【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* G- t1 J0 P  @2 b2 N; p: a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: w! _' B3 A6 }4 m7 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 \/ F8 M! x7 M1 ]/ M( \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 T! L" y- S7 Z& i; S6 m2 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( D8 e- h0 P9 _; JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 u! m4 I" g+ b+ n/ K5 }# \/ T7 SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( d# y' J; l: m1 O% H1 t' m1 pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ I% J0 n) i9 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 S* c% l2 n: o- f( z- PI’m still filled with fear
( {" b, Q- n* fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 w+ K7 V! _* J. F1 SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 P; b+ R- o7 z3 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 [0 i9 Y0 Y* |, d* T' n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* \) \2 ]4 H/ u: z( M7 z, o, A6 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 M9 U& {" Y6 d) `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: a% N1 G7 Y$ t! M9 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" s" ~* ]% O' k2 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& U2 O0 y8 s7 @9 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* |% J% H: d& N5 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 W6 [' r6 a5 Y! c8 Y& r: U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( |4 ], l) {% K1 v  {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 k. s8 p3 X8 Y$ q$ E0 ~  w: i: E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 T: A+ A$ F% E! s2 I2 b, f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. L% U/ a6 u; c' l/ E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; i4 \& @( X% R  r  T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; p1 k0 r8 n- [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 Z" ]/ R: ?8 M7 U& |' t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. _! z' v: ?. I1 h4 G9 f* S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  ?6 m3 U, {6 l  X( \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 o1 S/ f) t. a) y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- l, w$ l9 u7 r/ h# [1 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& W$ l% r5 e, }% e3 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 v. q0 O' R  Q' g  h9 h) ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ t6 b- f  k9 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. R+ l& S5 L3 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% e& J( V8 Z+ [$ ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>