【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: v) A# @% ^# [, F歌词我附在后面。
* v- E0 l& d2 E! NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 d9 d1 @9 `' p! k+ U, y: d( gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ R6 U4 k: Z) ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 r9 @8 m' X0 C% J8 |  @8 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& ~: a0 o5 w4 K. iSeeing the sky content with its love
& q, g, l9 j8 F" z/ B! g8 w& Y2 \+ aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 h+ @# v$ `0 @+ pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: i' B# M) X- C1 H& \I really want to know just how much you love me
. Y+ V* J% J. SI love you I love you with all my heart
7 w; E+ Y4 @9 E1 cNothing can compare to my love
5 }" L7 R7 r. Q4 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 F2 g9 r+ j6 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 }; x2 c& X. m$ f: u8 DI want so much to see inside your heart
& D  B% C/ {' I+ DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: r7 N6 R- W% EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% n/ M5 {) I9 j$ d2 F" w) PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# x, Z8 C- |6 ]* Z; s; k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# e$ z3 f  b- [5 \7 X& x# t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 C% _1 H7 F2 i  V. }4 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 c" L4 a  [" F" q, Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 z+ |  x, T# q$ W7 k2 j* G( Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 @7 M" G7 A  d5 q* `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ i, o& E$ {9 k: u5 E2 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* j7 T+ ^1 }! d% B4 u: m$ Q$ q$ _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# r% N( b5 f3 z/ L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; U, o  Q3 [+ T1 x1 A, H. P4 a; ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 l6 S4 [# P: O4 c/ d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; h  b$ I+ O4 X+ _( b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) f0 ?2 s  ^( x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  ]* u4 g5 a3 O/ j4 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 L+ `* j# v: {' Q& y1 m8 ^" X3 E6 u4 J  r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 |2 Z1 y' j7 L& i5 C' `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; g4 c4 c3 N1 T. p$ {/ n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 p. u. X* |4 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( s! O& M9 r. ]) p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# x0 o( V9 E1 f, D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 B3 v$ q2 M5 O) p2 g0 \3 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 _* w( Z% Q9 x4 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ R, G2 U; Z8 L: ~* ]% I9 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ i4 [8 g5 o1 U$ j8 H9 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 m8 t+ o3 E. Z( Q" ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; o! Y9 B  E) g# m: H! g2 a8 U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 m( k3 X; J, w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. ^( ~9 i4 S' o$ r7 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 v- s7 c8 L& q  j# w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" m* x% y6 Y' ?" S* @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 y8 d# ]7 M$ N2 r* W% k, ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 x8 z' ?2 d* L" M+ P# F* ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' c% }( `. H1 h$ l% l$ {- {我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>