【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 f* p% C; F- [8 a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# b/ E* \7 ]8 U+ I# L# E6 \( sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' v6 l* K5 J' T  u" y- |% FThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 \7 H, F, G9 ]1 S" \1 @- U0 PWith the moon kissing it every night
* \7 C+ P) Y' f/ FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  y/ s% x& l6 PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! C+ S* |5 N, t8 `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 N' U, B! R) t( h* V( Q6 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: ^4 O# g( i6 DI’m still filled with fear
  Y0 q$ g8 X' V+ l8 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: B& \2 n3 I0 a6 F1 h7 H3 q% TI regret not dying
" ^/ q5 g) U$ A! @# Z6 qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% n5 H' b3 C5 W& |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ E6 T( g% W2 M* L0 B* SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# G( J) O, b# T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 a3 b6 F1 J6 m2 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  K$ ~' Y6 O! j  E) ?5 d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: w5 ], [0 s. S" \9 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% C- m& o8 e2 c. Q( ?8 {( C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 f8 k, m, g4 s  X5 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 y# ^3 N. O& \- ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' n) Y( d) h0 a. I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 Z+ Q/ e$ h& ~5 c+ m1 `( u" i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& x3 |0 m1 M  o# ~+ v7 F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' @) v. v, N8 V, C6 |- t7 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ Y4 S! g( {7 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& L7 Z9 s1 m; x9 _3 \/ y$ b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! w/ M. n/ ~& w7 E) l( l2 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& l3 V3 P# a% l" y! Q) U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% Y& c* D5 ^" X  L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. G  M$ f) l$ ^: `# d6 c. q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' \( j! Z/ F' k/ v% C, I4 Q4 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& @6 t$ f# N. e2 h' ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& Q6 |% f6 q) |( P$ m9 y) o9 ^4 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, P4 c0 E, a) ?# h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  Z( A9 }( C$ M8 ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: u4 Q- j7 `+ y% q3 k" [5 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; d& c* _0 J8 J0 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 T, ]3 n7 E! M! Z) ^+ b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# Q4 f  _/ p7 J  U& i! `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" S  O7 j, }- z8 Y6 o% K+ f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% c9 @: Q8 [* ~. W# R- `9 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* N9 G7 m) x  J4 f1 G" ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( J1 D4 q  D% S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>