【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) A0 K9 b: _! B" K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' V5 x6 l# ^. F% x. {6 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 P: e- [. }8 y5 q& IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, Z+ j4 p; n9 h2 Y( a8 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) h. @# `. l: V3 J+ k% b1 z7 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# f( c, c0 K& z# eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ ]  ~/ V* v, }2 JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 P- ]' s. a" f  `: F5 xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 b$ h0 O9 q$ @4 ], r3 f9 ]5 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 V; N# r' }) _9 J% O; Z" kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 f& t8 n& w; `9 L# mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( n" K" [) Z7 N2 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 h- N" S' T2 F0 ?4 S# b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 ^& J% S! P$ D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) e5 j6 D6 r* J  g/ u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 Y0 H+ ^% N2 D5 a+ W; N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 t8 g2 R* C+ x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& {- a) B3 r" X1 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 S3 _9 w- D- p; T. X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 ~+ a# `$ `* H4 d7 z5 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 x9 ^1 O" Z; d6 P: ~5 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' g2 S: c- \( ~: x% m# C% F4 j! p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 Y& z  C- L% K- Y$ a/ a6 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  s( o4 _! r% {; i: x7 o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' l; t9 [3 A. o2 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; \  o1 R' L5 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 Z  q2 u: m( w" O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ q) p, p9 t. K3 s' u' G- o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% A. ?, O' S, H, p9 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 `5 D  ]" Z! o$ u4 }3 v, W% x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, r: N+ H5 J9 V0 X* e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- D/ L3 N% I, @7 N2 M7 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& v, k6 V, R. T/ k; V8 F& ^. ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 x+ B8 B  i  j9 B' M/ l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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6 o4 o, ?8 ?$ ?! k" |3 Y5 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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