【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* ]- x& d$ D- z& H5 z2 d+ n歌词我附在后面。
) M7 H, K0 f) t8 ^# Z6 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 V1 Q5 f" a" Q" \4 C$ ?, q, C6 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 M0 A7 b) f1 z; k& Y  h( rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, w( Y2 m1 T* {- Y) hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  b7 A" @& v' P7 H  Y3 RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; Q3 I4 L: B& u8 ?1 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 V- ?( |2 n* J* \/ V" D# m+ {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  X; [5 g8 t0 v9 h: @Nothing can compare to my love
8 y) T5 D. h+ m; b/ `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ ~: O# n' ~1 i3 @% }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) V5 r: q: u0 ^5 B3 I6 Y7 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
3 w- M( l, A) r) x7 z% H# R! g" RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& v3 U9 f, u; ]: vI regret not dying
/ I2 W4 q( v. M/ \* a! bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ z8 q' |3 o8 u- M! UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% K; o, v( O# K0 [" O5 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 \' h7 |3 x7 r! V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, T2 a* E8 D2 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" d- C: ~: t) A1 N+ V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* Z/ A% {$ \# k; F$ {$ ~& z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, B6 N/ L7 \3 ]8 v3 X0 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" u/ y) O0 h5 E4 P! ?! f- N' L% T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 E! c. x' P) l' [$ o* h& ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( T; ?6 f; |, O. x4 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& i5 m3 I# {/ s) K0 q  c. r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 k# H2 q0 M9 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ ~% X. i- h% L1 S+ S( a0 y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! H5 n8 G7 a, |% l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ P7 U& c0 ^" E- p7 h* Y# e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* Q6 X- n* Q: q/ m2 p5 {* u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ A9 |9 a7 l+ J3 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 l1 E) w, j4 r- ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 Q  T; p, l3 {$ b# g9 ^) u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( p; L3 }+ E7 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 f/ P8 B; r5 T. j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 F1 ~/ r7 Y9 P) N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 b- Z) D3 I8 k! h1 F7 S' h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ j9 o- H% \: m" O6 U+ `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. P$ O; p: G! O. X; T8 r( [! n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ D9 n4 K3 }* Y+ V我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 D6 W) m% p3 P$ z% E* g, e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>