【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  g+ I% _7 G" F3 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 U% Q0 p2 g9 z1 qWith the moon kissing it every night
" T( q/ K* r& ^( G7 F" G! S- a: [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 o# Y, |9 d# T+ o: w; y9 pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 K& k& r* @& q# nI really want to know just how much you love me
; k( B( E/ a- r! h$ \& |* A5 nI love you I love you with all my heart
' D2 o% x1 }/ oNothing can compare to my love
4 B6 M; `+ Y/ g4 w4 T. S) f0 Q, s5 C. SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 [+ Q7 s' X4 U& }I regret not dying
" a8 b# G8 D; [1 EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) [8 `# i& a" I) S& `. o" [6 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 h% _. z3 I  `, [8 o6 ]- e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 D( L7 A4 ]* x  `& }8 t6 N2 u' C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' R# o, \- }8 u' W: @# R' Z6 d1 X* x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 {' y1 y1 I% Y/ c) V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 ?1 S- x8 S2 W4 a* I8 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: h3 Y! k  C; t! ?% g. }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 {3 _+ C3 \  q1 D% ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 s  ]7 i9 ]* A  `+ i* i  \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* f+ s% f3 B' u  V! W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) ]- \( ~" _8 P& }+ Z* t7 L% {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 B9 \1 e$ N5 x9 f' y2 C" `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  \! B' y. p$ O2 N6 ^$ I, u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! t3 \$ g* E  d# K9 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 d6 G5 b, X* C) _6 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 X8 |/ S  s5 Q/ L8 o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 l5 y/ B7 ?0 Y" [" e. M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. A  G1 k7 c) V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 v' p* g9 |9 I. d! Z( y1 e% a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& f5 L$ I- [) u: p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 G% g/ s! S# i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 |1 n$ Z* \% }1 L4 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- m9 q1 `6 C; F* v8 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. o7 d& H: f3 f# _6 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# [" B6 j" {. g* Z: R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 b6 m; e/ C9 N: {9 {* ~6 ~4 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& F( }( v" W1 s1 v- J1 k2 f: N/ ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>