【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ W% ~* w& Y% q8 J歌词我附在后面。
: U& F$ ~6 L4 H1 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 W& g& H/ N3 T/ Q# }& KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: k0 S) j. T1 t8 |3 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 p; p! K& s4 n" _5 c0 ^5 {$ KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' ~& Q5 I" L0 [% M9 E# J8 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& [. Y' a" m) o4 O& Y6 @/ JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 d4 C& d# s9 j, E4 o2 S0 HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% `% L4 r+ Y5 a9 c% V1 BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 t' ?3 x$ s+ c9 kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' E8 L5 O! g0 x2 Z! A; ]4 ?, NI want so much to see inside your heart
3 [- W5 n+ W6 C; F7 o4 T  pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 }$ [6 Z) y$ l8 v6 kI’m still filled with fear
3 u7 u, ~5 h, ^7 e+ ?7 q# w6 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) Z. x  q, V1 x% vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ R( a" p6 x' C7 ?, y" xWith such a tongue as yours,
# P/ B: d3 K# v5 w! [+ T% pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 B1 i' `% K0 a' d, g+ fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 B+ w, B$ e1 z6 O$ i) @- M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% U0 N) Y! c4 S4 x# n4 W# V4 |- C9 N* A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 ]! T/ p. q! a& I/ O" V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; d' J, }; B( s/ {$ \- n5 V$ G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' s: S0 J9 T4 R0 g2 m+ M8 V! J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ k- e( Y+ ~: f0 Q* K2 K1 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' K* [; O2 Z* h- O7 s8 p  `, ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 L0 U" F  F" j8 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 K# g) T1 c- A3 R( `$ w/ y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 J) n7 D3 B) Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 x2 e& p! u: q: n' L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* B2 g$ v. r9 S" u: \7 w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 x  r0 [0 L: E: i$ ?: H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 A1 J! {1 e/ L! d: _* S/ X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# T% [! S: O6 F2 @9 @' d- Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 |) E, O' c  L  B' v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& q  U* D1 D* s6 R6 g! i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ p  d$ X6 B+ l/ s% F. a( Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: Q9 m3 `. V! W4 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 g% ~# n* i* I- K8 B4 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 B  l) v* }& K% y7 }/ i' h% W- n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* r% o) @7 K5 }' d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ y; L% _1 C6 Z' Y5 @' O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>