【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! D; [6 v) R' B4 v2 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 Y( ]% @' l; I# A$ F6 b# LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ s  i4 S: X, i& x; V# T- M( jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 {5 ~4 c% H$ P8 m8 H' cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 |, c$ o: w; G7 x9 qYou needn’t fear anything
$ d) Z" L& V, V+ _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 a: q, l( D% P7 o) MEvery other word you utter is love
; a- [- Z* i& tI really want to know just how much you love me
7 l: Q+ u: R0 e" BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( I3 Z5 t/ [2 B% }  ]2 `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, P# i( o) \" r- n2 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# H% T9 f0 x; q8 z! @3 lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ G  m# K. }7 Q; o3 L8 X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* F$ i1 `" `: ^4 k6 @* ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 o" ]4 t2 r7 C, K, E" L* X3 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 R& x$ ^6 e- }2 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. w: n. P) b9 F2 b' i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 W2 n" J  R/ a0 Q1 Z. r# M+ z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- V" m7 ~) u+ s) g) u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 U8 ~/ V. Q; Q9 B; X+ F  v+ g  s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# k' L4 F' D$ U3 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" M" F6 Q8 K0 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, b$ X0 _7 K- n: I/ F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 w4 n& z. x) e5 b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 s& y) X1 r1 u4 H3 e' v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: }& D: \* g6 V3 z9 m2 M: P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 [$ ~' z6 O7 y* \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 }% V: {7 p2 ?3 V! s; J2 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- ~0 L& {+ ]2 k! U+ ~. T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 u5 ?0 s9 l! Q: ^0 x  X3 w  _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) v' _  p4 l8 [/ s# v, m5 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" A( B2 k0 f* b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 \1 m- s' w) @4 O# X' h% j; L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 [0 s9 ~" J5 n" I2 k0 N( Y% U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 w& I5 U1 q% k1 q& c+ F) I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- H9 t6 m( d2 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( D& b1 [% [2 L5 M8 K5 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ U1 @1 M5 b/ S4 l) _. W! ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ @, k& ?6 o* _8 O9 q' s. z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( J: |8 @" n7 Z9 m+ P( N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 j5 k7 C( z/ }# X) z7 m- t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

2 }7 b0 }2 w6 A. X; ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>