【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; v( g1 }! H" K. C( `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 m' x* e9 \# ]# e) \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. F. Z, H7 Q/ `: k0 b( |; U2 eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* h% D- i7 w* Q% A4 Z3 B1 \0 f  ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 i- \4 M2 g) ^" _. C- j) bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 t3 \) X( ?( u- II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 y/ X3 \# H3 y4 ]) {Nothing can compare to my love
0 |! w: D! a0 h2 _) [6 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& r& j- `' b: z( b2 k* p/ h5 IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ b6 E4 B% t! G, h* [- BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 n& c; ?& g% u. w/ [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! U! I2 ~3 P" g; |% R4 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 W  a* B  U$ R) kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% z2 S5 l" R# t3 x; J3 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' A$ U* B: F* ]0 X# `8 v: ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: u1 Q0 O, N3 f  I; t- w* q7 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 E2 U$ v( K6 z" s8 ^5 O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( e* o; x  i+ D* ]  h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ e6 V% }2 R5 w5 [/ y2 Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; Z1 G$ F: Y  `/ t( y4 A9 S: G; q. ]% q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 x. [; Q/ P. A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 f) h8 b( l! P7 R: ]" }+ p* s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 {$ n- O" J  x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 Q( e3 J9 z" R8 F- m2 J& i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; @, S( c1 c1 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. c( I, \8 k% N1 ]" o# D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% n1 e9 ]$ g- Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, a8 U! R; [& I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) c. \% y* o8 F* ]2 N. S) j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" e& G* P% |% X3 i& n, ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 @9 x: E) U, w7 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, ?& t/ K3 n2 t0 ]; l5 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 c( S$ ~1 G, E4 d! x8 L9 o5 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% X- S4 f) t' [* O5 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 {4 \6 P, ?( Q& F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( l) X6 k2 a' u* R% Z! M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ m& ~5 q/ _, c( K: `' W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" d& n0 C/ n) t# ]4 f1 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# q3 }- G  J0 {% h3 s. Y) r" Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 \4 @2 q+ e* d/ R2 _+ Y: z" Z& N! W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, u: Q/ z+ F! l& U; [3 G& G' d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 O! |; |  m% c& e5 D' P/ W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 q, }2 I" ?1 m2 d% N( Y我请你剖开它

% x: p! P) W: C( t7 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 @/ K  A) ~7 \6 z9 O. U/ ]% i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>