【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ `6 h0 c" L; c$ X0 a) UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 E' Z: N: G- _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; T! d3 f. w2 U; vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' T; G$ y$ [/ Q$ lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* P5 q0 N4 z& [2 ^2 `+ n: L# `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  j' B, C+ s& h, |6 ~* G1 X0 gI really want to know just how much you love me
& Z1 b7 j  K; a% ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: K+ q$ \9 h0 y3 B. G0 g; xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ e' B7 \( v* r1 P, a- T/ GI’m still filled with fear
% k0 w1 j) E; AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" {! N8 ]/ T: jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: E: j" k7 r+ c' x& VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: z. f& W4 V: J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% H9 J' Z( h) d" K" O6 K  @! E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 ^1 k1 J# x" `" w& W5 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( u- O4 Q  S9 U% o- p- \# [5 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 I2 m# K& H0 w1 N7 j* u$ ]% q2 }8 p' W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- \0 T: c* h4 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& {0 {' s$ _7 l, H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 Z, b8 P: M  L9 G9 U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 {. g$ [7 i8 \9 I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ ~3 A+ E! F# F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. Y8 R: V8 j; n' o9 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 y" }  {6 `8 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 Z' v. G. g8 k: M: C( N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" t2 {0 |* u# [; b% E- U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% {6 |3 h) @6 O0 S  M, n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ P9 u2 P( n/ E6 }+ j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 e! C* _* U. d( g2 r/ C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. Z1 N! f8 p: v- j( G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 X' ]5 E0 B- t. M3 Y. {7 A. {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 B8 W" I- W( J% O/ K1 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 z9 h: f; v3 _* E$ F- x6 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& V' h' i& }; F1 Q: K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* c7 }* `- I. `- m; U" P' I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 A' l" q5 x6 x; H. E# [, }" U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( G$ z, H/ \3 V  ?! {1 k4 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 h2 j3 o; I& H4 ^- M9 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>