【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 S# X* K. U6 e( B% ^. G5 n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% r+ k. O, A5 e7 l( M$ MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ \+ h; K3 T( X/ A8 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- d; j2 p% p9 a. M: L( b& RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- X, P: f" Z. t/ }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ V- F0 q3 a% gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 X& @* Q/ t( F* S  e- S! ?Nothing can compare to my love
  l9 |$ P0 i8 B; N' p6 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 l0 O: T+ w& {; z/ Q% j$ eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# E; P5 U2 [( G. T# D) x* hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 t% W' D5 H/ ~7 e$ OI regret not dying
" O# j  I2 `7 j/ D- w: @" qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( ]2 `7 F9 v$ bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; w5 c0 w5 Q! z* _: PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ ^% y! c9 R) G. n5 L& c# XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; ~0 N: Z  P* t2 G3 x7 E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! q1 n0 y  g& {' ^+ @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: S, V: \/ R% c1 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 y( \7 H) e: X. U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) X) v! H" [5 z$ K# ~" t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' u" c( C1 w, I) i9 Q& u& I# J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 q6 w" x9 y5 b. e* g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ H- J6 W; P, f6 x2 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. p1 C4 K- }# h# V1 F/ B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ H- G5 ?+ x" V7 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! N) ^& h% \9 {5 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; a7 F; }. |1 G) g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 Q0 E, F- x2 ?2 v4 d0 ~# h7 W) z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ L* s9 L2 x3 J" p2 ]0 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; h; x2 e& p0 E( y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" g  Z1 S# H4 i+ P, R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 i' j  ]/ J& T; c5 u5 r2 x. G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, o7 P" `( X& M. S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  ]; m7 ?8 A' p5 v  G1 E# h  a8 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# U) W: q3 a; x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 L# |2 i: T% K& S) m' j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 e9 p! F1 \4 r/ ?. T- O) v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 ?+ y; ~& S6 r' M. ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  K. }; r9 x$ B/ e# g, p# \* f6 s9 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 B$ k' f0 Z& A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 ]$ q. s; {6 h; a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>