【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! ]& o6 y/ i0 V1 X+ f7 i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. ^3 e; z! O2 Z3 k: Q& _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! D* N* d  l/ VWith the moon kissing it every night
! J. L4 q; W0 q: y( V' }# q; iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. S# E5 A, P4 c$ |5 Z! m0 e. dYou needn’t fear anything
. K0 @+ E1 S7 K6 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; P- x3 v0 F+ K6 S- nEvery other word you utter is love
' M; S9 R$ I9 |5 p1 c- gI really want to know just how much you love me
9 B9 o  T# X* h/ rI love you I love you with all my heart
* W. X: G0 }) y0 B+ ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! E, N1 d8 g8 p; v  v9 r7 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  S& \  l" [& \( ^+ n3 y. V# YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! i' [' c2 ^/ h# g9 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: F2 R' ?, w, F  lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) A# j2 v2 K6 zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( e. S2 |$ A1 Y, b4 [* X9 I* TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) [. J* w6 ^' ^; Q- ~1 j5 x$ u1 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 C) K: L+ k4 o; O4 w& |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ H8 R- y; J9 V0 v! C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ ?: {6 ?) p. {7 M5 K3 g, N2 y% v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& g5 w: v1 |$ Y. E4 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* X+ u* Z8 ^5 V! v" _% q+ n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- |% T1 Y* x1 s3 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ p4 b% M  e( x9 F( s" S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% j& [4 [5 E/ R+ c4 F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 B. _, D' o. S2 e7 P& Y" u1 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) y+ ^. J4 Y* F+ P! F. r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. P3 L. b8 V2 y" u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 z0 }- _% R' Z& ~- _$ [* O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ B& V/ X& R( ^0 s1 ~9 l+ m3 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ T; X: ?9 |  {" h4 J* N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( c6 C3 ]- G2 e2 G' \7 c8 T+ D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# m1 f5 O/ j% a" q/ M1 q8 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ ~% V* _% C8 f0 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 s  a3 w/ `) K) Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! m5 ]; u# I2 i8 z: r' S9 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 F0 A- U/ _( w% K6 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) ~# G0 t) z; f2 w" D7 W- E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 ?& S2 G; n9 t$ C5 n! z, Z2 L! ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  ?; M( b) `, n; L0 r, E! Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) }3 i, H" e- z6 _6 N5 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ N6 ?" d0 H, Q1 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 W& M7 W9 {; Y' f' R+ @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% d( N( X7 u) y我请你剖开它
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+ y1 U9 U8 M9 y, S9 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 N0 o0 R/ |, a* P/ K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>