【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ b' k& ?& p; C( R9 W歌词我附在后面。
6 Z8 [: v6 y# D" S/ |. P# cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ _- G% M1 E+ Q& F- J  NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 J. L5 [1 j* _  o: `+ zThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 _* M& Q" Y# bWith the moon kissing it every night
0 R* T( [; O1 H+ GSeeing the sky content with its love
' H0 v7 e7 ]: v3 t8 P8 O0 E0 o4 o( W% zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  Q1 u" }+ v$ j% i$ N2 P. Z7 zI really want to know just how much you love me
5 }" o/ a* X" l% z. @! Q; k# ?I love you I love you with all my heart
2 ~* j/ b# Z% \! |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 B  B3 I7 P& c$ O! wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 L# ~# Q/ n9 {4 @4 e2 F) sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' C$ W7 L9 K+ z5 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* u. {+ C5 n! E4 G  t' jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" P2 b( T& l) S& PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! F8 T% Y0 ?3 A3 P  V* D7 YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 W7 u6 g& R" h, j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 t, d. E0 ~% ^: }! X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 G% }) ]9 k7 P3 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 I8 \3 I3 c( W6 M6 M% i' r  b# l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 D2 [1 t4 l! y8 a) ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% K; j" A- k1 W2 _. j( [' ]3 m6 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: T9 S- E8 }% }3 Y. }+ }" h: A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: L/ }+ }) f2 m0 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 e% ~8 T7 A7 J, k1 o4 _; L3 t0 E. O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( u' P" c0 m) d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& O; O; I1 Y5 l" r2 L1 @. O& Y! ]( @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% `" h2 w) Q* y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ `( k! k. k8 g$ T) O$ f- g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- X" J& O6 K0 c- C, O% N0 I8 a0 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. c! r: V5 [; F) J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( N  W9 }1 |8 D9 Q4 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: O$ K: w( R3 \' k; q$ S4 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& [6 v  u' [  ?. r0 w  P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! ?8 c( Z; \( \! H+ |! q' }/ E, }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 e" ^8 B# y. W, X/ O8 F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Y- }0 X, O, i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 l5 W- r3 u# \9 c; g7 v0 D- S  z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 C+ R: d6 k3 d, A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' I8 e" h% y) w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 k& D0 u' v+ ~. L& Y- L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>