- HI want to confess that I love you,
# W# e9 Q9 x: @5 e2 L: ?But I never did
& c6 u4 I: w) Z: l4 K* ?: bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) D0 j2 m2 q7 q3 U. nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 E# O; P; f/ n  M7 |# ?$ m3 iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 l  m& K( v0 c9 I3 D* f8 ~" ]1 uCan I entrust it to you?
' a7 W# K0 D& T! Q0 XEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' v5 n* q$ c, F4 h" j- K3 iWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% M  D: d  P+ @2 v4 \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% }7 d4 M# V7 B# HIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* M  e/ U4 P; F( V; g% c8 lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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- t" n( `+ @% f+ P' X: m' ^0 d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  x4 h9 G$ M7 O: W* V( H4 H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( W4 a& l" }9 K$ P$ q! X( ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 b7 F( }. G9 t$ F% E/ [; k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ X, P  g7 R9 _2 F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 T1 y4 A# N8 U; e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 p. L; u3 k4 [) w* P0 @<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& Y" V, q6 T; i! ~; l- q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% _! u/ p! v6 b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ H' ^4 V- d* L/ E9 z- H" M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 F! T1 F; B. e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
+ {+ ?1 l" }: n( s' t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' t7 D  q2 ^4 ?5 q- C4 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! U# S1 ~6 V- {8 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% [, b" A$ b4 c  I9 ~) S# J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 {' Z' B! S6 o5 O) E! r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 `# f5 `- }6 G* b7 U, R2 T  |; L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' r: @+ U8 A- G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 m3 z2 P" z: D8 z* |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# G- V& y& s) u6 n' R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, }  w3 d- T4 i: S+ N2 ]/ m1 z<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 X) b* C8 \/ o1 R$ t7 i2 G5 z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; G5 K7 e4 ~8 `4 g, `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. a5 M% e) N% B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 a5 R0 n* k: x, U4 c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. w4 @# \; a5 t& Q9 I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 f0 ^. k" m8 }4 |2 x1 c) g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! T# z' L  G5 O% j# `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 O3 @1 H2 q: i5 x, D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  b+ Z( ]+ y% Y0 {& f3 J9 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" P5 e$ W( z9 m1 g5 X) B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 z3 r, u. R* f/ P' _" s. [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& o1 x# C0 E, j3 f# J 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 W8 k' o) L+ r  x$ |; p- l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 N! ^( w7 P" y7 m; W% g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>