【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ U% I  |1 K4 K. R+ ]' A5 h歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) z# V# i3 G+ T( }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' J. Q2 U2 ^6 \& DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 n$ N. [# H0 s- iThe sky is happy down to its soul
  U0 X) e$ e- z1 l5 h9 E+ `" C/ cWith the moon kissing it every night
1 F# ]: `" I9 K( _! i9 W5 S# ^- a' OSeeing the sky content with its love
; Q  B& [. [" ~) e2 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ A. n1 I7 }( b9 mEvery other word you utter is love
; i% I  H: \) OI really want to know just how much you love me
) X( ]! K8 }1 e/ o# p& ?I love you I love you with all my heart
0 \0 |3 w* H1 Y( p3 xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) W0 y) J4 _# u. C* D, ^3 J& @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; m* E% Q2 \7 k; B: VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ N; l3 b; W" W; X: c! h6 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" X* [- G( J1 R5 i6 q! O9 C, O4 }; qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 t4 }7 ^+ A/ E! p5 D2 J+ YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! U! w- i8 C1 f& s; [( ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 B4 ]) E' b5 R  Y2 m' W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! N8 R/ o6 s, U9 t9 h) K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 Y8 ~4 |% d- k$ t+ w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 _2 l' n' O& b  _& f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  ?$ q( v$ }4 a( }% A- o5 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 `  n4 i. Z9 E/ j) N; g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* R: w) @: Q2 _; M5 w/ g* J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 q5 `1 }: Z2 u/ \! ?0 x- B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 @% _" l! J" }0 ]9 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; O  A  E. M6 ^2 j7 \<P>你无需担心</P>
$ s/ o1 r/ |5 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  _- y2 X% h5 S1 h* y" b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 n7 j* w" d2 g; _8 m2 Z" a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- t8 p+ }8 x6 f5 d0 Z0 ?& B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! @( B) z3 J* z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* u/ Q9 x7 i: L6 {9 b) J; B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: E4 Z1 X  n, t& |* o' L/ b# t9 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  [: Q2 T6 t8 `4 e( r) C& @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! C2 }) V! c! G+ ~$ L% R2 J+ g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 O  c5 S4 z5 U. H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) w7 F& X! N9 k+ m! ~8 K! @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# |) \/ J' n% i! F- R7 U% X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* o( ^" X( @& z" \0 A) z' S<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ A; Z; @6 D8 @! R+ s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- e: U; d% T0 a  f8 ]- v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- R5 q' L6 o- z5 P) s4 U; a! @$ i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 X7 H0 o4 y: [7 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. h% Z9 H6 }8 |2 @/ t7 P. E& r' c2 ^" \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 ^5 N' [4 w% d9 e1 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( Z* p8 I3 T' U  V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 v! o/ u( G8 ^# k4 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>