【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ t+ U* ^) ~! J3 L歌词我附在后面。
; O' c7 w9 U( u7 x8 y2 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! w0 J0 z* ]& U" E$ z7 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ q& H" g( k' U% v8 \. B  N0 rSeeing the sky content with its love
- Y0 e; k" [; A& X) h  ], r9 P! D  H; GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 i& ~% F8 j. v  R! ^. |+ `You needn’t fear anything
$ x& f5 k" T( c$ EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* m* l( `: \, ]" H1 n/ V1 DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- r7 P* ?; _  M# x3 BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 {, f3 l; w* n9 z. X+ |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% g' V# D/ @. @! f$ R7 x! mI want so much to see inside your heart
& G/ C( n* D  `6 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ h/ u/ D9 M  E, V; S! f, YI’m still filled with fear
, P: Y  u0 I5 }$ _" yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ U# [/ }; N% `# ?9 |( q8 |I regret not dying
1 R9 T. J* p3 v/ J$ u4 Z/ ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 r* J/ }3 s, z& I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 ~5 |6 V/ X. e. S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' z; u, ^) K2 Q) _# B; T) K! i4 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: _4 j& {( S, N# a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 p! f6 I3 c3 T. P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& E2 @6 w( [" d, S2 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, ~2 a5 I* u. |5 E7 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 I7 m: t% U3 l5 [8 V2 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; d& \6 G& |3 U: W5 `( ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) `3 c$ M4 O$ a5 _  I  w2 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 b- i3 J& G; H: p6 m% ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% E, u. S, J" Q- a, X! h" n2 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 q, A/ P: h6 q- `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 m( b3 [) @- y. Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ ^  M4 K6 N5 a+ v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 h9 S! D( E1 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# P5 G# \' C- c! Z4 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 ^" H7 _1 v5 t  T  d# u5 c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 U* ]; q% e% W# {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 w' H! U. |8 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# r! i2 ^: J& B' `6 c" {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. l0 N9 o! F% I8 @6 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 _! n! S) I! r" K; F) O5 W! ~3 p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 l$ v# T1 o  q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 M% ^: @+ r! u& P  k& x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 |( g7 Q( z2 \1 `" Y" D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( n  W, z+ K* S$ d3 A4 W0 H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. A  s0 R% t) q4 I* w2 t# `3 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>