【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 O- u* O! a7 |( \# p2 T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ x5 v5 C6 p3 |  F8 Q+ }+ ?0 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  U* p9 R# m# h' tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) e- U- j/ a2 `  lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" A: N  [4 P2 P$ ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 W  m5 b* f( i7 ~9 U( G0 G! GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 o! z+ U& P1 |, u' K% lI want so much to see inside your heart
! H- S% L+ R. KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) P7 `; |( E) y& H0 x: XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ B  _  A& T" z7 s( sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. J% u, ?9 e! l6 u3 Y) KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 Q" k$ `8 e# `5 e' a2 [8 J" FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 ~7 t, i1 }+ h" Q' O5 O' B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 g! a/ Z: _# R6 J- L/ l- b$ L' G* n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. S9 K1 ]7 D8 r' o3 @- M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 m' H1 A8 N8 G) Q& J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 O0 m1 f! s( L! }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 I" J: z. s) n8 @/ J4 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 D: i7 ~) M6 B; I  z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; r4 e1 q) }* O5 N. l1 y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  G, Q# j2 h3 ?% O) X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 I6 B# l2 |+ l7 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ z' }1 X9 ]  B1 `) j- m: I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, l) `) y4 p& A# n4 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& l/ e# [% s& q* n% S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) d3 ?' L, M0 O9 b4 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 n) V( h/ n  I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 B. e/ p% S% s; V% j! Q! O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 j8 a3 O5 D% y9 ?1 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, ]: `1 R8 {( n% \/ h/ X) H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! I% L+ X# q' O; v! D7 x7 n) N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ d7 \9 R" B4 Q( n/ j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 t. X/ j& u8 i; }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 C" B2 M& e* f5 Z7 g5 Z) E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. ?% P  c: Q6 p: v* R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! F# z5 }) Y( g, @6 D7 ~5 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 Z% W2 ~  {) L, |5 _8 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- Y+ d# o1 r. j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>