【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, ~# _. r7 f" yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- j0 i; X6 ]# |+ I2 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& a5 t2 s) Q5 n3 P4 f8 I: gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# J: \/ T6 u. ~/ fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! R" p' c$ y5 U3 F/ ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 e7 N  B' R7 h. `6 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: z+ ?: [* \, l6 o" V, _' O9 WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* X& j! I3 v0 I# g' wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 E/ C) _; J3 N+ e, V4 ^) jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ C4 g& p1 F  D9 B9 r' x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 ?( O0 {' l0 ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, b$ _1 w% B/ G5 {8 u3 ?) f9 k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ c: \% b* w# c, {, s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ D7 ?* ]* m& Z7 M* K! p# C  D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ }4 w4 |5 ^8 Y! i0 t3 C. n) g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 k2 p/ ?/ z; l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 e# l: z4 x  ^5 Y' A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% @2 k5 U3 F/ h9 H' G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, y& F) M/ V  d, t/ i/ G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ v+ t5 _7 e% t5 F2 _8 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; r* b& d& u6 H7 @7 r& |- Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 @4 \) _7 A# \; @% h; }) x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ y& `+ G7 A- T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 p. Y/ B7 n6 p/ _0 D5 [6 k3 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 o/ S$ x9 ]: E6 U& Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 u' S" z; p# S( a% R0 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ j( E. J9 v' |( v1 M# d( z3 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ O6 e0 |% |8 L2 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 r5 U4 d9 }( `+ B5 b$ x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 e6 |; }9 p) v! l# c/ N- O$ i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( x1 W& N' v8 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 z& M4 t5 q5 v2 z6 x5 x/ @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 {: P% J) M3 i4 J7 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. [5 G7 l! Q0 G5 Q& i6 m, {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 F1 y$ X4 ~: R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ }- h4 u+ D* B$ y; t3 t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" \+ U  F) H* [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 b! Z1 [- e* ?/ O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 j% u7 G9 a9 J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# o  U. F" R$ Z, u4 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& k( S( Z3 C* d: ]- A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- W4 D9 q6 E, Y# `0 b, O" w我请你剖开它
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( O5 _* b( ?6 |5 Y. o4 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 o" z7 k8 g) P' v' F, R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>