【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ k8 z. G/ D$ |$ i歌词我附在后面。
% N" _( \( x( t! Z' GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 P! `5 _$ b9 x% J# x, `; ^" XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 P5 G5 J2 P, W% G! u! O$ dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( L! K7 ?6 n: e9 S& XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, V- \% A4 m2 k1 v' R. S$ BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# o8 g  i- p; ~I really want to know just how much you love me
- P- p0 T: n! r& [I love you I love you with all my heart
, d3 u% E, v2 k0 DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* F; x3 U5 |" }2 q2 hI want so much to see inside your heart
9 i3 q+ Q! ]1 f; ~3 h; l" j9 @3 `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& m9 t6 h9 D0 B0 e0 g, ?8 II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* y/ E) z2 t' g8 t" T8 \( t9 q4 q: vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& ?: G! |, e& x9 L* Z/ A- S) Y  lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" c  T# ]! |4 d: S; ]; X- F: _8 yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' P4 {6 |: ^  o  l! F# h) f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* S* o4 |, _' S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* L& }1 W+ k2 \  p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; ~% }1 k/ _7 J3 T& }/ M. T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 n: f' }* \( H3 v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) r; D" ]# A4 B" t; E$ N9 ]5 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; Y0 o" v# k) F: o7 t3 X5 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" E6 b; k1 H, l. f0 x1 _* R2 A% T! o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- Q5 k9 H8 v  f* N3 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 P: B: y8 \& h, G4 E2 ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ a9 e! a6 l5 L, h# d<P>你无需担心</P>
7 B5 q, W% N. d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 m+ d* l. r! I0 `0 {% I$ g; N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 T* [2 N" D* i1 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" V  U' G- _! [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 V% Z# t4 A) |* A9 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# [( m% q" ]  x6 y. t& O- V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! @, s, n1 ]2 Y2 h, r6 N- s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ H& a( P6 O* t2 G+ V$ `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# u2 u3 D5 [/ ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) I( `' p, V7 g+ |) h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 J$ k. y+ n( e% P/ \+ \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; ], s- s+ E* K4 b; u) j: G$ u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 x9 r3 B' s3 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 d  o# B4 b' r, Y8 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ n( I/ v2 f1 v' s% c1 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% N" c: v) _: T- Z4 v+ r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 Q2 v( Y( ?% y; P! x3 b7 Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) ?! p/ q  n4 D1 L+ H% P2 f1 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( x  V) v* g; b) ?0 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- G# L8 A5 g; }$ u5 f' L7 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 R) M( A$ ~9 t: t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; |& H0 T7 c* n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. X5 V# W+ {/ E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' u2 u5 ]: x7 ?% i' l% F7 V3 N我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 _2 M8 U9 Z  h. g+ W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>