【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: \' n) l5 [5 L3 N( SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 u, \9 y5 U- N- @8 s" p7 A9 v: JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! i) [  L$ a; M, L6 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! x% p1 a/ {2 y# OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( b1 y% x+ g; [' n4 b2 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' t, m& Y  M* O8 `; `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; N, S3 d. k" s8 `' p+ uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  ~8 M) i( R+ ?' I0 Q& T( OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, s; S4 B* a8 ?; rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ k/ F% [+ o# @6 S" p$ ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ]% v; r% N2 @% |) `! {, r! u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ Y# j. k, G$ T! [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* }+ p! `( N$ @7 M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 K3 C8 X  e# G6 i  z3 k- C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' ]+ X+ k3 m) i5 l2 Z. l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 y+ }6 X1 m& {6 x: k7 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ k/ f& o' i1 \3 ?; v# k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 b: N5 {8 g7 E1 x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# }! d9 K3 `9 T9 Z3 {; ]4 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ N' c6 }8 a7 u' I* C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 }1 u% O& t# j5 T8 h- T" A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ k, J6 b$ X1 D. ~9 R' M/ @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, z& X0 d- r9 ?* Y2 W* t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, O! F; p  {8 H2 A9 o1 c( B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  f" R4 s, v0 t9 z5 ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: B, t+ u; _( w  W% y: R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 I( {5 g' y! G' \& l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- o% C3 u1 i3 `; }' K3 q( U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& a5 p2 ~! q7 m+ J/ ^  N* y* Y7 h1 w1 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 L& g4 _5 Q& b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* b: O, R& b5 a. V* r( Z% }+ C" {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 A0 P5 T" ^6 A7 a9 H% b- `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ j8 r& H/ \1 Z" [1 }) t<P>I regret not dying</P>
; g8 m; q) K* K) \) A: a3 h# R2 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 M5 D% i. z( H+ N3 }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 K# `- J5 I6 R' L! d5 {0 H- X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; {' O( l* l8 S4 V4 Z; e1 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

- y/ ^! B7 U; z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: t* x( ~2 P" t. d7 x" T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>