【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  Y- i) D7 ]% O2 ~) \/ r2 Q7 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' r3 K. Q; M  e  H* Q: fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" q* m' Q* I+ u, H0 D. WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ g9 Y7 Y# A  K2 R2 o% y% E1 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ v# i7 Y; w+ O! f9 q: Y  e5 XI love you I love you with all my heart
: T3 N6 V) X- ^2 X0 FNothing can compare to my love
* k' J: b8 B* `; i8 i8 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! ?7 i. @, A8 Y0 H+ e. t; ~: iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" Y: O: U$ U9 X2 d: R( z/ tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- x1 v" e, y: x3 o6 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 o+ Q& y. E- n: f# W- qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 @, x7 l: W+ i" r! K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ `) a4 E; @, U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 A8 X# t4 L6 q% V, p7 j& r4 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- S, ~: u/ R4 p; y( H( e  r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ q* o7 {; y+ X* K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- ]5 t: c0 Q5 N% g& l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" T6 g1 l, X; o/ q8 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! [# }  u1 x, ^- V' c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! m- R% B9 z" B. b: X0 z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 L' U2 l, f8 l9 H0 c8 O% Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 ]" P% B1 t  K( ?# J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; u# ^: C6 g' b; R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# f5 |1 a# k7 i! Z" F+ [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 V! J3 R! `# k2 i0 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 |* N  p% [, {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% c! F. c7 Z8 {9 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% x2 r# o- R2 k# e* v7 S2 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ A9 {- v) c, v8 l9 i- R' J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 y! q5 o3 O, o, X5 z# G: {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. D! I2 `7 d( X  _, }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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" x: K7 U6 B4 o" `+ y6 d8 s9 e# W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& A$ e- \9 h4 ~5 d7 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ u+ d/ W$ P  }) E0 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) k8 |# a- x7 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ _0 k4 T3 _- S8 A. `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: }6 A7 v* C% m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ t' k* O4 }; D) a) E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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; i1 F% n- T: T  }& z6 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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