【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' ^. a/ [7 u" X# V; XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 |( l" j2 l+ TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" Q& w- `  {6 v- o; k. e5 g  \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- T( E3 D1 @) G- H8 O$ l" s( _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 o" I# O# E4 j8 ^2 {, R$ d0 u5 V2 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. r8 F1 S# @! n# N/ XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# _3 h- Z' y) y, l; rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 b* k8 r! W# a5 L5 {% mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. e3 |& |7 B1 a9 RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. p0 Y( @0 h" V: H* _1 V  _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& V/ Y0 O& H7 N. N+ T7 v+ ^0 r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( ~: [/ |6 B3 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 O3 v1 \' {8 D; ?! D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* H$ [, v, v' c4 ~+ _' X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 e* D, o' F$ _$ _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 p; |7 i$ x3 G4 h1 _" Q) A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 B& ~/ o# S1 P# P" D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, W+ d& a5 I4 u9 M6 U$ {2 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 c( [8 Q2 V. f0 B4 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& h2 Z! h( B" j2 e+ a8 t6 g<P>你无需担心</P>
% [+ D4 w* ^; ]3 e" R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  u  }+ o  o4 d' [# [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 n5 n- r+ H8 u1 S1 _$ ~1 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' G0 P5 q8 J  h* i- L. M4 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 a. T& N2 l! k3 E9 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( I$ o3 Q6 C- Q2 ?: |9 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 b% ^! @, {3 x2 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  e& n2 b  b5 q; _( }9 G7 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) L- V6 D3 p, z2 x  o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! \- ?, x$ E+ m$ e1 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# T  p" d- ?/ m; y  @- s3 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* r  Y' ~+ y( }, M<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ P0 K, H; g6 _. a; w, v+ k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ P2 f' f# s; }" f9 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ p/ f! ?5 P9 E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ }0 R8 R  L% c, }+ W4 x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 o! ~8 u1 k" x8 j! h+ `& W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! [# X/ N8 S( ^3 Y) S& {% o3 z4 s+ _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- g3 Q# S; V9 q. v4 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>