【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 |2 Y2 y- f: t7 s) q! DWith the moon kissing it every night
7 {- w4 `( z0 U: j6 S( gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  {: A6 ^  {$ TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; p$ h# O" G* H8 ?  r9 UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 W7 P, r) B! c7 K8 o# }9 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 l/ J& k4 x/ x8 V/ VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ {) v- w8 f: QI regret not dying
% g% _8 {% D) K/ C9 kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- I2 U5 E$ d* H% ~With such a tongue as yours,
/ c& j, g* `# u: R% OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. n2 Q/ x8 u3 W" B$ KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! f4 L$ |' w4 W' y" u; @2 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, i) u% v7 p* [& h4 F; P0 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 s* y  x% V4 {" c+ ~+ r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 X7 p5 [5 F! Q1 a: G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, n1 K+ c) \- P2 o9 N+ ^" o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* v' _) W) t( L6 }) Z+ f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; \) i1 X8 l( b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, `. A8 @/ ?( W! F6 [9 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" x( \2 k% f$ }7 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 {. p5 L# a( p, d3 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# s2 n1 N% I  E' e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; K' V* t5 {5 ?! r$ a0 h) t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 z: u2 V0 v; ~8 s  v# x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% j( B' V( M- y0 b& i, x6 V/ N) R7 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  \% M. J9 B# P* Z# C# }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) W& V7 F0 L7 H% i% ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 C5 T: ^7 z/ ?) t  c) _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ j: [" S6 U1 d  _0 v' Y, t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ j  s7 ~+ g/ H2 x+ a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ |; k  h* R8 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* O- f( n# B9 K1 k4 o& ~1 @% p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. H! i  H7 q) a) I6 u6 ^6 Q4 c$ l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ S4 M8 V) F: A% ^! l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ w1 l3 h/ U7 F. p2 X5 r4 A- W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( M! I0 e# l. h0 h) I. T, l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>