【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 H4 P: Q0 n- O6 VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 }3 p; {, D) ~" @+ D, g8 U: p' aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 [3 U8 o$ H' @3 KYou needn’t fear anything
5 E, W  ?1 o, a1 T8 Q% a, zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# A& h. e/ l' \: N  mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- l1 R9 w) ~' p/ S2 ?  pNothing can compare to my love
6 D/ M7 V$ g+ Y( k8 L# `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 k7 z( g. r6 j9 V  A# |% v" Q$ Z+ zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 g) t6 x$ c, Q0 FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. X. }) G* E# A. f& ]I’m still filled with fear
. l3 M9 A1 j/ H$ j' l7 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 ~$ o" c% {8 _( PI regret not dying
* ]) U. h! {# T# t* CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 P! V0 e- a6 A# Q4 g7 SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" \4 i2 k& t5 Z- T& t5 [. g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. }% a3 V5 v! n& q6 p, Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 p/ j: d  @. n7 C/ A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 x, y" A9 K* N9 ?; M$ |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; j6 P) @& A" P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 t, `! N& |$ y9 _: y( l) B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( p3 D* A) ]8 c9 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 A+ u& p6 d) e( s7 [. Y: s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* x$ i! T& |1 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, V$ S* M9 B$ T2 n+ E4 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 Z1 e( O9 C. L6 v( j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 ?# e. ]! f$ z% H+ z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* \& a. C  z  x0 V8 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 y& g- U" G0 Y+ r5 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 F! V9 p0 O5 q& T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ B9 _) S- w% J8 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 C1 \- ?8 x0 k9 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' G* {+ f" E: j3 b! e1 j. p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- K% S3 h4 n: K* Z& W$ n# ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ L1 s0 O6 v- J- j( l' x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* Y* N& k+ M: v4 J" r- }! j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& B/ e% _* q* C/ n5 L6 {, n+ r( m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 c/ \, Z3 Y0 h- Q# A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 c7 z$ B6 J  w7 d$ W% [6 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 b5 [' B$ }6 A+ J  ]+ M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ b& m( y2 Q( t7 @  d; u) z) c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( Z7 z9 v( W( G6 f6 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 s" Y, c7 q+ a* J* \5 x' W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 M, t- K; E4 k; M9 h9 ]& H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, T' W. j& P# ?* A" g% X' G% I! q; s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 f2 ^, R. w: O- Q8 J. y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. b5 c  d2 B* x( n4 U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, Q% h# B1 k8 ^# M) G我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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