【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 O/ Y8 |7 T" V4 y! E6 ^3 b0 \歌词我附在后面。
& o9 n0 r; b9 W$ E4 D2 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  B6 i: o5 ^7 K- h8 F$ b" T& lThe sky is happy down to its soul
) u6 ]! G8 R+ o& i0 G4 @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 ]# B7 B: R; I" b% S: q  F3 f: E/ GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ C, I' H' ]3 @1 q7 S& zYou needn’t fear anything
( ^: p% N) C* [* @/ k* iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: J( i( K8 {% c* P% t0 KI really want to know just how much you love me
) b+ \+ _, c% b. |; C+ B; C7 xI love you I love you with all my heart
$ f5 n$ J/ j1 ?. W2 k4 d* c2 [Nothing can compare to my love
  C- m- U& m, JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# P3 B" P( o! h6 r3 X3 h. n! Y3 L$ N6 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- n& N( w1 m: r) H. }$ G# F5 D4 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 ~5 c0 R/ \( B% t9 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* d7 n: h$ w3 J. D# iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 V5 b# S8 M. q+ L7 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 {; D, r1 b) ^/ q7 w" m' n: x4 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( k: s# v, t9 ]% `( v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ Z. [" S% C% S# |( k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 J. q0 J: e6 R9 S; C  C4 V( _6 c( p6 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, Q& h9 P/ `5 b' T- g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ ~' [% J! U0 m3 c( r# S: B  {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 q, s' e  V- j; U  x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' y, J7 f6 i: Y' N/ _. B; i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! Y: z6 v7 @$ j& B9 _+ f2 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' S- F  C6 C  o$ J/ r; t3 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& A  b) o& q( l3 N0 U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 Y4 J( m. @0 ^; S! l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 r" z  S' N8 ]9 s' y- ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 V# v/ t$ D. N1 z+ d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ e" w1 l  w2 o5 S# h- r; ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 s- j2 F" `: {  |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) l( {, v/ V1 L. Z4 i9 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* w0 V0 ^# I7 r9 }+ |" C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 L+ R2 ?' l, {( ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 \9 }0 z* m3 A8 j; V) f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  \" X" S7 y( `. c6 n& a* e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" {7 Q, f+ O- j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 D$ c) F" b' E5 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ \6 j$ H" h% j' p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- q% Y$ x! ~  [3 T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ \) }; }+ l5 C- M- n+ K. w0 d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 O& m7 \) D! [/ H9 ?) l- f3 E1 B, _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% r! y  |  \# k- Q  ?- b# E- q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 j2 T1 a/ n" L8 T, B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 _8 H' O# T0 }" l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) D# b& T& h8 [" d; ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 w2 C  k$ Q; \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* s# @/ e! X9 V5 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# z# C" i5 F$ ^3 [. }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  p- J" a/ [- L, y* K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( i% d! f8 T  j6 T# P( g9 S, _0 `) g我请你剖开它

  y" k* i0 G; l. e: S8 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>