【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! P; Y$ V5 T' k/ B8 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 P6 }# u/ S  J& z; X0 z" LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- A( o0 a6 B# _. e9 PWith the moon kissing it every night
4 U. j: G+ S9 y- M8 |! NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' h3 O' n, ~4 m$ y/ F  o& i' {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 Y5 s1 S) O+ V/ ^4 qI really want to know just how much you love me
6 a* r; H' b! F: Z* uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 E4 ]* y# q) D5 O) VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- g5 w9 I+ g# F7 W) ?$ hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, g4 g& V9 M' Y. U3 j4 IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 h; E- a/ J$ j! L0 }& h7 ]0 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 ]% Z4 M5 l+ j! b; P# ?6 H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 G- i8 D+ G% g6 I! j; X% @: C# ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 I2 q( b. k% J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- y7 {/ v) v3 I# C" ?/ H5 N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  [2 w! U, [4 h$ Q( I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ D# x# |& j1 t( w" w( F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- m$ }2 d+ d" B" _3 [8 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 N" y6 z/ \9 e7 ^2 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ d- I8 t4 g+ v. Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 W, U# o: S( M/ G  T$ Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ q/ a) v, ]  h  Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 d" S1 S9 e: a) r' K2 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  N; u" @# G8 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( G) K" I7 C3 k/ n, O( [. m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ p5 [4 B6 A0 O3 b! d+ g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 i/ z" T( l0 T8 F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ s( M& ?6 ?2 t2 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" z0 M" \% K$ C& g4 H( l$ e3 y& P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 y: o+ S$ D( w0 k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) c. W2 d0 x  j$ ^4 i4 _- e' j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 w2 k/ `" k# A2 a3 w' O" e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ B/ _( z9 j% R; ^. k- E* ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 \  I7 {3 c# h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' ^4 D8 O" U# H& V0 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, H( w2 ]9 H' a; c: |# g- i我请你剖开它

; V- y+ a2 x: O7 ]) j  s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>