【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 D' F, N* B; ~0 r2 yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 J8 Y4 e7 a* b6 J+ K6 F# w* o( gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) W/ D# @: d* r2 z& F+ X$ F5 WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" v+ L" X# w  _: w$ I1 E& |/ nYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) W+ a! |$ Q" }8 I8 g- p- pI love you I love you with all my heart
/ f9 m! l$ T- s1 b' tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& q* k. K3 M5 e% D0 f- r6 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  j6 \% i5 ^3 j' yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 u. |% Z0 y& k& @I regret not dying
% I$ z- f8 ]& e- ]$ L* A3 m- II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' |( R. f! B" F6 a5 n) JWith such a tongue as yours,
8 k$ S- t$ `; g" ^/ yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& y& h6 S5 `3 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 c: Z4 a" E# m( }& H' n" ^# r3 H+ W; N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& Q! A/ {  Q4 m" t* n5 M' m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- h3 z9 U; k. ~4 B7 O) L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" j( @. T& p0 C, ^/ L3 d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' R/ K2 ~& e/ X) R% e% u1 R6 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* D: ~& f# L8 d( D3 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% V- b4 P8 B$ w! t6 }( y1 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% p8 u8 ~, U9 t; w& v9 k2 u; u, w) G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 Q* V5 m( ^; z: _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! }* H1 }# m7 l" p3 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 s/ S* A! c( d7 v1 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 B2 }) v1 e: q+ t' E% J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) p, j" d: Q, f0 j4 H; o: p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 l- ^. o3 S" p4 Q/ x& d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, a* g$ t1 N1 A6 j( F& ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& R/ v1 }6 V8 }; e8 S/ @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( p' E, N, L/ Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' ]% e  X% j& D4 f, E( Q% h% \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# I, e: F, d7 V# A8 C: L' s8 Z' U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. C% d$ v8 W% l2 p% m* Z# v: U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 x) v* K  a" e9 Q8 v. b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, H% n( F% a( G2 `6 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; x; L( V) ?8 |  l7 a8 h8 |; x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 d% p5 k- D* F- O( A8 \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: |0 V& b. C( [( U; {( g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 c; r; m/ t3 j" O* A- ~. d我请你剖开它

3 H. H5 R1 d) `2 M# I/ F2 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 f4 K% v9 h( U$ p( Z) P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>