【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) r/ s" {9 z/ H) A0 Y( Q# ^The sky is happy down to its soul
# h3 o2 Q; R8 }  Y6 i( {  M! k/ T3 ^, eWith the moon kissing it every night
- d" w3 q. D7 ^% B' I# c6 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 q  P+ m9 S- N$ A8 N; Z8 hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ p. d6 `6 h6 S# w( y( d- G0 rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! H" D3 F, A' _' K0 }& a$ MNothing can compare to my love
6 P. S6 r1 `6 f! _! WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' k4 y5 b! a6 l0 l2 P* J$ i8 [9 EI want so much to see inside your heart
- i7 c/ V/ j! ?5 V! v6 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& b1 A$ h" b* k, g- H! qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& N* ]. T/ [9 y% jI regret not dying
2 M( f# w% B% \% p8 A7 |( T, `4 c2 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) C/ }3 m, r9 h$ M, u/ y0 TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 v! }+ N, O' s- u# s. m( m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- v& ^+ {: O+ r+ T8 l$ f& `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& S9 U6 J7 P1 j- P+ k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* T5 Q. E; B# @$ m) Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 S: F6 [+ s- _' ~1 A0 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 B3 W# S& H2 L: z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" ]+ D; U. n2 M! q" t& o/ Q0 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 d( }9 o; T0 j, a. ~5 g0 u* y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; }+ w7 X( M" ?, k* e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* k( ^4 e& v( T4 @- o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 x" q4 v: {9 J+ A" T0 P1 b9 O) d1 w1 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* B, @2 Q  I) y5 S7 g  w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. p- ^  _- |  L9 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; X! N: R  C7 p$ u% V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 G7 ^! Z' k+ `$ d1 k0 K3 a- D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( o4 G7 C- c  j/ Q6 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- X8 A2 v& f. |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 _( r5 L5 y. m! y0 w4 C' ]7 u+ k5 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& N' p7 C- _! k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  @6 s8 e4 J+ u% o5 s6 o3 ^+ @! M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% k! v" b; {! @7 j& l: |7 u) k$ m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 n7 X3 f! Z  E" b: V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# `7 g6 p5 m5 r# {( u9 R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( n! L+ `* j6 B  a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 R% j3 j; N9 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, Y9 G+ J, z& O* i2 X: l7 N3 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 B4 {# H% J. c3 ]( M. Y! |. M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ y+ h! T4 S9 x2 q1 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: M6 P" b  s' \3 B- }. z$ Z我请你剖开它

: n0 k! K& \3 ?8 G9 m' q$ I+ x: S+ a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>