【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 w) E1 v$ [/ s* n/ sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 \5 f( N3 [- hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 y; O. ]2 \- d) C. P1 e% HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 \3 C! q; T6 q# W; H/ @1 S$ x' mThe sky is happy down to its soul
. T4 h3 Y! R$ h3 @6 w" FWith the moon kissing it every night
+ l( c9 R- d; [6 a) d% Y: L: _9 ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 \0 C$ \* n" p4 l9 Y- MI love you I love you with all my heart
1 v8 D3 M; p. {; Q: B6 pNothing can compare to my love
1 W; a' ?" v+ R) SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 H. |! l. r& ^8 Y; g& J( wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ?! M8 {7 z7 E4 e9 L- M& lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) r! o2 |; M6 Z/ M& O2 L: _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 W0 q$ m& ~" m" v8 r3 IWith such a tongue as yours,
5 h& W. D5 I7 b+ rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, k2 A9 p! }) s9 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& \- J. Y0 q' f: h/ l9 o; O3 v$ cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# \$ C8 w  Z6 S. @" i' n* D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 O" y$ k7 [: e% ~4 |7 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# V& Y! b; J; C- ~2 c# Q' ?' U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 o% g1 X' @; b) A4 P3 |+ }1 w6 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) V% I+ t$ L: h: `" P$ `  m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 t9 Z" C1 G2 S$ P' P$ N+ G  J' b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; l3 V2 i7 U: f+ X) P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- ?* k7 L7 T' |! Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ |; w9 F( A* P( C4 u! A- D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 ^2 H" n8 _# K) _/ X: b3 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: z  k+ w6 L: N. L) z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 ?- Y% r& j9 `1 C9 ?& S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 |8 [! v1 `* N: L8 N: a6 ~3 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 f; ?* n. R6 B1 p* X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. h% G  x. f& p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 ~+ w9 ~7 P$ R0 |' |# S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 `1 a! C6 o1 \9 B8 V' m) b4 u' J$ {0 ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 v$ e  C9 V) S) F# V; a& y3 X1 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 t8 p5 @' Y  G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) V8 e* P4 t$ d! V# o+ g7 V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 w+ c# l8 \# ?5 o; M6 j* Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 I$ n( w3 w( m+ O. `5 J, J: h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 L( B) w5 K2 B& l0 j# Z9 f1 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 I0 Z) Z( X! B) K! i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ C' B  N6 [0 b/ K. g! i9 `: L" ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, ^, `  {: v- l8 x2 |+ J<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! s% |" ~4 v  T2 q7 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 C/ f2 |; r! a* b# g& t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 A* B# r: E* b9 m; f) i$ j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 r  h( V& v5 q) p# J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! a. ?! [. C6 `; ~% b: B* \; [7 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ ^  U6 l; j( U0 `: f: I2 }5 O- V- V5 x, @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>