【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. m0 ^& X- Q+ `* @# r$ |The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 X* l9 S+ C4 W  ~/ b7 [% K2 Y  b0 CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) x3 u& i1 R  Z: i+ s; H+ zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ N/ ]% |& D# Z1 @% v# y5 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 m" ^$ V4 Z3 k; ?/ L7 w2 N" w( TWith the moon kissing it every night
3 B2 s% J% R0 d: P, q& D$ YSeeing the sky content with its love
0 q. q* K3 I" h) Z* n5 K; fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 F7 b4 V! A7 P! [4 k0 l6 ^2 i9 SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. m/ z3 r7 w9 Q, k! N9 aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: D8 H+ p7 Y8 G- B3 ^" i  m" X* MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 O( }$ Z& t! X% `" yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; D  D, Q+ Q- k! u  N* {$ BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, L0 _* p2 R7 M! @6 U' WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# b& {+ x7 c7 T- i% C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 U3 G9 d9 s% ~8 k. U" q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" n/ q6 ?9 _9 i, }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) m# {$ i5 m0 Z. n0 ^2 R. i9 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! e* G) F! i* n) y4 F& W+ l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 w( s6 r0 V& u' O. ^$ ?7 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ Z3 U" k3 R3 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, ^; `9 P0 Z/ {* n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 G+ r& L7 ^* J8 ~; M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) ]. L. W2 A- L  o; j3 u2 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* l( L, @5 W/ |; }$ j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- o1 r' }; Q3 ?1 s3 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, i4 F+ ~0 Z+ ?& g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  c+ g2 L% b  u( Z7 Q! H, ?2 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" A6 i5 ]1 o, x' i! m5 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. L: H+ V, m8 m; r: M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; N# }" z' d0 U# b$ \6 N  r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 }0 I) a# f# k# p) N: u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 S, W6 y1 \' u3 b0 X5 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. s8 g1 o1 K0 {2 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* d, a$ h+ A! F6 J  g% G6 f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 j. ]: [7 X! J6 w8 Q$ A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ V1 `6 {6 j0 n+ b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. i1 _; Z7 k2 W0 z  f& v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: f# g: a* c- c( n$ Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 h4 s' `$ k) n  a* }) U; V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, l1 b0 U+ h. s% G+ Z4 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ a' U0 V, e: {% X6 S0 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 p( y) m+ U3 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 x6 I2 l$ f( E: i( @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& X7 b, K0 K- k* {" X, @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- u9 ]! q- g& c& w2 [; m/ q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; {8 i/ ?( m/ j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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: `! F; f1 T. Q: l( x7 u/ J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( W! ?1 W! W$ C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>