【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( b2 T9 y( g. `/ H' d4 x, [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, r! k" y. w8 R9 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( W: D, _; L% M0 i  h5 z: x: rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% X/ e2 P" {$ q; u* r0 f; TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- j8 W7 y$ C5 b% J2 V; r# c- PYou needn’t fear anything
) a' r2 \- w, {( |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" l0 w7 E$ M. A* A7 W1 Z  G  dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ o1 m. h) I* L6 \- j& O/ GNothing can compare to my love
3 t: }4 a0 H4 c& m$ J' `, lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 L) Z5 j- [* I( oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 U4 U4 b% w9 R- V1 f; u, oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ w% J% X& p6 L9 i6 H3 LWith such a tongue as yours,
/ Y" o1 L+ F- _( f9 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 D$ E- N! h" I% Y. Y' J, T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( ?; o6 G6 G3 j5 s5 N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 ~( Y+ T" [" M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 {" Y/ W) R  k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  T0 n) d# E' a4 D: y5 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" t+ B) @; Q/ C1 Y" g3 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 h2 Z/ {2 L2 N% o' c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" i$ U" I# b* \7 b+ t  q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 J3 l" N$ n" y, ]' n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 M# U: q4 O3 T5 n1 E8 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: B  w$ C9 ?3 q$ L" M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 G6 y9 w2 A. [9 m3 V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ e' [' i/ X4 h) Y+ O1 D& R8 F& y/ K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( z4 G  {, {5 \4 o& O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 O% y0 g5 D8 F& {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 P8 \2 z  C, p7 ^' A7 K( v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, m2 r' ~1 `/ P/ m) c5 B. W# z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 S$ P/ k; x0 |( P4 |% I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 Z& R% H: A4 _  s/ w4 ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 W( P. _( V+ X# ]2 K  B; @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 Y8 G5 t/ i0 H: g4 P  f5 r6 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% Q% G2 p% m' l) r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" @1 f% x/ X3 d3 c/ M! M# M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 X# F0 g* d/ ?" b% A& H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. f# _  \9 v) d/ P9 O; h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 X( G/ |% x( w6 D. Q3 S& a6 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# ~, O, X: V7 J9 g我请你剖开它

# }& I0 b9 F: M; ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>