【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 r, |7 u! r' U5 T歌词我附在后面。
) j5 A9 H3 F! kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! y. I  |/ c  }0 z& BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 T; x$ J7 g) g6 ]: t) O% `3 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% c: I$ s( x% P- p0 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- l0 t; h/ f$ v* x. eYou needn’t fear anything
' ~8 \) l* S$ \+ H; G( m; r1 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 J' n% B' M) [% S; i1 B+ _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; j' H  }! P+ `% OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, T* p( K  \9 P. ]0 YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 ~1 I- n) S% \, t' `% mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; @3 ~1 e6 c" q( N  K( z9 ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ q5 A, \3 d2 Y5 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( {0 H8 _5 `2 g5 ~1 B; W. v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" C: {$ H6 v1 [# C+ W! s8 c2 @/ ?, e7 E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) q4 Z! j* T3 {" u4 h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 w) z, n& _) l5 l9 ?6 A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% N, M+ e/ r# L$ t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 J, C* n" K) G- I! K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 c; O7 x5 e/ {1 G6 `! t" h( v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 n9 {- ]- a# ]0 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 u6 w6 w1 e+ F5 O# A7 b+ ^8 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 D: S  L2 V( B1 b8 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* ?) s5 I! k7 H* l2 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, m) E1 q3 @3 Y9 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 k1 l" o$ r) V" A& ]( t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 C  T0 ]+ N+ {& H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 ^3 y$ m" H" z9 I' G! N0 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& a: s% i( a; W' B$ D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' D$ e6 e* V4 F6 Y7 a* N8 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' ?, G8 |5 O# M  Q# `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ q7 K1 I& }8 V% Z9 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 A: v; \+ Y$ e5 Q: \( M& H) v0 }6 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 F' n2 D. l1 I6 i" ]: r& c% M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 r& v9 ?# n+ }; S% {" w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; A. X- o4 T* Q7 M% U  C6 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 t" f& L* R1 a6 Z+ Q# s& {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% L8 X+ x, u' i- W4 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ ~2 k2 P$ }3 O6 ]& \$ X% ^- _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; _* T& p$ I% o: Z4 l$ o) G我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>