【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# i& a. X1 B) i4 u7 g; JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  L0 E" p7 T: T( g: N0 rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 z5 q" }. ~# |$ o) y% w( |/ YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ E# z) H" K- _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) ]( s6 w) D) m7 ~, C3 Q  jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 }. n) B& p9 d* b4 t  k' ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 C* y1 p6 L! F7 ?/ @- e& \1 _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 F' E* O! l; o7 KNothing can compare to my love
* y, q' L0 ~3 Z3 v! v) HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 _0 Z* G' |  B$ r$ X, ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ A, ]3 ?( L: i6 E6 g, R4 D# ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 l/ E- u" }% r4 y4 z2 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. V( D: p0 S- Y, y5 s, s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ ^% y. V: q! g( H2 Y% w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" i  l3 k$ C+ \( j; z. P- [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ o% k- k0 B; v# v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 }5 f2 j& o# k, M. V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 V/ D2 r9 c+ h& I" u4 E, D1 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: D9 a% b" e* u. k! C; _! V$ o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 B! s6 c3 k& A7 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! [, ]5 R' t- [2 y0 ]* T  d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* o3 s) J* M5 A  a8 U4 p% F. f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ C' n! x3 d6 J, x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 D) x: W, J# x7 l& P# P0 B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# j6 V2 |/ b* S" q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( d$ r/ V* w5 r' i/ E8 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ?; \3 F# ~& R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 |. M" Z# q6 [9 T9 q7 E; ?! j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 m2 z3 |' C* n/ x4 h4 l  C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 b/ a3 W& Z, G. k8 G6 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) @7 U! f: K: n" `. V# {$ p6 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ j8 E' O) B  t6 T4 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* r+ ~& x; h5 k, Z) c  ]' @4 G' u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( N' h. A* |- P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ t1 G1 F. d$ q! ?* ?' g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" d0 O: e4 f' p" [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, ^, k, C* B% |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 U1 f( @8 r# O! b3 c  O: \+ p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. y1 @$ D+ ]" i7 x4 d# a5 u1 c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: r3 z" j: T7 X% ^- Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>