【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" G- K( C' R9 |! A+ K  b! Z3 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 _. w/ m, _3 k: X6 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 {8 K) h4 |/ Z) D! J( a0 F' rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. d8 J+ p8 T" T0 PWith the moon kissing it every night
9 C! k! P# x- ~. q+ N% ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) ~; b; }2 N; y9 CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; n( O/ R9 C8 B9 f* |I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ ]  _$ }( s6 a5 c5 x! uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( m: E6 q& _( d$ a9 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, _4 n+ H7 C3 n4 _9 ^$ f: AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( F- W) G! n8 G, ?) |% S  b* aI regret not dying
4 @( O$ Y* u3 n% H* |- G" C$ @6 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! W5 R3 f" S4 s% l& }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 [. S& O0 J+ o* I: f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& `+ H9 g* U1 U8 N' @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 |4 w6 N8 {7 \* K0 }3 y, z/ U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 D1 I/ b- d) O. q0 H0 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" W% v- K+ a! a% Y, i! [6 D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; `/ E; c  u1 L1 N5 F1 h0 M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 D, M. h4 P- D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! \& b6 v6 n/ U) x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. J5 g4 S; P+ l7 ]5 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# t4 p$ U) m# Y' W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ b4 z: G! N( H9 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, u$ l$ K# L( @8 D<P>你无需担心</P>
( x! `5 k1 ^( @& q& a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 M$ w. M5 b- c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 v6 m' F' ?9 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# \/ x% V- R: h4 r! r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) o0 _0 P2 T4 f% W! I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! c+ x! p) l: e& M' g7 v5 m5 @$ [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' O: ?+ A1 F  z, T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ P# j& G& m& v  ~4 Z) Q5 m& N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& J+ N9 f# }6 e, O, Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; q1 y* M9 S2 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: L0 W& V% A0 o8 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 l, W$ u) X  H3 X: B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; T0 i, q' ~0 D# u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 V6 I  d" z! ~# V! b/ u- X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, v8 C2 `+ {0 P$ R( I- P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( j8 P5 q4 N% x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 y) q, \( L4 C) N) s: i' f% R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( T7 A, _" X- d9 ?3 g0 ^3 l6 r/ J我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>