【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 K6 Z2 [4 b" B% ~, K& q! K  Z% Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 B3 E  ^' R/ Y. z- X) ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* q9 J+ K% s' c" q& \$ d  YSeeing the sky content with its love
7 Y5 U$ s& S5 x! a  g, v' \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, o! g2 a* l' m0 i% WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ c4 ?3 o. N# \0 UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& |1 p5 i- h+ j! C5 u6 L7 W" iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, U" i' s! C! T# l# @5 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( i  M% S& U3 R9 u  ~, k0 S8 ?2 UI regret not dying
( C9 k7 y3 @1 W/ {0 g) DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 X  K7 X. T0 I5 S9 c* pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 r& z) f8 ?; I" p3 ?1 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- x% g) R( V+ d% K/ ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 B7 a0 Y. u8 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* v+ H' t0 C* p: Y% |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, ~" X$ R8 R% X7 F4 z( g& }' X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ Z- N& f  Z! b; z% H, z4 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) K' P" L2 _' x  `; z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 ^' k: Q4 H( a* B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 f5 ?4 l% E6 V% L6 U5 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 r2 f: a% C- @1 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. g9 v: ^; u. m) ^2 b, i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 J: Q# w6 F$ {) K( J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 `7 p6 y) }; y* f# |1 L, c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" ^% |+ Q+ l( ]' F+ I! l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 n" }, Z+ U" M5 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, S# `* R% I/ o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( B- H( J2 E* g1 H  _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. q, ?- E3 A! ^3 d9 G7 @1 l, l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. f6 I6 F8 \$ J6 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) {5 i/ y3 [/ v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. T- Q& z1 P# ]( ~9 p" E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 ~9 a# O' l0 l" m' L4 ^4 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 K, w  j4 j- H$ C" H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( I* Y3 A/ W" g( E( w8 b" g- z6 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& H+ M0 k# L! C9 {. u" B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. ~% ?* ~6 q  p/ `& m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- M1 Y& ~/ ^& P' Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- `6 [3 F  V2 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, y' ?; _/ |& B+ K$ \% V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! M# e4 e% ^" ?6 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 F& N0 D0 ]/ V8 |& C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' j/ x" E9 ]2 y; N4 U3 m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>