【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* f+ F! v8 x$ D1 z, @( qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 p' I! `1 Y" i% z6 _0 Z. d+ m% _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' F# s8 b' D+ ^! L% y) R' YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ j8 x. a5 ^4 T4 w; w5 iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& a% u; E2 t1 Q- tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' n1 Y: @6 N3 l" D; o  y( v+ uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- N4 R  O4 d) n% lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; N" c. M" \7 M7 i4 D4 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ l  s- J( E' d7 q8 K. X& g' L/ P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 z# e" i0 R" e5 B2 F/ B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# x) X! @2 u0 w% g% h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 _3 \, m- `6 i$ A& x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( o# w, P' \8 J1 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 J) U9 e8 `% I( s  y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 r9 t" h  v9 @6 U1 u( a1 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ [, r' x2 Z( T& c  g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' U. |( \$ A# j# U6 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ [6 U6 G9 C# y7 j" d9 C3 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 l  E6 @- L) A& E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# Y/ b; K# G% N4 h# J! Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* e$ ]3 C, ?; k5 s- ]/ H* g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: _$ e: c& u" x; P* }3 V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 E* a0 W! O" @0 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ D) V' p8 h# @0 K. P3 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 f$ \2 S# P" x% ^6 c( G' v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 n3 [& }  |; [/ F! A) T7 U0 f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ t; N' z" i" P, }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 |; ?% q! h0 |* s9 k7 L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# t% O3 m- |$ r/ u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 _0 ~) N7 ~1 _1 D/ z+ R4 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 O# P1 H5 [* d9 T) y+ l3 i$ O* q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' o. d6 n' p% P5 r; q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 W$ Q, ]+ f4 w! j" V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ A4 u4 N# x' ^( l! S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  L. [: ~1 Y* l, G, L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% l. T2 g/ B- q+ z3 n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. h8 V# W( Q* F0 P$ t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* N, n" w3 S0 d8 t7 r) P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>