【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 O6 }* j" [# p+ D6 h4 m# eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% D3 Z, R. `3 D. ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, Q1 I0 ]  C% S' B$ H5 n% KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 @7 C+ k: E7 Q) bSeeing the sky content with its love
% _% ~4 G* V/ h2 {4 I: TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 I: z! B9 u: J% c) Y# c" i4 fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ ?; f  t' j1 h1 N# Y$ |I love you I love you with all my heart
6 }3 u9 s+ O- M& y  GNothing can compare to my love
2 y$ k3 O/ O9 O  z% n. E) M7 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: t0 K/ d2 B! H/ F. t# [8 h. rI want so much to see inside your heart
# O1 u) q( f6 v2 k/ uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 d3 J! d' y3 ]I’m still filled with fear
& I& p# U+ o& S3 a  i. UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 @9 d9 ^" [3 e' ~  CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' P  P, [+ Z# w6 q# b% W% o9 wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 L" ]9 Z( P* h9 \7 o9 m: V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( V/ a+ V3 v( a! y  D* o+ ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) z% O$ ^  f( N5 z5 F5 E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 ]4 d4 H. P; ~! I$ R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 {; V, F' O- W1 N  N& `' B7 y; t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 G  N' J, p4 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- p8 M1 K0 s& b' [) n( f$ M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  U7 p7 W; Q0 j2 p; @+ O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  Z' \3 n) t% N7 }. [5 b# F$ e& `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ \/ M5 P0 a1 p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( p! G# V! X" L5 G4 C/ T3 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  d4 \) L- f9 P8 M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! u6 f  V! h/ l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% o4 V$ k' Z! y* E8 t' e$ g" ]2 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, T. j) g0 W+ _3 g7 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" Y0 u* O" x1 V8 I2 l' s" C& `9 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ f9 ^1 B1 l# p" J/ E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 [7 K7 U/ O. _$ D1 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& q8 X5 H, O( T4 f( Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 f- [* p7 A) Z9 d. m3 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ z& q1 A( [  W) N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* o6 o% r3 e( s0 y8 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 t" [% t5 l  X2 r5 q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ j, N% i0 C$ v0 ?& e5 y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 [; [5 O$ \# g. Q, A7 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ j- K' o, [& V; o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>