【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' N5 C* n. r, h  ^8 V, m) e( yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ w( o: E- A: EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; [# B2 p9 N) Q7 ~With the moon kissing it every night
9 \7 G3 {) p$ B' c2 O8 M/ U* ESeeing the sky content with its love
$ {( p: Y1 w7 o0 yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 U) `5 y. ^$ R1 v* cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 G% \8 L1 z9 II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 |/ Z+ E1 `# B% }9 r3 i6 }Nothing can compare to my love
6 d1 T* Y" ]" z5 l0 Z. KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 k/ b" T+ P9 A# k4 [/ T, x9 J; qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: ]3 d: s3 V: q1 S; ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 y5 O  r1 ~( M/ pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 d* W3 |# [0 {& \% QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 w* x; M4 y9 ^& z  Z7 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- A, h5 W; f  ~- g. j, P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ p$ e; K- n9 s, W- S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* z" u0 z$ m" O$ b" y9 r; Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 U  s) {8 ~% m& x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 d% E8 `8 A2 J, L/ o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! c: h9 ]5 {* J; s% B4 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 H: G7 L' S! D3 b# c) X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 A4 A" t$ M0 b( y) H" O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 b- Z6 v/ U% \: }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# a# v# r) z) o; N; C' E( u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 H3 u5 p( Q& u9 e( j! H3 [/ z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. z4 J. r; t7 u9 S; p9 E; T* N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 s  w" s- L  _7 a: N. z: @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 Q4 P( j5 ]7 C4 P, P8 ?6 P0 i) L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% N, s  k8 V. Y" B, o* H) H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  P8 b2 y; q1 n. [- M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ x, t! V; s, B. L8 ]% [! Y- v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* j2 N0 P/ }& G7 f# S: o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- _. k3 |; s2 v0 z# }8 g* F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# z: ]: H. T5 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 X" n& r! j+ @& |/ M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" S+ d; T8 `: v; C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, _1 |; W) }0 Q3 H3 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; n2 }" t; }: f' l<P>I regret not dying</P>
! W  ^+ T, W3 E$ b+ k+ k  d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( e6 J! s8 M" d  U0 r8 Y' P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# F9 U: m7 O8 X2 K1 {! ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) ]1 L: ]. |/ f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# L% W% h9 j6 G: Z: o' k$ F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 F; @8 x; C! V! w' [& v8 Z5 B# A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# |) S1 e# O2 J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: Q2 T8 c; L" r4 Y$ a  ]' f/ Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& X) |# Z& |$ J+ V! A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>