【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 ]( L4 g; [7 R- |& Z. }From the first moment we met,
" b/ h2 I& ]' \) yI already loved you with all my heart
. h. ~2 h1 D! y/ b* e2 CWe meet and talk everyday,
. H+ ^0 I! ~$ A3 o+ @7 yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& B, F7 O% k1 p2 z' t, {( J) xI would probably know how you feel
- X& R# q: h5 a  A( l* {0 yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ f0 C; Y: z& M9 oI want to confess that I love you,
1 n, L' ?, P* B, nBut I never did
( P  v4 G) y, V$ y; OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 T' v! R3 f" Q8 X% V' B9 iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 B* Y' t- I# e: V; t  R( KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- i: M* O, J+ r: ?" s8 w8 KEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 k, K5 u+ s2 z7 Z6 z' N# X' e7 MI want to confess that I love you,
$ S5 [0 W4 L  e' G2 I2 MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' S: G1 K  ?3 q: i( G" u( x+ HIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" K. i2 e5 @0 e, s- N4 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# H: `4 p  ^: Y$ Z: h7 ?. L- ^  \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% ]4 O: F0 d: T: {% z* c  fEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( a0 _% |& u+ R3 v0 S3 Z  L6 ?<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 T$ f; w2 q! B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( [: k6 i! V1 m" w# R* y( n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- k" v2 ?& |  W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' {. M7 k: y  g* o: x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ L( _8 U1 s8 T! w: |& M9 Z( U) U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 f7 {* Y2 X) h& H, F: A! d3 m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) o0 L9 I8 W: B2 S; l' r$ E: e+ S/ I<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 G) p8 [5 L5 V, p4 w: ~1 y<P>但我不会</P>
8 h% |( q6 N2 ^. a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! N! g1 t' ]+ c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# @5 d+ R2 v/ |) t( W& s+ H9 c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% ^; n% m6 ~/ R: @- _8 a' C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! x" n- p8 T# V  `, U* w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( Y: k8 `& p& Q/ ^# F) Y  W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ |3 K6 \8 b# W. m) T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ i! a% Z6 n0 D# V! K" j$ i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 N" _9 _5 }8 T- `' }9 s! k- f9 V2 |<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 r! K( A; Z+ j- @, h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) X9 s' q9 n5 v# i4 u& R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ a* H$ v1 c, a" {& h: ?" e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( @. P9 [1 t- R& I7 W. K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ T5 A/ V0 n, X: n+ n0 k7 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ F/ j3 k0 ]' m: U- s$ T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ [; j8 K: c+ k3 d, x<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( r; a6 h/ D% T" i% F2 B/ ?2 V1 u$ B
* @# U4 g; P3 E% Y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
3 ]# g/ m, S  N, r, v' W. _, d1 u
- G' x# \6 Z: n6 }1 L% T! _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 }! ^8 W" o1 \: h7 Q& J* f9 m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  Y% |6 M9 \+ A6 H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>