【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, u5 h# j. v; J0 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 r% y. n4 S, P9 o' W# DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 u' A1 `, t6 V  g* f# XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* n& T2 Z  m4 P! G0 {. Q* _! nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, R9 L' t" f6 \! e- O6 qYou needn’t fear anything
' a- f/ ?6 _; R  p* F0 q  ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 I6 d7 T3 E5 N: Z6 JEvery other word you utter is love
) J9 @2 ?( ~) y. ZI really want to know just how much you love me
5 l: ]) n0 p/ ?, n0 k( j/ ?I love you I love you with all my heart
) Y7 |+ N$ `1 {8 L6 e' m) ?0 F) BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 J& S  q. G: y' k, NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ I- W7 ?8 h% R8 P7 |; T) ^I regret not dying
) b( D0 ^* C! v4 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& h, F; B9 _1 _0 g; @# v- UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ q5 L2 @) }1 n2 q7 e+ h6 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 l& }* d. ?1 `: K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 ]* A3 V4 p; Q( `, c8 e% _" h  p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& n- D1 K  U8 m1 {, d7 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ {' e& @; H7 Q- a* y5 y5 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, x, M* q1 p3 h+ H4 B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 o& k3 _/ b  g. G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ T1 [- \; D/ F; T: f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; e, w( Y8 }# r% ~" S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 x$ [# H8 c+ W# h, j% }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# A9 U* S. N8 e2 B) R1 D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' n4 f8 Q7 T, t4 T2 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; d" i) n  T0 a& `- R, W9 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 I7 b/ m# b* @6 A7 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 S& g3 K: m( e* l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ d( [0 s; `6 Y* v& M; q5 ~$ d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 J( G. U5 V+ x1 R* _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ r- b/ _  T! Y& \1 b8 n, A2 N+ C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 \6 P9 P+ g* h4 M4 ?, ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" K9 C. N, s! J+ ~# t; o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 y) Z4 d, w: W/ c' r& D  w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 O% u8 R& h% b" K+ [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- E. F+ c3 V( E+ U  ^' @$ y: }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- V7 R/ Y/ H/ R' _- o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ p  h8 Z/ k+ {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: I( |) ]( [: `! G# [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>