【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' }# i7 G" W5 g' t+ O+ m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& \; d( ?. g6 p% tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" j5 r2 v: ~0 j. ?7 m5 A% j% XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- K4 \5 X5 P, xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 L" x! V: e9 |  c' {! W0 _3 c  _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# Q5 s- X8 `$ p1 d0 JI love you I love you with all my heart
  H6 ]- B+ j- ?7 f1 W" r0 S; DNothing can compare to my love
" a. l5 v- U2 L( e2 P& k: ~4 H6 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ ~" O" f  l1 c' j1 r8 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% [# _# c  K: j- P% oI want so much to see inside your heart
& `: F/ x. f2 y! \! G1 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% v' a  E: A% XI’m still filled with fear
+ m# p9 ^3 J& t& \. iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ [! h3 J1 k1 RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 S7 r% e. x3 h1 h. kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; p. e, B' c" W6 [; x$ \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ ^3 B# Q# a0 A+ W* G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 I& q) S& p0 C7 G0 V* T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: @, @; O9 |, \( q* P, o9 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  {& m( O, `3 q- V. m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 M% I. _/ c6 \) `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. i/ E9 c& w2 |" S0 v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. F. T1 k5 n9 _" J& w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  q' n+ g. J% J# ^# M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" a  k# I5 l8 d) S& E, `0 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ p4 l6 v* n+ l! ^& g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 ^8 ^/ G) ], R' K  Y  I$ Z% e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" c/ p; ]$ J8 H2 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. `4 r+ n& G  ~: g" p; `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; e7 w1 P$ H1 W& X" d: y$ n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ _1 f7 H& [% A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 b, C( D1 D  Y: A& R% F5 `2 K3 \( _- p8 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 h9 R8 {0 [) [2 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 z; B" y4 A2 Z! H; b% Q* z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 l; w4 P  R2 T4 t  t  N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) J8 F; H/ t. J* i* U, S2 ]/ O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& Z2 q8 a8 }! k" C6 M! S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; t" N4 ^& t$ |; f: n* U& I<P>I regret not dying</P>
  Z# i) R: l( w# @! f5 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; F6 N& T# T4 E- i# M! I9 ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 D8 N' @: M0 T1 d  G. H5 h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; h4 X. b# \4 |/ m* N3 T) v/ e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ e. r5 j! y; z1 L0 R# O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: L% h. w1 F/ F# x0 A  ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 m6 h- Q: U1 M5 k& g" Z9 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  d3 _+ B2 p* X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 J9 C* G3 f+ S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) h" ^5 F2 r5 Y  N# F2 L  Z* l) b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>