【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 z# U$ {' |. i$ ]+ a6 X0 m歌词我附在后面。
3 _- n5 J* Q: O1 z' o9 [5 ~" XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# h# C( |. Y0 |3 L9 Z  r6 R/ L# nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 ]* Q7 Z& s& Q/ TWith the moon kissing it every night
. R6 Q( d1 y* w  }Seeing the sky content with its love
5 I8 Y, A; S5 [' K8 i% b# @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ C4 U5 ]* A4 b% f  ~+ O) TEvery other word you utter is love
% Q, {' O" D# M" Y* tI really want to know just how much you love me
' I9 d- y" p, E- M# ~3 dI love you I love you with all my heart
, t% n3 H# ~6 a8 }3 ANothing can compare to my love
4 \1 t4 v5 V+ ?/ y3 T" F, vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 q! R  T) h7 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% J- [* O8 t# U$ H4 q4 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: M* A3 R0 K3 P. w( bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 ]' V  G  [* \! ~4 v3 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 o& n# R& A# @" A7 c9 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; z' Y" O; y: c: v  B# P+ X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 W+ K$ x5 n% ?3 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' e' ~4 F7 {: z6 \' b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* D: s* x9 _& A1 z5 H5 j( p9 d1 s& X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* |8 W) Z5 P( f! ]$ c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 z% E# r: {. T6 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& |& G0 U) A# ]- b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! I4 ?: O$ ]* ?) Y: l( N* K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 \) V; h, F$ b- i! b" T3 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. U" V3 R! u7 q! k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, I7 o8 Y3 b' F4 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ l' I2 o7 r& j9 i+ w8 F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  U* P+ L" S% j, z1 E. [# F* R9 ?3 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ v0 {. x  ?  o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ f6 d; t; u1 d- f  S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ k8 }+ R/ J, g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 S0 ], R0 C  |0 E% C( Z- T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% x  y" |2 i' h8 D# g7 E. ]1 E0 o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* a' A1 J- i$ l( I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  W5 @$ j' q, W* e$ l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; Z+ S( c5 ~* {; H6 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. j$ l5 t. q8 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% O2 z: |+ Y4 f  D* H' h" O# k: U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ c+ }+ ?: s' I  K, f5 [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  f, \: {& @+ `9 r% Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  N% l; _/ O6 I! I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 b8 R  i! e" }' d  m- v+ x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( Y2 g0 m/ Q- j. J' g/ C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ X: F% O( L7 |- l% Y: _" L+ S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% m8 i" F9 \9 k. c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>