【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. r6 A* C$ w5 a1 }! L4 ^5 A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 l- w% k$ C" u' X3 V- nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 e+ H: I! S: I0 n% m1 l% KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  x* t: f* b# Q! f4 |, ]% ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' l8 ?5 X& a2 l+ gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 g* c# [3 Q  b5 w% p* dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) w8 i0 t" T5 l9 i4 O# s$ V) yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, C: ^; T! s. s: T  X% vI love you I love you with all my heart
: t9 f9 v# V' M5 b  bNothing can compare to my love
* x. m# b5 s0 {% ^: KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 V1 R1 ?- o  c1 K+ c! \7 fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" `! ~; b9 n- Q- C4 ^; {2 T9 bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 t6 C2 F- w6 a0 m% k3 l" qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. t+ m" M) d' R1 rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- Z2 g1 h" Z6 U; t- f) c, UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 `- r) _4 _$ F8 O2 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 @$ t# T) v( K/ ]& B6 y5 g- q5 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 i1 C! }  q5 ~3 Y6 G& |2 j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% t+ ~8 J& @; c. y' T) k* n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 F7 n$ n) \/ c' c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' A! B* P8 T+ c% _5 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ v: g8 Q& p1 d9 A  I" T6 T# B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# U. K. k% d6 S0 t% X5 r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 ^6 U; Y5 z0 k% F. o6 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 O" G) F5 `* `' N  _* w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' H. x9 H0 c9 p6 N* }0 ~! x0 s: ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* }7 A6 ?" F' t# T; h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ N+ P; W# L4 V2 I( @2 e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 [, @3 R! n9 T( K; b& G# O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 v( L- N  ~& ~' w/ W+ Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- ^2 M2 H7 l2 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) b. q8 Z; _# p7 A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: E8 {6 E3 K1 p" Y5 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( J/ {4 ?3 E9 I: N, p8 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: P% M& A& S1 S' _" _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 r0 q) j& ]5 B" u7 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( f' z% g8 K9 k( @: z' P. q) `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ y& Q" a% ?1 O6 }0 B4 P0 j; z( F4 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" R# j& |- E- W+ }2 G8 W, X3 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: H* A! g! P) m' F5 q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; `7 a: o8 ^8 F  f- E2 P" D( {. x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! x6 U, Z$ ]; l+ d2 Z- Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 n$ `- ~1 \$ P) q8 x8 h' q( g! d( `4 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: U" |9 z0 I* Z0 Q! N# n# c<P>I regret not dying</P>
* q1 |5 C  l$ Y6 z) Z( \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 D8 w7 U- u5 w2 @- ?' f8 s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ R4 N1 [, I5 f4 S- L6 ~& G: G/ p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 a5 [' {5 r0 v3 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: J7 r9 V- V; p  z5 @. K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; z; p* a8 t6 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ c$ C: k: j# ]我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>