【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( N& e6 E# Y6 a1 Z* b1 }* W; `The moonlight is shining brightly,
! h) L  O( }( {+ GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 J7 `0 y; r  }  Z* ?0 q$ B  wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' e" e: s- y+ u1 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ {3 W: G/ n( K& O, [$ z( S9 J  N# kYou needn’t fear anything
. G3 P5 G. D+ w/ mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) |$ p0 q+ f, X! K% B2 s+ E2 H( K  @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 V* \( s. S6 ~3 g6 z; bNothing can compare to my love
  i6 v1 e' z% [- `( N8 N; YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; d2 o. p0 {( c1 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 {8 E" p* `& j6 J- }2 x5 PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( W6 h) t6 J7 O8 [( ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! b8 Q! C3 S6 i; D# u) k: RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. E0 F! U/ `) i0 h1 X! I0 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' q( g& I: X3 y% q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' S; t  x0 I' }3 [8 R" @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& C  @  b2 B$ S& S2 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! t  x7 T. s( o3 `+ r2 s( q  u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( x2 {2 I6 F+ Y# N  m$ Z+ }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& S0 m; Y1 D4 Z: c6 l! r. i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ Y; l' _) M5 O* U, y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( b$ R1 r6 E* K( G5 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 i4 V- {1 n" S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 A' Z" V: i; u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 p& N- M6 T# j! t6 ^; a<P>你无需担心</P>
- T. D, O2 B7 A0 D. o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 B9 D# `, N/ q/ ?' N: w+ b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  P& l8 s9 m5 k3 x$ G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( A7 A: M( c6 q. V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( t( A& ~, z5 r3 K5 g$ L' C4 Y5 g. D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 ]; U3 h. s+ X- z) D! {) ]$ c# v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 ?+ h& [0 z* l3 Z- X" ?* b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- r- w' k" T' _/ a/ @) N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- P' J7 N" U) b& g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ q* S$ T) y" e& x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% u+ b6 j! W& s. H% ]/ D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, w+ H7 g( T4 c: I: n) N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" W( V+ e( X( s# c3 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 p/ [4 i3 W4 @- h1 c6 W/ V1 t+ j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 ^/ ?1 j* L0 @0 m! _. I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>