【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( Z; R7 G) ?+ T, M# NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 T7 ^. j6 n$ W8 W& |% a, hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: |; o( D' n% zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' M9 a$ I0 i, l# L+ E: J7 z! vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" x  w9 s6 u0 x5 aWith the moon kissing it every night
, Q! H9 }, v# I, Y  ZSeeing the sky content with its love
/ K7 q# ?; w4 P8 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. c# I* X8 @6 D5 v. m2 e' qYou needn’t fear anything
# M0 q: z. F3 b* x3 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; r1 |# b% X( L4 P. j8 |; c  fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ q- ]/ S9 _5 Y1 q. D8 h1 ]$ QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. ]( z# f! u6 o* w5 S3 {$ xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: w& \: H+ _. T% p0 T& a1 D' hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: E/ T9 [& s* u# u6 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ M$ Z/ x3 b/ F+ u9 h( z! ~/ QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. H  s& A, h5 ~) j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ i1 a6 D9 F8 a" H% o9 K3 e5 W8 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' ?7 O5 ~( C/ H/ T( Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 ~6 h" g4 l' t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  k) N9 `2 K/ S3 \5 d2 f2 |# b. K9 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* S0 N* K2 t& Y* ?" d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% P: e/ @# e2 ?7 m% ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. j  }' q$ O* ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* i% u; r2 o2 R6 ~, R2 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; d2 s/ q* b$ A6 V4 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! k( S1 l. O. q' V  W3 N6 ^  D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! }2 M: `8 S+ h/ ?' w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; |# g2 X5 t) \0 p- t  z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 J: r3 H  S9 d/ J8 e  N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" @: F4 B, b( f, E: u: }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: O" J2 N- x' c' @8 U( b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 b  h; }3 _2 F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ A5 [- s& w' d" [; a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& e, _' @' M# p4 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" X/ c; ]3 z, |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 W7 A$ i) u/ Z0 f; k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ O. O8 k5 G( ?7 |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 X; E+ k2 h4 H! E/ j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 V& g# y0 s  _/ Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  y3 f- L' ]' X  e; i. q7 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ g* U5 ]$ V  ]6 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. a3 X. _! y0 c; O7 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% s( ~8 G# d! `' U8 W7 p) M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) L% y* U4 U& M$ y我请你剖开它

+ n0 e& G' i+ x  o, `4 w) R& O9 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 t7 s2 i) _8 B# u" [5 s( b6 l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>