【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 K2 [' e0 @: }/ D: O( U0 A歌词我附在后面。
) Z/ W2 A' i9 q* g! mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& U9 f3 Q# H9 I3 a4 }9 XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* E4 H0 j) R. N' i& o/ {5 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- S# T8 E! a1 y- Z7 KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. ?7 B3 U1 Z/ v. @$ e1 K/ s, jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! x5 ^  q# e+ n' |# @( qYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! }4 T( f. w5 K, f/ v: r" |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ a8 G$ d4 f, ~" }8 Z' s# O+ T8 d) LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- m& [& r1 A5 y0 I) u, {1 R/ R8 q9 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" G7 n; ?! T/ k9 Y5 P  L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 h, _: E( F  g- n- ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# {* d% W; @; }' n- Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 G9 q( H* Z$ @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) X2 D% ]$ n% R% a8 Z1 F# m9 I" |, p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 y) D5 D! P! X5 y2 t+ ]3 b, i" p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' V6 F/ j$ s+ I# s5 Y3 d1 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 Y8 q! j/ e% b* m6 A5 T) }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 E: S1 B1 [8 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 a+ b9 G4 b6 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) m8 W% R( C! G$ {5 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 p2 o& i' p/ w8 [9 `' ~- w/ z( m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ W# K1 }1 W. O4 \, p4 S- ^8 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ g  F5 I! a- G7 l8 m) i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& v  Z( ^6 N& W; v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 N/ Z3 i* I, a( ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 {, Y4 b' r& D7 x9 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  H2 x7 q( s5 k% L4 C( w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) `* E' G2 r0 N# E% v( O3 g; l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, n; V" e5 K8 C2 k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& z+ U) Q( f( a6 ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 m5 d" f# h; ~; ~, ^& X& x2 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- A* N. T6 ~' J1 B, X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>