【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ c: A" M0 F+ x# OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 w7 q9 b  f9 p1 S. BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& r- B$ L6 m( i6 h  ^# c2 O  J% UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 ~9 R' Q  f" a. L* {* tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 i  O8 h) ?3 q0 L: ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 o9 H2 x$ k0 @+ o3 P% d6 P, ZI want so much to see inside your heart
2 l; m; q+ \2 L- p# nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 i/ e$ y/ \5 {5 ^8 J0 D4 v9 uI’m still filled with fear
/ _! C. O9 b+ j8 U- l7 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ i2 e2 }) L/ G: |I regret not dying
2 b8 H# V0 m6 T4 d. eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ A' m" B5 W* YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% p- O! C/ w6 }1 X1 E! DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; F$ y. n2 k' h& }$ g% O& M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# a2 g) G# r; F/ j1 \3 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; D3 D& t" V3 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ V1 g/ Z* _/ r$ B( G- Z3 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& t! ?+ ?0 [  |8 b# F) n. A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 `+ D3 I+ V. w; y7 }# D& D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ D3 L$ ^+ o& t* U4 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# P& _. D+ J, j* a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 k' _$ z" L& ]% X& E4 w) z* r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 Y% \; L, F8 f1 m8 U<P>你无需担心</P>
8 ?- s$ f3 ?  V4 h- ^' B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 w  V$ N9 X6 W7 A: F" G8 M; g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% S; d' ?$ @% P% y+ b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 M) X( K& l+ U& V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' D8 x  l6 E* d' J1 ~7 d3 l: K, c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! M2 P, U9 C1 H5 ]( K/ f# Z% v: v5 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* G# r& r  K& t3 D& W$ s9 R3 d9 ~+ h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 x* W0 M: p8 e( r7 r8 }9 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. n3 C% A$ i2 N: o  |8 C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ^+ z: Q# ^: S. i( Q# O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" {) o2 K  {1 g. C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ Y' z* e: e: G3 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% K* }0 V: L) L1 w$ ]& s4 F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 i0 D/ q: K$ M$ l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 H6 D* S7 W$ `& ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ |. X% Y4 @8 Y% W5 h. p# D5 e: D, n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  G: `; o  q, K8 k' r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* i% f- r. f2 n0 B+ `6 L0 ?1 ?& v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 F9 }; ~0 j8 [4 f! w& U& P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( V% `& l! Q7 I; F) }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 [9 m6 R/ w$ g/ ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) Y6 {+ U/ t9 g% p5 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 u) w7 I- ^' }. Y  t: b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>