【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 A& x7 r; x; b  oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) D' ^! t$ }! d7 y1 u( mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 p3 n  [5 C. K% ^8 nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 ?. L2 C" Q! o/ A; v, x# j+ jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 X1 h7 Y1 B8 ^/ O! O% ]& H. vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 J1 C9 ?7 `8 IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 @+ L' f9 ~" |/ R2 P9 ]- tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; x0 A) ^0 m# x6 C" ]& r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; p7 @8 Y" o6 m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' j* B6 Q% |1 z' O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% _; C( c! w8 S+ Z' v& J. A' F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 H1 @7 H+ n; r! W( j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& B; B% I* A9 p4 Y4 [. V3 ~$ D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: v: P( N; \/ M* P& M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ q  j' V% Q' U5 c$ i0 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  |, l; W8 o$ \+ U9 d4 H<P>你无需担心</P>
1 T; \& d% {3 d- I4 `5 X& Y- k% C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 O6 B% j- k$ _: x7 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 ]. p3 j! |% m! ~0 E$ E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. L6 b7 P1 r( k. L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 F+ N% C7 u0 S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 E# f5 {2 ^% ^6 z9 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# H. Q' i+ S: n* W+ E2 p; e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( F4 _+ M- ~3 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& E/ e+ D' W/ q5 \5 f9 n0 G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 L! F3 `. r/ G1 p. O! j' F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& Y- A1 J' `: F+ S0 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 x2 b1 X6 J' F. j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: O7 C: p( Q  y- j# [# y0 a) Y7 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ y2 M2 K) q: l  w. {8 A- X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ V* s; k) @1 R8 V2 m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* t1 `! X5 Q9 P3 g2 q7 B2 C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 h  z( }4 L! z$ k; x) q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 b. _; r+ [4 ?0 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ]8 O. Y* L" U: f" p. }, X$ W/ b" ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 f! ^& B6 \9 ], E2 i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 Z7 y. b1 S/ W! G6 U8 N8 ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 _* a( l) ]" l3 B; P( C  k+ [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

1 ?, v! j* `5 n& D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>