【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ ~5 |) N7 ~) `  qThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 J/ K* j) E/ ~) DWith the moon kissing it every night
! @' r7 \8 K: p% J% g8 t, WSeeing the sky content with its love
% d/ Z* t, f7 N8 s7 l4 Z( nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, ~) V( f6 l6 W! yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& j) `' R# {" ^; mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 [+ v( q+ ]% Q/ \% KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# ?! ~/ B% d+ \" I! r5 h3 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* H3 {# B' ]6 @; y$ A! [I want so much to see inside your heart
% f8 G3 j# T8 R; \0 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 t3 z* {4 Q% H3 N+ m9 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& N, M6 u- X* J) KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 t4 z( ~0 U/ ]7 a) `! k0 k9 r' qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  \" E$ y: C' X+ h, W; Q4 O" @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 F8 U1 s% l7 g/ Q/ T" Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" j( m0 b7 j2 k  M0 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 Q/ Y) a0 {' J: d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 R0 O+ z. v0 Z) ]8 R: }" D1 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 ?4 i, S9 {( {( n+ r0 r5 Q: H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# e5 _- e) K( a2 w- K6 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ F7 o  {2 Z$ u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 O5 l0 I! M/ L! j$ ~9 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 M9 F# }' W% x2 S  J& l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 W* L( u& F" r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 v& Q& n* W' k% e0 Q5 [% }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ {6 _% ^! c3 Y3 J3 t2 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 D, P7 R3 f1 j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- `5 r  W: F4 a$ P% J5 i8 n5 V' k* a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ O2 v9 E. n7 C; X8 ^9 t" h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' r0 y- m& u# P" N, X, B' F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. ?+ q! z9 X- I7 C8 A, G9 q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( {5 X+ }3 q" t; u" E: n& A: M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 f  g; B# _7 f1 U* I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 _$ A% u0 s1 S, A8 G2 y( \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: i: k- R7 C- V! \<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ B, O8 u4 K- K0 @$ y) x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  F$ r  V/ D2 }- \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* @2 Z3 m) G# j9 }5 v9 O7 v, {: W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- q/ C+ U& S* L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- {- Z& `6 v# H+ U* p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% A. W; g6 P# d5 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* ^. l7 \! b4 u7 G( y1 v8 T$ Q5 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, v7 I' m, e/ H# f我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>