【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 D8 b1 t& d2 q9 r  m& T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 ?6 p/ @# q% q3 ^( s; X, MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 C3 A% t) [* G$ M- DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 H( x  H, ^# N( a, S  [5 k/ K& FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ P% _( d' n* }! }Seeing the sky content with its love
5 s) q8 r( i; EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ D2 C) `( r/ B. B: m$ B" y3 rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% `* q5 S$ @) L7 d7 e& i8 yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 j0 R+ h% M0 B' k5 Q6 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  A: u7 w. _& @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. K" k2 ]+ x* L( FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; Y" Y; e1 Z6 g# u: PI’m still filled with fear
+ R6 C$ W. f% d0 |% pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( E. f" O" U) \+ K0 mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( `; r( c0 M  CWith such a tongue as yours,
: ]  d( e! Z2 B& f# x8 WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" W) V3 ~" u% T& c' t2 j& f# ?* G% I! rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 [- J0 W  W( X, M9 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 r9 ~8 }5 Y& B, S& i% \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( H6 i) H" w. [& [- m4 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! h6 X3 H  q4 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; |* g- T. Y; j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 O5 b# ?( L* z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 X- K! s6 U3 H/ Q- j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) i2 s  e& z; a, M) c. s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  K! E" G0 ]( h; n% L( o0 J3 e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 d) }  B1 {' Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 g1 e( Q' P4 ^3 h' o) G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* E8 w; a9 ?1 l. q1 ^# N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% q0 q; z$ f6 M" L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* Q- R0 W5 G# ^1 }% B3 T) S/ ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 ^8 i1 U& d$ M6 a6 S! X# j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& z" g7 u) G! f. ]( t, B9 F4 y; ^+ b2 n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' j$ q) C7 W0 P6 |6 Y; M5 Q% }0 `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( i8 U2 [# T6 p8 d% x) x6 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! ^) j) Y" I3 f! @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 T  k! e8 D0 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! Y6 ?2 s$ G5 Y/ o- ~6 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( g9 o9 D; m& T" Y4 m* J, q+ J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 D# ~4 y  b' G+ _" K& Q4 @* f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 t* o3 {, N  x7 R7 Z/ e" ~# p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 ]" f, {3 s. C3 E" T. d  E5 S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

0 y) v6 M" d3 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. Y/ L) b2 ^3 `% G8 n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>