【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ ?4 w. G! P, z. x. {" I% q歌词我附在后面。
1 {) n' y3 s. D& N6 y5 ~1 S8 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 w0 I. {8 m5 a9 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 [& ?' \8 K# E4 n6 s4 l. }0 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 F* R* |/ g. h8 {& O  a' }! XThe sky is happy down to its soul
: x! c: O. C7 Y, q0 HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" }2 E  G. {: F# D" v0 j6 XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: K0 r6 d$ |7 I2 t& E+ TEvery other word you utter is love
& _! u$ P, O: A2 A# o# z- H1 ~7 gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 P/ D: N  y; j' `5 F2 P  d% eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 ~$ K" K! ^; jI want so much to see inside your heart
( s9 ^0 P0 @/ b. t% HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ N. @# x2 C) AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 `3 J& R+ X0 m5 [( V' {6 [; d& \I regret not dying
, L+ @  e8 b( WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 ^6 {9 Y' ?3 P- J8 GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 t6 n3 I8 k: i% Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ V! @3 p+ z% }! H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 h! D) R- P( s; u6 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* _  p. I& M3 C7 a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 @( u3 W7 ~% Y- u* P% j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 }* n- v2 Q) O6 F" Z$ e4 u% Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. F5 a& Y7 r1 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 L, ~+ H% M4 A! v# I' {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( o3 L! P& P  Z1 p- x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 e7 {- Q3 p5 \+ r9 o# _6 h$ A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 y3 ^/ g0 }0 \9 n8 e: r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. S0 @8 u" D/ d: Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 C  b$ w9 Z# t" V& P2 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ S- n- Q$ W; V1 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" h) j0 ?$ K, }/ n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 \: L% r  x1 q# d! ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 i& U  l# ^8 R" v0 E1 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& [3 Q+ o1 c$ `0 `. P8 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# O" ~! `: @7 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 i7 }/ y6 [" f" e! A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 K! k  \) e8 T/ e4 a* L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& r! P7 W; ]. I& f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 L- @; ]4 Z& o! i, w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% v/ O0 p0 M7 y9 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>