【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: r4 C0 S# Y( ]( a1 }1 W歌词我附在后面。
4 l; J( R/ F6 p$ m/ RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: L+ M$ M( j7 d, L8 B1 @/ SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 R) M0 Z2 J5 k4 U  A6 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 L5 B9 R5 C: j% ]# I1 TSeeing the sky content with its love
4 H6 O7 D- r) L- N# {0 B3 B) D7 m" SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 }2 ^' k  S9 y: EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) x+ Z8 Q' m# ]5 U, R. d1 p. C8 zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  [1 V$ E0 v' V9 c4 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( K/ N* v: {6 t3 q$ n  V2 fI want so much to see inside your heart
6 r) P$ F2 G# TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; E$ s( q. s: oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( \( c% T, o0 ]* iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% z% e. B. N7 J5 [9 w4 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ S: k3 \( `& M& w. P7 }% t$ h6 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) R  W3 o( ~4 u, }! z3 t8 {5 E, ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 A$ ~, q* ~: p+ b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 @6 }# g6 _( z; k3 s0 Y7 `3 X<P>你无需担心</P>
" C/ R: }! G6 i- G9 s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! w1 d) {" {: ^" E* g! J" T8 q: Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 m. L& u, w! b: q( v& r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 X% H- t" W; v3 H9 _: S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% Q7 H* I3 i) t# ~/ b: X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 r% p0 |" |( T' o% ?4 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 m0 O1 d- K3 Y* S" c9 w* ^0 r1 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& _8 _7 k/ ]& B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 r: R2 e2 \) f0 Y3 K. I; r( J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, U: B. M3 }) H9 S, @9 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& L) d; R' B% P" L: Q% ~9 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 t# r, @9 u7 r+ ^4 x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 X2 f' B* H6 M2 w5 ^/ h( P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  F! }( C' x* b6 O/ q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 C+ j; ]) Q% l+ J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>