【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" r( J! Y" M( R% V歌词我附在后面。
( N/ u1 A) \2 z  Y, A9 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" B+ j, u) E1 w- ~9 mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ G- U! V( x9 M% zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' \& ?1 \- Y8 U* T4 _  OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 v% e; J( v2 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( [& ^! k/ X4 A) r/ g7 LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ U, B1 ~6 Z! S! I8 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) n' F# q: H) f. R+ F6 L0 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: l( I6 @" i+ V6 h( Y4 A8 z; ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 k# ?) c4 x( h& nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 x1 Z. T$ G* Z0 u: F$ k, ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 ^3 H; A  M/ K2 N& Q/ N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 l% x% {" l' T6 n$ s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" w3 r) B! H9 g% {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 X/ y0 l! w( ^3 i" Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% x+ e! x" r) E3 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 W* h  m& }! q* k<P>你无需担心</P>
% t/ `! I8 E8 Q  `' C3 h3 h, f2 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  u& k  w8 I2 B* i& s2 z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& `' `% A4 S$ s( M- O6 T- c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 `! I1 U' R9 l! W2 p" g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; ]+ L3 d; \- S9 ~* a5 u- Y4 U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 m. G) p  |' L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- D# a3 k+ F' d# }* T6 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! x: V2 z$ Q% N8 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 T( G0 M' t" |) ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& O6 R6 s, S) Z* ?+ l" H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 f6 p9 m3 ~7 r& F3 J4 Q- U! E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 L5 q$ C1 j. G3 |9 D: o! L$ ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 ~" t* y) Y3 w% ^/ E0 r9 P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 z! {7 h, i7 x1 ?( W<P>I regret not dying</P>
: O5 o/ y& q) K* b) Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 u' ~' }- E" r( A8 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, x+ P) ~, ^4 X; U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# `3 H* a% k) p+ y0 H+ P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& @. V4 Y/ n$ F; [6 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) ^: \! k& f' F( X7 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! P/ X  }; f$ ~# b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' W* P$ `, Q* K" E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: l: E/ u4 k$ n我请你剖开它
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* b# A5 N2 R$ O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>