【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 w; p) `6 [5 I0 i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) n; o" r0 ^4 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" O" i( B9 P1 x% @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ ]& ^# a: x( h% Y( u) aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. E( R/ q, j7 m% I; W% ~0 a$ nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- r) O8 g) ^3 Q/ Z) w' `. @5 D. [Seeing the sky content with its love
6 ?9 }/ W: k0 M- f! g$ Q3 S7 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ |' C" s. \( J* F, RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; c0 Y4 c3 W0 ^! v  s7 A1 E' z0 p' `- I7 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& J& @+ d1 @" XI want so much to see inside your heart
' ~% t# H+ T3 B- l- i$ tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 F& \* P) A* |7 j* I" OI regret not dying
2 S& a" }, \' U$ Y5 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* @! H0 U! V2 G( @With such a tongue as yours,
3 x& L- w; i. ]  R6 D' d8 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 v' H! i" A$ T7 `' k1 W; XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' c+ g& P0 g( N, P( v" @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' K1 |6 X2 G0 u( ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ |; f, j# m2 W( P2 H" U3 d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& f7 C, J" C2 O' O3 Y& t. b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! F. V0 g* }+ t% L! {* |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 P6 p9 o0 v" y, S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 o0 [( j( l: o3 h3 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 B2 X) r1 [# R+ T- d0 F' \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; j& {" R  Y$ D3 Y: c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 }0 ?, s% i1 I7 I7 ^# N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, \& Z! ^6 l/ _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ Y, s$ g9 b# W7 n4 j7 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& ]- t, h6 L1 N" [# Q1 x. c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: D, V" j7 O% c3 W7 u% ]* ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, B# D8 s; C& ~7 F9 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 ]! O% t, ?. o# H. F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 X/ l9 y7 B  p8 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. w$ s3 G" \0 N9 X" p# d# j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ K% Q7 c7 n9 x( U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. ~1 s$ E: _. |2 F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 t3 g$ {/ c3 B. U8 D5 ]# P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! ?( k6 g$ n% T5 ~# p! X<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ T1 v# E* z  L/ O# j0 \7 l2 u) P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ x6 V) X7 s2 X, A# V7 N4 a: z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. b7 h. _0 l0 W2 T% U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ I; B* j9 K9 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 t" _% @, `# p& k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 D+ S9 _; e: o% @5 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 @& y/ V8 M5 L我请你剖开它

; m3 g' `' m5 o, |5 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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