【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 t* @- p* `4 B" o/ Q# F5 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# P0 [' M# O7 @! k7 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 f0 @( }3 A$ S9 h5 T# Y2 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
% ~$ @/ N' m; |8 S6 yWith the moon kissing it every night
  l9 t0 v& S8 n6 Q5 z9 i. Q+ zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" ~$ m0 S$ y$ J% w3 f8 iNothing can compare to my love
; [/ f. K) o( x9 H, t; {2 qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( B$ a. L5 v$ W% d2 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 Q7 l. N+ [5 I1 L6 Y# jI want so much to see inside your heart
  ]+ T* @" e- P5 S& w/ C9 |* mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 m' J% W% Y3 X' {6 nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 E* X" U) \! Q5 v. ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& z" U1 ]5 e# U2 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! u1 v, [! I: ]# g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* D/ d, L2 F# j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( ^0 y1 Q( X6 p/ ]7 e9 s  v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 [4 [+ a% @! m# X9 m' H3 b) ]* l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) H6 [6 o' |! w$ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 a" F( z5 T4 q" _/ C& h) w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- S6 ^$ R! `/ J: ?" Q. e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 i! F  Q( n( }% I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ |; [) l) A. _4 C) w% Y" U: N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: g5 f  C! l9 J9 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! c) L# E/ I( F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ K7 Y, v) I9 n# s: h$ ?% t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& ~0 K2 s% H$ ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 A3 b: U1 C! P8 e& t3 q# U% h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: |6 E' `# w( _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- m& G8 H. N2 ^4 Y+ ?, J5 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- c0 a) C, @  K0 h% J: ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 k+ [$ M4 \- _: c. b8 A* k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 p: Q# Q) }4 Y: n# I* `, @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 P4 F* @: W8 L9 d4 J, G% t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- c- D$ w- ?& ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 `3 g9 Q! ^& l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) ^1 g3 K* ?: J4 s( W% H; z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! q" `% B% b; J+ j& {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 n3 `/ w" w4 D0 ~) W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 J, g) ^' |1 _0 u# R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 I8 o  O# T) r; q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>