【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' R  X4 X3 L; L/ T4 i歌词我附在后面。
5 W% Q/ g' |" g" {* ^8 h7 Q4 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# [4 [: s8 y( T6 q  ~With the moon kissing it every night
. Y" O4 D* I0 zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 _( _/ U9 w" |5 v" C. K3 N) @You needn’t fear anything
7 I8 v) {. m& V- OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& @" {* A3 u% t2 VEvery other word you utter is love
7 `6 V* j3 R( wI really want to know just how much you love me
( Q# k5 u! [1 W; Y1 fI love you I love you with all my heart
4 K% O* S, S5 @* aNothing can compare to my love
# g/ {4 j+ @6 \0 {% P' ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 g1 T! x  U8 n' hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! u# G1 G+ t, ?$ `( UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ m4 i+ W3 m/ b- N8 K" c2 g6 OWith such a tongue as yours,
. k5 Q  ~5 }* x0 WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; H4 s7 K* ^1 I' V* X( hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 e% X/ H. H7 y) |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) a, g% \9 q! M9 k/ h# C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ e; x2 r! {% y/ I( s8 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, E! g! [, D) U7 x1 Y' _5 \. ?4 B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ Q( b9 Y$ c" m6 A4 t! L8 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 z" e4 Y% n$ E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 Y8 t1 U7 \3 P+ Z+ M* Y8 M8 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* M4 m- v2 p; {# w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# z! {- v& w6 o, M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* T0 E1 \$ S" K; _- K) h& u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. X* Q1 @- z$ h8 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ e' U3 W3 `% B. x! u: b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ g: q/ I! }! `$ ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 u. D0 e8 \, y" u, g! G" O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 D; I5 P' u, U; f1 G  c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 w0 A% R. ^" X$ ?% A  f# f/ O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 [! N4 c. @+ H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* O! ~# n. R- v* z" q8 j4 o7 ~3 w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( w. t9 K' K! G+ V7 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 o0 l9 J) e7 f5 z6 r& d7 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" S- T7 Y2 W9 U+ H% \% I6 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! G3 d  T( @/ K! [+ A# \- ]+ }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 O8 s, H; i. T+ B/ O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 w7 F1 H7 P- V% h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 B3 j) Z% S! _0 _, x# y: t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# h& H) r) M7 }% T! X! P<P>I regret not dying</P>
) k+ {8 z, u$ H* l% ]/ B3 s& d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 u4 B8 X- u) W+ y" \; x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ |9 U; `0 N$ [# L3 Y+ L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, \+ C7 q; @( ~& z. a, Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 C7 K5 ~" N9 Z% S3 x) x9 I5 l5 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ r/ V' b4 X% M  \6 D+ y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

' m  i# v5 M' M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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