【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 i4 P" g1 M# L% AThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ G; r9 R- \3 jWith the moon kissing it every night
  y9 F9 Z! `$ y7 b) J$ bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 n( ]9 ~. N! Y( O6 q1 n6 iYou needn’t fear anything
% b. L+ r0 D" _3 uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  O+ h! A- _. J/ w% f, g& q  S' gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ p8 U0 `: f; R7 D" [2 e  dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  r- ]/ M/ i: s8 }3 d# P  ~! G4 UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ G' k4 L! B# `. S* C$ e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 p+ U9 G+ {$ j) W" q3 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 }; Y* v. T$ ]" c% ]/ z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) o3 b1 O9 }# m7 T1 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. Q+ V+ L% {/ d- k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# R2 e3 @5 ^4 z2 N- L- C- B3 e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 i$ B2 X2 L/ @) Q# T6 F# v5 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 t# `3 }* l9 E5 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 \* O5 }; T3 d( Z: h4 M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; v1 y4 e6 ?: {0 k0 k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, m- E7 H+ H& p3 J0 I/ \: P7 {/ H, x1 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ P. ?6 A, P: y& |6 G  u- e3 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 N% ?$ e  n2 y/ n  T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 h" s5 x# s9 w2 ~9 [# L( n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ G- |& p5 F3 I/ w$ Q" |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' f# V3 ~+ ^- t, I' Q1 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 C. ?( G' F; e8 \- d, [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 }+ m0 X2 @. X. u  U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( R! F; o, R# p' f/ _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) L/ H' Q2 B7 M! Z8 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* v; b* o% D' J4 m7 L, Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ a% F  Q1 c8 |4 Q  f7 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) m; q1 ^2 J: @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  a- ?* _; ^4 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- ]7 v6 [! q! @  ?, G0 s# P# m8 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>