【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! I( `! g0 {% H4 F- |% IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 x6 u0 |. [+ q; J0 N6 UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) @. t4 e  I: D( u2 _( F3 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 l1 C! Q% T  D' v8 d2 }% ~' HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# y5 S0 ?& j5 L; N" O) G/ uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 i7 P! ^  A, |& rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ j: E; E2 s& Y1 G% RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 z& [9 Z  x% t1 hI’m still filled with fear
- G: c  o* Z6 K2 d: ?3 H1 H2 {' |" IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 G8 c" A8 z1 ~+ [1 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 t! l9 j% P% H( v+ x9 x2 Y. rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 J$ [" R1 K4 s$ ]7 m3 U; }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ r$ x+ z1 o' O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ o% o3 p' F6 {" g+ p# V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. e, C0 W! V8 }4 G. B3 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" q0 y! j! U* G3 ]+ e4 Z6 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ J3 i6 h0 i/ X5 C* t4 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ \; r, T& G! i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ J9 v% \- W( N6 z% C2 \- |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 h$ \- D$ @7 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! z3 L/ X' E2 w5 O4 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 ?# y$ z: j' J8 W/ q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 U: I: `. C  P$ M1 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 n0 Q- F5 }& u4 S4 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, ]) R! v# t  R' J7 h$ h9 v5 \  Q+ i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ d6 Z1 S& P' T7 p& Y+ N5 l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; X  F' ~; O7 ?, V6 u) c. y( {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ z4 t  g- T9 C; h* ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 t# E9 T8 @) g. d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' p  \! e% d, k" k1 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. ^7 ^, j6 f. ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 A- p" g: U6 s7 z' x7 O  I$ ^! h( K, |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* z8 j  Y2 {/ S8 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  _0 v* V" F9 J8 k+ Y0 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" x% K5 z% r4 n6 [我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, X/ |, Q, X- C, @6 U/ a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>