【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  Z# V* T- C' |/ u8 IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 e! b% u& j8 j2 N2 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& y+ G6 a0 q& ?  F+ \( H' g$ sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, m5 Z$ w" j: r. l$ Q* U4 o1 P2 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! A- }, g/ a- W' t) KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 S3 ?; m/ P+ d6 d+ `0 WNothing can compare to my love
* a& l- x& _/ P$ N& f+ _$ xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( H) z* z: b  G1 j; [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# X- N% D# t& s5 p( M2 Y. O  sI want so much to see inside your heart
' V3 H) _1 _/ t  o" F' x" B. sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) L- n# n% |$ r: o3 \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 P7 a* l! Y6 j7 j; F1 o& v; |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) `2 o) X9 q8 r& }& |! `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' X3 {+ I( ~6 |  w3 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ C6 S2 e' f/ b6 j& s* i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ {) q( I8 R* v. \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# i9 v% _4 _$ c7 |0 O0 g2 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 G$ H4 t3 b9 V7 ^3 P! B- J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( t4 @6 Q1 r( m/ h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ j  |3 S% E- b+ W. U' R- n<P>你无需担心</P>
' G1 x) d. o+ {# n( p. A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 ^* n, j. m# k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ `" R; X/ H* s6 O- t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: t1 G* f( d$ D0 ^2 f4 w, Z% r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; p6 t; I& l- c- V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 _% B2 L* P/ f7 E& k) z/ f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 n2 G& X4 ~4 U& p5 e/ Q& F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# B$ y) Q6 D% F$ I: I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' c( u6 K% u! ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 D8 w+ c4 ]- F  q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& Z7 ]. h! Y8 u1 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 M+ V0 ^( I3 G( q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; Y* ~9 I! k) E4 ?( d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 r) S. r. b' o' Z! W5 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) d( d4 H4 H# }$ ^$ g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ h9 k# f2 d0 e  C7 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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; k( s  V: A; x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; N; V4 I$ X/ c" G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>