【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 Q- I/ g, G3 x* m: E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# e+ @' Y6 a% P) {2 n6 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; R7 f, ?; \/ \% _. }8 ?' f3 KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 H+ N, E4 U% s( lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ R7 W5 K' y1 I, ~6 X9 Q: KThe sky is happy down to its soul
! p3 p3 F! c+ ^With the moon kissing it every night
9 V. g) X' I. c1 \3 \Seeing the sky content with its love
: \$ o  I* m7 h' k0 J+ SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: q5 _& S) Q' o: f" hYou needn’t fear anything
! g  |2 N  b( x0 }" ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' V7 ]5 N2 T* x0 rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 \9 W. r; w3 P1 J1 xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 J7 }6 ?. ]' N: e1 Q; i0 T8 r& |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; @  y% P  k: `6 x" R) qI want so much to see inside your heart
# I. g3 i& W- _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 j/ r7 l# T/ BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 Y6 V' _# e0 i' n* rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ y2 ?7 w; Z3 k& z& ]* d5 ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  k3 v3 d9 d/ w; O/ T% m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; {3 d! O- W4 ~% E  J. i+ h. J( v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  Q, K. @" [( v  z; k# q! l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- h$ i, d& S. F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- `0 p3 K6 M5 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 c+ j* [: E; y0 h# f) t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) F' \. a. ?+ S0 _5 @+ r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- k6 r' S4 _) R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 ]# _/ q* _5 {6 t5 D3 ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, M5 {2 k7 p  i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 G& R+ b# U9 k) q; r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 R1 S3 H' z% `" A% D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* z0 b% z# H  H5 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) E' ^& n! l* k0 Z9 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& U* g, I, D& M: d- b+ t( |4 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 `- k3 {. o- U7 \. z3 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 r4 R8 t/ e5 a' p7 t& k2 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: [! \7 [- T  k. j3 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# A7 K. C% n* R% |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 W3 I" @! ~# ^2 q, D( g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ p& C, @% d' y; e7 I' p& ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 v0 k6 Z- s1 t, x0 L- k; u. X$ q( b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 u" v6 j; v7 t  a9 }, V, `& ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; W: D& E2 x8 t7 c, }: Q; u& Q9 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. y6 b2 @% B3 @: L' h: C9 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 W* c+ {) \8 b( D8 c1 r* S- s, W9 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* z( X# R1 w" {9 I# v7 h2 x& j7 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ e$ W' J7 z2 ]2 u* [- K9 P# @7 S# a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 S& P" m7 H) j, b; G- @* m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; _3 a, n4 }- e! g' J% g. s; W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" X: y- X; ?3 ~, t  x( Y3 j, l我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 D, K6 O+ g- \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>