【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 `  s6 I/ R5 F* p; I- Z. N歌词我附在后面。
9 i5 R1 [) L; IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% {8 C1 U8 v$ k( v. q! JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ a9 Q4 @. u  a8 t% z+ xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 J$ y# c( ?( x& pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 X4 ^# f5 ]9 d; n: ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 {% E" V3 Q# iSeeing the sky content with its love
, [2 e% H, H- oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" ~- C# R. l4 {/ ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; V: H, z. v# [9 bI’m still filled with fear
- V5 s" B  V! A- A7 k/ @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ S! r+ B3 G; S$ Z) _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- Y: S* ^- _( x7 p# O0 wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: u& c' H, o. R: S/ N3 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; R+ u4 ]6 b  q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% d1 m1 y7 g, o# @- i. W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ z) l9 Z; C! S5 E( j7 ~& T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 b- H- v) w/ ?9 T: t' ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 K% P$ M, K; l) G% P* w+ \1 Y$ f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 v, K* N5 I2 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 m6 m3 f" ^; y( \6 w- r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" X8 e! G% [& `  X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. p1 s+ s: ?  S6 w( L) e; v0 }1 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- P4 S; }/ u0 [$ ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: l: b4 b% j1 f' p2 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. h* E, ?$ w* X4 W& k# ~3 t4 E; O2 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) Y4 R' n. w2 R! T/ D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 W5 E0 l3 z: F2 H- Q0 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& `9 R: X3 n: X- [0 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, V# r% N" s5 q6 h- X, ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' |0 y6 p  ?2 N; U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 {3 K+ j$ b/ d( o( K8 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 z  s& r/ K5 S8 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* U2 q6 A) [& h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ z6 a8 }# y. B1 P: X+ [" L  L2 _' `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ n; F. n! R  {: {% o0 h0 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# l: a+ q. F2 y$ }( S% e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 _3 W0 h+ z  h) p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; ?8 h7 D' s! ~; j, c4 ~! R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 `0 Q) X8 x! L) D2 w我请你剖开它

7 N+ i1 T# W& h6 C, l1 u- `  z& \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 a9 x& W1 n* C7 S$ n- n$ q' c2 j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>