【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 |7 G1 v& i7 e我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, Y, [8 w. k. |: c; I7 Z' AI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 \0 ?5 @. S% `- GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% ?, @% G. F7 E* GI would probably know how you feel
5 N/ ~9 H# X' Z$ m) ~; i/ @7 J- GLove… just the word love
+ h( L) N% d& V. I/ JWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 G* n& t( ^! RI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 f4 [2 [7 o! s4 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: p4 Z) z$ I! Z/ S1 kIf today isn’t too late,
9 M) e1 H3 p3 t+ v1 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ o9 [( r3 C% T) {/ G  @8 ^4 dEntrust my love within your heart
) ?1 T9 U* ^% z  {7 wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' E! M3 b$ b( ~8 {' q' b$ H" VEntrust my love within your heart
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% X' M; d% m( `* Z' q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* a% v5 }9 k4 c& ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 |, m/ [5 B) V0 [+ v- O# S<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ n' \5 k0 H0 ^) M& ]6 S<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! |% b# e9 [/ T- M0 S! H9 W, u5 W6 I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! J9 y+ N( i7 C% r4 X* D& v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 t  Z, B) q) f7 G' |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 H; Q8 F4 _% Y& x" u<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 ~- I. v2 Q2 q9 u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 x  e! j1 ~. x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 i: u) E# C3 }& m) q5 l<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ M& o0 t* q# Q0 M3 v1 O$ |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) D, ^. v; k8 U: V; \+ Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ }. `; e( n. a<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 k1 ]) M  C3 G  F" B- M- F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 z' i$ `2 A- z( B$ H+ \! I<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" c3 p* m- ^0 m" j$ c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% i7 C, S( w1 R" Y: ]0 b- T3 t* f% d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 \7 N* @& B7 o7 a% _1 x1 q: j8 H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 N4 h  T6 g' G0 m$ \0 }, _8 {$ `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. |" f( J* L3 ]* M' F7 N5 _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* A9 c# a3 B& ~. t+ x8 q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 J1 C6 Y9 m& V0 q, L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 N4 P* r. L' W- v2 z$ W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ u, V' z7 Z4 F  r4 Y6 z+ `+ W. L- H<P>But I never did </P>
! B' _2 j$ R: G) {5 N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, C. S: l+ ?2 ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 K, c3 `2 M8 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- K# c0 @, _; k7 ?1 A6 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 E4 V/ P- L2 S& x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 Q9 t9 G, t$ X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# J) g1 V6 Y7 E" N- _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>