【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; `' t6 ~" ^# M& ^我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 D- C: S9 I7 W: \6 D/ t( ~I already loved you with all my heart
# ]' r. v4 O+ [5 Q) W8 @5 qWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' ~7 a* n, I5 d. N, }; H# Z1 MI would probably know how you feel
* M5 e3 p" H% ]( m4 ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 x9 y8 @4 T  BIf today isn’t too late,
8 E+ D* i* \6 J$ x+ A0 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; z- _2 z3 l& `4 NCan I entrust it to you?
4 n& h4 A) _5 L; Z* x+ L; {Entrust my love within your heart
+ T& F/ Y- D) H# ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 y! C! p5 p+ pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 o5 p9 Q6 A) J3 k" F& G, E3 |; }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: B- c9 V* s( BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 P/ W5 [+ p4 F6 Z4 o, ^& _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 l4 g$ y- k/ VEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 @5 a" X1 m$ `! `3 ~<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 [- n0 D$ [5 n) \1 v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; y& \( o2 F! w: c8 u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- L3 x0 y8 E- Y/ L) x$ o  t$ h<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ G& x* e$ t3 [- o2 q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% W( G/ \: K- f3 t7 F* _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ N% U+ l1 h, q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) [: K) N8 y* Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! q1 H# D+ ^& t, Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 }( ?" B2 P' S  B$ W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. `; y* F1 W9 d9 [$ Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 K4 \9 x+ b9 W, x" a- g4 P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 |. f2 w3 L# s  r. Q% F+ B; ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" L. `. `1 |$ [* Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- C  g' @3 T  L) o1 O3 q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, F' p$ h2 ^* X7 n. A+ u$ c" C/ y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 }5 f3 F* t" @# w3 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 ~) P2 Y! O7 M  ?! ]2 Y; L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  Z. X) O" `' D/ a! x- z  G6 j<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 W% V  T& g- M  R/ W8 a$ V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 X2 m4 \4 s: X4 `# W% I2 _( `<P>But I never did </P>
$ J& y' ?5 P8 J<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( r# R* O/ U1 }/ n: {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( r/ u, }1 W4 J0 R1 g5 V# B$ i7 S2 Q4 S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 \/ N# e: u$ b7 l/ ^. u2 s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 o" e& w4 c; W/ t! P$ f$ i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  h! T( e. W( o, ^8 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 I4 @4 k2 G. L. f0 m* z# \ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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) c( x. F( u- W4 X) E" I) s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% F2 J! E' o7 q- s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>