【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 i' C5 J$ h' M7 N$ cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, E0 p9 X4 p) C9 t* ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% C, F4 v: L( I  ~  j( bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! w% R6 l/ O7 Q4 u6 s8 o# WSeeing the sky content with its love
% j7 {, n8 F9 b  {( z. gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- y0 V( ?& }% |1 J: IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 c2 W0 r+ }. b' i( eI really want to know just how much you love me
7 m3 {) [$ r' _4 D, \3 L0 ^) \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 S$ x3 ~$ ?2 d3 z! J" uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- G' v' H7 Q* T( |( |3 [I want so much to see inside your heart
, d( h% z" Q9 ~* Y( AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 h1 i( |! f' }, w* ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 [& m& P, v8 O! z( d$ }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 r8 W" E( I3 gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; b% u6 `, d  o! D8 ^% X7 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 I7 J! Q! Z  s& y. a% S: [9 N  P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, i' z# B' w$ Z- f) o: \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* W7 P; G( q2 Z" @; J, ^' Y( L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  U# ?4 e- M* T- p# K; h2 M! |9 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( ?" N: d& W8 b* O$ E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! B+ V: h! {! f3 J& ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 T% Z& s  `4 X# x; S! r7 Z1 o$ z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 Z2 s( v6 ?! U9 X( [) K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 d% b* n. x0 V- h8 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& }. X  w* \5 s! o3 J4 a6 F& ?2 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ h8 }0 C: g( n* s  W5 h% ~8 d, W<P>你无需担心</P>
# |9 @$ t3 H5 e# i7 j; G" _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 Y1 }% N; S" ~) N4 x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& K- B: [% I. [5 I/ }  D) K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) X: E4 [+ F( }' \4 h+ J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 R& E1 ]! K# W5 M! ~( Y' g. X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 N( Y, n( Y6 p, h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& U* i- _& y. U% h# a& s4 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 g/ n* A" S" B. B9 a$ F3 y, Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, Z& Y. }% g) S9 T$ p3 Y! C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 s8 y2 E- [4 s$ h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 |6 F! ^" G4 E  y/ `* ]; n<P>I regret not dying</P>
  H% M0 X% P' e* B% u" h5 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  V( e! i$ I2 l2 r2 h# N; k: [6 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 ^- v' V& D& |9 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& {( V# V- z* z5 F: n! ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* H/ w+ T% D: u( k  A' x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- Q7 \+ o4 {6 X4 N. b; d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

/ ~+ Y5 ^0 @. o' L$ e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>