【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 E! I! b) N4 ]; r: {4 q歌词我附在后面。
2 w$ ]' P  O1 A2 u' |The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 A: n1 t1 n/ Z8 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 x0 o6 U# H7 f$ O6 p0 D- P  i" vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 g( `! Q; N  H8 ?5 C% F: r' `) c1 pWith the moon kissing it every night
8 }) o: g$ C  q4 O. j) i2 FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& `' [6 F% C9 d; {% m: Y+ ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. y1 b) U% ^& e$ JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 Z$ Z' r5 k0 R! d' w9 tNothing can compare to my love
# E8 k2 `' a6 C8 {2 \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- ?- v6 F4 K5 OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' l2 ]1 |) G8 t+ X9 s0 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 n2 N  U: n: F* Y6 kI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' i5 H/ g8 J- s0 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ d& A9 r: S3 z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 A- P1 |7 u) |2 q7 r* Z- w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- ^5 {+ v6 N7 _7 s8 H. |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; W% S$ T) r; L5 r5 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  M4 Y0 F" u6 [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 X7 x' X8 s4 d- Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 o+ ?3 @% s& O' R% F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( _+ m! P; A1 F$ e4 Y9 B1 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; c# `6 x" o" Q- D$ |7 t2 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! p; V& M  z% F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 L* u" C9 [3 Z  n5 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 q' ~' P9 Q3 ^4 b% Z5 @% I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! h: [3 w; m. i) a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 @5 P( {, y3 M; ?3 d: v" ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ B+ p$ s( o, H3 f6 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 P" X. d6 m2 X5 f; u  u- ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 _; f# E3 E% ~4 J, X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# f4 q' t  s( S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" i/ f$ O2 J" X6 H! Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ G. {* X, [1 T3 r* q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ ?6 e- F* L! q% Z' m1 }5 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 q6 O* w' B* ^. t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 M: v2 ]1 N- `/ d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) i3 g) E/ P5 g/ C$ q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# D* j9 J# H4 z# c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" L" D, ?2 W" k& j- i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 }$ B7 d4 O' M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ A" W" f* m* S, S9 I" [! y' j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 q' _) j, B; m- A/ F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>