【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& V! k8 \0 M  p: `$ C& w' p9 O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 ^- b0 Q4 }- A% {" J5 V5 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 S' q' }: f+ Z3 j/ |* _The sky is happy down to its soul
/ z! Y/ l$ H  x' \; [With the moon kissing it every night
- I0 e3 |9 o% {/ ^! T6 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; C, {- K4 O" J, W5 gYou needn’t fear anything
  t1 B6 p& ?- e, a1 U& ~9 p7 a3 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 K& o) r4 W! \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( d8 Y* E: U( r. K, Y6 X' zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( _0 Z- G: o5 f( w' OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# ]* k* |0 I5 ]6 e2 R. NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, O5 O1 R& N. S6 \0 qWith such a tongue as yours,
8 S; p5 p! W) @2 ?  r! g9 E# ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ C, j% D/ W  @+ B; Q& D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, F( Q# u# y, f( U" T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" r9 F+ ^4 g' t/ `, S5 k: `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% g- ~% B8 \2 b( G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% |1 h- A  ]; c) v! G' g$ Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* M0 E; C& T8 [0 B( l+ w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 @/ G: T1 X0 J* E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" _5 I; U0 x" b) R4 \1 B* ~! I! ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 ]7 ?) A% h3 B) W<P>你无需担心</P>
! X  o5 t+ F: p6 J0 i. `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 w6 z3 e4 M) v7 Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, z0 T, c$ I+ n$ f4 }& {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 x1 F" _% r& w0 f) e4 w5 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( H* ~8 z3 s. \) [7 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& x# b: f! m# a. Q: K, F3 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 S' W1 H* p$ m" |$ Y7 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 m! v/ o# x2 R& v2 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: E0 I/ z4 {1 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 }: {! K. q  |6 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 y8 o% ^- T- T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; ^7 x! |+ Q: [7 L5 [/ |, E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* f9 A. q% e% |" N/ Q4 C; [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 v3 k. V6 r( D) J! R- |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* F$ l' i2 s0 q1 k3 ]/ e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& e# a5 K" ~, y: q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ A; r! C0 C" v1 ?. Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  g" m: v! T0 b& s0 t6 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  H5 x; E1 f) X2 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" Z$ [; E: D8 `9 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 V/ x6 ?2 S2 _; y- u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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& D9 L  S) F) W  }. E9 e5 b& | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 W  c# r# }3 A% T" A# d7 C, r& h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>