【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 _) D% f- F$ r, IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 `: S& ^. P6 E! B( S0 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 o, T! \1 M" q4 D) oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 Y+ m* A- I- {6 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" l) s5 M7 e! Y$ W6 Y8 ~9 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 P3 z9 `$ H; l5 KSeeing the sky content with its love
3 ~7 }: v) {0 z/ z! SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; I9 M" c" e' m. B& L1 FYou needn’t fear anything
; K' g% M1 \# J# kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  _. e! E1 }- ?1 `2 oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) B3 e0 l9 M- s) C; T/ pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ V. I* c* l7 J$ YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 ~+ v0 K; [! _( o7 h4 X9 wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% N  b- r9 ?: y3 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 g& t% L  _/ m: {1 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; U/ D- w8 P" a5 D2 UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% F% m$ M4 E( b' p  D. e5 i" eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 }$ @" s( y' ]. O* [" v  B9 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 ~7 D& T+ F6 s/ a1 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  w3 E0 G/ X( r. v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# Y: l0 ]( m& q7 A* I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 w3 g" V  O  W6 T* E* c' l# V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  }# w; k  a6 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% c( o5 W3 E$ M+ r9 X  S- _9 |' K, q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# C0 _/ F) @- n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 i3 t/ z' M. n7 I6 a  S1 V% p" y8 j<P>你无需担心</P>
% ]! r0 g; u  q& |# ~; G) }; x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 ]) ^7 r$ M9 _) A/ N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ V% p: w$ s' t+ h& o7 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 F9 a% w" P* e$ x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& Q/ ]: w, i4 S, B5 X& z; q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 {: [+ w: F" q- ]9 w, D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" d9 s- O+ ]4 |7 Q8 I: C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 l, l& o3 ^: t3 [# i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 }# _, z* ?) d) @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 c2 L+ k* d  J. U( U  M: T# l1 Q/ v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 p" ]2 Z5 K+ |  c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 x2 Q8 g9 ]9 H6 V" d1 Z* |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  p& s9 x$ F5 \0 L" Q+ c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( [% z, ?5 o. t, ^: q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, a4 Q& j  X2 x, }5 W* D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 i* O2 d1 I3 |9 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) M8 m$ p: c0 c& ?9 M/ x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( u, C( X2 \/ }3 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

3 m4 n; B6 ]8 F3 U$ o( J& }: h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>