【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 e0 S- n: h2 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ [1 V: j1 a  J8 n: |* ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 q- J1 y1 V5 d- rThe sky is happy down to its soul
* B( \" O$ o( n: N8 @% Z7 b' R3 F1 |With the moon kissing it every night
/ L4 p: o7 C8 q; @- rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& I& _8 r1 l" H: D, f3 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  M1 _1 m) k$ [+ U+ I- [8 zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ m& S* e; s% ]) _- H/ V; P8 hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 p! N, ]- q( L; s9 c, H* a7 u1 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ |; M+ x9 b9 B8 E/ y' WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- G0 q  a/ ~1 N3 ]1 Z) rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; p0 t" G) F$ L2 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) _  y; v5 U  N8 ~$ ?3 G: }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. \2 M! p" U+ q% N+ C. z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% D5 n, Q  Z7 b" o6 j- H! ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ P) h' T( C  B8 d/ o" f- z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 |! c0 x% D& ]% ~. P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 r7 J+ o* Y, I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- b- l% z8 d7 K" O/ H& a: X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 E* R0 }: p/ X5 r2 o3 L  S' o$ ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- Z; E! G3 J$ a+ K8 B) s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ y" {4 ~2 A5 K' n% N% z+ t' r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' m% @" f. @7 ?, }7 O! u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 a5 N( u9 k  B: _  ?' {2 Q) O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! Q  Y2 P! q$ r' f3 f2 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* w# Q$ G. g5 Q/ _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 S6 e9 W' W! c4 V/ e' S7 p3 G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 i0 H7 r& e" V4 g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 B4 _0 L5 Z) q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" A0 H# C! q  i" s' M: `( Q- r" u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& p- r7 B  C& ]  l' _6 ]% a! @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 c( I; j! C. I+ N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 d9 h0 W6 C6 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  r% z! H8 @: }* e+ S' H2 L* @3 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
* G* S8 v/ T1 L7 U' ]8 x" m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 S, w& B! E: }6 Q0 [1 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* r9 l( E5 C; }+ N" i8 u* U, i4 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# E! a" y4 v1 T' K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 {5 T) Y/ D% ?% C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% l; p6 U+ G: w3 u# b+ J; _8 ~# R6 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 ~0 S$ L' \& K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ ]) @+ {$ W5 \8 E7 K8 [3 t$ A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' G" Y* i# B- [0 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>