【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& b, f- l# \3 S+ o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 F1 {* S: l& ~1 P0 U2 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 H% }3 E! @7 F. z; IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% S- K$ ?+ h% `9 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 r4 x" c* R9 h- j& h3 C) H& iYou needn’t fear anything
  I5 T0 R- J  ]1 j6 E1 Y9 ?' MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& {/ H8 V0 E; \3 u2 hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ I" F3 s# A4 Y% c. fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 D9 g/ m3 C8 |- G8 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: v: \' L  F. h: [4 z& lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* ]' z, a, F5 d# X7 u  h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 |! w( d2 K4 I" G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% Z' P6 D2 b* a5 ?, U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, f' _/ [9 k. {) |8 q- E4 B" I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# j" X  Q! Y* v0 l* U+ N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* n2 v9 Z' ?% t& W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 i! S0 f' |$ ]! i( ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& t1 Z! Q: Q$ A9 u% Y& m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 r$ h% X8 ~% a$ J7 }7 P" H; W, _2 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ J" L0 [4 h/ q' U+ V- n) ?8 J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 j) d4 V4 |! G1 _; W, Q2 h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) z, C* y/ A5 B- F% x& |* U! X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, r$ s* }/ e, F/ y8 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 a4 v0 G/ |$ p  n2 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! ], q# Z8 o4 j6 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ M+ A' r. q) A" E& N9 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ n; _* |( y  {: O$ v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 D  H+ A# v  _3 I% I- i, A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 d9 w4 f; g, z7 J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( `# o# s6 a" s  |( d# K4 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 `4 D* A5 I* y1 G2 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 M, X8 Q$ m) y: X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; v3 I4 g, G0 L2 Y4 S- |<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 n3 Q- m4 {& D0 c5 s; o8 R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 I- m& Q3 p  w5 A+ c& i% X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. e  w7 e! w9 M" a$ o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' S1 v- b, N) Z" c6 L3 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) _7 `: Q8 L; C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' G& I- T$ w0 ]% Q' u" c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>