【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 z: l8 c& Q, t) Z' u歌词我附在后面。
- e1 B: s) {+ S) JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& K/ E) I1 D* `# Z' U# x* jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) B: W2 ?# b$ f( r" aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( V3 I5 y6 H, Y- B  sThe sky is happy down to its soul
- ?" C, |) i! ?  CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 I+ E! y% @  L, n7 \4 QYou needn’t fear anything
: M# c% E3 [3 n/ @! ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 W2 d* g9 k7 B6 }3 I4 I+ cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. L  `; M! z2 G8 BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 F) J4 t) S/ z3 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" w7 r) a! T3 {% h/ ]2 V# A. u, }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ M2 M+ }9 n& W1 ]0 ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( t! ?6 b& _) f# `( V8 E2 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 C. M$ B0 {5 \6 k# e4 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ h7 z  F$ c- L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' c: p, M. A9 k* q$ |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ N2 @; d$ ^/ y# }) e) ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; w' S  o  i4 ?( y% L  _5 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# r- f9 H3 v  n( E+ ]1 d2 H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- x, t: Z* c* P2 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( l* ^# F5 u" q: n" t3 N" C1 e5 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 j4 v& g9 q( m' S6 d; x, q- c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 y* c! C' T/ \; Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ _) A4 v5 ~/ L3 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 `5 F( h( C1 j* }. ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- M: L3 B8 g/ E9 t, ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 r# r% Q) |7 M8 S; J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' R, q7 c4 w* l: Q' ~  \( Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- f; d# L2 J, n$ i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; C4 f5 w+ W9 n1 [3 q: g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 Z( s1 {" O; Q: z, m  W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 U+ ~2 P- v$ i! h0 Y. m! o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 ?6 i9 H+ }1 ~/ e7 g, _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- c5 V; y# f) K8 m/ _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! `% a4 Q! s/ f& c3 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' y' m3 i; D/ L% L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% F  V+ B2 i  B我请你剖开它

" m% O9 d' ]7 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>