【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' }- T& c' {3 J4 X/ Y歌词我附在后面。
( u" W& g1 o5 |2 {7 zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) e8 H! o9 A, V: cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 M& m( C- @' k( N2 \With the moon kissing it every night
- k2 j" o& g! i) m! J& J! u& Z4 _Seeing the sky content with its love
: C( q  @  q) F4 J: c! j9 J( i2 C- aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 [4 X* Y1 }7 g6 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ E3 ?# c" ]! l' s, nI really want to know just how much you love me
0 r/ L( E1 T: DI love you I love you with all my heart
0 z/ U* K& U7 LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ B- D# q$ _+ u6 f! lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; L1 z- |; j/ k  fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: T( e: {9 q  w; _. ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. d# G) q: b6 ^1 \' A2 `% hWith such a tongue as yours,
& E9 X0 l0 x5 h- c) TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) u, a' O& h' L' uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' v4 ]( ^. l; ?9 ~: }( P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* b5 ]- K) z; ~/ H5 ~+ [4 v7 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% P& j# c# T: _3 [* x( Y% O5 C3 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: f7 e( X* u( k% g$ o# n8 _! E! X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% v# ~8 P% b7 F$ j8 W# l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; |* V; p* z0 m2 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 r4 i' u+ A4 v8 ]' J- h" q8 p1 X. V" q4 H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. W- ^* A# ^+ K! ^1 Z/ [: a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 e- E! c0 H- o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! E3 w* i2 o4 b0 {: z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  h# q. D( l  |; h5 G$ ?6 e9 u, ?  J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! O9 e) f5 q; s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 k$ T- J* \& f, |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; x! X% Q2 ^8 O* y+ `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 G1 q9 J2 w% ?% z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. h( x8 d$ T! C" c1 s  ~* \) r/ O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ J( m7 b2 ]. s5 s5 m) D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 i: D9 Z+ m- Z; g6 [, J/ K* y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ t6 _4 |8 e! m5 x& j& f- C! W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 i% E+ Y4 x# ~+ k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' D; y+ R  r; N' {7 E9 \1 {7 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, [! ~) R: ]  x5 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
! I0 M+ ?7 T  N, D; v* `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 p. [8 D8 D) z1 R; w% b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 X  i, P* f  p# ^6 T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( [) ?$ e3 A* s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, r% J7 Z" g4 c/ ?5 e" E/ R  e  l; V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 e4 n8 U: |/ E4 i1 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 `3 e6 j! }7 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ N- ]' Q% g1 ~. g2 y% h! b+ q! o我请你剖开它

2 b" w2 {0 X, Y% Y. c, Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>