【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 r" p' v# I  ^6 _! sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 L2 g( V: w) f1 Y2 o) BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  T! J9 T3 U3 ^9 }) xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 }6 F' w) Q5 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  v, t5 z8 V4 a$ xYou needn’t fear anything
! i5 X& D2 @0 p7 n+ XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ ~% K2 F' Y0 r: z- g5 fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" `6 T$ Z0 r, E5 \/ CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 z/ `7 O. [1 p/ xI want so much to see inside your heart
  v; d( v6 @. }0 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' x. X8 O' m( i# `. B+ b8 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  r9 X1 K  C# O( F5 b3 B1 yI regret not dying
0 ~! ?; _! C8 _5 S) @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 c, T* C! V' E1 I* B6 d$ `$ FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# y* f6 z2 v8 hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 A; L: l, {* ]1 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 I# L: `/ W- x3 O6 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- ~; }9 H, g: |* l& P0 S: {+ x  K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 M% `1 E% e& D# M+ F# i* @: Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# l. I! [% Y/ ]0 d+ y% K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- F$ `* M7 I% W7 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& U7 b6 ~0 `  _: y0 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 {9 t0 W/ h! n9 D2 c1 k& ?9 n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% k3 O! |( F' b0 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: q5 _9 }0 G5 X  T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, i3 W& L1 h8 n+ `  f! p1 P/ m9 {6 t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ Q  `  r. I3 {0 `. r1 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, r3 o5 \. b  x2 s- i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 V' l1 n+ T: L! L<P>你无需担心</P>
% v; m! w' R& A5 F; ^$ e; d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# y/ U% v4 m$ O  o1 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 I4 N& F/ s/ n/ B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 Z; F6 x0 t2 T' d* w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& T8 t+ S' ~1 v/ x' `6 |5 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" F: {% [6 ~- A0 S+ K7 z( a8 ?2 P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- L" a9 [7 D$ c1 C7 m4 `# O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. H' u$ [2 H, a2 N! Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 B2 w, v7 E5 l" Y& [6 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* C- l: w+ o9 X  f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 m' a0 k! Y9 W- A; c  a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# A# z$ \; d  I& s' ?; o8 |, E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" @- F0 A" G  v1 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- D/ N: z/ t# Q# w- z6 s. x8 k% w4 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 q4 Z+ Y; s5 K8 r% y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 S( A4 H3 I) W1 q, w. |2 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" P4 E7 U- |4 ]* h, e  Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& Q4 y! `9 R3 Y5 _! l+ N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>