【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# O4 U, ]  j, a5 O( w1 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, R" Y( q* d% vWith the moon kissing it every night
" C2 b, x) x5 t1 bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 f% s; m( x8 P" w; w7 iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" ~5 o( W- |' |& t% Z. M7 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) I" m7 ^5 s+ D; [+ \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( b" s# y) }# b" VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' y$ J1 S; s8 l$ ], s3 A- lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 m& x% T3 [, u6 x* L5 m# X! o3 JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 J# s6 ~2 ^, T# MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% a' N  O0 G) W/ z" \8 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, s' X4 X, H: }8 |: m8 q$ k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& p& `7 p/ M0 P, m- e6 D5 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% C0 S$ N2 f. [) Z2 }% S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( f/ l# i% }# f, ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: M+ }$ V% f0 D' `, r% n( u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& t. D* Y8 P* R" t: J. _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ E2 O0 z9 w2 Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. k# V2 I) D7 o! K1 V3 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 g2 z  k* i( C- |4 W/ p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# l4 ~( U, ^% W4 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ T$ O5 [4 j) v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* {* K4 S) {4 N* p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) N+ u7 F1 A# s( h( R- e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% C7 p* f  A, ^/ X) @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- Y9 n6 j9 k1 k: s& i2 Z9 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 E: f8 ~: G& [) R! O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 n% ]1 M; \- I! I9 ]& J* Y- B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 I( S2 a. V+ x, n+ c# K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 R3 u" O, [8 I$ \5 q7 o3 p/ L0 z; Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# n6 b+ X( T9 A! }1 a  C" i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% ?" n! v! V' V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 W- {/ `0 I5 `! s& c- N' Y5 G1 z9 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ S/ v8 P4 Q4 K$ M4 t& Y0 k) @. x! _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" f8 d, G# j; `7 k# e* U! b2 F+ N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 @0 x- e# b5 o/ h' E8 ~5 i1 z4 W" Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 F5 Q% P; O/ z( B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 i) U; C8 R* c; ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>