【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  l  j* P# H; ^; j2 I% E3 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 F! r2 [. ^5 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) p4 U0 F- K) N# P6 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 B+ I& ~# m' X# J; p! B, ~5 HWith the moon kissing it every night
# s$ l' |7 ^1 ?  h; B: fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 D8 d6 d2 A# {( s' sYou needn’t fear anything
& f2 _8 _7 [: ?& X7 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; L: ~; H5 s5 J/ d$ N/ AI really want to know just how much you love me
7 C5 @3 z* ?: KI love you I love you with all my heart
7 I! W/ Q5 {; l& j+ n8 XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! W- u! h! y/ S6 \: g/ R7 eI want so much to see inside your heart
$ a" n' B/ h1 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: S5 R7 ~9 \8 H% o) W$ SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ \8 c/ }, b6 [" R( g6 hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ y' D: @; R2 D2 F  l# k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- O3 k* t  [- q+ j3 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 m8 J0 O$ b+ O: ~! c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' ~% \' T9 p/ p5 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. m% n1 A0 X$ p$ W, ^3 |( D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 L- }# E$ X+ H: Z3 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 K9 }) X+ Y, h7 m3 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 Z4 r5 M1 x3 T$ t) ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' E( k% v+ E. W5 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ v5 u1 z& d; p1 q3 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 ]: Q9 N0 s3 |7 m) t1 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. o" @0 O! U! G: `/ b4 m2 r<P>你无需担心</P>
8 w, ~  `/ J, E& r" s! T  }) W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 X. b: Y- N& t7 ~, ^! X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& d7 T8 ~" y3 q% a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! ^  R( _" r; Y8 O! ^9 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 B/ J7 z/ c2 q( @& P  x& C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 U& i/ e8 I, Y. N% r, v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ j% r5 t% D+ e! g" o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* }- s9 A4 q) D  c5 W/ o" W: p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ P, r/ H7 A2 n4 @* h, m$ r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ T! i% Z8 \4 v1 Y1 [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! p+ C- K4 N; m- @* P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 `* b+ ^6 W9 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 G  g, v% x! j  z9 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. W0 f( J; l. J' }<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ m, q- @: H9 I% e6 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- b  d2 W; n* d# J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  q1 Y& w% r2 h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 ^! M8 Y+ K1 X4 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ [  `( I* @- l) t" F5 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ B! V, f/ K5 B5 Q: P- u: @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& Y9 z6 W, K) G' Z# U2 L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>