【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 ?* T, g2 ^2 h) v5 W! W歌词我附在后面。
$ A( L; r$ K- W5 l- kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# m# ]" Q0 E+ r. a& N( T0 b1 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* d' K4 S7 D( a( r+ E) `7 S: @' dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ }. @% D7 l) ^" r, h- E* lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 i8 w% m6 t4 \! OI want so much to see inside your heart
( z6 a' ^+ y$ `3 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 Y* D6 s1 O9 F/ s, Z* L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 l- \5 Z" B1 s4 M) ^) ^, H! ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  E9 g& V* T! R! w3 c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- d5 q# Q3 ^$ L3 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 e* w4 _# Z6 N& M: m' X, ?$ B5 n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 |- b7 O( C( s: K1 ~7 V/ Q) X  s/ \' g' J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 C! O2 z# R! J% Z3 c# S/ ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# }2 a4 G- j% R9 T( H1 C$ x, e$ u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; X; Z) G6 m; E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- Z- @5 o% m# A5 ^# n+ C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 I# X, M+ r4 O6 F' W9 X4 L" j' A$ Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! _0 X5 f8 E7 Y4 \. i. I  ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- W  e: {& ?2 t# e- ?5 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( E% E! a: d  q; J0 ^+ k: p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 n& K7 Z) w- T: w+ N4 _2 r( u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ R& Y# B1 u& U8 ?1 i7 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& K' }& f* ^! ~' A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: ~0 J. m. q; C3 a8 d, S; i8 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ y/ F4 F3 C& K3 @2 e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& A3 z- j- X: U6 Y8 O" u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ D8 @5 |1 ?& J5 T+ A# H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 [- L* X. {# ]+ `7 v/ ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: \# A- P7 n" ]1 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 m& T0 `2 G/ p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 }9 s5 E; L2 r; z$ r) g, ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- T$ N. E9 q7 V: e/ a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& l8 G5 n; G6 ?! l) P+ O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  ~4 L( A, _- h& l8 r8 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 M" x2 q1 G6 _4 Y' Z: Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- R0 g' }2 l4 l  ]3 _8 m  l$ m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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( N7 p. b- b/ c* S& R: _2 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>