【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 \( ]/ z  Z7 n+ n* UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% L& B! }$ \( l& ?" g6 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: |2 a$ L" @9 u+ lSeeing the sky content with its love
" X/ ^7 z) a! x" y5 ^" N8 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 {6 J5 ~: v" P$ `0 k( [! [5 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ ?. A, ]: K" NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 L. s1 I% ^# N! i" KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 l, W! B! L  D3 SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* k+ h+ ?, Z) m; {" P" VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ P, n- b( _* t& Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( x1 [/ M1 V6 M4 K8 j( @: m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: ^" u* W" j6 D" K, w2 r7 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( n2 b9 O% y+ a5 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. ~+ {  t& \  z6 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% Q3 O' l# v( b! {3 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ R+ p9 j! P& }8 {! O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 K; P1 J5 L  r' {& B4 j' @) t: k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: C( b) z' `& H  R% E3 E$ X" g: E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ p% Z9 I; b" ^5 S& n; u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 `6 h* [; [; w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 Y! z, S& d+ l( M  _& }9 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ C5 O! e$ j+ R: d# \& S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 L! ~8 t4 ]2 z2 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! _0 y! X: L6 x' d5 [# U; U: K  B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( x9 _8 A  Z$ _4 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 R9 @# I4 t2 G1 c. W6 k: \& l. F8 Q; e& @6 O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& h% T6 ~+ T; A- _# e% j* b) {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) D) |/ i" M% b, o- F( |( p. X6 ]8 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& W9 a( `, A6 c' n5 u1 D9 z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* Q  o/ f2 o# t  ]( k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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0 P( z0 v8 K/ o9 G$ h  |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# o$ i$ m2 g1 b& O3 |" z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 I9 o2 o4 o$ E+ j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 b6 e( N( ]- l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! m0 x% O; L. \" c' J3 H4 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; G0 i6 c; s+ _2 a2 T) `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, u, J3 i  s2 P+ [& v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) K! v9 J$ R' E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( s7 Y6 f( @2 @. c4 b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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3 k3 g* _, D+ q0 ~9 j+ [  y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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