【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ \6 u. L1 d; A; n2 d5 C; xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 r2 t' o! C7 V; o/ iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ y7 D# O% j4 t0 y% ~, ?  kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' L$ e4 e5 J% oYou needn’t fear anything
* `  n% w. |8 \; n1 b. hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" o! ]! ]# `+ M$ c9 R2 `; R. b4 H) ~. AI want so much to see inside your heart
% f! i  T$ c( n; n2 o9 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! {3 G- t: ~% V* x( \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  b( p' \8 k4 s2 _2 y  Q- x7 tWith such a tongue as yours,
' Y& I* P: Y7 P7 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  e, K; V9 y, v! l6 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) C3 ^& @/ q- }( l+ X9 Q* X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- U6 `% n2 K2 g' g, D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 O. _- M+ N& V" }% m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: m4 h8 I1 r$ w$ o/ P4 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 R7 W! L2 E3 [( g: a$ T$ p- X# K7 V3 a8 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) o$ _0 H% Y1 V; Z2 C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# s2 @8 o" l( R) V+ J2 z4 W; X) ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, u7 I' g* `) t2 ]0 c- W' p. [1 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. H8 Y" x. K0 m0 J; U. T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% L% Z/ {3 O) f, C+ f" h% N4 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 G0 ?  F2 l& B$ r! a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& f  d2 w" \# B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 c- E! I' e7 J0 N7 `! r3 I6 [4 F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 h  J0 \6 D4 {. H( P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" N5 J# F) a7 w  N6 ~/ w' e5 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 u4 o  Z- X$ {/ ~& w; H. n' |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ D  V% U( C+ S$ D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; X: d# f% F: I8 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ @9 d2 _3 _2 D/ X; B8 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 ?# J2 t( a5 e' G9 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. L7 z* C( A5 r# _9 Y5 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 @% P" n5 M) O8 s& j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% X, G6 q. h3 J6 m. h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 z: p% E* r1 u7 C* l% p) U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 L3 v5 A' k4 }+ {: }+ D8 I3 P. H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ U) i/ F& B% J/ A+ K9 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' A* S9 P  A* e2 u/ Q' p+ V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 i  b0 C6 @/ I8 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>