【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! a0 T/ a, m( k  V; t! \9 q, UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. e! Z6 g: p) i. |5 J0 J) E; Q# _5 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. a# g2 a% Y% D% C: h3 y5 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( _' X# I7 ^" r, o% DYou needn’t fear anything
9 D  v* l& C0 i* w; N/ x& LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 }" P' Q4 }, U, _2 x8 X& J% m4 wEvery other word you utter is love
# |, @6 P7 p& vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 T1 k. ~  y& D3 z; @/ aNothing can compare to my love
1 o7 l! g2 w1 ]/ ^( GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) g4 [5 \4 t1 d9 Q0 r; eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 k% H) ^" r& T, ^) x: \  m9 vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% j5 H# z7 P6 T$ aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& ~. p# h+ X' k3 O! [I regret not dying
$ [2 ~9 k+ B9 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 p0 m! X* E4 H5 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' N+ a8 X( ?( ~6 p# dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ W8 S+ U7 S, |4 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- f& ?' W/ k7 k, z3 F. e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 v, N! ]* t- h3 x7 U: u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 k. m' h3 A0 R% X! c/ S& A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 W' P5 T. G1 o! ?8 U- E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 {; o( a9 b4 J# Y6 t3 z- W! ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* n$ D+ Q) W9 q! i& P/ j8 d2 M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 \5 }$ t2 K$ L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 d7 E% R- ]) @+ t( U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 m8 p8 q2 a$ E' D2 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 h7 x6 N% N0 f! [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# D, K/ R' [5 r* ^1 M- s9 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% k$ t3 z% Q: \8 ^% @" ^( W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' ]5 I3 \- E, l+ r/ S# b' m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& V: n* H( B: n; y  l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 p3 N3 o2 l7 X% A, _' O: P" B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ m. W6 p2 O( Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' U  c" x5 F& g' D7 C* l. c' Z/ X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! X, t6 w( P4 ]$ ~" m* C" L7 U( U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- P2 l/ \  _7 ^  p& u) _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ ?. c6 z* u& ?* S+ M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 X+ n/ W1 N# \- J- [  ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" u# \+ w& K9 v5 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- @7 l8 y1 D. U/ b6 C% X, b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  j' j5 K  }  e* E& p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, b! x# o& {' N4 Q" }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# d6 N, u) |7 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: G& K9 Z2 a7 Z: w; _3 ^8 }& ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- a5 X/ r' `. Z2 T. _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( G) S3 a5 y( U. A! y5 a# u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ u! k  X& U0 i8 c1 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) o" G! L% Y% }" t, j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* @6 h; V7 C( q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ z9 m) l$ d6 t2 @8 Y+ \0 Y* [( k. a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( y/ A# U& T, ?5 D& P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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