【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: k8 V  ?: D  r4 r# t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) j' \: I8 K4 ~7 _; b& ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 p/ h* \0 Q% Q$ \0 p, BThe sky is happy down to its soul
) D$ N0 A5 \# c6 O4 C2 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) V+ @# q( O( F; y  D8 {2 ?8 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" b" |. b7 ^1 Y0 X6 m% I2 L( F# BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 q" _/ }% P% f& M/ z' [/ F' {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ z) I7 e% @8 @5 }! R$ _) VNothing can compare to my love
$ L, c) z) k2 l1 _$ e* r' M& ?: g: F- MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 v& A- _* q& f5 `5 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, c+ Q5 ]# \, ~* e! O. MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 }7 e, W. r! h& n, j) \! K' AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; H% p, }- H; P2 d9 P7 P# VI regret not dying
: E4 x( A* g% h' f0 \+ I' e: @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ Z8 `- x. y" e  D7 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 ^9 }1 d5 o, @" {% @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 M6 B+ j5 h% _$ G9 k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* d1 R! M; g7 P. l! B8 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' W: `  ?8 u7 E8 e* S* b) S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, B& o  z2 Q. F+ i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ Y* p$ q8 s; Y: N8 n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% q# m; n" o" T0 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; b  x/ ~* q5 r) ~% P* y9 k( _2 @0 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( g7 m8 k. h9 l9 S  Q<P>你无需担心</P>
( b8 @+ C: V$ w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: F5 I$ b$ j2 A& X) o/ D2 i1 N, U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: h1 I4 n& H1 X5 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! {! z  _; T" U' e1 p1 n, V9 T5 c  g! L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: A  ~2 [9 x6 m& d( `% _/ f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' H7 ~6 b6 n: }5 H1 b* P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  s1 Q: K7 g$ P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 d# G/ i" p9 n( u7 P. _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 H( t+ n+ Y9 Z. y% M3 D  `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 c) i* W3 ~: ]+ L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ Q8 b6 [% y4 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 H' g: `6 X9 M) \9 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! E" ?. E  O9 v4 l# ^* n$ P' {& q1 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) ~9 g/ q! Y* W0 _! a# F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 m% p( N1 H& N5 O+ N- Z5 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 o5 T+ Y; ?" Y' N9 r: }7 k- C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

; S4 s( ]/ W& \1 R, B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>