【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 k' ]) b0 Z1 B' f. V) T) \* xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ n8 q2 _) A& N8 b8 k3 o% lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 O* F* \% j0 ^/ DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 J1 t, c# r0 ?% bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 E1 `6 B2 O9 |% s5 R7 c' ^I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 _# R' l; [8 M. Y/ m( [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 ~( X6 N# ?3 h6 j; UI regret not dying
4 R8 a2 S) l; G& SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  X3 |: t( l3 l6 G7 ]0 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 n( l- ?7 ~. @, O9 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 a- P+ i! Q: K3 E' Z5 p" S3 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 v" ~' R$ t  G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 z. @0 K  ~' W' M/ Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 b" W. k7 G( G6 F+ q9 |- o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 P9 h  X) |. [8 e. \1 |: K4 i4 l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- K- }: Q3 `3 A5 q1 u9 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) s0 F+ ]. R( B/ k- N' J; ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 A/ \% l* F4 L% s+ M+ z7 ]  H  `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& W" n6 U9 e7 d: r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) h% V+ g* y* Q" M% p/ W2 }<P>你无需担心</P>
) J3 K! l; }" `/ v7 |! p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 `+ Y# }3 H* {5 H# D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, h2 ^/ K# p5 r; y+ I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, \" `: r0 A& ~6 d6 m! _% d, h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- |! N2 y1 v8 O9 n- H" H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 }+ c3 t, m4 @4 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; C0 A7 Y; t1 X/ W' q- _* x4 c2 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; Z/ h0 j7 S+ Q3 k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; X3 u" Y3 D4 q+ h/ K1 i" `8 ]5 E  j5 S8 f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, e: Q9 T% r& O# R, p2 f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- D1 |$ E# W: D5 S7 F2 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" A1 i  x' r4 E$ F1 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" M7 Q. C2 _" B9 G7 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& F- O* L" x9 X1 I5 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) i- T+ h3 D0 ^, O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. Z( T) [% D6 _( v1 h- K: u, t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>