【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ e# _% W1 U5 |2 Y) ?8 [With the moon kissing it every night
" u2 ^! x$ z9 d" }$ g# tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 E* j9 C  \) E3 ?8 H5 K0 @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 v( G! J8 h2 d! o- v' d: C% GI really want to know just how much you love me
" j6 Q% T# f$ v, n6 C# wI love you I love you with all my heart
. U; P% }( c6 Z* MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& J  i/ `, m) O/ MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ i5 a$ o6 B$ o2 b% T: cI regret not dying
5 B+ E7 T& @% M8 ^/ T; u8 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& u1 A, e5 T3 U  {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 D0 Q! A/ f" v/ t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* U  |1 E6 A1 \- s) t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: m+ p3 b% V( k  @$ W1 y/ g! t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 w/ U0 _: Y5 p* w# }$ K8 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 z% h" v6 ?# Q+ J& \5 x2 n" ]7 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 _9 N' n, a* A6 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 X& B$ ?1 w, l6 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: }* g  _2 u6 j5 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' T4 ^( J, o+ r* R/ A5 z7 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ d: C0 F% _* u* J7 G# L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 |9 b/ I( p+ G5 `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 y6 R9 _9 x' C2 t2 N% C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' k- U! y- p' P. s6 d, I$ Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! d5 i+ D" l- }' {: A/ a$ J$ u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ Q! e7 M4 z/ z. S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; s; T/ o2 g4 q. r& u$ }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' A9 m0 Y! R3 H/ t$ N" ^- k+ h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 m+ e. X0 ~  d9 r9 M0 D5 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 x; ]% I/ B% g: e: M* k% {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; O+ m! t6 U; e9 r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 N) z, N' m2 B, n1 o% ~4 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" c! J) n  Q, {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; m! j! v- h7 F) H/ @" ]% z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 I# o( Z) x% [" C) `# a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& x, d$ ^* d* E' g# e2 F- X: Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 G7 _- h5 b! W* n7 |' ?2 C# Y9 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% N) _: K% ]1 Q; q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, f- K  F. M* D2 K/ d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>