【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, k( b* W5 }* \6 i7 |! N歌词我附在后面。
/ d* H8 q0 G* G3 B  N1 H) w; BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& n! g6 r+ R; g  CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 {  I6 R, `5 c' X5 N4 @0 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 I: x5 a: i* S5 s  o) ^The sky is happy down to its soul
+ q6 ~" i4 h4 {6 g2 {# GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# B* Z, ], U* I; k# HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- w7 F" p& n4 M; TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ r& m& C+ M  Y. P9 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' }% p* ~8 f9 @7 ?I’m still filled with fear
8 \1 p( o1 k* }& Z7 x5 i6 i5 Q" uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 s: m" g& R. HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 ^% s4 `2 [% [* I  i; FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 H$ I: H. R- N# c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 x- Y" W* [# l: M) X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 i  w1 J0 [$ N" s1 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" C2 f3 \4 m1 N! b- R, ~( T; k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& V3 {6 ]( Z; t1 |8 Z8 A5 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 n' m* e6 Q5 b/ ^6 P/ p6 B8 d( x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 |  P3 R! N/ E* K, i$ f2 M; d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; {5 ^5 C: s* \' Y* E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- d4 `% Q% Z( k4 u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# ^1 R3 i0 E, J; W: p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* X' Y' h5 w. [( g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 S( J5 E  l1 Z% A/ d3 C' \5 J. R. x! N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 x5 u+ Q8 S" N. k/ {* s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- b* i$ p8 p6 C& P6 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 l- F, D' L8 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 S8 r- b6 N( p  R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 p, b" d: p+ f+ u& g: J# k2 c* `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& ?  J+ b. I$ D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 i- D3 C- F+ T3 M  q( g% m( l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 B% H4 e! _, c. W& ?! n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  G4 d3 J) w: S: T* H7 \5 s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( t& M, r  D3 Y8 Q4 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. _) S: |; }7 @1 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 W! l% V8 U3 ^+ b) A- J3 j" O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* W8 n' S5 Y$ p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. l0 A% Z" |- ?$ t$ y- l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ G3 s4 ^/ h" H% ]1 y  J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

" L% b  C, J0 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>