【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 c4 p$ C4 ]: i& a5 x4 B, bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 c5 m6 @/ K# ^% }) ]4 d) CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 @! m4 ?. s8 TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& O: B/ c" E/ _7 T% lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- l! W+ W" K2 e2 L( a! Q" _Every other word you utter is love
& C0 j4 U4 e* n. w9 k$ jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  [8 f7 {' A8 U3 G; o/ j' O1 tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% I; [  S! }# q( b; W9 @' ]$ VI want so much to see inside your heart
# K9 {7 f; ^, WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 I% @9 Y% L* g9 @" {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- ]% n8 T" @* u% {3 p  kI regret not dying
$ k. w. c8 j8 ^( ^8 T; _, `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% G  P8 V' x6 [& iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( U; `6 K# y5 T6 H7 y3 |( MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 u% d- {1 G4 Q! h. d+ Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! n6 o# Y" s& A$ l2 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 u9 S  x1 o  x1 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( W. e! K9 W( t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  Z/ y, Y2 M% e2 j0 P0 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: c) u* b6 A, o) q- Q  M0 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ b2 z9 Z- a, @8 ~' z. y/ ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 t. [2 W# T, V8 n5 [: u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* r- A2 i3 d5 K0 a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 T% ~, j; \* s: C% c1 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 B, V5 s/ a, J7 _0 r1 q3 ]+ g/ h/ G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- E* r; j) I8 A; Z! w  G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 [- T2 ~7 o" c; [" c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ D. j. Z+ g$ G$ z; \* u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 w$ I+ s" X8 G* N# l. i( a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 S7 D/ ]* ]  a# ?' _- A" Z+ g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* W  l/ G- O9 J3 D. {$ s! s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 J& I# q5 C4 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( d# R3 ?/ r2 p( L- p* _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 x4 \8 w4 k( d; a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 I% |# H: i/ o. N% n; ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 _2 N$ U  z9 q2 J9 G/ M8 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 l% ?# C) Z- I+ N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& ^% ?$ H  ~9 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* p% G4 O5 m1 ]: V5 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# k% Y: f4 F8 R; ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 u& P6 o3 k7 @5 I2 |- `. C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 D7 k; y, c( ~0 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

& P* ?9 c9 Z$ o; O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>