【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  O" i* N2 X( `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 I# E* {, i8 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 x' [  E5 h" d: ]$ {1 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& D0 Y( u' `8 z) EEvery other word you utter is love
" A: w% u# @; ?" iI really want to know just how much you love me
; H% R2 n) z& h% i; rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 M. \" A. I, E7 D* tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 I# G( \; o, M2 g8 F$ g8 i. ]. _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: p4 Y, I" G) i8 ]2 JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: q6 ~1 v4 l6 q7 z6 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 G' p  J) M  G$ M) ?- D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* o# r* m8 f: q9 F0 P1 {- h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' D" _0 G0 @  `: q% c3 Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( }9 f) F: c1 H; Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 w; A5 U7 V" @3 s' D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- W% C  P& i  G! b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- w" ?2 W$ O' k8 b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& z$ ]' D% D# `0 p/ ?* h3 L0 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 w+ u% c5 r' T5 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( X  D8 h1 [" {* e( s4 P) M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ f" l% y0 ~3 l8 o8 H3 }, L- c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" F8 G1 ?5 ?7 p7 r* Q* ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: r( q: E( R( `: p1 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: H6 k# T: y! ?; N/ S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, H# {6 F+ @2 y" H$ ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 |4 ]/ E+ I( N) }! G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" r9 Y& ]3 p" H8 I0 U2 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 k0 J' e- X+ E6 V& j<P>I regret not dying</P>
; x0 \4 ]; D$ [' `: [# |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! h7 C# X0 _# ~/ M: A4 s# o" ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ U0 W+ P0 B1 Q, P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# f4 ^3 v/ N$ s2 r$ [" s5 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 i" h& q  E4 a0 k0 h' g' {; l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>