【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, r0 C+ {& o7 g' K& z; KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 r% t( I0 L) I* [  l! }) w, F% p7 `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 r; L7 _1 C# V3 L: ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% c+ E8 W- U. ]% P0 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 g8 Q8 o3 K6 W8 l/ nI’m still filled with fear
4 u# B& [: s) w- LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 `  H" M0 W! W- _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: ~) d" X7 g2 Z4 L2 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: n) c- {; X4 `  n# T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. D0 ]" L" a( z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 [* h% J0 j: ?# ^+ s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# b9 q$ \2 n2 u, u/ L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 q" `; }; X; Q* F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ k8 I- {. a$ x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; j6 i" d) P6 H9 M3 \: a: m3 \<P>你无需担心</P>
' V* Y2 n( O6 A; i2 [2 I) j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 H' _3 c5 p0 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 j) R7 ^8 F  G, n  ~* L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* c, a4 m, k% O5 @& R) b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- @5 K& _, K1 d2 }+ m- c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 c8 @' U6 \+ D& u5 G6 M* Y! F0 ~1 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" V3 C, S6 |- @4 D8 Y1 g- z7 s6 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  l" Y; Z4 F/ ^2 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 h# z4 l# f8 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% W$ ^. J- l" l; v5 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 k) W$ `( J( c) U8 g$ Q5 e, ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' M7 u- G3 m. y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  {; X2 T. z$ z- G<P>I regret not dying</P>
# e  J* H0 A! l- r$ K( p: {2 G1 [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ^1 ~( O  ]0 X) D6 ]& q/ L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& P1 r8 G* E2 ?1 ^6 l/ A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* p9 B; Q) h0 b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# K" L) C* [9 B/ |. n! P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ z8 w, S# k2 c0 C' }9 f3 m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& H# O" Y  \6 _, Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- y9 k& S, F7 ~5 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>