【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 A, b7 X  Z# u5 N: i  Z; nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ O2 ~; M6 O$ _8 j: yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ P( L* N- E3 m0 l1 f5 h; lWith the moon kissing it every night
$ V0 Y* C) t8 [. l, o. I3 w" d6 WSeeing the sky content with its love
; o# J/ A2 j% pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! W6 J5 V( _) T  C$ _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; I: G5 S3 |2 w) m' SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- D1 y- Y1 P  A) p6 AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, \5 K% I5 o, o, N/ a! VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' \8 Y$ t4 _/ E- c) m% dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- u% [4 ], b7 k' yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, c6 d' V1 f+ n5 A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 \; W% g1 c; ]# @* I% M& y5 l) g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; z( C) }3 r, {# w: v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' k9 e& J/ h: @% N2 l1 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 b- l- \' `# b8 l& e2 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) H  z2 I; m  Z5 B+ P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 u  R4 X+ z$ R! O3 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 o2 p* H  d: }+ G6 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 X  \- L: k' Y: L. ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. h# v1 c7 m% q+ M, s$ r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 U3 ^$ x3 S8 ]' w! V! C+ ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 A- z* U0 D" \9 |/ u1 ~8 g7 U5 e. }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. E( f1 a' I+ }$ V( i0 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: {* Y5 g# {& E! M# }2 `) R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ p- `+ X7 X9 v4 u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% l/ E4 v0 H* Z4 O3 i4 C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 Q; g/ |% ?" V( Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! z! f% O1 g( `7 {2 b3 s2 G7 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' c8 F6 E$ L8 S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* b* ~4 x* z( f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) g* ^% A! d. D" ~) O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 F3 b- ?! d3 G  C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 S3 Y7 n8 p4 _1 e4 T5 p1 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- r) W/ k7 o! K* b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 O9 p# _% I) J: [# Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) y+ t8 D$ ^: d* u) z% g% h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 T6 g& O( C  ^' q: k; L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

4 t" s, w4 E$ n2 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>