【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 A* h1 I5 R. p+ R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 k* i0 L( @' O0 oWith the moon kissing it every night
2 k% }& Y5 J8 f2 ?Seeing the sky content with its love
5 U) d; [6 v- D* |! A' z: nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! A( L4 g1 P1 j! k8 GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, X' T7 o5 `( u8 T% L, T5 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( [+ ~. N# `- t8 e; m; oI love you I love you with all my heart
0 {2 p# }- v) y8 F' [0 @. P+ {. zNothing can compare to my love
% y3 x* X5 X1 _0 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ x! }4 ~, y, a5 _0 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 s! ^* T  n  A4 b4 o# x# HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, y3 D& f9 u6 y  E$ N) aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* c$ j) W3 [  KWith such a tongue as yours,
, V2 s& l9 E% ?5 L* p3 x0 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 l+ B+ L+ z. O( L9 n& m: T' _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ e8 D, U7 ]  y. L' y; n2 e$ u; {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 }# g4 |5 a) C% F5 I+ e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 c+ {; n. C2 d7 l$ g0 o+ P& w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% j; p( q9 n3 y* ]5 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. P0 R4 r$ ?9 T; P: X8 L' F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 q$ G2 i# T2 b- Z  T2 `7 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 u: D8 n! q. {/ l( x1 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 S# P. W: ^' @! ~. ~2 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 M$ [  `) V$ v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% B! Q4 V+ l& A% r7 ^7 P: ?, \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. G, l* S$ r$ |6 }! k  J- f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# ?7 b) O3 `2 d. k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 ^' @6 p3 e7 `' u9 `" e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 H' n" l3 R# O2 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' z1 e0 ]$ e5 C: i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 \* {. S& o9 i6 X- S/ U% ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) h) ]8 F6 a  |* K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! H$ y- @* D! c% t, i9 T- G0 H# _& m" i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ ?. ?! }. o$ ?( S; `" t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  ~4 ~) _$ L; `0 j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ K. j) C2 Z6 e3 A) V: `$ k+ p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 Q* ?1 }8 S' C7 D2 C( \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 S2 a; e- B& \# d4 F4 I* j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# l$ q. @' w! b. `- n8 Z+ r2 e5 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. L( X" ~+ p, M) a' M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 M, K" Y" {0 }( U2 P( T, [% ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. b$ |! ]  N& ]$ R$ r# Q1 i3 v- P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 Q6 ?- A/ F$ g7 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 D4 q3 T# X" \1 [; M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 R' A) F9 b* @" N" \8 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* c0 z4 f% F4 `( d/ e- R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' M* o: l9 [' l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 N1 \; c2 k# o- K; u. M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 ?4 }2 l# o8 M$ K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 G& I: u6 L7 Z) p6 z8 K+ v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>