【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 r8 G$ Q$ G' s+ B6 zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, t% V  C+ ?2 j( H5 v2 r+ RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 O/ @) c- ~# E* D/ sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# j  b8 Q! S4 g7 O8 O$ T/ r) mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( z. `$ {9 s$ H9 REvery other word you utter is love
1 Q, h3 [! q; z7 W3 z5 E- XI really want to know just how much you love me
4 j: r4 d) q* F. m+ RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( I9 f7 o- H8 Y8 _) `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* m4 `1 B% l( NI want so much to see inside your heart
  {0 X& l: Z! [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: E% q3 ^% x% {9 \% a2 s: o+ DI’m still filled with fear
/ r7 C6 Y/ j  iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& E6 ~" w; s2 o0 ^3 j& P! |! PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" {/ g( h0 \& b3 w3 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ E; b  ?; L$ V* s  m$ FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 C# z$ ]* i3 B( x# l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) R6 `; |4 \* c3 v# ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& M; ]* F2 i) g; i( h1 w3 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- q+ ^* o+ n4 Y" R. E7 g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ _1 ?$ o( p! S, U# b; Y/ A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 K5 ~3 h# x# [  `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 {+ y* ?8 s. \4 i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# M* k# w1 Z- w/ ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 [8 g1 E" Z  Q1 K1 v0 M, g; ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% `# T% r3 a1 w% B' @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 @. p1 R$ Z1 R" V& _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  U/ J6 d1 c2 U! }0 {4 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* @. y$ t. p% r$ A/ {& |9 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 G' i7 Z4 T- x0 V' G. [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" ?5 R) |. |( N( U. j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; m, c' K/ G9 u% ~  P3 B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, W& P1 h9 ~6 Y3 ]9 G% z" g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- k' V( }9 k4 ?3 J: u6 U  J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ N- q& V# ]% T& T. z0 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 [! H) h; f  W' k! c  J6 Y7 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ], n4 W& |1 Q. i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! t  s' H7 v, V) T( ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 j0 O" M& b/ q. D, e$ D7 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 d0 k- H2 G' [+ ?6 A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>