【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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1 H. x$ @3 W( Y/ O6 T我另将歌词附在此。
7 q3 [4 F/ h! Z$ T; `! q, LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ ]( N" F6 S0 S. `- p1 ^: h2 |9 _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( w" e- S/ `3 ?5 E/ ?) S8 NFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( M! d& d+ u2 g- S4 C5 O' X+ ^7 mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 E  u/ G1 @. R$ Z* J: }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  R6 `( r& l0 [. ]* [I want to confess that I love you,
# }0 }. b1 @9 W, `1 ~4 h$ bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 v7 ?/ V; i" P& K7 E; TIf today isn’t too late,
  R6 w& R% U) yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- k% I) g3 V, x1 g# P9 XBut I never did
5 H. {2 U4 l9 d1 e  q$ bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 _, c+ G, a1 P; nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; a' y2 V+ k- ~* }/ M( C' eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
" d% J! G/ Y' O/ t8 wEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. I# B) Q( A  e) L3 ^" z# g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" ]3 m* s& F/ x4 X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 P9 {$ s  O  D9 |' q# ^+ @8 K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, j+ f  v/ p7 }* ~0 C- c6 E( R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ w& H. A. q  g; |+ H. u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 k; r' G9 n% z; P* f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' v9 s( l+ ~/ n9 ]2 r, U! W* B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 ^% ]6 A5 h6 G8 ^" _$ \! H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ f0 N0 }! Z' Z6 ]+ G" g8 O" v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 k- `: I1 f; F/ |( l' [/ e- G) R<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 C8 I) F/ k; `, `: }( _, ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* \& L1 J9 `) i7 O" w$ w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 x8 y  k3 a* |  e/ x5 g- R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 ^7 l& b, e+ ]4 J2 H5 D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% b, \' K. M! a4 v: ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# N' r* A! x1 _; F" q& O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 J" N. R8 Y3 K# B" V% t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( s( ?' t+ `/ B+ }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! C3 G1 f$ s5 q2 L9 l/ M+ N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! C, Y7 k. A) T0 @' s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ U( ^0 P1 Y. M7 d# y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ z. b6 W3 h! \3 a5 o6 f9 ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) V6 h6 D* G, l$ d6 d* ^- H" a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 ^8 u* x- U7 Z; \2 ?9 T6 d6 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ O1 Y. s5 K" T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 L. V: L4 p) g  @/ {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& Q, R- G' {; `8 @6 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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( M9 ]* M; T% r5 c; [! \这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>