【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! j" X2 Q/ S$ C歌词我附在后面。
- b. P, t. t6 L0 K0 h; T+ HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 x% H0 x* C& E0 O% hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) u/ ~0 [8 r7 K# L+ v. Q- kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 \# `  o* p; x0 _' j0 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
( ?# t7 g% Y  @) Y1 q$ MWith the moon kissing it every night
  Q: b+ w. |! V. zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' {6 c& E: ?8 I4 q6 H/ g" x: Q& NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 L  [& D, L1 k9 u: ~I really want to know just how much you love me
' p" v7 {0 ]: l$ v5 r+ A* {; ~5 yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; V# R% @! |- p+ O) AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) B2 ]1 z3 L$ kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- ]% e) J' F: I" U2 b' Q8 I1 W. LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" K% k4 x% j3 |" C! D& yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ G& |8 Q2 m0 c0 `, c0 A( GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# S$ m$ x" D9 J- e' v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 }- }5 O0 M* j. t0 p& R0 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* W7 H3 `- {/ j7 P# K! R- T4 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  a- B  [3 l8 f! Z. L: R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 X6 t# L8 E8 Z5 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 C- T4 \; E6 T0 X, r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ F' `- x0 Z1 h. u1 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  \2 l; T% y9 @- J4 h& x; d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' s) r0 `% g4 h3 k5 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( Q9 A3 J3 J8 i( h7 `+ w+ e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. X* R1 `4 h- {) @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& O0 X: @: N! ^6 i! j( s1 m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ |: V/ p$ `( L# h/ n6 n1 {1 j3 j) I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ z+ J0 H( ?0 q0 k8 y; I3 g; X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& q0 k. X. O! {7 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: T0 R. W# @9 [5 `' T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- B9 c2 l6 Q" i7 S7 P5 S( T0 X5 O0 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  N0 D0 h7 R/ k0 p/ y- v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 i6 [' a: R% b' ]8 X! ]+ {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; A! ]: e1 b: N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! p% Q, l% C9 ?  ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. m* G* _0 \- i5 _4 I5 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& H- w' R8 L2 H5 ~& x% Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ P' L4 e4 X1 ~5 C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( i# L3 _& j3 s8 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" X! x3 s" b, {9 ~! \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) n# [4 J) I; C; j0 m" ?$ a1 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 R5 U3 G8 @; u. ~4 }$ X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 G, ]' W9 y, l" x8 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" N! t4 u8 v8 i2 Y' n* `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 n& b/ v! z* E/ R! B* p5 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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' K- N- t7 R' r+ t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>