【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% w" }1 c" c9 B  g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ V  c) F# S0 U9 Y* M" ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 t0 @( G7 [4 ^/ B# ~With the moon kissing it every night
( d$ H0 s# T! n; i- j; M* i7 g! \Seeing the sky content with its love
9 V5 C$ X5 p( qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  s/ ?6 I5 I& E/ Y3 FYou needn’t fear anything
. K; i$ ]" A; q0 i( m3 W! ]  w9 uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ t: j( R$ m! I3 B: X1 P. Q9 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* s4 Y, s7 K0 x6 @8 V" k$ @- O$ `5 nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, z& g1 x: E9 D" F1 {1 O4 bWith such a tongue as yours,
% v( B* }8 u1 D- i5 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 M) W) S7 E) P( @: f+ U% q+ v( W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& y( C. k/ _* `, c$ E5 N/ I+ G2 _8 m! J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 ?, G5 ^7 u3 y& x! C( l0 ?( I$ G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 u. U5 B9 O1 e( }' f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 F+ q6 D( i8 A7 M. l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 \/ ]% O4 v$ B# y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 N; U( L. e% ^0 L6 Q( `. X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; e' k& q9 l6 X/ o- t" p  A/ l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 g7 G8 t+ ?; p1 G* F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 h' Y) i2 W+ ]7 u' Q2 ]/ w' g+ G# b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ C- D2 e5 P) j, x3 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; P1 A7 ^, d$ A) n" f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ R  w0 E7 \8 K) f. p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* F$ r& d$ l$ ^; ?  z- `8 J9 c/ Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ ^+ b% j/ b6 I8 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. f/ @+ d3 T4 I2 ]0 A, k! Q( a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! R- C: U2 z3 F7 H8 C5 O1 _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  ]. {6 O8 u1 x9 U( t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 V- e2 C- I4 S7 {0 X! G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* y" t. N$ D6 ?6 r# d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* \2 b4 N: x' s# ^& o' ^% }+ v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) l. A* [* R0 ~" O% o: T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! J% ]  j$ u, R( Y% F3 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# C, j( F4 V, [8 o' G  w: p9 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ B: E& q  `8 w4 m" q  J: q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 P. j/ N2 A( T" Y# y+ B2 k, X/ v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 S' I0 \& U: T& }我请你剖开它
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- o' V# ]4 h. j/ v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>