【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 n' K; q" t& b( t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 p0 U0 t$ Y. P! Z4 n  m/ @2 N$ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) x( x/ {7 i1 u0 w* v. QThe sky is happy down to its soul
  V0 U' R( t; n" i1 PWith the moon kissing it every night
! k6 _# o$ ?9 @1 ^, }9 |Seeing the sky content with its love
9 y8 C! s0 v( f, ]" b+ N$ KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ r9 o# k- ^3 ?) `) K6 wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# v- M; I$ T+ o+ o- EEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 Y$ }; ]' R4 y9 j7 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! V8 [7 @% K* \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 U  t1 J7 y/ P. HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 h, c) j( n  t- P' SWith such a tongue as yours,
5 a% Y8 v) f, l  }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 \" S: W7 z) f0 y8 j/ O# {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 V9 j# w0 [" F# }, f: M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( W9 E9 d# {: h3 `* D9 P- w; G3 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: J3 g) \5 C1 A& F& U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 g* }: G% ]- A; h/ R% z- L( n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 r9 c) }, d4 ~6 G" w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, @6 i: w) R$ `& |+ q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 f  E' g6 P! |' m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ w; @' l1 }" I1 F" c9 h' I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 w& [: }1 {: B" ^* s2 a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 W6 ~* w9 i8 \# Q* O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% e+ o2 f0 e+ w$ C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 @% y# W; A/ m. Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 ]! b9 M7 t/ N6 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ H, R9 m4 }7 Z' U( d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ ?& }- Z, B( m4 R0 R( c8 g  S7 W$ L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* Q. p$ Q; |3 d4 ^' H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 K% I$ D- x! m# o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 s0 L) ~6 [7 B; }/ K$ j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ E" e" c( ]5 F! t; w2 p; ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% n& _1 l; Z& e/ q7 v3 H: B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 h. ?6 v+ c1 }0 l2 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ [8 O8 x5 D1 R( E& x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 i; V+ s; d& t/ k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 S& J6 v; Q% H1 c( G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
2 E+ w3 W* w, w
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>