【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! Y. x. r$ Y, |歌词我附在后面。
+ O% d% f* F' }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  _( F+ N. ?) A" }6 u  }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ^7 X# b) [9 X0 o9 d' m/ \The sky is happy down to its soul
* W$ n9 J+ @# h- v; y% \With the moon kissing it every night
8 U* k) L' D% d: SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ l7 T) a: d9 u" R/ ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; D( v4 q* V" H2 `- I. m. FI love you I love you with all my heart
. P( y2 B5 r2 o! `0 @" H( GNothing can compare to my love
) u/ ?& ?: k1 j: hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' x( P- q, c, }8 g/ d, BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* ]' C9 x+ {- t) r1 A; a( aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 Q! ]# \& E8 {- v: a2 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- v. w$ s4 m; P4 Y, dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 ]5 z3 P6 w; R3 v  iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" T" Q3 n' `9 }4 Y& s/ q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: |" ]3 A2 A! y7 E: z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ ?6 B  ]/ B( U, B. ]: D6 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; L7 _% d% k* Z3 v3 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: ?4 M4 |3 @/ o* s& d3 V% h/ ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 f# `5 W* s8 G( \$ f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ a) h; G; R4 n2 i* a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% ]% {  m2 G5 F" S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; Q$ r3 A  g9 |+ S9 p3 e4 O) F! H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 r: O1 }! r; e4 h* u( C# k9 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- ?) I0 [# m2 x4 W7 W" k' W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% `7 \, o% n& v5 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 L+ u+ I) H2 R0 D9 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 G, F+ O  \/ c* D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* j: x1 U4 D0 \7 r  I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* L4 g  _+ R6 ?' ~5 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 C( |! H- N, p! x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 W) c' s$ N$ _! q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 @( @  k, z$ i1 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# j6 J& X7 B( M8 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ D) N2 p5 B- z& Y( T+ X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: n4 X8 A" B2 S& ]' K- S. M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ h6 B2 S, e" L# w1 U& Q/ C: y4 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& _6 \7 Q# r, j* n6 Q3 a0 s1 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 g$ f* C. s0 q! L" `3 ?1 l: ]/ ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, q3 q2 i9 o1 B2 ^( v' J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 f; l/ ^4 e3 ]/ [8 L) b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 E5 t% m6 L' g; u$ j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 j" y! T2 a' ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 K' }+ M9 d% g7 ?8 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>