【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 K( N& q9 ^! p9 R/ A( AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; v1 N, D7 p; [! n, [1 S. QThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 T; V8 a  [5 s9 w' B! v# T0 [' QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 D7 u' Q/ @; y, G9 `9 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 ~/ H2 C, v* p* W/ `+ AI really want to know just how much you love me
- e, J' T6 s" G4 ?! q% i" ?2 r# CI love you I love you with all my heart
8 ]' l& }& @  x2 T5 z% ]Nothing can compare to my love
7 l" r& Z7 e( f' yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* f7 d1 K" P+ RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ x, a% Y$ I' B% uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 D. F8 a& ]$ L* ?9 LWith such a tongue as yours,
' V1 ^0 }5 I! f% f. xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 ^$ \8 W6 ?6 T: F' P4 U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 s# p& m8 G& Q0 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, ?$ r8 ^& t4 _" S/ }  z) L9 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( I$ s4 ]. z- i2 O: V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  `2 J) m) G. S) U* P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" t( D0 o, a" h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, V0 p! w8 G$ p3 h) R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 b; o) @3 ?0 E5 N. x# r1 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# C0 A# V3 I! a* }. Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 W3 w: W4 f6 |6 G8 T. P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; g9 B" |8 w: P1 ]1 c# Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 t! Z, C, r' l7 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  m- O, j6 W$ Q6 y1 J" f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 a, i6 o1 d: Y* a5 p2 P5 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 S# T, I3 d( m9 n0 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: T; @* l1 L" I9 ^9 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 G' j, X6 j' a% @& M* ^1 f  N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' O0 @# |" X# Z% z2 P7 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' g+ D4 u7 E, P% Y5 q4 H( m3 s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 ~1 M- ~" i7 K! E( w% K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 |; j! y' Z" Y5 D. X& ]2 ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& ?. n6 Z& k" h, D1 P+ l<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 s0 K" k! ]8 V- V$ F# @8 E0 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 N% ~( W, g' t3 N- a; `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 u9 h1 ?* e- s, t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& {5 |' {$ l1 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 d1 g+ o; d1 \# o1 J: Y; F我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>