【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: B) E4 F0 q; ]& F9 y/ u# nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 F  @! z3 C9 S: h( `- f6 E2 d2 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  L. ]& C, j) ^3 m8 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, y7 u8 p* z$ _3 T" }7 BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: _4 k; K( u. P& f; {8 k" qEvery other word you utter is love
2 z, Y" i. g# F/ c/ |I really want to know just how much you love me
' r6 b& x7 t8 Z6 ~+ iI love you I love you with all my heart
- d4 {3 s2 p( N! D" w8 g& SNothing can compare to my love
5 C2 j3 i! T/ lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  `& v& E$ l# [% `" ~7 MI want so much to see inside your heart
- X" @2 K  H) s5 h% _5 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 ]9 v# `' S  hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 o% V# V" {+ E( A+ Y7 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; Z$ G# e" t: l8 G$ O. x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& z& I3 M2 A! H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 _! p3 f% W6 ^8 N( f% _- R# f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 [' D' L) y+ Q2 ~: M! K  h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: {/ R) ]2 K! H: b3 z# m, |/ n/ `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 U( g' h" }  ]! }" m0 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, v$ }7 F% @* w. ^5 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 o, t. {" C! f7 _- H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 |+ g- V& b% H1 t3 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, ~2 x  c$ n4 ]; N3 }: \( e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 u9 u- @4 c* E) d: S6 M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* T8 y" Z( ?5 n" f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 c, }# B' I! ~9 x! v5 Q) u- }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) T+ F0 c# R/ K( D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 b- v3 u* `& m. X) S8 M/ Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ [3 @4 M% i7 ?# w4 R- X, r  {) @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 X+ m$ g3 [7 \  ?5 M$ g- e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 q6 z) {- |; {: u+ q7 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' l" ?& n4 m% e$ i' P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( p) ^7 C, Y' `; l. h& B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" q3 M3 o& K* E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" |; W6 e: N( R1 c# U- f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 A  v5 a1 y- T0 E2 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% [: U, p% e( S1 W8 u/ f/ \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ m0 Y) h  r' p' y5 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 K7 F% y( d* D$ |" d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 g+ m" N- v& a1 A! |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& `* X5 S- O: _! W8 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; O: n$ s: z1 `4 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* L- U( a* g3 F& h  z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* l8 k$ |) \0 f3 O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>