【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. x+ A: N; d3 G8 o3 _9 H5 U- d6 z歌词我附在后面。
2 m: V9 }$ K/ N; n1 U: oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 s" l+ m4 J; e$ z/ E( k% kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: j% q+ E* M& d& c9 D) `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ _5 d% j5 b, Z7 Q) j, S0 h8 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( c3 o. ]7 ]8 s8 w) _/ ?9 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 X* Y0 D, k  E! C, Q0 ~: [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# ^0 O8 i  ]' Q& [) y1 w3 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# h2 ^4 i+ @6 a6 |! P2 n6 rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' G) x6 N3 I6 `; ^- NI’m still filled with fear
4 P# g, a! O: _3 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& a) G% T  [! m& h) }+ b- II regret not dying
' n6 s) i0 N! {3 o; GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ {! i& r4 s" A, B& T! _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 Z8 U  ?, r4 y. p3 P+ }  O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, I  [5 H+ }9 @2 _, _% J/ @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, d- G9 e4 y/ i0 C% x# ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; u8 K' r9 P% z2 w2 _6 L# I. v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ m+ ]$ D9 l6 z+ E) [4 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) [* `! y9 L# k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 j, }4 r( X1 |3 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% D6 H( T6 |' k# ~  X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% U; s+ \; {0 [) D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 H9 V9 g+ P# b. L+ Q& e9 B/ B' b7 P  E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 T* o  F( \4 |+ w" E9 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: V- u5 X) b1 E- ~. t' L7 Q$ _6 W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" T; F9 S9 _2 s$ K% b+ }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ n8 x5 T+ Y3 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 w$ J6 s3 q( i1 ~% @3 q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ ^+ x. e& s1 r( ?2 `9 W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! \- _0 ~: c  d: t; l* B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 R# \/ C9 V7 b8 k3 }- P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 d; P8 M& D0 W1 {; n7 x2 r2 k( @6 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# O+ u- A& i5 ?* z: s, z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 E- a8 c1 y2 J8 _- C2 |5 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 Y+ t8 I6 G: E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* u. O2 g. b* U9 O. i3 s( a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 h- e4 l- w1 ]) f. |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ h6 _2 G* F! D/ ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ |) P. N* P; z, s- j* w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 ^- `6 S) ?' r, k- C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 N8 [# f# r" ~' n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, O* r4 ~# M0 N$ @$ B% F2 q/ k4 T我请你剖开它
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/ x1 d1 E. c6 e% W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 V* l) D& b3 z8 j2 o1 _7 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>