【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& p! s; L. B* |5 Q! V4 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 C+ Y5 O2 u/ U7 VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 }& z6 \. ~) z% a; ]8 k; R& B! nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! I& ~; D" |; N& dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! g* |7 z5 N2 j% ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 B0 f: U* M) {. f: u" c$ j& UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! ?! h5 M! w: G$ G' C. T" DI’m still filled with fear
  z6 O; v  _/ `. d$ L( hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* M' S0 F- b: g( a$ MI regret not dying
* |: o  f; Y' o7 P0 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 ]8 x; e; \- d9 BWith such a tongue as yours,
+ E7 P6 _7 j) B  z. L' F) dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" [' \5 a8 `( ^. RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& V7 \( v$ X& Z7 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ a- K! }6 D2 b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. X$ v, O9 E7 o. s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) G% B6 |/ w" {( z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ [4 z! |6 l9 j( n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% l8 b1 Q! a$ E, l$ ], D& ~, i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& k! X% p+ `0 V; q( r+ c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, m5 [8 |2 A. F5 g! J% m2 P1 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; G) r2 B* {6 F9 r, p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* g; i/ D4 I5 E* \% r* D1 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' F- y- S& x7 {- n$ X) s. L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! Z+ C. E, @3 N5 I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& p- [" S3 W+ u8 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( c3 p6 w: B3 N3 n( b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 q" F/ z" t8 f7 z& h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- n0 g1 W! a. \; P, {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! w7 v9 w( _; P0 F  h- @9 m( a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ \5 J! D8 [8 L0 Y; u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; g# S8 x1 D  P" R# W- Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; `. f7 x" \% C( s. ?: T8 i# b5 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 n$ ^( E. S6 [# h( R% A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 F  V: y* Y9 k! Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 {+ Z; t1 i' @2 ~9 l" K/ f! @; k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& e3 v! B- `& E0 Q1 i3 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 c- e9 a1 y- q/ U9 M8 M1 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 y% e+ i; d; m7 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ J/ {/ u: ^5 B8 f$ }) I; S6 l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>