【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( |4 q, X9 N3 WFrom the first moment we met,
/ K' w6 D7 e. E" J2 i5 MI already loved you with all my heart
5 w# X  d, W$ j- `We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& F7 m3 N6 b( p3 p, H0 ^7 \/ GWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( t: u# i% p- u4 hBut I never did
& s9 f! z9 A, {$ z+ g8 XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) ^4 M! B, q6 w5 q7 t( Y6 A9 AIf today isn’t too late,
1 J. u1 F% K1 l% tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! ~8 p4 P) ~8 u2 _6 uEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& s$ {3 n5 N. ^8 m8 h. W6 sIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% ?3 N1 m6 W/ q0 P, s2 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 t9 s" U  }8 v% f, rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* I1 y1 l* J9 a8 Z, \1 {  e$ h1 E4 f" LCan I entrust it to you?
5 B8 n1 ?- T7 \Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& N  ?7 ?$ B) j; ?<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 g4 d7 k; l& |% \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# t5 S- c( u) {: r<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 N- ^/ [9 v4 O0 \5 c4 R! ], K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ V% t: Y0 O9 H5 u" |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  `$ c5 x6 o# O<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 F6 Q- N! D6 c7 Q5 t5 w8 I& y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* V" B$ _8 P: E' {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% e" r9 }5 Y9 p! ]6 \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ C* a+ l1 v# b0 x% w3 K<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ t9 R( Z5 Z- s  a3 K) Q6 i: W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: H! @: E, u; z/ l! R8 u( z. _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# [1 w: H! M; k$ E7 Y% U8 o- w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 R& j( n) A4 W/ {0 V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' _& ~. |- N; {6 O0 r+ E7 j! ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 o5 k, l! O! B* G. H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) w& X% l. w& z& J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 \4 l* ?5 W9 u1 f3 [3 Y) ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ [0 F, A9 _( A% U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, V8 P* m. x, A: ?) {3 W% n& A, p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- B/ I" D, [  u) H  Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( b) m8 v  I; b; m/ f+ ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- k5 g6 l  s) d2 g4 R8 C0 b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 D0 `$ G- o& A. Y. r4 N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  D0 J, S) l) W/ e1 I* f! R& C<P>But I never did </P>
& H/ |1 ~( e+ u. [* F<P>但我不会 </P>
' k" T  E! Y: \, D* H<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 I$ J- d( i6 |7 ]' `0 r2 P" b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  R) Y: P( a% j% G) ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& W! K8 u( S, f2 @, E( m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 z- Z2 o: @$ Y3 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 f( x8 A$ ^; \& q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! y- p! l$ f* ^* F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  F/ [0 T' ~$ Y5 V  |. u, B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' \' x: C5 Q  K( [$ S: D( H: c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' F! x+ T/ Y; J4 v. f3 B: F 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- p# E6 H* t6 o7 k) A) Y1 N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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$ w. [- C% x) T0 Y4 Y<P>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>