【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ d* ?3 M/ g5 W* QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 a% o+ s7 ~, \3 G/ iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ Y* E( Q) e/ K  f9 ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" b$ E. S3 c2 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ \' V' M3 u2 n' J0 |3 vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 v& q4 {6 Q) r$ P; iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' j! v4 N6 j. g) }2 nI love you I love you with all my heart
2 ^5 g  l' G- K) \5 w2 a1 wNothing can compare to my love
* c* H; l! c9 Q$ k$ d2 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 F! y3 y! ^7 z- |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( U( I6 ^0 R/ f3 b" I) eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ n0 i. l& F# y( W3 G) ]2 ]: wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% R0 M8 E: `9 X1 E- M* g. kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 O2 d8 r9 @9 k9 h4 T1 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 J$ ]. F, x' D% z' K1 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: c/ J" ?/ h# I& h' y; l! h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ I5 c9 r% V6 @6 @1 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 H5 N- N- i' I" ?0 O6 y* Y3 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. ~; [1 |! j$ i" c- E8 F2 C' t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 v4 R' B4 X* J8 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; |$ \* d, R+ |- ~3 Q4 X7 M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( X1 c/ ~' m5 s  n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 H7 \9 n2 h' g; F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& w( f+ i7 z  ?9 k$ D  U) W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 B( a$ l* c$ r$ ?+ b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 U# q+ b) K  f/ _8 Y2 ~$ L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* f3 Z' h; R1 `5 i4 y6 s( H, O6 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& J9 z* p4 e; l- {/ X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 S9 E' d6 @+ ?3 n9 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ i, h/ k" `7 t! Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, ]4 t5 x- I  h( G% L9 L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 b. Q+ {5 u8 f3 \: C1 {! V- Q6 r9 B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 u) a) B: R: ^' P" G0 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 L( |2 p$ U: u5 e/ {# c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 L% q0 e0 v3 W9 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# O% @% `' X/ P! c2 x: ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. s- i/ X$ s7 q$ g5 G1 [7 m- p8 ~7 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 W, L& \8 T4 J1 ^8 I" [/ ^: V0 Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* d5 C+ }8 l) B  p  C9 z4 J2 G/ E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 f) m9 G7 M" F$ ~, h- |我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>