【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

% s$ f6 S# k2 M6 d5 s<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


  e/ R9 S  V. U. o' a0 D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, M9 Y) G& \# m3 u: _, z0 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 L: _; `: u2 S$ r% j1 ^3 ~1 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 x- R2 _0 U: V6 H9 l  `. ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# E) ]8 G5 F( U% z: qYou needn’t fear anything
. ^+ ~- C$ m# F& P/ m- z4 o/ U) `! ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, x) n2 k( @0 q+ d& \) fI love you I love you with all my heart
* ]+ L  Z% A8 }, M7 m& `* tNothing can compare to my love
; y  F& s8 r& [" Z) zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" }! D; s4 ?! E4 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' W* d9 S3 c( Y" ]2 FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 E- O9 V6 J- ^& [# ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; q8 u8 K( Q" X8 NWith such a tongue as yours,
% G) o3 x) X- @$ R6 KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ d3 }" z8 T9 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% R3 p; L& ]( e: R. ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( E8 x4 e! Q6 _! W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ Z1 R- b8 H0 p5 e+ B! M0 y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 p7 X( g% Z' ]$ R4 I- e3 @/ ]4 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ A) Q( {9 L9 @3 O. D4 ~9 _: t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 z' f. o) d1 A  I/ ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. ^8 f9 u" O$ m: f. i9 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 V, Q; X5 i4 }- I* |4 w: D6 d# b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 X0 {6 X- a/ E. \' E1 D4 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) B/ E2 u$ r5 r9 y. X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; j1 G: Y; [! X2 K* U' a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 c1 w% l% d" ?/ `- O% n& V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ u% {8 D7 n# i5 M3 b- h! R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 X( _$ Z: P1 w" E5 E! U8 @0 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 C( E$ c0 v$ V& E- l: J/ O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 w  ^* A/ H7 h% l. L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 s" {0 n9 W5 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& ~! ^  h$ p4 F2 M- M( D; ~: J" n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 A: O; r3 A) ^; i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  M3 r8 ]) Z) P* R( u1 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: f. ?& K7 r* ]7 ~( v! C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: |; i7 ]3 T& o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# J: Q& F9 N8 b0 C8 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' I6 ?' _4 N& n& m  B; m7 s, C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ }; y* c: p9 j* N* D4 h4 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 N+ R$ ?  F2 [2 h$ D9 L  e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  R# q' F( y5 w: j* q5 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 h5 [1 }: V; L  A, [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; |: v2 A1 `  |/ m1 E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( W6 V$ E( n1 k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% T* P7 f8 [$ K% r* f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
* m1 O" T& k1 h3 v3 Y' X
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
# y6 O+ a3 f0 Z- |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>