【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  D& v% Y4 P' W$ [, P3 O. vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 s" b  x0 L1 M2 x. @" \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* g' Q" K3 ?5 o% _7 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! j7 k6 o8 `6 V! d$ [) `The sky is happy down to its soul
( Q& F/ J* j  x' y! P5 L! V  O! IWith the moon kissing it every night
+ E; I/ j% U# j! b$ e* x; S  hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 ]! S& Q; A9 h3 `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ y& L9 ?+ S0 c/ @: H! wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 Z$ ?6 x2 Q/ C- y  ^5 n* DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% c( K7 ^2 R2 o- @6 R* G: fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 X. A% R. U: H8 k% d6 I; p( ]2 `With such a tongue as yours,
6 T: i. c3 |7 x; \: mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 }8 |3 e% h- D7 L) c$ [$ W$ f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 i9 I4 \/ G, d; s1 V8 [$ p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* r+ X! j, J9 N: w: }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 D3 g8 R2 G! r. i" J: R2 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% L( D( o- D( ~  N- X# z! t) N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# ~8 j* F0 X1 q# Y+ U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- H  w% h0 e/ ]$ P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 z/ X  @7 l- n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* u5 c  |6 M6 ~5 I: f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* n/ P; }8 m2 }9 a/ K( F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 _4 w1 \  q9 C! f0 @# Z1 y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 K5 Z  f/ W) w7 z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% `, L0 H5 b4 w$ m' K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 l# h/ V: N: F8 [& C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' C( Z1 T. X2 h" L& `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& N; g3 P' |7 y9 y, P4 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ D6 v: y6 j9 V( D% h9 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 p/ g4 f4 N# _5 I( }* V- ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; v7 k( Q& p6 j5 r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( C7 y1 U3 R; K/ {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, x# j6 C3 y" |: V! u5 o/ |0 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 J% M+ Z! d- E& R  x7 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 H0 N  [( [+ _$ I2 i0 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; }& ^7 a7 M! O! ^1 F1 d( b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, i0 D% r  @3 k$ F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' u5 G' \, Y) ~6 b- \$ T. F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; P% d+ r+ s7 I& b, V! F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ W' P" a* @' h/ e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& k" t8 r$ X: Q# g" Y8 |) y! k3 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% Y' U4 C4 ?2 ?2 D' k) T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ E. W+ ^5 T$ b% i% P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! d7 o% n, C) D, \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; k, W4 g# l$ S! i, c, @" ^, o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 @* N8 m! D, }9 A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 U' M8 p/ z7 A* d. t我请你剖开它

$ g9 ^9 E6 I, L0 h: t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>