【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 l, Y: N" Y3 w/ SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) ~! g, L; J( t  n8 {6 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: U, F: {  {) m+ r, s7 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 N  o2 S+ h  yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* d+ F/ n2 a. ?" H1 o/ D: ]9 _" JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' [3 ^& u. v  u/ D/ YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# ]( C4 m, b" D; Q" |5 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% _* x4 U0 ~4 f5 X6 K+ C/ qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 e3 N' {9 [/ }I’m still filled with fear
: F  ?# i" c2 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 C) Y- R9 v5 Q% B: EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" ~8 L8 O* |& C1 ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: v. B! p4 z, U' ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 j- R) b' p: X. S1 A3 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 q2 m; w  Y- a8 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# e( u8 V! [; l1 p; N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 o& g! d# M) ^' A/ C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: V9 P7 ~' ~) B0 I6 s* z5 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" N$ Y9 v: G: \) o8 s6 ~3 P3 v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 T' ^9 c$ w; `, L* A9 K/ U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 y# G# |' U: h% \0 }1 v- J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 w8 c9 t. y- O/ t0 W) `4 N3 c: f: [8 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- v7 a2 s: X' a/ w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 A# \0 }2 b" M7 T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" @& E( ?$ G- K( z* o<P>你无需担心</P>
* {; D% z/ y: _9 c: ]4 G( ]" F0 o; D+ W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 ?4 d/ {3 D4 D9 S1 @; \! g* i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 Z7 u: _7 V, R/ i  M1 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( T8 Z2 m& h- j1 d4 D! @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ O, h! K/ @% [: s1 J! p0 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' q. V% g0 g( R9 P7 @* H5 ]7 k$ q7 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 j) T* ?& x. r2 v8 }# y5 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* b7 o' j7 E' @0 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. w/ p2 m8 P2 X. [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 p( E) W0 w. Z# q- {1 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! v( r9 K; j  m3 ?; a" ?1 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' W" d5 j3 C8 D+ e* @- N6 J& q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! l$ ~3 ?/ T+ p: Q% z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ K0 o, v9 g. Z3 e( V. [. U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ v8 ], T8 ?$ U: O$ F' t7 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& M0 H3 L/ s1 h' a( s8 c; I* S  b$ d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# T5 X) \' H! P6 S! _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 [- V0 C* e) c/ h1 d) Q; u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 @: u* R5 S9 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# j9 u+ x1 {* [# h. f& u2 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 j3 ?% k! C, b3 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 [1 Q; g0 C" w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# O- a- I+ ~1 e! A4 {3 o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

  ?' ]9 u: I8 n7 Q' d# p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; L, a" z. g4 m) X8 D8 }6 S, N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>