【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 F/ H8 [( r: R5 u( U: @: ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& c: x3 Q5 u9 {# O2 X+ l# o- n6 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; C1 C% T1 ?( I  ^0 p/ T8 S: qThe sky is happy down to its soul
* P' Y8 N) I7 y/ R6 p' Y% k3 R- o9 F. HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( k. F2 v) @$ e# V% o) qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 T* R) @) f4 B( C' e+ B& ]. k4 T& @I want so much to see inside your heart
8 T0 [6 T. Q* w9 {% OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* ?1 }/ s$ G8 [  oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! c* B" z8 @, rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ r, h% A) m! n! G6 E: r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- }+ u( A- I, l! Z* E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) Q$ |4 x$ B5 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' _! ^: \/ {0 X- P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" b, f9 i* {$ b9 i8 d# W' z9 D; d# L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 H# j' Z! \3 b5 T# ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 X4 R# Z5 i0 H4 p  R2 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& b9 t. |' S+ n) H) i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 P4 J8 Z) O, D* H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" N: ^# ?5 x, ^) {% c. e7 u6 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 t0 b5 b4 ?% @- R* C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' g; z9 _5 T4 k& o  }) b9 X) U- |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- C% u, F& G# T* \6 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ A( j$ y8 f3 D# V; o( N3 B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 E& T6 l. R0 h3 K" h: K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ [( ~; }9 Y, K+ v' R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  C, K- f' R; [$ y* x3 n# Z% G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) s9 s# P  g$ _* W- d& ~4 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 M6 |; T. d/ j; z. `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 J( `  E: n  P% Y5 y6 ~: b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( c! N6 `! P7 K: k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 [1 L" A) L5 \4 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# M$ v8 N' l4 s8 G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 i- E4 _$ s1 @) P# h+ m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 J, H, s; t+ N$ I6 ~) T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* A  t6 ?8 E' n- ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 P4 P" r6 @& M6 k2 o0 N# V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% O3 ~& C0 H1 _6 p5 x  \) Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; `( I2 y/ o( }1 Q, x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>