【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 W1 I0 E' M! z; e8 e1 J) ?2 `Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 N8 B0 y* t; q- u) qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! }8 Y% t8 @! f6 f8 R7 }With the moon kissing it every night
3 D. `0 u8 [5 s5 b. ASeeing the sky content with its love
: ^' q8 E5 D! r7 E/ ^* hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. Q. h! x; x+ kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 S; W- c; g7 z9 s2 zEvery other word you utter is love
( g" Y1 [& D) F5 {) w# \' dI really want to know just how much you love me
0 L" D) o6 Q  v7 z( [* b. B- j9 j# `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% F" ]) F( ?. o4 E( ^, u$ jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ k6 B4 w* V( ]% n8 h7 o* W/ {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# i4 M+ e  C5 F+ |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 P4 I* H4 F, g5 r3 X- B  K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 {" R. x( j9 d) d. q0 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" Y0 T* ?% D' s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& K/ h/ e4 `% M4 e$ N: C# E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 Z4 V! J6 ^, p7 O: R% G/ z* d$ F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ x' U8 \) k5 C: P) E- c/ T; A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 Z- Z4 _" I+ Y1 d. a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 C& K; _( ]- @- K1 A4 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  ]* k  m0 s& B6 m6 @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 _" I7 v  j0 m& K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 K4 [; x2 w" \) Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 Z& h# }2 p# V1 S- O! J: ~+ T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& `2 G! A% {- P' v; c! {+ H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! q8 ]+ [( Y3 ]3 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% l9 ]: N: J2 |& H- {$ R) g! m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  \& d" N8 t3 \9 {* A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 M" P; S" @: e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ A& X3 G. N  l6 J0 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' X4 e% d8 S( z( H) \. E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( B3 w  G% V6 m3 {$ K; ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; Q1 d& P7 N- y4 c% `) S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' t4 }" o  W. O$ B" [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 _1 v& `2 q) e5 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% R& q! Y/ s; p+ I" h& S" Q3 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* H9 @" k8 l, s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ d; P6 C: x6 G2 a; C1 Y我请你剖开它

/ H8 m) e) S) u- j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 G' L* J6 [$ r0 }- f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>