【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. {) W, y. I" v$ _% J) [! sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 D9 P( m0 J' ]9 I9 t6 k, D7 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& x1 X0 w; |0 iWith the moon kissing it every night
) t4 b0 F* ^  p1 y0 s: q8 B/ dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ V/ R- W  T$ P& b4 J7 H* {5 PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  A4 W( c" ]# f7 R8 j1 k. a; ?3 p/ BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! t7 F6 O* @7 y7 W* Q9 `/ KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  o8 n" I# }1 ~/ a+ j$ }" BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, X5 k6 ]7 O* R+ u+ Y' X7 FI want so much to see inside your heart
3 p* D( W" g' I* S/ p" mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' }4 L: z  J1 O' n; FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# B: F5 e5 ]( V" K/ F+ ?! [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( R  V; T# q8 G' P/ DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' K8 G% A( f7 |$ |$ [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 H8 z6 W& \, E" m' e6 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 d( c3 H# u% `7 v; v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; x' t& i4 ~/ ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: C$ a5 x6 }# X* h$ v) i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 v! k: s1 g' P, A9 ^+ A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: e7 Y- Q! e" r. s- Z& J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 u4 `. s# C" G% O, l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 C6 y- \, f0 Q8 x<P>你无需担心</P>
  F. e0 T. x- S. S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 g6 S* u+ J5 ]9 U/ L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 ]1 [- m. u+ Y0 H) d7 o. ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. A. _- @# U$ J6 S' V" D0 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 ]& B0 B( l/ ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ v; z+ U0 K  M/ C- s4 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 |" G% C. V! o) ^. }6 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- E( z6 B& E# h. o1 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 G  L/ a% F% V6 u, G6 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% E/ W2 e; h! _1 Y" m0 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 o0 \- B) n: G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 \' T/ o! ^7 Q5 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* s4 h1 C$ |' H; d" z<P>I regret not dying</P>
( I% g  v4 Q# B0 ^) r* n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( K; ?3 D4 F6 G, ?3 C; t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- f" i' [! {% x! C% g  H! o! T4 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; P6 {* X# R* k2 E/ q4 T% N$ p4 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! h. Z$ n" }. [) ]2 D; \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 m! D, L. `6 Y( {# F/ \8 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) z! f" E& }3 V, K9 h# ~; a3 p9 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 g) s' H! A2 h' d6 i: c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ w) {& `  q  b% x我请你剖开它

- v5 V) s+ A! j' n. L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>