【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
0 k- W* q; Y1 O; z8 e6 C& G+ EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 F8 ?# U/ U2 E: L$ YThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: g, X+ U  |- o7 m; FFrom the first moment we met,
: `3 A" A& [) `7 a9 p' l' I+ bI already loved you with all my heart
* w1 _  k( [0 u/ ]5 e9 L6 yWe meet and talk everyday,
7 ^* e' b! o' x: |& U6 \% l' l, dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% ?2 y( d0 P7 Z8 y8 JI would probably know how you feel
+ c% K( E; ~  {- x8 dLove… just the word love
$ B: M- }1 f4 T( hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 h2 g( S) t: S; ]$ {% \6 e0 mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" `$ D0 Q8 \; r; u0 mEntrust my love within your heart
- A) B6 A* I9 T: T$ p3 |3 n0 A0 _+ bLove… just the word love
( [: E$ t% a/ U+ I$ j, ~3 LWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; z: M: ?- ]5 S  S& r( UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. ~6 U/ d% ~( V( p2 L: wCan I entrust it to you?
: f* H! ~" Z0 Y7 s( BEntrust my love within your heart

8 ?7 a' D4 @" T( G! j' o# Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( g/ G  [  R5 Y9 S/ |- A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! S4 C( I' i0 @4 w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; @1 J' F4 L' S- E5 n; @1 W7 g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' J3 ^( t, d% @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) ^- d% W9 Z& X; y6 }. X6 N# v( u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 t; G5 Z. |, Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. o. f# T! [/ P" S+ s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ R6 f+ k6 }2 x1 `, X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% r% Z) ]6 U  G- q7 J& L) {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 A: n. M6 @' M' J1 U- z% G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ r! _7 F5 Q8 f/ O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, i1 p% j' O. z! x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 D# w# U, s$ i4 I8 r0 K6 ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) x; h( `& d( A" J( C: ?- r- R! L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 L0 }% V' |) X5 l3 G! Q0 K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 R# c' c5 k! `  z' G3 [( X8 e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ L5 q1 p  e4 I% B9 p0 B/ P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  @# @: E7 a* s- R4 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 Z. m& k9 y5 b) M4 N' t, ]" j% ?# |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 f2 o( N: C, |( K) R- e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. f: M) d. Z1 r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: c0 e7 {# w; p) w  L. H: O* @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 k1 s( [" F# c# I( h% ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 U$ Y% d. o7 ^4 B# R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ F: d& p" R$ ?( n6 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, d! R( V, H6 b' s+ R6 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# h$ k1 X* F9 y* n8 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# E& N" j" p; c. i& d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: [; a; Z# p3 K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ M( g+ a' A9 Q: j2 Y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>