【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 Q9 b) m0 `& u* K0 A4 X1 T+ HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* j& r" Z! a, b4 b8 z- H; A/ _& JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# d6 u" b( R0 j, r& ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 b% W2 w2 G3 H" X* hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 p2 F4 I: q8 A; f' H' m) ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; z& \4 A; O; u( \/ G& uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) Z1 o# g. a$ n' u/ |% z# GI love you I love you with all my heart
; C( p; f+ _  w: g( A# H7 l, KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 r% [, v) G; ]  u4 KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 G% \, ~( A, y8 N: PI want so much to see inside your heart
( H& [& F3 E4 I+ e# V% p; KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ x, x! B/ e5 P! h4 {) Y$ I# sI’m still filled with fear
& v) `! t% U3 m, O2 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 Y) O/ o1 q1 D& x3 N) |I regret not dying
  C+ A6 M, r* ^) ?$ ~9 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% E* Y( u8 x/ C( O; g- \! t- g( {With such a tongue as yours,
. R$ i# E3 o3 k" t) NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 D8 z: n% Z% F# V! D1 D/ d1 T6 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! w6 \5 s' S: D$ J' q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( Q( j+ `. [# H7 t6 T+ E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% S, n; b: m) V% y2 R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 ]/ y3 }4 l2 R0 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 f" J: r0 w2 K+ S, K: @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# K; W% ]# m2 D* |/ Q1 n; R" r6 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% f; D; T% E; P( h8 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* e- f# e, _: w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# z. \/ Z; ?1 C* J8 l3 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 ]4 d# t' b) J2 J6 l2 k7 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 M2 f5 ^7 E/ g# O* Z+ M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 R( f0 k1 p: j! Y/ r: a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 _/ ]- {, ]; ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 t) p! l- M! o5 [* _8 G' i1 p. D6 w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ ~  W) |- K' f& o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, q4 ^9 N  E% K' X/ S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  H8 Q" F! c& i- g/ Y2 t$ C# s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- r' L& n. W4 {6 _3 |4 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ y6 p$ Q2 J8 u& F/ t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) p) D9 z/ @' w- D. q- F& h5 u1 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- L* M  N5 V% f; H5 b" A# x' m. Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 R3 @, ?- \0 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 a+ T1 B+ J& Y) X: S3 n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 I7 `2 i2 [4 z5 h/ t# }) J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ U: C. c% J% v% E* j* X2 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) d( ?* _, `: B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 q7 r, @. ^1 {. }! |9 ^) z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ t4 a0 D' n) \) ^( Z. k. |9 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, j8 l9 }3 X( ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) t7 _8 L$ E2 B- I  P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* Y6 p& @# g' C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ B" Y2 O9 E, U6 ^  l我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! }1 J6 x3 c! V1 w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>