【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 ^) Y/ a# Y: V, Q/ p9 O& U' {0 iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 l5 ~3 Q; P% L0 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  N' }; v8 M( _: TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& x" o# o" `/ E8 i. x# yThe sky is happy down to its soul
: [. M* U% b( V6 M7 U4 h$ n$ aWith the moon kissing it every night
! Z  J+ E+ R/ @) gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 v$ \: G, K) s8 g( p3 \$ KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 `  g5 K5 q; F+ o0 vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* B: `# f, j& y2 K7 [Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ B6 a9 Q4 p9 o' a( N5 {I want so much to see inside your heart
" K9 K. z+ g8 G& iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 ~3 t$ W- P) }4 Q% ^3 W' KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ _, M6 j) U8 s3 j$ _; L' A# A3 s. h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 z  @+ X: g4 C, O- I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 T+ B) R* M7 M9 B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 y) v% i  ~/ a$ X. D" i2 ^1 U& F  ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ B' ?* a; t2 T' z5 P5 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 V0 X5 c+ l5 E0 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( K% y- T( F# k; |/ n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 X' M" _0 A, ]8 E) k  \% @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 U5 I! i9 I1 E8 |" m; P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 I9 }! c4 r0 c: }2 B<P>你无需担心</P>
$ ~/ _" R6 K- ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 X1 ^/ W3 Q7 g; y; ~2 x5 O: H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 k/ N; r6 @0 U& s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 y# d5 [1 I9 U, a' ?1 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- o3 X# ]/ c! j. X3 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* l/ G" ]" ?1 p9 I" F. F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 f1 \! y; h1 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' I% J* G( l5 \' b# O& O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 m- _( I) n+ y7 a1 C2 w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" }+ ~$ e; l( E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' N, j3 J# P4 z& D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 y+ B2 t! ^3 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 q' y9 I( j2 K8 V& t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  c1 m5 R" c& P: r2 B2 i7 h7 Q4 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 Z8 P4 N8 o* R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ ~9 y+ [+ G* Y6 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: U7 ^- r# V! I5 u7 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* p- V; Y0 w# k6 t* q7 o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' \) V- e+ U' g* U8 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# s& `, ]. W$ l1 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 P/ y7 c" E$ P; P& `. X/ N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' E5 c$ @# n5 H, S, L# ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
, L6 Z( D" a) O; K8 {: v' p. `
. E$ `/ r! d+ k4 I- B我请你剖开它
3 ^$ ]$ J+ [9 J; @
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ e& t4 K% c- y7 v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>