【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ l/ u% k5 D+ MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" C- Y2 x2 x( a, C7 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 Q3 r0 M! _: ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 @' G1 I5 `& i, `1 K# BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& `- o# l3 ?% K& f5 N& OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- e2 q* i' w5 E1 {: s, fEvery other word you utter is love
5 K  P3 p8 l4 }" Z1 [! AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* c4 z& }/ Q3 A6 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* f" w) N6 N6 r2 h5 v1 L" nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& q0 ~8 m7 `7 G7 N8 h# ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ N' k: D5 G& c6 IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ }/ F+ e4 G1 H0 r$ O( SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 _' v3 E: D9 L: D' [2 d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 z' U8 `3 z" t- P$ ]& e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, u. a2 ~! _- b" O6 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 ^: j0 f0 `; j$ R6 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- h' b, a5 u& A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 K9 d, }& N9 Z! a" k. ]" a- Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ _, i. i1 f: u5 R% I* j3 a8 h7 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) n1 {9 K$ U( e% t3 T) e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 C- ?  s" b* F$ x, \' ~9 Z( D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ g1 ^5 f+ k# p5 I$ y# {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 D# {( ?1 `' K3 y8 {& j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 O& w$ h! m$ V# [0 B, D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 @0 C0 H1 E6 ^4 m4 Z/ \# \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: q; T. }+ @. Z2 Y( c6 u3 M  n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% ]2 a& L, l) Z9 A* g: L4 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 Q9 b- J0 c5 N/ @& p% }0 C, d& j# S& ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 c/ ?) S. }# G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# ~7 d0 ?, r+ l6 G- l) @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 |6 x4 [8 `! ]. `4 d" C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. z# X3 Q" X! L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- B& N5 d$ g- m" p3 n. N% y" s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' O& o" n, v$ d2 e/ |4 ]* l" d. B- A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 s) Z* f. j) k7 E* u* i$ c! f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ E, k1 ?7 [' Q5 w- O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' {+ R: |8 i0 V0 S7 a: G! P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. q7 x2 y9 P" K3 L, g1 D! q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ H1 r( ^% l4 l5 {& q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ D' o: [# u  }- h$ h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; G- {& F; M  e我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* d7 g; O% \3 ~0 {; }/ Z# k7 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>