【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 m1 J: L9 u, x# k" U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ J0 G: k# p, V! [& ], lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# ]1 [5 i' [6 }2 x1 nWith the moon kissing it every night
' t: p  \( I+ t0 {Seeing the sky content with its love
! I. [- a# f8 o+ T( v$ yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# ^1 C6 Y6 ?: PI love you I love you with all my heart
2 n6 R1 f# R5 ~& J! `& U- ]. nNothing can compare to my love
$ W7 r$ t; i" i. L/ d. _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) [6 k2 Y  S' e- e8 x/ HI want so much to see inside your heart
9 F0 t/ p" e# t6 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ F0 j+ X5 Q: {0 b6 PI’m still filled with fear
: v; x9 h( F( O3 j/ ?# c$ GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' G: m) |1 C" k% r: X- ~$ j0 lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 [+ ]; H+ F7 \( x; v  Z4 uWith such a tongue as yours,
$ n/ t+ Y0 T0 \, z. B0 q, A4 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; ]& ]/ B/ N% D' O0 s! MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  R+ u: x% k1 X$ `  NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( e3 X2 @6 N) J  ~9 c$ O- ]1 R$ [( H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& X& G5 s- r2 x/ A4 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ l$ w% ^7 _  _/ Z  K' r: n, J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 I5 c* W, A: L! r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: y4 U( l7 `0 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% Z" j( W( X2 Q* z+ x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 Z- N+ U3 i- w) V$ \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ a5 n% T0 P  U, U- u6 e1 g5 R% i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; ?" ]8 o. Y; {; M! X2 r" M' F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  t' n$ s0 @; |$ g$ y/ n. p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) C+ l1 Q1 O+ e! i6 ]) G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 m; P/ c+ Z( b6 S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' \* J. q2 n& a) f, A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 R# p6 v/ ~; W, y- Q  |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* V# T/ I( p# r# ?5 r  T+ S1 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; L% O& ]) a2 b3 }. A& t' G9 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 `6 X* b3 L4 z5 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 e2 r  a5 M: \& N' G' w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 u8 |: s5 J6 f2 u  x9 S( f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 Z1 n6 T% U9 h( W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 L9 O% f- M/ z* q5 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ A0 O. l7 C/ ^4 S/ k/ L: A我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' I2 i' B3 {2 L. \( @' w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>