【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ q6 M0 w3 [7 U& h3 T9 H. S+ h" F歌词我附在后面。
5 B. ~+ F" `3 G: ]# D2 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
) m3 q$ d9 P5 g2 W% nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, k0 H" R8 W/ d2 vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! S4 }: _7 @/ t( @! PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# E  z2 c* B9 `) T$ R9 zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 Y% m, D6 Y8 K% m, vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  K( u7 i8 ]  R) G5 I' Y( xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# G$ P. J" j/ }+ m& Q; [I love you I love you with all my heart
6 ]% }/ f6 u7 V! ONothing can compare to my love
9 G! g8 [0 k) fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( K  \* ^9 R& TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 v3 [$ F' W' B! O3 ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. |& C- m* ~$ @. U2 [+ eI regret not dying
) X8 z0 V0 X6 Z) z) o: vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 ?0 b* J6 _3 d9 u8 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 e/ |5 A& F$ d  A& L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( D( V, C6 \! V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 d4 A" l( v" S" a- V5 b) H  \1 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 v5 Y3 s8 }& A/ M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! R$ t! j! F9 G  K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. G3 D5 C4 ^1 a# y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 _1 Q9 U4 K* E# K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# k4 c* \6 K: P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! }9 t+ `' Q' L; E% A0 _, H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# H3 ~- g0 H& d/ ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 {, D0 M1 d' B% u0 |' h$ v% ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 \& h( n( w; M, p$ y; d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ O* m" w  }! o3 X4 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, D' R6 W7 f: N& D7 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& S- H& D' [# D. h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 [9 J" O" ?) V! [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 G; h1 m0 G" y' o9 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; ?: k4 A! n7 m$ c4 R6 t6 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 {  o  E6 g# J1 Q0 V9 q" Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. B8 Z9 P& |& h5 d" K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& [6 y+ f6 z7 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! _1 W8 }: E0 m5 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! B' Y7 j* V. H+ I2 w2 l3 b我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>