【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 Q% p7 b/ s7 ~  u) uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) A0 x6 V9 C! Y* T$ CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, x% Q/ R. I3 s: t% _: x6 _+ o# m! WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 g# e) _, w+ d8 ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 x9 T) e7 T3 CYou needn’t fear anything
9 L0 _) ~( o9 j* F9 U2 c4 t$ _" bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* }* p: Q+ V8 e  \& s" AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 b. H; B5 @" c0 l( [+ j/ s" ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& T4 T; e" O: K& S6 A, d( ^- DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# r) y) [* |' k1 @1 q" `  E' bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: _4 ^1 e" ~0 @: Y5 K% HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" \, \9 F$ B+ }5 s1 SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! ~: N" Z1 i3 }: t& N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ {# q: O  `) s( c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- _/ q' }, z' ~5 C! M4 J3 W& C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* s$ a2 z* u$ ]% g3 {$ M% }/ x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 x& M* Y1 {1 {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ H1 ~# C% F  e! S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 p7 d, [/ y5 O$ D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) s1 G& p# T- r  s2 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 ]8 @% N! f' b8 F4 m/ u, g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 C; Z3 f3 Z/ c1 F# o! T7 F, |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% ?( d: }& d: k1 u9 @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 X' c% E" h8 K0 c* H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, P6 `) n: C9 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ L* W, n) E6 X; _6 K; n( B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ s7 a5 I; ], h% V4 {* K6 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; n" w9 H9 E: v% e/ L2 k! g7 ^7 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) [! u7 F; {% K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 ~. d8 x3 r# B7 |/ }2 N- E% x- _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 p; X. O/ _2 _. c4 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 {. y- O* n( ~$ z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! y! f; t' S" W& C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 Y8 y' I, S/ e4 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' J7 p' N3 h+ ~  Y; O6 C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% _& ~6 z3 P. b6 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 H! Q, ^; F; S! q7 _1 D, Q. W2 i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' ?" j% q7 n0 V8 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 ]5 F8 }* E+ v' t, U& [' f% ~- t% U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 n4 d4 {3 _, D$ W# I; V/ E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& m% m+ |* x/ d' a* Y% v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ w/ X- O+ F: n  f# p4 E- H6 D1 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>