【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% u: t) O% C' {8 N5 i$ u. X5 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 C$ J3 S# n8 a8 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 H5 U% L4 ?5 h2 d9 |: o/ q& _. pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% U, E' o/ Q. F, g7 [; MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; }+ T+ v( K# A+ \( s& v& fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: a4 ?4 Z( S2 O' P5 k: E$ HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" ^( u0 ]6 z, n/ ZWith such a tongue as yours,
3 f' h1 ~/ V5 I% AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" ]  |/ R. ?- c5 cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 b7 f! `: k6 L, l7 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ w& w4 B0 ?4 s4 s! f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 i5 M8 I" r  f3 H- q" S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 T8 Z3 k: R5 v, a$ Z" U& f- P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  P: Z# ], G: M) Y, }7 v0 m- L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 o& T3 h  Y& z4 E- x- S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 q( j% t6 E9 F' o9 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% N+ Z; v8 G3 j- ]<P>你无需担心</P>
, E$ p3 @2 c& F8 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) k. |+ T/ ~: {, a$ D) L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- q9 o8 q' V  u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! g  p3 _  i& x  @8 ?6 W' F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  z- u! E: [4 K) c' d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' J+ W2 y; c, V% z; l- u: S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 L7 H( s- r: u  j8 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; V; V4 _9 s! S: e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' M1 N! {# h6 O3 n+ v1 @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. ]/ ]% c2 U* s9 `# _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; Q# @! R2 Z; k9 I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' s) E/ i' w7 ^  P* D2 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 `8 r" ?% I- r- a, I3 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ u9 |7 x9 z/ w1 K/ u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 e/ s3 H* L; h$ |( Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" l2 G* J  O0 e; f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. c1 {2 D7 u9 q. f9 @8 v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 e' J9 v# ^9 ^. E6 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>