【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 t7 c3 V) o6 l% d) m! UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! C' Q# O4 w5 ~0 L& GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& C1 |6 {7 g4 g. R! s' v/ v  D# t; CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 b  E" ^; w% I7 Q: _! S! a: _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 P- M( M8 z* z. O+ x) h" eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 P1 E! P) m3 y7 W8 N* ]9 bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% d; W. \# U# J. VNothing can compare to my love
8 p7 k7 Q! o% C$ LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ o5 |" n& k" E* V7 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 X. v4 W! q: M+ |) {) R$ @/ LI want so much to see inside your heart
- c* M$ W! u, W* EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 ^$ m5 N" H3 q+ PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ r( Q( |' m& I  a# X, G& V- lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 S1 i) C" E& w+ Z3 Y0 U8 R! ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  I# i8 U8 B' j- _; ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  l. j1 y+ O7 l, u; w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 h" \- O3 f; S8 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 G& @; V4 N# k; e2 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 r- @" G; ^  X& r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" c0 L# H  ~$ ?* m) C: N' {9 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- O# j+ `" ^. P5 n) E8 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* s3 i2 ]8 `! i1 U8 F9 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' B4 c) K* e9 z% k; x8 R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 F  _3 R+ ]3 [+ i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 A  }; W: _3 `3 {. M- t6 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  P+ o! ]5 R! d; a# ]+ U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ `/ Z# `  A. w( ]& c! e; ^9 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 \# {8 x# E$ u) A% g6 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, r+ L' P. p, S. W3 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 @) x* g7 `8 I( F. ?; q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# [/ |( O+ n, K- _1 c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; y# A* e, K! K; ~$ i* e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; d+ `2 p+ R: k- i! t7 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  _+ C) E3 Y8 t/ ^, L% m7 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 W  t% D4 L& Q/ l# V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: H) h; C* C- C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 p6 X* C5 m  E: H* Z( r& }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 r& ?' j% O  W& v* D1 J/ i8 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 z* Z$ @7 }. T$ x$ b) |" w$ T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# E* v  E6 y6 _* E+ W$ |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ }) U, @: T* X  q6 I# ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>