【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 w2 ?; |( Y- z( v/ GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 C2 q, k! O/ ?0 x5 a6 o4 l! FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 }) f: w7 [( ]( q" {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 ^8 r# I# x4 v' |+ qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ F& ]. }$ @+ J% j% H" aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ z; Q, _. h0 P/ e5 gNothing can compare to my love
+ A/ Y/ G1 S' X3 J" nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: B9 M) X7 R: k# h$ {/ J5 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& _) g, @9 s& }. h9 F& sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  Y) w/ y. Y, M; v: ~$ NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* Q0 g8 t  G; c' }6 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( G9 }$ r2 b. D2 @% iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' {% C4 Y" i1 R* K: X' o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) `) T; X2 y2 R  x/ R% |  e8 X! w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! \5 N, R; u) \) j/ |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; s( ~# M/ {9 `& C: W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 B* q! E+ N2 V$ D9 g* k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, Q& g. a9 z6 {! Q! W, F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 t8 V2 V6 u5 C) r! e3 y: z/ v$ o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! z6 C7 f3 I2 g( `. v3 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. X6 b3 Y! c- k' Q  @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 x3 {7 o  g) E2 q& f8 c1 T" I- _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. M  K1 p* B. f7 I6 G+ P1 ?4 o% @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ K- }- j& G3 G4 |+ I+ P  I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 Y6 a4 S2 V9 |, K8 l+ t+ K, {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 v4 I3 x& q; G! o& b6 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' D, H5 u0 J: r3 I  |* j2 G7 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: P" \. D+ Y( ?% |4 y7 H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% c5 B% Z/ I( h, f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' n% }1 o/ z7 X4 A) }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 x% c( ]3 J2 j5 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 X( k' w; B' V) @2 n* Y7 e" r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, a  x$ ^# J( @% Q' {9 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; K. L+ E# l7 w9 q! L* X/ v. `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) T; J0 Z3 g( U: F6 S* x9 K! ~6 ]& |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: \5 r" j- x9 f" t, m/ b* V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 E) k9 U# b( g% g6 b0 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( ?# i$ _$ y: ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' C+ t% k6 w9 X% H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# ~# R" P: B% l' ~- [8 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
* w9 J; H. f9 z- l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 M$ r, v! S( e2 J/ z/ t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: l4 N! x- I' p5 }9 m8 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" [; @' M. P  D! Z0 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 i# V& x1 L6 o& ]8 J- g3 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ I- ^8 I; j1 G  l/ T/ j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ G3 m/ e0 D' o6 a6 ^. z! @8 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# j- e0 c# z9 V% Y. r) W4 a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 A0 p. s0 y/ `/ ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>