【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  ?! X8 Q$ c& c5 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  x' H( }+ Y- m3 t0 }4 e  U4 l6 {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! O) }! l" X, ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. |3 L: W9 I% ^You needn’t fear anything
( K0 s: i1 m7 j* cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ f# T' w2 |# f' D/ T" H) SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 L- E5 G" J# [1 }8 D6 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, V; Q, ^" H) s1 ?0 b* ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. u! i, s! ]9 d) A6 [9 WI want so much to see inside your heart
& n3 w2 D: |9 H  u7 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) c; e4 n1 W) wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- u  N- ^- Z2 yI regret not dying
8 G2 `+ H9 w6 |( N: lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 [* m% ?# h6 g! t4 D. RWith such a tongue as yours,
( C! O& M( b! X$ h6 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' D$ X& @- v) Q& Y3 h' ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& r( J- F  N" k: u2 G) I4 X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. j! ~6 B, N5 X% d5 t4 m) i5 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" D$ p9 E0 _) L5 f- X' L# W9 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 g. p1 g9 b2 L$ Y( z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! W" t( }% X' T7 o# S& L0 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# `" Q! n9 t/ k" t- }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ R  g, j* g$ W: ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 u/ W$ K) z# d% g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" W0 e0 X- ?- t5 |5 n+ K<P>你无需担心</P>
& Z" U( T" a+ J& L& f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" Q* k; o5 N3 S& `, z; R8 I. u; a* d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. ]) {# H; h: n+ H0 V/ @, l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 ]8 h, `9 g0 r( N5 I$ m5 g( I7 }& i  g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 ?( B. ]  c3 H$ w7 _6 U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ e8 {/ m) L9 \. r6 s9 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* \9 O" q. \+ E- ~8 K3 |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 H$ E3 L1 F4 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& D- |7 n7 t% @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 ~% [% a; o% }: ^) H) r% B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 I4 Z" t  L8 l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# d# \! J3 R. a1 l7 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* u8 p$ H  n+ f2 }2 V4 Y! ~" y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 \( |5 n3 ?# w: }5 I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 T: i% q9 [1 ]5 H+ a* i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 a" H- z* c) ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 \+ @& @5 L" q5 t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 Z' z# E5 Z* v' [* X2 K) C- [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* Z" t4 C+ d! A& V- W- H- B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>