【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 c- p; e2 K3 |+ j2 F6 y5 ~- gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" m3 z& d' d: L/ P/ b; w9 }9 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 z1 e+ w' }5 s8 }0 w2 b& |The sky is happy down to its soul
1 h5 ~* |4 A% K+ M3 bWith the moon kissing it every night
0 [6 p( v( j( A8 m- y$ ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 y" L7 M+ P! f# n# YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 p0 t1 H0 E* X! o5 f) XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( F$ h% Q3 W2 JI want so much to see inside your heart
' A1 G& a' q. D. EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 N3 Y$ Z. ]( q6 b4 H  Z& U$ OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) w- c' j, F, VI regret not dying
0 h7 }" i# J7 p  L8 l. Q& e% UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: s. Q( O1 t$ |; b3 M) B9 ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: @7 X- z- F8 K8 d, I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% x3 s$ r& e$ X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 r: D1 T! w( e6 r7 _3 s% I1 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 s. ?4 D$ A! i" c, x* x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 W: s" w6 ?1 e; y' W+ {  d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 d# H2 m0 ~, I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ P# l" {5 O' l* d, o! U  K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( ?9 D6 v0 Z; f  F8 N* D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 z! b0 H: Q, B4 p2 Q# K" N9 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. A. b8 m9 x$ Y( N4 C" l8 Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ G! G" G2 m! r% `2 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ q+ y# I6 L$ y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: f* B) j6 B0 x2 W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% v4 q+ V9 `* a5 F& J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ J+ y; ~/ ?/ e4 e& X: g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 x- d- c& L3 l8 L0 u; t. j' ?$ C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& D. _! l$ H* G$ N- z  R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 L- x  j7 f6 [2 e% n  B; w! Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ K2 s0 P* |9 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 Q, g0 s: ~+ V7 ?8 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- m! o, c3 ?" X! [/ n/ [7 X1 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 P+ D" C& A1 ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>