【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' K3 b6 D+ K4 h9 s1 s- {) L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( `# D' o: Z" b& }2 I8 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% g3 u0 z* W/ u! r4 W. S+ gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; x: O' i$ A$ X0 p, U; \4 Q3 ]! tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; l# g3 t9 }8 D3 H: u" VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# T& R, ?, H' ~  D' {3 yEvery other word you utter is love
1 t8 L+ U* s- i( @) t. \I really want to know just how much you love me
4 m/ M. k) u( j7 H6 nI love you I love you with all my heart
) j3 T# D& t+ S' v  ]Nothing can compare to my love
9 ?' Z6 u% D) P& z' ^) X' Z# }; FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  ?2 t( G- h/ `( J" oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! O& i- t& O) q+ k4 J2 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; n; ?6 f) N) c8 X4 CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 J3 N( g; m! B! C7 nI regret not dying
7 Z* M7 `/ G1 gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. p4 c7 {) q% ]With such a tongue as yours,
/ B% m1 ^* L- r3 e( n0 m( C9 f  {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  N9 g- [; n  K* y7 {' l5 v% cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 @  z3 C* c. g& v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 J# t& Y4 X4 q) y5 K1 E+ a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# O; ^2 [* ^4 A, l+ ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, l3 R: c0 V9 a6 g3 i+ m$ \& J: n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ w1 |) d4 `0 R# N0 O/ E2 R3 _7 }; Z! f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 ?) c5 `; E  D+ B5 \0 i- p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ v) u0 @/ y2 {8 j9 f' q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 d8 h. b& J9 a* x. ?# _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& V, l) X  u. G, a" [8 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 _/ ]; _( r) A8 e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) i5 i8 r/ Z, B; K6 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& P4 h5 a8 K0 T" P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& i% G& T) a# \/ @  P( C7 C8 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# r! w4 |  E6 t. E: z+ [1 L2 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ c; \0 z! j5 k* f* D& a% h" l0 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' ^7 ~2 D$ A. x. V0 p; A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 `. t% @1 v4 z& I3 {) g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, b: {8 S) l7 U. B" J! J- j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% U" p2 i( J0 e4 F  K1 m- J1 @4 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; x) O6 t: z1 l. A, D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 K6 U8 V/ }% ]7 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ [) c& `6 _/ n5 v* R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& Y1 S& J0 c# ~, _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- j' Z6 ?; l( n+ G8 Y& d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, C9 C! M( b! H4 m; h# ?& H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ b9 P" E, }/ r) u4 q  C& N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# U! ^( s8 N  n" j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>