【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: L$ h# A0 w0 f9 t5 n% {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 R# C3 Q8 ~7 Z, |The sky is happy down to its soul
( |/ t: G4 C+ S' TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 H8 b3 d6 g. wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 ~# K3 b. S$ J& ]- eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 u" u$ V$ b- ?$ j; CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( [9 V6 z& u% h% ]( w: K" [" L  HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" L* D9 |( |/ X; k. II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: c; v. l! X0 XI’m still filled with fear
5 D, `2 c6 p2 Y% B6 K; _/ v8 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 N6 J" f, C7 ~I regret not dying
8 \% x& v% r$ ~! s4 _6 S0 o' UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! Q  A1 K* }! K; SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, l1 H9 B* q  m3 h; v4 Y3 j7 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; S' C. q3 _  J! A1 u+ q4 x( O: C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 y7 H6 j  d$ g+ h1 ]! p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 P3 p" Y' N+ W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; `% x3 |8 e% U: T& V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 H/ Z& y5 V0 V  J, F2 c) X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 ~  F7 T3 C2 ~/ L8 o% X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ ^# M! @5 J+ z2 Y3 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; M1 H4 E. ^- {/ f) J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ {  |& Q1 q4 l/ n8 K3 _7 W5 L' Z. A: X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ `: S9 Y8 [. s6 n; Q. T' D" ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( D) S: _" g1 x, Q2 H- R0 D. D" U7 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' d7 @$ r1 ~/ n0 N" r: b( r& N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 z5 P- c% R5 V# y* d6 G$ Z' D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. [' p0 Y0 X) ]# k* J  h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" g( J4 r, _, ], d$ h  B8 x- F1 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; M& ^( A9 W( Z+ O4 N7 r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 U" p0 X7 U3 a! W  I$ B3 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: [6 b" F! S: ~6 r( w  M8 W6 ]$ Y+ b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& J0 F3 b7 g3 B. e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ A5 n  a& ]' x) ?4 k* a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; E! ^  K5 O# n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, f1 S  O' I, b3 [* `2 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  ]9 Z5 W/ E3 M( v6 l' W+ i( T& L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 n$ P' n+ u0 [/ ~3 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' l) d8 m9 h  k& r4 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 M! j+ z2 h1 N; p+ n6 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, b/ V3 W) T/ V' [& Q1 n1 W6 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ h$ r/ ]7 O+ }$ W我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>