【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ D* L6 \, Q$ w. P6 r6 |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 A; B8 T& T& kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" P. n: S. X& z: Y, o% `6 u; IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ t! x5 B7 A6 [7 |, ~& \Every other word you utter is love
  K2 m7 x/ M( j) t7 vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* J1 x  j3 J1 e2 ^( i+ @/ K& @0 zNothing can compare to my love
5 I# X$ g: H; s7 B0 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. g; K+ ?2 m2 ~9 AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* }5 O4 A3 I# a0 f: r# o& fI want so much to see inside your heart
* `! C7 [* O8 j, }- {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: @5 k# }0 H; ]0 W2 Q) pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 t7 c. D9 Y7 J: g2 BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 g. h" a0 {  A5 o. oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% v! L0 s, J% c' _8 a# Y; t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) {) q+ v; q4 X+ s0 h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 Z# ?! p9 u0 X& c( U1 s: t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 q  X+ @8 ?' c+ e$ W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 n7 s( p) W/ x1 y. E2 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) A3 y  M$ ]( R. @) p* E- D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 _' {, `) T7 _/ h' b% Z$ ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 X; k7 P  `5 h/ G1 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* d' |$ P  p& i: A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  d% j: f; v+ r4 ~# n<P>你无需担心</P>
( K* I; {  I' r) U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ ^7 M3 K6 z/ M: B" l! Q- Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# T9 S# T! P* g8 k' ]2 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& b1 s0 {& b4 N% f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* W5 y& c* k; j$ S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 z4 @& d1 s1 s- e7 g; _+ q7 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ [1 g1 e$ B  ^8 U9 k$ z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ c$ `& F& l1 q1 m+ L1 q: p; h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 q1 D; ?9 K) A( T  y4 l, v. l7 b( S: l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ H& r7 @4 l) }8 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 C4 Z0 [8 x1 @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 S9 A" q6 v) r/ r/ B; ~6 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ P1 d$ @8 ]. _' A& ~( \) M* L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 |  [# y4 m4 w* ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; c3 |) w) z/ v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& v" F' V9 R& Z- v. T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 |0 J8 ~( C1 W. f' A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& o! n! l' B' }9 W# g7 C0 P4 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 j0 j6 b; E/ u4 }: u% ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ p6 g; |; t$ |1 n5 Q* u& c, V# T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- v5 C# q; W9 m6 u/ Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ ?1 H6 Y6 h% X- B+ b" b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  [1 f8 w+ d. a# j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 }, ?4 [2 ~6 f8 E& S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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- D/ X* s1 [. g# W. H3 ^6 a& S1 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& c! q' _* O9 i' o( w0 e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>