【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# J3 V9 J, d/ m! A歌词我附在后面。
0 P3 L+ s: p1 a6 H2 F8 x+ A: }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 H! v2 w! u% |5 KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% B" m% O; B; _5 [. K1 g5 k0 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) W+ L7 k; ~6 t8 n* ?9 h2 WWith the moon kissing it every night
" k+ \! u3 m+ H. }Seeing the sky content with its love
5 M! Y6 F! M0 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 @( Q" a" R2 @4 KYou needn’t fear anything
  {+ |) v) `  z+ Y$ b# W$ e0 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. @* d5 U9 O0 N4 F7 }, n2 A: r! yI really want to know just how much you love me
" M) q7 ]; E; m: S4 {# e6 q  I% S4 @+ PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 K& `- P: n1 l+ y+ oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ L5 f& R4 A( w6 k* g) cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, {5 A! W3 d! T& C& S1 X" s+ `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- A' e5 f$ D, KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 R/ u0 o9 W1 c1 y+ V" `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 e) W* I, \- m6 T$ E: C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ T- \: B+ ]6 I* X7 O& A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 U" i* ?4 p; c' g9 s& \6 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) q+ Q  M' r* F$ p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 C6 c9 B# }* l8 p# ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& p6 G7 I. u; u( j; I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  X( O+ A: I% I+ @) v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( U, K$ D! b1 Z' i  w+ r$ S: o" h) b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" _1 y: Y; M8 ^/ V0 W$ T( ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" R% I4 d6 I5 W3 E- F: b6 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 }# w  o& p! {6 H0 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ k9 G: l* d" d# m& h4 [7 t/ g<P>你无需担心</P>
$ k; g0 R  d5 O& w7 T) U9 t3 ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 o  O. R; F$ {. P$ j, J( V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ U) ~" n, `7 {3 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% P- d5 ?% D+ Z3 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* P0 k- Z0 ?1 S5 X8 O; q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: i6 a! O% l& y, d; m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! u. _2 ?( G0 A( l/ j" z4 k  F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, w# i! m0 Q1 \4 M2 o0 I0 O* o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! m, _  O0 O+ O# X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 Q6 f+ i6 T/ O- ?: A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 i2 w& V  L! n" O2 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, s# M, \, R9 f" ~9 [$ T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; b. }3 A5 f: y+ a5 l) K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 v7 ^+ g7 Q5 I% t+ g3 H! ^3 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% ?( _  i2 A1 F5 I; D) p' l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, c. P/ ^' Y$ b. t' B( P2 v) m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 E7 Q5 g6 d0 |! Y+ o' |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 r' `( K" A, o1 R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; h+ H* g. U* r+ r+ a: v* c8 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 m: b9 S- H4 J' Y2 q5 J" H* u* d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 u9 v- h' ~% I! E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 a7 Q; G( |2 Y5 a: i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" [  I* ^2 X' n8 G2 T3 v. D# h( B5 B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' w% v6 W7 o3 t; V' ~0 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ ^: [' A5 C+ g8 ]7 C! m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& [1 ^6 V2 m6 i. L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. h# U' J6 Y. _+ @7 e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>