【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 H) L1 h9 H5 u& {4 n! V# p! U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ Z! Q- h& t- n9 Q; Q* G8 S5 pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 Q# `/ I8 o/ R/ a* L- @: Y1 @Seeing the sky content with its love
2 C" E; S% O; q' @/ M0 t" H3 Y- Q9 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 H# `( ~7 d' s  _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# i# A: A& M- @Every other word you utter is love
7 E# m0 O9 O2 x& b( E+ B$ TI really want to know just how much you love me
) f5 c) o2 o9 E3 T0 Z/ K. fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 X" ]' Y3 y* N" ^' |4 J: ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( C; u3 \5 z4 M5 R3 k. V) s, e, yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ B7 y8 Z4 N0 xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; y' U" o) {$ ^# _I regret not dying
# E2 ?$ `  a* E* K: i' Z6 P0 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) S, O+ x  q4 H2 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; K' L3 T; U/ b1 s$ n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 v/ Y) k4 _0 O$ e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 U# E" b' F) ^0 D, Q. Q6 g4 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 y  [" ]6 p1 L' H  Q$ q8 L3 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 X& n- A6 l- Y! i: N7 J0 M" s- t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; t! x0 [) b( T' I0 j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* B0 ]5 D, J5 A6 R; ], Y" r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ y9 o0 H0 n! c: }* d: y/ x2 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# Z3 J2 u# F: k5 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 W: _, t4 d5 ]# }' a; C! i" E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: W! R, y, L+ x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, H" Q. o% m3 V5 r3 P; X' h1 H: i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% X" Y) u8 j) G% ]) |0 e. A+ f& P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  `8 i* f& `) {% S* ^: F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: Z3 w9 c6 C0 z: V4 ~5 e) n$ S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  Z  d0 C/ `5 |/ d, d+ A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  q# _* C; ^" C" s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 S4 T' i$ M6 Q: F/ e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 x) ?: j8 p( L! G- u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( c* r# m* g6 a, }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( O; Q7 i( e# ]8 f3 ~( V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 n1 T0 y/ }. x+ o& H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

4 {5 `: l& r& W; E) K, d6 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 F; P) R9 l5 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>