【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' \1 a% o8 G) j1 R6 C歌词我附在后面。
6 R% J% v  g1 }5 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 j9 Y4 d5 O% l8 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, Q5 l4 k$ [  LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 O9 d1 o# p* o3 w5 P) }With the moon kissing it every night
: @& P  @$ M+ U7 nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, W' p# p& i2 SYou needn’t fear anything
9 y2 T; _" o/ x7 _* G) hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! }2 c6 `% p/ a' h5 e8 q& L9 DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. |9 J" t6 k! GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 L  O% F1 x* |( bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; h4 u. i8 \; H/ L" L$ c7 ^I regret not dying
3 k! D: F8 d! ~3 e, UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- U0 t* @- m# P5 F) o) UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& U. Z+ @% @, B) |+ F0 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. ~4 H9 h" j& g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; B/ X+ U* p( L( P, k# Y2 M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ W. w; Y, q1 d. g% @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" f# Y; k+ Z! R<P>你无需担心</P>
8 e0 b6 k' P( D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 Z  \" q  H# o9 O) W$ I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) [5 c2 N0 Q: X" P' `6 P% P: G- o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% s; t0 b3 o/ Z- |9 y! _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: P( R" Q% P. j( c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 r2 E/ W8 W& e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: s) m, g# p0 B* l6 m- K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) J$ a* V' O7 A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# r7 j, V3 T& t; }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* D" u1 ]  J0 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 I" B+ o4 a; K% N7 q: P. c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% T: O' R: f( d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# O  R9 v- u. I! h# Q9 H4 [! H+ g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 L+ W3 C, _6 c* w* t6 b; r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 d: P1 t! I' k- b7 x' d" y9 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# }5 Y2 _2 `0 ?# T2 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 N' `- ^+ X' X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 k9 S$ ?2 j; v  x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' F$ Q" k+ \' r& p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% x! F2 e! v3 u+ ^  E/ c" d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 N! C9 s& @+ f) `( s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 J( c( j, V, b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" P3 y" F! Z; v* i$ b3 R3 m9 u+ Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: }# O3 K& n6 |1 y& C我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 g8 |8 z; Y- ~9 B+ ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>