【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. H+ A2 y- \& _+ j0 c0 Y; J+ YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 Q8 ~$ G6 R/ o' v, t7 VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ w$ W# r0 g* j% NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 x1 q# o7 d8 G1 ]- E/ cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ M' J9 t5 @% j" MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; e9 e1 y& Z2 G6 H2 q: E3 FEvery other word you utter is love
. C9 M, X9 y( Z8 k8 ~9 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
% D& Y' n0 D. d$ v: K& mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) p' s, ^0 W+ v' U/ M. J/ EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* v  U% A  z; }! w4 u3 {0 X" d0 V' h. R# XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* Q; |" k, M8 T6 s% \I regret not dying
' h" ^. ]. v5 H  }- LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& I4 `$ O# g  ^* v. T! bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 B8 W" l. `% {4 y' `& `8 b3 Y4 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 b( a% G( E. ^: X" y: z: {! `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 h. {. `' P7 X7 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" X& H* X( ~# \, C, o$ R/ z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ w2 K3 M$ \! e, q; H% H! I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 T# }1 ?0 w- x6 j. t! i+ F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& K& \9 e5 P# g6 Y( K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" C' o- h+ G9 D  v4 b2 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* B- J9 |: m% U9 i  m; H1 X8 `- [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. n7 T0 n+ }# p  y( y( O2 m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ b: v7 Z" ?7 z, ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 o& j! z( f! H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: O# N7 b5 {9 I) m! R! P* l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& x, h' L  O, h6 {5 h7 U3 w# o. o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 [+ f/ O4 g( p+ L6 f, P8 M# P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  ?* v( V9 a6 E# X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) }4 F; A% f4 f# O. Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' }9 g1 @0 J( ?2 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 f7 h) D3 u2 _4 x: l) w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ t" d5 R1 b% Y( @; d, ~2 f: F/ @5 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ V, I' ?* |4 i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( G: [8 U: o9 ~! J, a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 i' M+ Y& a: y; l1 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, D5 h# ]* l" \6 a* ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% M4 F) v" o; {: E/ U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) r8 f8 }* d7 F3 n' `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* t# g' G  v. P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

- O3 e# E; y" c% M3 [* \; O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 {6 f& [0 {0 W5 L2 P* Z$ P! _4 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>