【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- H  Z* Y* v- J歌词我附在后面。
' C2 Q3 p8 @+ K( f# I% i5 XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 c/ C# L- M2 I$ ~' c& B* k5 S# g6 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 w  r. o+ g1 d) lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ P/ z( q9 W" }- WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 w7 `& F  b3 NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 ]* {3 d, p8 o% e+ ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% @/ j+ ]* M( L8 gI love you I love you with all my heart
, K" `7 t1 B+ KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& U# J: V4 f( s/ JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! I( S* W2 E) X. h" x) TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 B& _3 C& G( w* J5 t6 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 v; K5 d  _1 z5 _# r2 R/ H# P# OI regret not dying
3 s% k6 [' |! M: X" G4 q/ ]( _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' I7 N. o, K( K; N! ]/ b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) L( R6 m6 Y% N( S- g3 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* D  g6 P8 @. x3 Z- E0 k+ k2 e# Y9 O' w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 \9 E/ h- @* x7 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 z: }- E* w. E. q* }  _- y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 ?& ?( I0 Y2 b9 O0 ?6 ~. K5 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) t3 }* [5 j9 Z2 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 n/ t" B6 d3 }0 X9 W- n% e- c9 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' j6 N4 o) f  ]' w4 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' i/ a, X6 c/ y5 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* `. J- u4 r5 A9 t  T3 j4 S/ n8 s/ F3 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 Z$ U! N& O* |  L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# d$ N7 o$ a! C- l6 d+ t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' K2 c! r' M" p0 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# y3 [5 D9 S! A7 W! \& u3 o/ j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 W; @, r% g& I& W1 b' I3 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, L  e6 j1 g2 N+ @# f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( g$ J0 R# \- d& u! ^3 W, D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ ~6 [  U# A& T" f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: a0 [; q8 B5 i, Z3 l3 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) a- D1 X! y2 O, [9 O. {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 Q2 N8 l! ^0 f  f7 R4 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# Z% r7 W) W* q6 J- e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 B; ~' s1 W3 E0 l& F$ b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# o, {- W& l6 \5 G2 l& b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 O( @3 v) M+ x* g/ o; j; H# v1 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. c/ i8 m1 t/ {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, F2 J+ ~  I9 A- k) [$ N0 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" A# [0 \3 s& W# ^5 Y* F+ m& E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; X# @; ?7 F2 k  s$ S9 |& Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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: {! c( t/ d$ p3 n3 |: X5 I& i1 j  ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 T- k( |1 _; Z, G+ [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>