【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! d; w' _" P3 o* A, _* vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; E1 l* k6 X% |7 S6 O% sWith the moon kissing it every night
; T4 H) M; ~3 O, l" Y0 aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 K* s) D/ q$ L  b2 w( m- OYou needn’t fear anything
0 x# c2 t9 p& Y+ F1 W$ h6 @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 M* V  K" }, P+ R2 k% c( eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" W" A! B$ j6 ^. b7 N% ]* q; nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 X& _* k3 I' @( l( I1 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 i* D3 e3 d9 c0 m, qWith such a tongue as yours,
' B& G0 E8 {3 \2 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 q/ L$ R; i/ j& u/ T3 M; B+ C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" N3 C. m" S( U/ e% `6 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& i8 R2 g" Z7 e% b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 N5 j$ ~9 f5 U. ^) P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 |  g  ?  I$ |! V2 y% l6 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& p# f& {( z) h' U0 k3 K. ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 `* ~6 {; H8 r2 s% e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 [1 s9 b  I3 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 N8 _  \) b. S( N" f) f! {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ t+ L+ H! ]3 o2 h. H; E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" [- u( i' c7 F8 _' s0 G! T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* ]2 J5 r: l: T! }/ n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) k2 G; z) Z1 P- u$ Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ [7 T; z1 E! h6 y- Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 R8 x: J6 F8 M# A% V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 v# o" K8 b8 u- v* x' O) ~- h$ X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 X0 z6 H' k8 r8 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  S& J* M* t7 w5 j( K; O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* n% {2 q& g2 `9 ~% z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 s. x2 H4 k5 B& W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" q. D3 U  \: s1 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 T( q! r8 v5 _. K- p* A- Y6 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 e. `# W% i; u7 m; r" Q4 e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>