【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- v$ S' `- }1 f$ d8 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" V+ |+ i. M7 e0 CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# W2 b& _3 K9 D$ ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ r8 N. v; T8 V* RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 M. j$ q6 v) }, T1 }$ `- MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 a1 S' `, ]: x+ D# TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 \6 E' E: Y1 z. iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. F9 a/ b0 A! s& y( T1 PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* l; n- Q" y8 ^9 O7 G/ CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 C5 H( T# C" ~- p1 Z2 w3 fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 A9 V: I3 k; Z* s9 A7 v% F  GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" g8 \8 e. P: H+ O5 o. v9 q: dI regret not dying
- e* ?$ j$ R9 \& I  U6 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 s6 P, O! H: n# ]! ?8 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, V( ?" b( a: @% Q8 t! A6 T. ~' `: d  KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 A% K# t* ~& V. g& D! o4 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: Y/ N3 U' g8 }3 ]3 P' W# `) j, x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 ?; s. @  ~5 E& b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ w6 H: i; p0 f* R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ D/ P3 d/ f2 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, E7 S$ ^( c' o& t" w: t* N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* F/ U: a% A" s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# l( T7 g: N$ l1 [. m0 @! b, }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ k& s2 f& X. [& g6 g% P7 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ G8 L: ]/ W4 g* i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 J; M2 t; F- C' b9 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 x& P) V+ Y3 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. X  u4 I: T/ Q( p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( x9 B& a9 Z! `* \# v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 w8 y. i6 b, J0 b. g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% u9 B; W3 `: W! k8 ]" v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; p: J4 `* k  _9 d, p( T2 t7 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 O, l1 o7 d& _# o9 z0 \3 Q; f* x& A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 P' t$ ~# a+ @2 q! j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 A9 A$ p; A. c5 r8 t- p8 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ N: d. J* C/ g/ r. r, t* O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ x5 I  H$ s: H6 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 E; a' X7 x2 p  H( M3 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, l# @5 F0 \# ]7 y, ^4 r" J" ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>