【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; p1 Z7 p& _9 L% p% L) R4 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 S( p4 l+ J' b. OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# J- k: B' `5 R" sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 [) _  F3 p! G) A; {The sky is happy down to its soul
5 x1 m* p, P& X$ C  LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* c6 i+ h  |" sYou needn’t fear anything
2 K% p+ V" @; Q. [4 _1 P, aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 c" ~( ^" R" X8 ^! kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) G6 [0 c# O* gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# c) h6 M7 T( a5 q: }I regret not dying
' ]- z1 Z. Q+ K) l$ c3 h3 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' e: f) O7 J* f" I9 ], q4 QWith such a tongue as yours,
. w- p* C4 e  @, b" \2 G' sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" P/ l; U+ `. I( A; d2 `  GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: K) r$ k+ [! C. yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# @8 t, f4 p$ |1 X1 G) M  E$ T6 M! R1 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" F2 f- F4 f" c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 b* g% q* w) n: K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) F, O# `8 h  y2 c# o: N" I* z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& u% \6 o0 V; M6 \+ n: b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ A: x- o8 J$ _+ P! J  L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" z* L) n2 z1 k' M0 o% Q- z3 ^6 W+ X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# m% S9 J/ @, X* n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ ^" X" `  ~0 C) J1 {. q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( {& ~2 Y" K1 `4 w" I7 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& X. B& V8 M) i% I  R7 e/ p' G<P>你无需担心</P>
0 q6 i; e2 u0 V, Y% X( }6 M) g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. j+ y& j! x) q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% Y# s3 }+ Z% A" G7 d. H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ s9 s* J. J7 ]( W3 h7 S0 a% R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. f9 E# ?1 `' L. m( k/ I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ Q0 K& i/ i/ k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 o0 T/ Z) n# r* C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: [- b  Z4 r* A2 S! ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% G. L+ Y( H+ ?- f# l3 r# g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* C" ^* \3 y" ^8 v7 a% q  K6 \3 @. J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 ^0 p; w) x4 g- r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& h0 g5 y! p( x2 k2 U0 P/ T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 V/ X) F  r& B! y+ t+ Y+ j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: B2 g9 \: c. ^+ A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 w1 p2 k* ^! d! Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. ~* N, f4 t2 n: B: H- [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 O" n' Y6 H6 J' E我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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