【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# H1 J) X( p, Q8 |( ^' F$ P8 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 t+ X% m! x. p: \" w4 S8 L8 g! N" IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  Z9 j# k* L" _: P7 r( s# oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  b  m; R6 b/ Z1 tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% p1 v4 b) ?) u0 \# d% ]# h; s" ~6 uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* a/ R. p( Y# k% eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# [9 d) D+ R6 r& @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 {$ E" J8 D0 FI regret not dying
5 i4 Q. r8 H  b0 |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) {+ y7 t, Y! L0 N* y- j, z. TWith such a tongue as yours,
. o2 n1 O1 V* F$ t; sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 ?, ~* g, o: d% p2 V. {) }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* W; [$ Y6 o2 f/ ~+ i! L" iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; g, h; v# S& q) r% `0 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 g6 l: n3 A3 n/ [7 E- V" v) u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* Q" V4 Z1 }7 P2 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ V/ t" {& G+ Y* \* K( I& a8 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. `" M2 g, g3 ~" c1 K! b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 v: W7 A2 [  R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 L. S! F0 _2 Q& b" u. m' ?! q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' x" J* ]5 L" A/ F. O7 Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: v3 d" k' j* h4 \5 M( P1 S1 V* D+ z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# L. P" N. v  M& g8 i' ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: A# J' b! ]! ]+ c$ A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 v. C" w, |, z  w! ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( p2 {+ T( h: `5 G# U" _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 h6 ?) g, M3 T% }; B( W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! x, C7 N+ X' q) D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 Y8 s' A# z6 e  {; j! e# g; ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 `, y! r) K  m2 L# J5 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# O4 f2 {6 K; q* Y/ R' e) B5 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. l7 [# S% z6 a$ {! h8 F2 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" T1 y3 Y: W3 Z6 y! a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  T: _0 \) h' o" |! K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& N2 r$ c4 O7 |' g<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 s  b6 p, o2 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' \8 _2 K: e6 W8 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  w% W% b0 g( Z1 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ S: N9 \  t/ p5 }4 k# _2 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- D8 `* _# {- q) X9 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ i, q: J# e2 l+ i4 V- l" b  {: c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 O0 I  M% f+ V& L" @' p: B' ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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- D- K- i7 c" i. v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" u# F6 W8 R. W; j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>