【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 Y  E' {! O6 W9 i* ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 M% X; L6 J8 Q) ^. {7 c1 l, tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 v: O; w$ w) f/ ]The sky is happy down to its soul
! C; Q$ r8 s% W* kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: t6 R  \3 O) r* f# u& x9 V- c( SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 r! I% o, e) rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, P2 U7 \( z6 kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 u( C4 c4 V3 z  JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 ?5 V7 o; V5 s+ pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( b0 G% g8 m2 T) c/ p+ d0 II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 Q' I' |$ @/ N/ H4 P& \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# p2 B; K' @) ]+ M0 c# ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 T. m. d6 m( d7 a/ D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' y: L" _3 Y0 r! J+ s  h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# o1 U% W6 k4 n, A; ?+ E% h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. x8 X2 R& s/ J1 s" T2 R* q6 G: n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 X' N9 D9 I( x! N  S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 x( ~( T" J, `. O' v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 R4 a! Q" c$ L5 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 ~& I! [( c9 b* m' h7 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ X' S7 R& B7 O6 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) x( k5 v. b1 v: N( ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, M, L: ?) E' ?0 e' w3 z% b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 o/ l* p0 ?0 o% a, Y- s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" k0 {! q( X- f" H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- V7 [4 K; h4 M- y' H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; L% P& {( p, t2 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 g8 }6 i( b  i7 s# g! x5 q( a$ ~: a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) q% ~7 H) w: r/ q8 O. B. r, N  f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) E+ g6 O: }2 A: L3 e3 D- b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' Q; h5 t! u4 ]9 A1 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, ]8 m/ ^6 y1 Q6 {. \' E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 x  {1 s% m6 R8 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
' }. \) _- `0 o. z+ o3 z0 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 C6 v, y0 c' `# a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 y7 x* v% E9 W0 G' `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 \; ]' I. d: M8 i1 B1 v: p% k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; J* m. `) B5 ?0 H! U4 [, M0 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>