【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 K& y7 U+ P' y6 t! `  J1 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  k! q3 b. H% i  ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! h' \8 l( ?1 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; H2 a9 ^. R5 X: xThe sky is happy down to its soul
) T& @' c: c1 [/ R! t5 pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 k+ s: e( l" l/ T  v6 mI really want to know just how much you love me
  \1 O% J  d1 f- P) ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; L0 z$ O. \3 |3 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% A# k$ ]4 O+ _) A( f1 P1 d9 A. {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) ^7 ^6 ~2 p( c9 S* SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: d! }  W, u) {: P' A8 m+ wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- P3 D0 n& W$ D) k% U( o! AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 P  c% h* N# c4 O, g0 Y7 V: k1 ^6 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* i6 r* \8 h- B1 J" z. g4 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! s- k% g, Q$ _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ {$ D; p/ N, f* ?8 Z% A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) Z9 H) g# O. u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* R9 G# w& V/ g0 |5 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 j1 u) ^4 j( S! c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  Z  q1 L$ M: [* S: v8 z  m# i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 c4 x$ ]# D, Z0 i1 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& Q3 z: |- K& n# U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. u* l4 j. H* f% [# ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 W- l; V# j+ k: M/ ?, ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 a9 z- B, W: ?1 V# ]7 N8 d9 P* m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 @$ I7 `1 S. O% r% J  r0 ?0 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- t" E1 u2 O$ i6 E, O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 K8 w# D! @; e( F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% z( @3 l) l1 `4 ]6 E6 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 K4 Q, p. @! g. L/ v$ h1 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ e. \& A/ @" x& H3 w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 @* P  q4 Y0 Y5 K- r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) d# \4 p7 ~- f( M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  k8 d' v* Q2 `+ X; y# ]0 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, U4 o7 ?, f, G$ W1 R: s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 B1 p5 @( V4 O( V1 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: H" B4 r/ V) K% |9 b6 B3 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# K" g8 k! z3 c9 k$ E/ T6 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- m3 R9 q& X! Z$ ]6 J8 [/ [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- E- x# E8 i' o% k. P5 i' j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' I+ m& o4 F4 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: `4 I9 w! R8 h( B5 U; A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>