【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 x6 _! z2 r" W- T2 s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ O2 N. C# r, N" tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 m. I" C7 Q( R) \* FSeeing the sky content with its love
% W: D5 @" w  k& o7 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 {! U% k; h, `5 c7 ?; L( CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! p2 \; K; w7 K: t& }9 e/ k0 CI love you I love you with all my heart
% T! ~( m9 T, q* W7 M2 lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% e" ~9 W% T2 R2 o2 UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) [/ v% r4 b7 m+ N" mI want so much to see inside your heart
" I5 i3 j! N5 I1 m/ u/ e# f6 EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! C' o3 m" \$ z# _; zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) n# S% Q3 }; J; v! w: H& AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ z1 Y9 M# q& {' DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 e0 T8 t4 Y: K( e4 y2 ?+ l2 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' ?% z, F6 p  P8 r" U- B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ _; `" a! S, y" G: r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  x. z8 N2 f1 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 t2 G+ Q+ L7 `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; z2 s5 m- ^7 [* {$ w/ K7 _  E7 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. f+ [5 p  s% ~0 A# j# A# i, D* X1 o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% O* o& K! H) B0 K" v" [, _. S% h- n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" W/ {6 z* z) a* q3 C+ b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, b% \( R: |  y5 M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; j+ M: i- I; a" H6 d4 L. x' H! s, t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: k/ ^& x7 e; B$ i; O; F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 i7 k; _3 G5 N; h/ I3 A# g& r4 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' ]7 ~  j2 e# m5 n9 v- o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# @/ D4 P9 s! G- S8 ~, X1 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 d/ U6 Q; a* `6 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. m; g! n( N* d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) m& K' i8 q2 J. N$ g: a1 l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 F$ q4 ]) w# [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ h. J. e- ~! i5 y: F) A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( F! M" N- e+ R7 b# E/ F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ ^# d! e/ m+ N; H& j" i+ Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 Q9 G$ r6 k9 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 H+ d: _4 C3 q, Q8 P我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* D' v8 }& X8 @/ _7 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>