【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: a. n% w/ O1 U$ i! `. J+ q. EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ T: i1 F6 t7 U: ], H$ S4 d$ yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 V  i' n$ c) \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 q9 |1 w& D6 }7 `8 x; ^You needn’t fear anything
; G" @2 j; C9 C  |! ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 a6 a8 k6 I% [- ]  A) A" YNothing can compare to my love
; _) P4 S+ `7 s: o3 x0 G3 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& u+ [! v+ L. o& R# w+ W# RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# F) k6 j  o8 q" HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ C+ n: {2 f1 m7 w8 PI regret not dying
9 K$ x& P: h9 z8 _! T/ Y, @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# E6 y' q4 q" L# U+ ^" Y2 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 r$ W' ~; h2 S$ J/ n* g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 G% l  I  k8 h3 P- ?/ v; E3 T4 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) Y$ I  R- l& X# ^$ \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% }( K- ]9 r9 |8 |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ T" g3 Q% c3 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% h( ~+ n! O- i$ O1 ?2 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# `/ Z' G, Z% q0 h* a0 c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) `( Q2 K0 C) j3 [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) Z$ C# M# Q; u9 M8 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 t: h% H8 p# x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ P* {2 K! W8 X, x1 g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ E1 x4 w( M9 p. [/ k- o7 w/ M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: i7 m1 ^) l6 y! ?7 b3 R0 ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. }7 u9 f1 C- V6 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, o5 y: b7 x4 u+ G: t7 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 y  X! }3 J: X0 k, X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; }1 a  `8 p9 @! T1 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 |, ^) ~' Y9 _1 e' ~7 I6 \9 h* O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 l0 n: G5 o" e! Z" H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% Y* l2 V8 q+ b( r+ c2 N4 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% g% n: e, {5 p' o  |0 o# R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! L0 ^6 X4 y0 `0 i4 x* b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# Z7 E' A" R. y* Q8 }# Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 g, {$ H( D# R" U& z. ~( l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 `* m& P/ G! g& P% N0 @6 R- g0 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ m- g- X9 F9 b% ^6 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 g, d; i/ X1 a* L6 s: g' C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
/ E1 }8 ~1 K) c
: K5 a+ {! F4 t% ~我请你剖开它
& y# h4 Z  L* y, P; P& ?1 Q8 ~
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' s5 F0 F% e9 P* t) f1 v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>