【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' F; R. C$ F" P/ bThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 C( [6 z" s8 ?& x2 mWith the moon kissing it every night
. H; h6 D: b8 j: p+ H- |. qSeeing the sky content with its love
' W1 G% Q' M9 c/ q0 r, f9 NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 w; H% D& [: b8 \3 e  V! WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 I* W' s" r9 A! L+ u& TI really want to know just how much you love me
+ A9 t* [& D# O: X( `I love you I love you with all my heart
# o9 _) z0 n* N" |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 R$ ~% z* |7 H* XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( A2 w3 J7 f) R8 t+ h( oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# G5 r/ }- Y9 V: |$ |I’m still filled with fear
0 z( ]; T0 J! d! c+ I% `* b+ |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" [% s$ D% C) [8 |/ J( P' fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! n5 ~0 D' L0 R# ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 g. r, q3 r1 l4 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- D* ~- u, Z0 y7 _4 r, P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# w( l+ n3 P/ Z) }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 F% }8 \* O( D2 d* W) L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& D# t9 y# j9 H& C1 U' M2 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 {4 P3 |4 B: D  r* w, K' m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) r$ m9 g' t2 Z. S8 e  U0 Y5 R; J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 C- b+ R) Z% t. e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 ^5 W" [6 I& Y, [, p: j( Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# h+ k! |# F* F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" Q4 c: k  g0 k/ k/ f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ l$ O) F  l* @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 q: J0 T1 `# u1 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 v0 G9 L* M; f$ j- g9 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. X+ j1 h- T" ?# B+ q# \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 N* f) F/ n1 ?5 `+ O7 e) Z7 H* \  A- y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 o7 y. i- W' h4 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ S- Q. u6 f$ v6 J& k* g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  ^; P6 \, J8 Z- b% ]: @1 J  P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# q+ @2 W8 F& S1 c/ \$ L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" i, }% t' i1 T9 R6 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 L( {9 A' g2 u' I# y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 L, p5 W9 o: N+ Z1 ~' o, L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 A- K9 J) W$ z+ {1 r3 a6 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
, @/ S  R* i$ w# E4 {) J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  f- }1 A3 p3 Z  i4 B. @, D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. ~- w2 n9 {+ z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# y) R1 b8 y- w% G, |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( `: E/ _5 B6 g, P6 Y  w2 |1 a( D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
8 m" ?1 G" Z6 c3 s$ i+ p
我请你剖开它
* ]8 M" ~% C0 H
6 y) H* r& j! v4 R/ b: o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 m. x6 r8 k/ K  ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>