【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 @. L4 R# t" P4 X6 p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. P9 h: o* p! j& _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! @( U3 ~( ~+ ?( V$ J% Z7 p, MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ C, k: f' s3 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 {) _& y* R0 O, h6 ~2 ]- c" q. gSeeing the sky content with its love
- P% U: y$ r3 Z- y2 H  `: rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) ?: v  f: y4 H/ jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 {5 {" K' Z* _2 u2 o" NNothing can compare to my love
; _" ~4 l! m* l% [2 f! V9 L- OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 V/ z( r; y2 h# M# c, IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, T. u( L( @# o6 {8 s' Z7 l6 r5 T4 SI want so much to see inside your heart
6 ^0 P4 T# \. [: E4 r0 d1 m2 u, Q" c# \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: Y; D: H! q! U( D0 B# o! LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) v9 O6 p2 m) _7 n, L% SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 r1 Z/ v. s, u  m' aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( ]' X2 h2 e1 ~( x( m0 |- E1 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ \4 Y' p* ~0 |, E& h% G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 R+ A4 i& A+ G/ Y- R! K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% H/ X; M2 ^. b' |2 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- R# s; }/ ~. f% m9 k# |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" s0 z1 r& x" k& @1 W' v0 o/ `' Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. ?" Y2 G- t1 \7 z6 |  r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- H- m1 X7 W& \! _% H6 B8 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 x$ o( }4 q/ b; Q7 j0 r8 v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 M1 U6 [! ?  U5 h9 r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 C- B1 u1 {. D8 ]5 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 C# b- P7 k# ^! U$ ^$ |' q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, @: @- V/ k/ Q5 H4 \7 Z4 Q5 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 @/ J% {( ~/ P8 ?  p, m: U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 h& v2 \2 ]2 N" ^7 P  b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. b- y4 ^. x6 I3 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& a: a* e, r- L0 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 @6 B  e0 b& I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 G7 E! _: C9 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" N- a) m5 m6 \6 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 N. p* S' e; O/ C( A% b. z; V: m0 z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. E7 R& e1 C' Y/ {" j. i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ ~: S% Q' X+ b+ }6 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 v- G, }" p/ C; |, D: @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ R& f0 F' V4 z6 W+ C0 P我请你剖开它
$ x9 T5 K$ q6 g+ K. D
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ t0 S" t; Q* }9 K9 R% T1 F8 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>