【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ W1 X: K1 N5 i! v+ q7 Q& tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" R; z9 e( C( |5 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 N9 n4 m' o8 w/ c1 bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 x; Y% y. q; @: [. |7 ~  E1 XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 I) R# M3 F& C3 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( S6 b4 Y1 R! [1 N' V  A5 q) }9 KI really want to know just how much you love me
; C/ p: R, a7 g0 s$ D9 jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 r  q5 ^. s; b/ zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' B' i0 }0 g& c, ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* d: P8 `( ~' l. f6 n5 b$ AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# _- z0 }: W: J; j; h8 s: C  ~I’m still filled with fear
8 M! j# ^" j8 C5 X* u* v* iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; R* y5 o* u  b, e/ v+ cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' b/ G! m8 e3 u7 k7 mWith such a tongue as yours,
1 h# }% u) z- ]$ yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 J; k& E5 \6 U3 U3 k& E* eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ k2 t0 b* c* l! W/ O3 S) Q7 e; F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& R% Z' ]6 m1 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 S/ X' w4 [  s5 w, i7 c% n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, N$ n1 J/ C7 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 z* i6 I+ A5 e3 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ Q0 f6 `& f' \8 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 F4 \/ v0 _; d8 A: {5 u+ `1 q; s! R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. s. b$ F/ w$ ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 N# |$ Z* }! X4 s, E: ~& }<P>你无需担心</P>
8 X% N& F+ z4 \- q- d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! V/ B& o* @( c+ r1 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: B0 f% ]$ C0 x0 {$ l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 ?1 I* A, k# M$ V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' D: V) e% U# v! f5 M. V6 j  r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 a" U7 o8 o) Q3 s& X! p9 ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; q+ d6 o  h% @+ R, A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 d0 F- @) G5 M8 w- }9 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  @+ w" A# y; R+ b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ h$ k) |  Z/ X$ q5 ~# N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* ]  U1 q1 \) I4 y: R' m8 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 M$ x# f% z5 G9 |% a. r) E1 \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& Q+ k$ f# E5 Y. \6 J: t1 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" F2 W' I4 ?- W" S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 x. c: y, l1 p2 B/ N+ ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# `; X" N7 w' k2 }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 X& {9 J/ S# ~( z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 q& b) W/ m! x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 t: E2 N9 _" ?* Q2 G% \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# |2 Y6 P2 R' n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) p$ l# B, o4 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>