【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 m1 V% T1 c# GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' Y" b7 T8 n$ L8 i% OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& t; c) z% ^1 r2 F8 S6 X8 xWith the moon kissing it every night
1 [- l+ R) p, \1 `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  w( s- w5 f) q) s6 F: a% @$ iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ l) L) ^9 @7 y% D& HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 S7 F: r& I: fI love you I love you with all my heart
  J: _0 J" n1 ^0 w; E" y5 H& U9 ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' Y5 c" }( d) k' u4 f; c% {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 P5 H- G; {* v$ O% w+ yI’m still filled with fear
/ X5 E$ U2 y5 c" NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- y* f5 a+ C% m. f. k" f! w4 D0 j0 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ C3 B8 G- x" Y0 O/ D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" P) x  j7 ]9 s4 c2 D5 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 D6 z. S/ b/ ?" ^/ {& a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: s: S- m1 b$ h5 `( a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ G$ A: U, ?: M1 R; a1 f; M, v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ f5 M' k) R( T* Z7 m& w# b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 d6 L. }  m6 P; s4 g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* E1 e- ?9 X* U; B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  i" l* P. ]% }8 n, `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 I! y9 ~. g0 ]) J9 l# B2 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 X0 v! l0 h# d0 V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 ^5 h+ ]) n% y4 Q1 H/ g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" r, v/ A2 L! Y% Q0 w$ G; u4 N' X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 d. t7 D! e7 x2 M& M( W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' i' z3 J4 K8 P% `' a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, I7 p" N5 t! l: i0 [/ \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 i. z% C, B1 J* |7 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" V. y& X0 P( y- v9 `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ x  t7 F% S8 L3 R+ F  v+ A' \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 |% t' l; D3 B4 c3 H9 v# Y% l( E( s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* Q: }" j$ H2 s9 V+ r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& l, m4 e8 @* v5 x& e, v9 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: I' ~( J  S6 `, v9 l( s( O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: l% P6 e# `2 u7 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- g- |* Q! e& k7 e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ p3 V. H5 `, t$ i, N* T9 o* g- N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>