【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 {( `2 M3 S. o; dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 {( \2 d. J" e- @, AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; h) ?( C3 K2 v# Q$ |; `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 `" U; U0 M. V/ T% LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: `6 q8 y6 u, ^9 vI love you I love you with all my heart
. L+ ~0 x& P. P; U7 ^6 E9 w  pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& t  j" ?( [8 W, O1 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( W7 O7 m3 L4 x. HWith such a tongue as yours,
/ m. [7 Q8 c4 u  I  M2 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. n) @9 V; y; ?3 e* jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& m3 V9 O: y3 v) @9 [* URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  v  r: R0 l7 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: h  `5 A. ]5 x9 M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! t& ^( r8 s$ ^" K' T1 _1 N; A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* E( w- o; L/ w/ h3 J5 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 I/ g( B% `2 r" n' z0 A9 ?! f9 m* M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" U  L4 X% h: K' P6 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 ~9 s* I* C* x# Y* ?& Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' L- r( H# J1 `# z) W; m7 z7 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 x) c& ]+ h% x3 \6 M4 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" p/ e1 k! X8 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 A8 n% @# D6 h2 D& S: \6 v5 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' V( y+ S9 y5 k; J! D. Y$ t- j1 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( l* L/ W: s. N% Q  H* g0 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; A7 a9 q& ~# J, U% _# n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ i+ O: u- R$ X, z. ?( @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ X( l6 W( r( g. f, ?" H+ E2 P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% y/ |* J  V/ z6 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( @- F; k- N( B/ S' _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! f7 |# y$ V2 p2 ^3 `* F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 e1 c: O: N9 I/ b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ N, [7 Z1 R. f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* W. k2 A) o- G0 p, ]' }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 M- C5 Y, ?( c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! V! I- T% H' Y/ R* l8 T我请你剖开它

8 ]/ |: e5 [* q5 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 n/ F. _7 S- r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>