【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 ?: U; ^" H  v  j* y6 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' N( m9 N7 h* b2 x3 O5 [2 n. ~The sky is happy down to its soul
' W+ E  W6 b/ KWith the moon kissing it every night
7 X, V2 B! x, v; d. QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- Q! j. _, ^* Q% }6 a; @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ P3 Z( R( w% Z9 TNothing can compare to my love
( u* A! K1 W. ^) MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( ?, v: l; l' |& l6 FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ P% b0 `& O4 Q4 FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 T# k9 |# ^. JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 C& y+ L0 ^/ t# AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' o& Y5 n( U2 n; A' n2 D! ]5 d' [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 Z0 q$ s2 y. e2 a* s* y7 z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 D$ ~& F' L+ h9 x6 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 }" ]' o9 X* R/ _6 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 e/ b' v# l" h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: Y# `: d6 E( @/ I" v# M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* G! e: j' K. P" e1 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 v% D9 h# m  U8 m2 ]8 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- O5 s3 |* B2 b7 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ F* b7 ~, X) a% a' u" P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% \: w  s& H3 b7 u& v" n* U* A( A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 }" ?& E3 e  R) y) g<P>你无需担心</P>
- B0 q# [: R+ }% l* A! |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 S' r: a$ i: \- l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  L4 s4 z& W- f: u: B1 C% \  n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; Q" b. s* n, S' i! W2 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 ^( ^% `! ^+ f0 O- j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ p9 G; t  f& D* v, s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 S9 @7 b' ^, O* Y4 b9 a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; N- n& y6 m3 A3 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( P0 {4 S3 ^9 B+ k) d( N+ \/ y( q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 u+ I. ?4 ^9 O& B( v0 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 k+ w3 ^# {/ i0 r$ Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( t* f# \6 z6 Z% h' c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ i9 W! Y$ d  n: f3 Z* d1 t0 q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* `+ T" e/ A/ B0 \3 F3 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 r1 w) u  W7 Z% w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 z% U7 r7 U4 G. o/ L6 R7 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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; r6 K) G* y  N  d1 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ u0 Z! c: v3 a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>