【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" `3 f! @* N5 a+ S5 I5 D8 F9 d1 y& |/ gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* l, |" q/ W1 A1 \- B+ D  v% Y! g" oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 M1 b. E; c) F5 _8 E2 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! \( p6 B! |& n% @! S3 qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) q* h5 g2 K6 KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 i1 \3 A  i/ w. z- p- {! G0 i; eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# k% N3 C& d, ]# ^) W, xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# v+ W5 c. k6 {3 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 H* p' `6 T" l) p% i1 h( Y# l* @6 ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: r. }, D3 J9 v. zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( H! Y3 W( W' j4 m" G! n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ v$ w& x* b! ]- P$ E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* q# _; d& Q! @7 s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- J& }3 T9 n3 q$ c4 |6 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 _# I5 D& r, R3 g* \0 ~: V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ i) C& s! P+ }3 _+ M" |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; v7 U( f/ ]+ m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) J+ n# ^: Y. x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ K# T. p5 r8 l' K- f1 I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. F2 D! q) R+ C1 _& C: M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, H: w  W$ v' X/ `" U- g! X" L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ @9 R9 D! ?( U; I  t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) j& x+ I' D0 k' v: H& L: S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# g0 g, L4 h2 O2 O) a2 D5 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) ~5 K1 z5 Y) w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ t% v0 Q+ D: M2 {- X9 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) Y3 K+ t5 G' `9 ]! j0 |6 E' r+ c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 z# g; n) `! o7 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# o! Y$ P! {# |  t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ |' ^  U4 U! H' L1 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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