【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 r- `: p- ]" \* o- [& X0 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& y/ ]! N! @1 X* @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, Y1 h8 u: }1 \& o/ v$ y# c( yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" b1 S1 M% v8 p  F2 pSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* V* M) P2 h% uYou needn’t fear anything
2 j  {9 a' I7 h5 }5 y8 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! L1 O4 a) ^, k' P. {# b+ z$ I& ZI love you I love you with all my heart
$ t. F+ G9 q/ y" l$ WNothing can compare to my love
+ k3 u/ s% ?! m) T5 U; jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 G  A0 j. F; ^  J- zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' i. L4 G+ P$ w7 x- dI’m still filled with fear
' ~% Z1 A: U! RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ~) h7 e9 {. h: b9 G, S, ?/ \# FI regret not dying
# b% @8 |1 d, I$ {. r9 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 g# k- X. q2 R( ~3 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 b2 V1 M+ A* @0 }7 c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 q; C) X2 a. Q% L9 M( F) R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 s& ]1 B5 z8 M6 `7 `  R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: u1 Z. a$ i1 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, ~, G4 D3 [% R/ @5 l1 j0 B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 Y" b" L# r% D5 ]8 y. i- r<P>你无需担心</P>
9 R/ ]4 v- y7 v! z" [, f' \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ R$ E: U! Q! S5 m4 Z7 H5 Q* M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 q- G* T( C; g! p3 Z2 r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* p& b) l5 `# Z( F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- m# g: K/ z' M. ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ K% h% G1 ^1 p- y6 S9 e+ W9 g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) I7 c, f0 @4 i. }- b; @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. R2 J; e% M7 w/ u3 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 C) J/ {1 ]0 N8 y3 D% k<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 w' y, Z3 g+ S$ e) M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 m1 z$ Q% v8 I7 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 B% i5 F  \+ A/ I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 ~# U* D) p& ~3 l9 E# \7 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) U$ ]0 O) x: U* [+ c/ Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 s) m. B) ^2 q7 s( \- e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 b4 A6 l# q  d9 {- M' U! t( \) Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) z1 K/ q) Y' I4 G1 K我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 A- y: {- {+ o$ _7 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>