【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 X) f& p5 Y. D: IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, _! g% N4 j6 p4 Y$ sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) T! s; G9 d# N0 g% G  `% V0 T. @9 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 Q5 W2 I! g) {' C) {Seeing the sky content with its love
, a4 l2 I' v* K  @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- r2 T1 {7 e: h3 E9 XEvery other word you utter is love
* y$ @6 t$ e: R* ~6 z! A9 uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. I0 `) F0 H5 x" R- ^& XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ ?" m) `: E3 F2 LI’m still filled with fear
' p+ O& l- l4 J8 H% IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: W+ _' I" G. ?6 r( J0 e: DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! G9 D: {' i. _! U/ i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 `& z- n$ {) g- }; k* ^. K# a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 O# e1 x* G8 w% S% c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* @# H9 _" e' i4 C. K4 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  ^- Z# t; N2 t; k: [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& c! E! \" i9 t6 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 n( d. e; S$ h( u3 C- d  z% j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* X+ `- w, y% I9 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! S- b8 R& g9 k& x% Z* `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 ?) K) n# d  V; w& [$ ^& L. _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 d9 z5 [6 v# x2 P5 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 |& ]1 `+ d$ L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 {8 u, n% r/ G: j1 I. W4 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 [# v2 U; }; E, t) s% W) c" t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 w: d+ Z1 P/ U4 l- d2 e, t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, N  j/ ]- o- F& ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- }) O  K3 ^) c& `8 y$ [2 ]+ J2 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 O9 D+ x; {# u3 h3 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 P) T- E/ Q0 B4 a# J/ b3 I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 N2 j6 d5 h4 k6 Q# |6 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- y+ P* W) l; h1 B/ q% @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) P1 {% D- B9 ]+ L2 V) }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 U( E, T* S% ?6 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* n2 Q& a) x  [) l& K1 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 |' `7 x% ~( y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. G! q( `4 ]8 ~% P$ V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- C& _8 H% E' U. e: u# `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( V4 s1 R$ Q2 d& y1 A) J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' y! g3 i8 @3 e: Z4 {. k我请你剖开它
% P! I. o4 ], v1 I
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>