【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, h- _, a/ M4 `, d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 x' F7 @8 i9 Q8 C- n3 r/ MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. ?# l# E4 l: m5 w" mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 \, K; M  N1 ~3 pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' k. F, P, T; L0 A/ ~  `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* `, T0 V: `$ N5 w" A1 kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 w4 U& y7 S( ?: _+ C2 OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% h6 U8 h' E9 y3 m3 _- ?+ wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: ~/ C7 V. M9 W" p; q  S6 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 `( r& c, F3 U: X& E. t+ H7 lI want so much to see inside your heart
2 I% c, g- f7 ]- U, eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ l0 ^7 ]' f3 S( C# A7 uI’m still filled with fear
+ b: Y! _% t( z( q; a4 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% U4 F; {" r) b! ]5 o) G+ R+ uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 r+ q+ \) T" c- sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ o" C7 X7 }7 T6 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 ]& P  o3 i1 ]) f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ t6 b' g* u6 ]. `# |  U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ h% f6 m: W0 G- x1 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ ?1 |# b$ Y2 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; v# U: n9 V" x' J) n# i8 l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- F9 [3 S( z( R8 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& f, ^7 Q* o3 \5 F. m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 s% h9 ?) N0 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  P! j3 }9 H4 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  n0 K" S. `" \$ k9 E* p* `  N5 \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# l5 V4 ^; ^3 G! i5 S: X9 o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, x) Z! b& [3 }: x7 C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! ?* T  ?5 ~6 b: R. _1 Z" C/ y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 K* ?) h+ @0 b8 [" \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& j  C* t6 B  |0 A, r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 B6 n/ }% P! d+ }  B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 |! j7 e/ C" K6 {4 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 P! M' f: H- b6 X7 T) X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 Q9 F* j" C9 a2 l4 @  g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 g$ h- `+ Q( d# G7 r5 a, ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* T* I& F" O7 |, V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. ~( c3 p9 j1 N1 f( b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 a& x0 f* z- `$ a, W2 O1 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# B) z: ~+ h& s' B, w5 ?, @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 `5 }2 {5 ?9 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 p6 C0 c, p( z7 ]: A) R/ w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% `/ y7 E; a3 G  U+ l( s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 n/ b; u+ t! }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>