【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 [- K8 q% o/ Q2 _1 V: TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 b- Z! [1 n) @4 zSeeing the sky content with its love
+ j( b  c  i; O; p, z1 c, }3 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 u. D1 m, M8 |& RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ z2 h8 b" g4 s! P! e% n  l# [7 |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) d2 M$ {/ N$ V; B' kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 l8 z' t8 Y9 w# ^- h, S- sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ n! A- ~: ]2 Q- y1 EI’m still filled with fear
) ]$ c7 b4 G  w# Z' PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  ^4 g. s% H1 d/ lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; r# b3 R+ \8 mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 p9 ]+ m7 A6 D  i5 D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 @/ n7 L5 X' y* R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" K0 P7 W0 n; c2 b3 k$ Q  U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 E/ r. L+ s# z; h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- _3 T" m* L5 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& }3 a6 t/ |6 k) B& @) F; d0 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- Z! o" D% q- N) P* y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* h: ?% N* l, p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# t: x' W. ]0 t# P+ @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- W' m9 O, W4 n7 }  G+ j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! x! S7 Y, `2 m. p- ?9 z5 L5 A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 @" Y. S6 k3 W3 M3 H! k1 Y0 E0 [! E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 ?/ n" Q. `/ q4 }) P' V/ z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& I* }, E) a- F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& H* {  s3 |* M' W) k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ d0 S: k6 F* G7 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ v. i1 ^3 c( ]- H( L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( z+ F. t9 @# `- a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 d# ^2 Z$ [. n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' \$ q# r! @3 t: b) Z- V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  Q, m5 {9 v* c$ Q# L: d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, G" H" k( V1 O' a2 m/ `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 v8 D7 i9 K; K) s9 d" ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 H. p3 r% P3 s4 J$ Y$ K6 b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 q7 C- j9 e6 C$ S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 {. }( v3 B: N$ m9 S: n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" N, h1 d$ \7 }1 G' q% q我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>