【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' y" i$ m5 r3 Z* \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, E& I8 i; L" C/ e* IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* ?0 ~: k1 ]' R/ y: [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ N2 M8 F. O  xWith the moon kissing it every night
0 r+ N  g6 d% w: |! z" C2 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 w1 Q- E, W+ o1 eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" x0 X( g+ m5 V; `( L) E6 EI love you I love you with all my heart
4 {$ W% X3 u& w0 m2 {% x: X9 BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' F7 k- P9 p. M6 X9 k5 I# U* g; WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, L7 b/ G6 F0 E  V4 q/ b6 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 C- J% |3 l7 L7 H4 S! {5 }. gI’m still filled with fear
& e! I# r3 T+ S: n3 U" F" H& LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# r3 y/ o  M1 `4 i# y. E7 |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* W3 y8 \$ L: d& z/ _8 n3 h, OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( i7 |6 b' k9 r: IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ ?3 U' z. I  W. R% k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 s/ j% e) w$ E& @+ h% Z0 C" V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 [+ @+ ]; Z  ?& u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 a. G, j; a4 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 R" t$ \7 |& Q* D- p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 E$ G1 }5 v5 I8 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 T3 f; v" G" c" ?( K<P>你无需担心</P>
; c- z# ?& ^; J+ \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 Q; r6 B! x$ _! q) o; y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ j1 w1 V9 y+ l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ p2 ^4 Z. i, r" B1 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& Y% M' G% R" z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- t; ~) A+ v- h% p  A5 a  P; r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 Y% @6 e5 h" v/ q& V& X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 V. W% j+ P7 T: Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 O" X& n% s5 H. u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" S; o4 m$ e" n8 |9 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 G8 H) _, r& d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 V9 q, K) X+ ~8 {: r/ N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 _, G. Y+ p* ~3 u& X9 s; K( W<P>I regret not dying</P>
! {3 k; D4 q2 K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 _2 k" q1 ]/ Y5 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& O0 K* o' T' K& l( j9 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 {* y: v% H, R+ M% b- k; C1 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, ~. g7 l3 i5 Y0 M" d% D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 y7 u( {3 Q6 n/ k% T9 N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 e% p; h% z: |& N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& i# P; |" S' A- l7 a! l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>