【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  {/ E: M9 M4 s4 K8 Q! HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# v) H+ |* k7 V8 D0 X7 |, n: GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 c/ ~7 T" D# l) LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# J! j0 l- F  k" iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 ]' [* z( e2 Y7 w9 Z' BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' d1 e7 i! ?2 K2 XI really want to know just how much you love me
8 v! R6 J' `4 a8 VI love you I love you with all my heart
- z1 a# ~6 g9 PNothing can compare to my love
  l* K6 o+ h$ P$ i4 F) N5 qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 T' b. F% q+ jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ d) ^/ o% p" o# W% FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- N7 _. A% G6 O. Q3 }) vI’m still filled with fear
5 m* b# O' a. M* Q- MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 b7 v* F2 @6 |& u7 ?9 _$ t* K! rI regret not dying
; J  f0 @5 W, V& q8 v! R) j5 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ r7 z/ |$ f+ ~$ Z* uWith such a tongue as yours,
- u9 E8 L5 @! G! s3 A- q" VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. F( U# w& K5 e1 e' \" z1 q+ FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 I  r, Y  X8 B4 g% q% J. k$ \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( Q/ h7 q; Z2 A# T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 G. r; d! b& _& b# _, y7 E! o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" k* ^. A/ F' D3 w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! d. K- {$ K2 p. l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 T+ o; e1 S# d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 ]! _6 x) Y, P" Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 H# Y$ J7 d9 r0 _1 W7 Y" L+ m2 e" u4 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% p" J. B" p8 P1 c; o6 V  T0 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. q* k* E0 Q$ v1 L$ l4 Q( N+ L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ [" R, ]& s4 F- v/ w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& H+ ?: p1 ]$ Z8 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& \/ V0 m0 d9 w6 ^7 q5 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: x: A2 I: l" |) M9 C& Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# n7 m7 U6 \! g) A% y* v6 b. ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, V+ q, Y! y7 J$ d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ ^6 z1 z' C) R, a. ?: S& P3 f" S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 u& [" w; X8 r& e# \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 G# P6 O& Z) w3 `5 W/ Z' B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; ~- Y0 i8 S9 T: C( o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 m# j! e6 N; S& l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. G3 T' a& s! r8 l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ G4 x+ Y' A2 b我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>