【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" \' T, |9 F+ {$ T* TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# e0 k/ {8 C3 @# k6 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. X) R, l* X9 q3 y2 z. u/ h3 N9 UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: l& r" `& `0 |& \9 H& |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( c2 B+ k9 X, ~" |1 Q! xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ G0 ?) T" r# O/ ?1 l. O5 y9 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 ^1 X' X2 p6 b3 W) X6 V( C5 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* c+ H9 \5 s, @4 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- U" ~, W+ w6 Z' n, T5 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# Y, {" t$ h- h0 b9 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ f6 P+ ^4 J: A7 j* r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ _, k7 J8 a+ k3 e7 C9 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: l9 u( K: n8 c# c3 m2 K8 g8 L2 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% e1 B6 u$ w4 ?: [- T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 B" O9 A) u/ e% G2 o4 Y3 e- ]2 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 ]6 {/ S" l8 W0 ^/ Q7 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ g5 V! ?% X# L8 s, _4 y6 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# x" u% V& P9 s( M' w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  e# }* {8 Q% v  j- _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( v- z. \1 D4 F7 r/ I# m8 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* i$ W! @* _0 {8 _( {: O' R7 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 N3 [% N, x; ?# O7 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% v+ Y& q1 p5 r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( ?7 f  n. J7 M' U2 n% U9 W0 S/ X( Q. x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 \# f2 v2 K& P5 i% u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ P+ r! E  G. e$ Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: _& S0 N/ n3 T0 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 z6 x3 o+ U: N. v3 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; k2 \( C9 G0 s5 f! a7 Y% ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 Q- y1 S# c  e: w/ _! w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! Y9 I' f! Q! ^3 n! {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ N. m+ |- S) O& ?9 g8 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" ^. Y9 a, B4 X( B2 }- ]9 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# [( E3 Z8 u) a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>