【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; e9 Y3 z: g7 J5 I9 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 O: J: M+ O2 l1 p8 L: `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 b. s! a' U% l- z; }7 z4 A6 F' EThe sky is happy down to its soul
- K1 ]! s/ C) Z9 I: {With the moon kissing it every night
+ |4 u, K+ K! C6 n, A3 ~; `8 lSeeing the sky content with its love
. r) U# ?; M! U  eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 \2 {2 I5 l( J, ^# g9 X! _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 K$ X' _. [; m+ ]6 SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 ^$ g" r! @$ j' C9 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 `) \% l0 ~6 l3 kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) g( f  E  ?0 b! k, KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- C1 X9 O& Z% x! I! V* U" X9 z$ L( DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; u/ i6 ^6 L6 ~( \2 gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 _) Q4 Y9 C2 M. }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, q6 N4 x3 A: A/ r/ ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ O" c5 Q. |& w) w* e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ `3 _1 o5 y5 v' @. d+ R9 H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; e: w$ _: |9 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ x8 N% H4 D& Z% D: m& V, Q2 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 {- p# R, ?& z- K- k$ V' w. L: Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' _0 \1 X+ N8 N+ W/ c) S) ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 J* T4 Q& I: ?% ?8 L4 q' G; T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* z( q/ `6 j2 f) U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 E* U& _+ [, w( f* j; R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ k$ [0 `  f* w! n1 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  ?& g  S+ ^' C0 w/ Y6 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' J" M) z1 m3 |% S: j* E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( X; t/ A  y( r9 d* s# d: d5 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, Z" G, t9 n% c3 i" Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( y8 Q  P6 y9 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" D" ~2 g0 M- \: i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ S( D8 H6 Y; O5 }8 z+ j+ b- f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  t1 f' X4 L; T1 W( g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) k. v1 d2 V2 `1 {" y! q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 X6 [0 P" ~/ p<P>I regret not dying</P>
& N' m* n- ?" t- @  [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 L) S. x: e9 t% r/ s% K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. \% L; r5 @; S! U& H, i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 j6 ^. Z: Z+ d3 l  I# {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 t  D& d- j# H  B0 T2 G; [! l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 E% s  R. a1 W! e2 a1 d7 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' v: G6 k* Y  z/ v' j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 {: }4 d/ R, |/ L0 |' u4 p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 M# M$ C. l% W  f) f9 T& t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 V& P# L1 b0 G( b. `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. v% C) K6 G) [3 q/ w我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 c6 _2 e( Y" K1 g6 ~6 R5 Q* ~* e: s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>