【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 N: }, u0 h1 R3 S; uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, N, @; V( Y. E+ G+ T/ f: ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ U- `1 D# U% L4 H* f( AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ T& \3 @- a2 ]0 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 W& u2 X1 T  R6 ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, R/ i5 f% C' BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ E$ F; x5 p0 Q% r2 p, SEvery other word you utter is love
) K" M6 W8 [: u9 q) c+ Z* wI really want to know just how much you love me
+ _9 x) u4 z. f; j5 z9 WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! U  j" a" M& L- V5 ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 z) M( y5 i8 m5 ?% b* SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 d- D5 F$ {: O6 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 P* S9 P2 M. r4 Y9 i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! w  x  q  N4 K! T: r( |4 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 r4 R9 k( g# z( |! i7 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' s/ j$ {0 e- l+ z" g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( `$ F0 l+ E- {/ G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) c' m) x8 v' e$ R" @4 ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 i$ }1 i' C1 _7 Y8 C! s2 O0 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 p, A3 M- Y4 T+ m5 T4 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 Y; l0 B; }- x" T1 Q8 @7 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! f% g: b& _( `" p# f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 [. W+ {0 ?( t$ b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( o+ j3 X: g3 P  s7 {) E/ G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# E" e0 a6 ]" v" C  [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 X! k% `8 W5 \3 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" e/ i% k1 P7 O' w  J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ P+ w0 [4 R+ N) a3 @% z. [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) f& T) K8 U3 `% [1 y- }$ r/ D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* _# a$ p7 x% d* V) ~8 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 b  R" m) M3 w4 N: @3 x: |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 v) X0 `5 q2 W$ h" F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) }9 ^. Q3 Q. _% h  u' o) t2 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. q% }( L% J* _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! R6 y: f8 i( c% @* T, v; Q! c/ w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 U7 X- q/ \1 `/ W! N' Z9 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) ]. `! s& D: C) p; v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- }5 ?! @4 B2 p6 z2 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' q- c, i  S9 L我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: w  l  Y: r4 l9 ]0 E9 I2 b, u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>