【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 l1 f3 l' M$ j& ]8 e  m2 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" P5 Q  ?) A$ w& g, l1 M- M( QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 j3 o6 C% X$ t4 nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- {% F2 T+ A+ W  u) K" TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( U6 [3 r' D1 u! N1 j- a) \3 nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 C1 U/ |3 a7 T6 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* y; J" l* _  e, V! DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& a- X1 y) k& H3 H; f* sI regret not dying
/ n  ~, D) _9 }5 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, \6 U/ m4 m, v9 E+ x# R3 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* J& B- q% u' n  n4 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ K9 P- [5 a$ `" L' L) }7 u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ j0 M4 X  |  d! }& n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" r- P* G0 t- L. Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ W* f  j, w' r$ C: J' P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 q" g& Y: S" M  @4 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ `) V% \. n1 v6 A; G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# z( f( {, b0 S, V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% I# U& _5 m. p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: v, r+ m# g+ g* [1 P* Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 q' ?6 A! A) P( Y$ h# e; X. v<P>你无需担心</P>
, G$ f) G% p7 o7 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' s* }! u5 K- w2 |5 U4 ~7 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: @% N$ L* O+ Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ @0 J* o" |$ p( S" {- o# }5 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 _5 S* H, b5 U# y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 b8 y* H. `7 h' r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* G; a7 Q$ X$ G; Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# t1 t9 c( f8 w$ L  f* e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: E" J; }& R& ~- [# U" B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; i7 Q4 Q  m$ ]" h8 d! f+ u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; |& L  @# h5 d" Y2 D/ l6 f5 m2 G, a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. c5 @9 X  t, A9 P) C) v. u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# i' D8 L' _) G$ z( n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

9 _4 A5 Z* m8 {0 ]" _; c1 J  I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; Q+ I! z4 T3 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>