【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 w) ?: S' L0 q) h. `5 R! a7 HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- a$ u& i9 }1 ~5 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 X, J( V  M7 D' HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; F9 o; v# _: n- w& }/ BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" S% w( G* z' @; jYou needn’t fear anything
* l' F0 {& o: yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% e  y5 [& d8 V+ i* f" M. D- l0 \% UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& u1 M8 R0 n9 ], PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" W+ J/ I/ r5 x0 M7 w1 IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  O+ G7 U) K. w4 _0 JI want so much to see inside your heart
9 Y. z3 S+ V1 e. g) XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. @* Q' b! P, U5 r. jI’m still filled with fear
; p2 x( n4 B: t# W5 {" }. [0 U  ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: j9 a5 D- A$ ]0 p( {# q# n7 A% r6 sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 B% r% @: K" t1 s+ @9 W; P- k9 tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" D1 {, z) p: U' J& VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* |3 z  e- I2 \0 z: K. MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 X: i' x# L% i+ M. c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ h* |& z* ~2 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% X0 g4 }1 F8 c& w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 h& T: @$ ]; F6 t$ Z* m$ V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' i! a- b6 g, \( f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 O! W/ e: e' ^* |+ S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# }: d# o$ F+ u) v4 L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 n! J; T# s) W1 g' D( ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  ~9 j( h  c+ m& V7 Q& x' n: d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 G( L! ?% j1 I3 J) A9 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- T- t$ M. l1 @8 m7 K* |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) u* R6 |) F4 S1 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 G9 Z2 G& _- V/ G" X6 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- W6 ?0 ~" L6 r: Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" g2 c  ?) b- h* B8 Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% w: m1 n& V( R$ T" T6 M, U4 d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 @$ D3 D" S' o, {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- v) |) u! u/ f* H, @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" ~, a7 P! V7 ~1 Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ F7 p4 u1 W, v) d& d9 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 O2 x/ q& a; I! B& f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" B) y0 n) ]/ W# t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) C" c1 ?) j  t  @7 V* f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 e  R# v3 W/ G. X4 w我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 [2 S* r3 r2 k# N& I7 [8 e& Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>