【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( P5 M( z# i+ W! T( D9 _' i) ~歌词我附在后面。
$ V* M: T$ q& d% @! U$ ?! X( MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; n! L' }2 a, A. k' MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- E. `' T. R3 K# SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* D1 C9 K1 U: ], l, iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. [' e3 e7 W1 U8 \" I8 {  g0 P( M2 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 ^* D1 Q, [! u, \! SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, D7 W# d+ t  I& G7 n+ DEvery other word you utter is love
' m; X: F3 h5 a: p6 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
' B" Q) H% l7 a: r0 AI love you I love you with all my heart
7 f, @1 f5 j5 L; H% n# a+ ^Nothing can compare to my love
/ Z; E+ y# m+ oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 c0 U& j/ v& {2 F- F+ gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 b. w: r' b# f5 FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 H5 T& n/ l1 a9 x5 A! YI’m still filled with fear
  S9 q6 m1 `3 q# E8 r7 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* m, Y) l( f  b) z; b" H3 `3 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# D# C# i) ?$ h1 f5 E9 K2 e4 vWith such a tongue as yours,
) N. w# K# B/ e3 ?, C2 V+ f4 x- {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) I, L& J$ h" ?* {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* l! F" n8 ]7 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) K5 Y8 l' K! q: C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, K+ c8 f6 H; }" G% i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' [. J8 t" P5 y( f* }( l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 Q, ?, q$ I6 @2 N# `0 j  g2 j. A( {' x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 ^" ]4 d; R; F: C% S& y* S9 v  E8 ?) ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" X5 v9 i" |5 M+ D3 p( p5 H. X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; M: ~; M5 k) |3 d+ B8 b+ |/ L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; H. F& w$ h; g- U% K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' \& b  ]% l/ v3 w: a( T# B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! x! ~5 P4 |8 o- b" H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  U, f& {, h7 n# o1 e" m* U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. D/ G( r- \/ S- ?+ z/ p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# d$ }3 _$ R  E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, H- W# v+ J6 b% c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) ^) ?, v$ a) w4 f: s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 ], r3 w5 Z5 h. @7 {! A, @& z$ D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# q' j$ s  h2 B+ Z/ q; A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 H3 \9 y  R" V7 n. k" k- p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 ^/ u$ a) @* x$ B! B$ n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 Y& S4 M7 U3 V4 ~& h, Z. S' Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 @4 E# G$ X' t, ~1 \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 k, G* \2 m3 q) Q+ b" P; U3 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ ~8 E# }( ^3 B8 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& J) y& h6 O6 S6 p( S0 g% k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( V3 \% k4 b- n0 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 r+ \2 {, b  R* X8 b" l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; P3 Q# q- L& R# Q8 x8 E; c  P0 Z4 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; Q+ q% s0 K; a3 R& c7 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& v/ C* x2 q+ y  ^5 l# g  g我请你剖开它
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; ?9 ]$ y6 g9 u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>