【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& P0 I" C7 W- e; X1 w2 Z歌词我附在后面。
3 M. i+ M  l5 q& w" h4 Q, qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: |! |" D/ q1 ^9 U7 q" c" n1 x6 HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; w1 |7 y( ]6 Y/ U# C4 r$ U: x1 F' aWith the moon kissing it every night
) W8 u% s- H. u# v4 p5 qSeeing the sky content with its love
5 [( d2 r- d4 ?3 j9 S0 q& GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( t( i: ?$ o. }( W* {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 ~+ j' c! d" z, B- N* Z0 [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 p; L% `' C; t) B+ J! C9 hI love you I love you with all my heart
* M& X2 w; m3 r; ?2 @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  W6 R! Z$ |. ?! n8 e- CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ i+ L0 b) K% m3 Z8 S! VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  e5 W, ?$ P! P  _; CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 ~3 ^6 R7 k+ W) v5 t1 W" u+ uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; W$ E2 R) L3 u* y- m, U/ L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 Y' c: e4 _" J! ]' A7 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- b% o# ]/ l5 q& R# I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  S$ C9 Q  A$ t, G9 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# J7 U  U8 _5 o  ~# |% i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, p% b) Y& F2 p7 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 K3 H6 x5 o6 [3 w( K; l! _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( L/ V2 {1 J8 a: ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ T( r* E% ?3 b7 u6 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( [! O; _  ]5 X# J1 e# }2 y9 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# c- N% t: _8 V( P# O6 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- K. d2 ]& ^. M, M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: v+ B/ {, b) j" o' K, U# C5 n% z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. f! g: i/ u0 l( p3 _7 l0 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 y& Z3 i: {8 Y! Z. d" E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 R' u: E8 o$ o$ t3 @8 O1 X7 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: B2 y% D: B' J3 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& W0 P" b& J) z% \5 V: b% n& M* c<P>I regret not dying</P>
) `+ \* x/ @  i8 t, M2 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, i5 j: n4 Y' r7 @" @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' B' L9 O$ N+ V+ A$ R  ~  j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 I# o0 @2 `( y$ R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ `/ z9 F% x4 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( T% Z3 r  @( Z( `6 U* b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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