【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 J$ ^# i! A, U) h3 q; C3 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- }9 K) q, w" w: t& }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 o( e0 t9 P. L- NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, ^# @' Z. y) z* UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# q" M! q* G! p$ t, {. ], r2 K- [& v9 MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) n1 b6 w1 b8 V9 O- ~$ K9 W4 W" |% RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 x# n: }6 Y( v7 D( W* j* {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 P& n8 x2 ]9 S- C( w+ Q3 cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* Z. J$ `) c& z4 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 e3 t. ^) i; eWith such a tongue as yours,
: j. L, Y1 @- {# |# f$ QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ O: \1 f+ a7 {  d' K/ hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) b/ O9 h( q  y: g' N% N9 S8 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. p- n! y. M+ j( H+ _7 @" G& b& `4 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' R. W. P( P0 E! \6 i( R" z2 h: K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 g/ I5 w; E& _5 X4 N# s6 {5 P0 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% r/ m8 D& |' T4 C  D9 U- _4 t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 [- z$ }7 ]- w; U  h; }/ j' L! t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" N4 u8 Q. u  B: G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' I0 r" S) I3 ^# f. u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( v; A) z5 K. J8 q/ f8 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* p7 m. w) w, o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* K2 E4 B  p, P& J$ T4 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' U9 ]' T5 ]% ], B, R# N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 A( p. \( O" V0 T, x+ c- s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 [, {- ]9 `5 `3 s  L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, `7 t, f0 v  ~( c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 m9 }" F2 E: ^% O3 ^7 l8 U, A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% M/ P/ `# I) J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! V. D. m0 L0 z2 l# h4 G* O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 ^3 u, ]2 `' D* s+ ]9 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 w2 H3 O/ @2 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, a' c) n# ]: }( b# ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& |- t. j5 G- Y6 q8 R$ U/ ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 ^' ]' C. W( n+ ?7 E9 J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ S/ |8 ?' s& Z7 n* h% i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 g! r* K( _2 B/ h" h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 Z. E7 ?# b% m3 N" z+ _* g: }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 I/ W- Q8 e0 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' ]0 D, Q* K: w2 {+ K. L& @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ ^8 t- t) E* v# b$ d  z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>