【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 M3 C3 X( s+ c; j+ g* }歌词我附在后面。
( V9 p. P& _, }. `. E' LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 ]1 U9 Z/ P( |  n# w7 Z2 K4 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, M6 F/ ~6 M4 J' S8 X! R% i" b$ i  BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 a& m; }6 v5 v3 o. o, |9 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 n5 ^1 o2 u# H5 FWith the moon kissing it every night
( c4 H6 N: Y+ E3 t% s, |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ }$ P* h  ]( @! f- D. n" C  mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ Y1 w5 B. d, _8 V) |; t4 R* DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ H2 C: V. M  S" yNothing can compare to my love
- L* ?2 h/ I* z  }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 @+ q! W+ z" U+ u, V7 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 }" `6 v# |) {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) h+ _+ l, T4 _I’m still filled with fear
. D; Z) X, E- K. s6 i$ \0 PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 p3 b; G) s7 k9 P4 r0 |% cWith such a tongue as yours,
. E" ?/ a3 E. {; W+ p' D$ l9 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ R( s! u$ x6 _6 z8 p* _. xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 |, U5 U! C5 v0 j* |. L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. X+ q+ c' A  f) v& }$ C, C" e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 E( y4 M( u8 e. A& V. j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* R/ g4 b; ^& t, q: ?6 Z: M# i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; w) ?6 Z/ I# D9 ]% h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# L$ b6 L- h+ y$ k/ Z- u  L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 W8 N) G5 P+ B9 K9 l4 ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 F3 e+ \9 ~  M9 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" v- a) B! M1 v* p1 `; s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) x/ j$ @. h- L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 e( u: g) M5 a& M; |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  t- x- k# \" J! O8 X+ O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: @( r  ]% m2 |" w# D0 s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  A0 D5 y* |. {! @/ r( ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& \* t( d1 P4 v! L9 u7 ^1 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% e7 y2 s8 k! `; k, f) a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; f# e: ^* c$ v/ ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 I4 u1 z0 t/ m4 ]4 m! x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' _9 K4 i4 D, t" f: n: }* O/ O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; @- b  _" L; s8 @$ H9 g* u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* ^  w  z! y0 m% N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; {0 d% d& k9 W$ k. v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) W* d* |0 z1 G/ O" j; M' h( e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ @+ L8 S4 u7 J: D2 N# B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 m6 a8 ]" A/ m) b+ F* f我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>