【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 z) K: G7 z0 z6 f8 y) HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 S, ~* L% Q8 I: V6 L# c3 l5 x' vThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 }  |2 q, _$ m) @; ?8 l6 CWith the moon kissing it every night
9 Q/ O: l" J9 u; r, g. @  ^" Y/ N% M; O* JSeeing the sky content with its love
" F+ P8 z4 {+ y  }2 z) P5 e4 X( @; GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( L" v, p3 }: KYou needn’t fear anything
0 v% |7 ]" }1 ]$ ?3 o1 y0 k. SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- R+ f+ b. f6 }4 Y- F5 h1 \I really want to know just how much you love me
; |- h9 N. X) C+ H1 x! e* pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 w; ~4 Q0 q& A% |1 g; n1 E; K' [+ dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 s" d  G$ t3 ^7 c1 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; Y/ C$ v1 f  m  n# II regret not dying
4 V+ c/ ]$ i9 _' L+ j8 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" M9 b% I  l7 i# i5 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 x/ P' D# r- q( Y1 |' {/ SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! ^4 c0 x% |  ^2 H. x! G# z4 V1 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 c# g9 x. Z+ h6 {! X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* P4 g/ m4 e9 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* t7 X& z2 R. A- D4 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  j- r( |/ }& k- T  a4 P) N7 ^! v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, H0 Y1 h6 w" M' A) F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: ~3 [5 I8 r6 V5 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; `, ^/ q" E2 {/ U& d* W2 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' c4 H+ [6 G- E! I* T" c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# @! z; T* W% g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 _0 ^$ l2 r3 Z6 u! d6 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ?. Q0 g, Z% }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ z( K' [; @: f& a9 \5 x$ d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; ]/ Q: U6 A3 h5 D8 W7 A& d* x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  J" f% i2 M) `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ S: n  ]2 G* l; m9 Z. O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; S; V2 c2 A% b* i1 I1 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 g8 }( Y$ N* d, }0 j0 s% d! d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% x' V- M# P4 w  E8 g$ c) a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; w6 A. R  c6 i4 _' z( e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 p( w0 f; J) V# ~& I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 K: J, S$ m, E: e8 h3 c( z2 p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  m- h" Y* k+ b8 k0 i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 c' r& d5 ~; ?( i3 b( C) A' U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: x0 z3 u& f4 s, X4 N; o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! b* R- N5 ?, V# V' a) x<P>I regret not dying</P>
) ?6 c  b/ q0 ^9 h# a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Q# g0 O( E2 d( @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 Q3 \4 Y" G  a& F$ o- _# x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 c% k1 i! x3 Z& t' N" E$ U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" o! \: q" \5 c- F3 P  `" c' j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>