【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! g" E& p4 B* `- v  k歌词我附在后面。
- ]( x* r' u9 I, a# rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# ?. `5 y3 E3 C4 ?& iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 X/ m/ e5 Z( iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- g$ m; E; a) Q: C! o/ z3 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 }- S( v+ w0 d; c1 `9 \1 O: DI really want to know just how much you love me
/ j. [; ?- p+ wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# K8 S' {2 m/ X0 b1 o/ _8 S" nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- l/ j( o( ]& }' cI want so much to see inside your heart
1 r9 P& \' [$ i* p) PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* Q5 J) j6 L" tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; J# N" p4 `, w9 XWith such a tongue as yours,
% S+ \% S# x! N3 }; _! Q  @6 wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 l) v+ [. ?; d6 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 E5 a' A# G; }% c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) p/ G, I( d3 }8 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 ?+ p' p0 d, x) @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: y: R; }( N' U9 e1 I1 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# e* l6 s: a7 c7 `4 V8 b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: j, r1 `+ l% x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ K8 |- E0 N+ [( U; u5 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" F; r' p2 C$ u1 \7 c  u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 C# k1 q0 @  [3 U, S' |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 u, Z8 M" |( @4 g/ W* e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 ?' d' @4 R2 ~) o7 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: g5 ]8 x- ]0 A4 S, c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& J! ?. W& n3 d9 [# I0 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% h% t) }, D8 H6 C/ E8 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  r# F+ J) t. ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 c! g4 v( W1 x* o; |: r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 P; f  q9 C0 I+ w$ |- Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 b0 ^; [/ d7 n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: m" m: n) K+ M5 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 @8 n  H2 S! d7 z/ i* J* A' g2 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- P% V/ t- x2 O' A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( z2 V: H0 j1 k# L4 W3 n# ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! s2 H8 h9 u( g% S% c4 V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ b4 }) m9 h4 j3 p# U3 `. ]- D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ V0 D$ t! }1 L% r' s. |- g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  `: W: s! W% A: c* K  p; s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 k3 r/ w7 P2 j/ x5 a" i, d$ J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 T5 E6 y3 p. e0 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 s' g6 e% C' i5 m( `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; u' |( _/ n2 W+ M& e5 E/ D6 _  Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ G( }4 M9 w* J5 u& T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 z; o- A% P5 R0 j; Q( W我请你剖开它
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6 s' y) B% R- f3 f" Y! w/ m6 L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ j( H5 t* u, \' c0 t. V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>