【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ a: v, |9 B! c5 i0 q% [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. g- Z$ U) b% K( a+ |& z  ~, GThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 T" }' g( F9 G* Q: l$ ]( n) _7 |. WWith the moon kissing it every night
4 Z  P) n/ F6 X0 F9 RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# s! B& e5 \$ o" E- `3 lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, C, t9 b* |: N1 D3 ^3 wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. Z) r' C! \- L" E% m3 M- OI want so much to see inside your heart
/ u4 ~$ C8 b2 h  V( H8 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* q0 ]/ `4 h( I2 w, {# V. s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ b- X) [+ K* W5 C: {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 o3 d- W/ V. i. d* z. O6 z0 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) R2 X6 o& L, F; X) N# F# {2 [, ^3 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: ^4 y% @2 _! J- j% A5 h3 }- _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, g: o4 b/ `+ w! f3 @( V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 R5 g$ \. ~$ h6 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 }2 Y: B& O4 n2 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& O/ T2 F) V: S- M6 [3 @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 C+ `% h! m9 y: y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ m+ y  n' b4 C/ x) H! o: D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" l: t: d0 O3 n& B; ~( H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& w" Q; t" M3 O& \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: ]+ `- c" N+ h0 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 x# [* I1 G* G9 e- w+ b5 G' {; a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 e" F) m; D& X6 A+ }7 Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- M. J# ^8 ?6 q8 M- }% E5 U! M- T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) T& W) r% ^1 [; @( j' P& W/ O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: n! a) t$ X4 c1 e1 L' C# ~8 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ a9 \6 s% w) [' }3 r8 N  F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% d' Y8 ^* M1 g5 R8 G# Z; S) B: `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 y& f% i9 N" ~1 G1 F( v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 _3 v7 D( y4 ]; ?# S& k/ X/ T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ y% }- y. v* {# n1 p$ |0 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! D$ p9 N0 Z# i' K) i# D# k0 E; t# v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 y7 k" c) b  J2 J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; e8 h6 w5 k* Q$ I0 R. Y, c4 s+ b' R9 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 @( A9 J# d5 P& |, l# C+ n1 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, u) x; i! Y5 G7 q0 i* L8 s' C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' O+ ?$ J9 @1 F7 n# n) N# a7 }9 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) E9 Z& m: |( x9 `6 w" Z: f2 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, x- V2 S/ N! F! Z, t6 @+ s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  n# _) v5 O& u- l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 N7 }" }' Y- C. m+ h我请你剖开它

& d) m, y- f- Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  m1 n" E. W- j; t: A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>