【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 H1 u* V6 W  m, m: K: `  D& j8 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( c7 [6 r8 x& F/ P7 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, Y* g" G* g/ V( B7 j2 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ Q7 @: [5 C6 ^# wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, G. j( j/ v( C( ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 C8 d0 ]; ^' f( n$ d. mEvery other word you utter is love
  @/ Y1 L3 v( R: SI really want to know just how much you love me
" ~& d2 t. r' ?8 rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. b% X9 M8 I9 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  `5 E3 x$ X: f/ v3 P# Q( c) [I want so much to see inside your heart
3 J/ T8 v  ^9 v1 Q! w3 f$ lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: {. V* ]4 ?) ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 R: W! ?$ u& PWith such a tongue as yours,
$ \* ^8 B) p2 A1 M4 ?6 [& TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 I8 g; I4 _2 F, \; ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% `% C8 }3 Q! C5 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 Z. J2 a" Z: ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* l8 Y& `+ r0 T  L1 h# y9 v  S: P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ D# E9 f, o7 X$ u4 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. {# ]" @- D( M$ ~1 p5 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 [# [9 i5 B8 \+ `8 t+ b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- G5 [! `+ A- ~9 ]2 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 ?; u& d: K  a0 v0 I3 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 G- j3 k9 |" A/ T' r# `4 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; `" X/ _7 w) M7 i  Q! O. C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) y1 H+ s8 Z' G& F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; g  x9 H, p4 h' M2 ^0 x5 }6 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  b3 m4 a  t1 U- z/ J  k0 s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' c/ g, I6 a/ H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 V" @3 Z0 p! m1 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( T+ `! q" d, a: d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* z& T! d' U3 W  }' S& I+ F; N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 l9 ^8 a" c# e5 j* a4 k/ \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* G+ o6 h7 M; S3 T! w, }+ ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, w" Y& m( x+ i: O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 z# a( H$ E; T4 q* H) K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 i% g9 u" m* ]1 M+ S7 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: }% E; E) E6 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>