【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
, [- z- c6 @9 N; V* qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 L- T/ X% j+ l/ `" d- {/ iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, q5 s7 Z# k) N1 O2 GYou needn’t fear anything
  B0 E6 \$ I) u+ [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 O# J+ D$ h  f7 c/ n5 Z8 E9 jNothing can compare to my love
; h! z1 u" f$ U" d& SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# E& V  H& x* |7 Y0 [6 AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, q" U2 w7 v1 }8 x2 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 \& Y: f5 a* ^3 \- ^  K. |2 R6 pWith such a tongue as yours,
+ o- W8 ?5 X+ G7 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  d  ^1 d# W  R3 i5 c# Y( TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: K7 i. x% j( k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ E/ w0 a# i: ]3 q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* R6 t' {9 v, ?8 @( a5 \* x& a6 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 V+ F5 a' ?' L/ V' X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" S, O8 q3 Q& E4 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ L, J% V* G- N# M- d% A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 Y, \4 v- G' j4 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: F8 l" K, J( c  ?2 o$ i5 b9 e2 ^. {: H<P>你无需担心</P>
* [4 c) K2 h- i/ K9 A' @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' t$ a  R( `/ i! h3 A( }, X2 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 S( J* M; f3 z3 _& E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 a& s( Q3 H! V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" C. O; c# p% o5 l9 o6 R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ i+ L% o* v" e) j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( k% ~7 U: o' p  f+ b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) m6 e1 v* X6 q6 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" C) k: d0 k" R. U; v7 Y' y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" J/ X; `+ D9 Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" \" y6 K$ d* `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! |  v8 i- e! O- q+ d  g' A; o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 Z* U: k% i" ~) u/ S, w' G3 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; e. g6 i6 U3 w7 Q3 ]: N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* f% F, p! h! E: U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 k; F0 O/ E' G7 p% d; ~2 L3 ~+ w2 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" z  ~) l# e7 Z& C3 n& t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 b3 N. j6 r6 D0 l% z9 g- d! e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 L; c- R) f5 P$ N! t  \- L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& s: j1 h) T4 ^3 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" w# N! ~/ B& E, ?  b2 s* J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 f6 d* ^. g, H8 X, s: \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) l; q; m" U9 `7 \0 W$ C3 ~( Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& I1 Y: w) e) E我请你剖开它

; L/ T6 o5 v" Y: w/ B8 y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 K7 j) L; Z( y6 J# ^. d3 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>