【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; d( T6 d6 P2 e1 k! HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. C, z4 W' Y5 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! D8 F4 |0 H8 Y* VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; H( T) o/ R/ b/ ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 n& q; k. L+ v& t* EYou needn’t fear anything
2 c) D/ T% `! J! @# KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 S1 Y2 \2 H9 S  lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' [" R* c6 y, X5 t) tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. N) `$ z/ C4 ]% ?" CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 b# ?. c% A* c& @6 ?( ?I want so much to see inside your heart
# I! m0 r" C: x3 iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 ~2 o: T. A: Y* K+ [* H* PI regret not dying
$ }0 V$ r( E& DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# o$ s4 p. i/ Q5 \: R, ~3 a2 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 T+ I) A$ C7 t! q- }/ _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- C* P' \% N0 L  \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 G; r2 z& ~7 }: ?" |7 s" Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 {8 A6 B9 F7 h2 C. |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: a9 s' n$ r+ a6 @; p) M, |- b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& k  _3 T/ d4 w+ f, |2 n$ K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 h9 y/ w( R( J7 g# w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: d/ y2 Q# Q0 b/ S' k% D) ]9 E# j) P2 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! Z0 B7 w& g2 ?3 j, s+ \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( k- P2 [) @- f5 M5 C7 f4 B' v) M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 i' n7 g; H" _- m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 x+ O+ T- j" \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 }0 w* {2 k6 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ J' P) s& j" w; z4 U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 J4 L7 V. E3 _, w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 v6 U4 t6 q5 _) z, A  t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- f5 V0 S, `$ Q- i% p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 e/ l5 v/ a- t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 u) h- m* G! C- l, x; I4 ~: Z5 C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, O: z: J% p1 C* h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 X8 z& b2 X7 ^  ^0 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 k! C7 `: _& N3 ~* c7 K) r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ E6 V# V9 J9 Y4 J$ P* k- H6 i! G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 c5 S8 l# x$ B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* d- r& x, w2 m/ e( k4 N4 e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% ]8 s/ P- _+ @$ L+ w8 D1 h' g; T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! `9 t# g6 H* f) e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 ]/ ?4 A3 I. a$ B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% Q, Z- v9 G# ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% N- ^9 N, F- y& O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' p) z% f! E3 {2 E! i! h我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>