【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ c3 C4 q6 |# R+ NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) x- U, A4 l& G& @3 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) U' X$ \7 o0 c9 i7 oSeeing the sky content with its love
# I) ~5 Q& s1 c2 O5 t% u( DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; o6 J6 h3 V0 v! O5 o0 dI love you I love you with all my heart
6 i; Y/ e! v, F$ L4 aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! O% u( M1 n# vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) S, o; f4 `7 N8 C0 f# }% @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 e# @: j3 g, S/ j; {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) R( |- @3 y. u' R/ q' A3 gWith such a tongue as yours,
( d. L# ]1 \* u8 C. _& S" VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 q9 C, N  P6 y/ c2 T: yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. v# g+ ^2 n! ^7 K$ t- eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: w5 O0 o  q: G4 Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! {: X& ^# a3 _0 q9 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 F1 J" e3 A- h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# f6 Y* ^  ]( Y$ F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ G6 i) {5 X4 W, }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 s! ~% H! D2 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' {- h: b9 U9 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 G! j' C  j- D) S* N/ i' H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 j% w% @1 i7 o; J" q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 N# A; w$ F4 V2 T- z. o( i) u, j3 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' J7 S# O2 d' j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: T/ ~. d. P! ~: n4 |) ~7 F3 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 G6 T  |( X; r/ R  `# Q3 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 s9 x( T5 R. p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% B& _# X1 J9 ~) s( w) B. c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! X( d1 M5 L4 J# O2 |, k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: r" H- v. A9 N7 s6 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: F- K6 j1 E9 q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* r0 e% h2 |9 H- d& ~" G3 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" O4 E* T. m: V+ W9 N3 F- w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% u% e+ g% s+ R4 b$ U; ^! t. D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% w0 t+ \6 P2 e$ y7 H<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ e& j( |/ N  ]; u0 z; N3 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 p) T1 R2 |: F( A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ L, Y. I0 u9 C' E: e: \' S! d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ d+ a. W- ?! d* X" Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>