【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! \1 B' T, x0 Q; D  M- O2 `' V/ ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' a* U& b* `( I3 F1 R. YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 {0 \- w# L8 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 g! p4 Q5 Y: E) \9 N1 _- DThe sky is happy down to its soul
! @* d9 B9 |0 t1 b' `+ H+ J) ~8 E' rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ C8 u0 ^5 u9 ~0 @; s2 X/ p4 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 s; {6 C! p, `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' W3 s1 s1 |) J# c# f8 ]1 @I love you I love you with all my heart
& R( ~, E& b; T; F  NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 ?) i' I9 A1 `/ dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# d5 ~/ z* Y5 [# ~9 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% _7 G/ h" T& m) m" S( m: pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- c: [# V/ t$ u& O# ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" T' a, q# M/ c7 e* F4 ]$ M: F% n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! n/ b1 {) \6 {; o3 @8 o+ C9 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ u; W4 y% i4 l/ I" u2 N, T8 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 v- n7 r& Z4 j8 G# ^6 P; j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" B1 C0 F; v& ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 n8 E0 ]' Q' V9 z5 r4 O; ]: f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' j2 X; K8 o5 N' O. j6 b& y: y0 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 m6 t" {& @: O/ \( \5 y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: T' _2 x! t1 L! h; G( D/ L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ p2 O3 Q/ o7 b' {  ~+ U5 `# K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! n' J: b+ p1 r! _" B6 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ ~2 D. k" \% f" c4 S4 [5 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ J! p# R% r& e5 W" O: D& B! w* g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; m6 C; c4 ^( Z3 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 k6 {  h3 g0 O1 U! f  F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 Y# F5 F/ ?9 t( M3 K( T+ K/ d1 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. i* F; D2 k0 U% G1 y/ G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 ^9 x8 ^  K6 y- r; _: F  P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>