【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 i1 w# r2 r* ^+ @7 ~1 M" D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 D5 J! {0 F) HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 l8 u* w( |0 }% z4 n% c' v  p+ F- {" i! bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. [, Y' c' d7 a; A% g" HThe sky is happy down to its soul
, U$ h, g- ~$ [. j5 x0 RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ f+ _$ M' P0 a# r! A# ^, oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 V" K# X8 {' \$ k" j$ @0 C) jYou needn’t fear anything
0 S  a# `, H  r' D3 g7 S/ R5 u& LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 c, h" m6 n: j% sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, K' v' g3 F0 `7 c! LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: P7 f" p% S% gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 V; B, \- {% ?3 H  q$ RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, n6 C* V) P  g, UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! D0 c8 u' U; h* ]7 QI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 V8 I  f! O, s. E' H' L( m9 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; r) l2 L: p9 U  {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( T0 l6 Z, }  A+ {6 U8 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: @) M# }; ^+ h2 Y- M: p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: U; {) T& U; c+ m8 G' W" Z# `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. p. {- d$ L( Q" e$ F/ B3 o6 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ ], o# {; @% B8 {. K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& _# S& `2 n1 E3 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: K2 s. p+ k( q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! y, X3 n+ I9 n, e. _" X' Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 Z5 ?5 A- D( H" @" Z- p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- A. t6 a, o4 B* h3 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( G1 f* @9 T* i* R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 o) T4 p/ U1 c6 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 j" ]& u* K3 P0 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; Z7 r" c6 n$ o; {, B& B: a<P>你无需担心</P>
3 T8 s, S: C3 y! ^5 d: S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' o8 v) F9 _8 I: g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 P' }  e6 Y- p2 ~0 y- j& o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& A, l. l+ Q9 w- B6 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! E2 _8 |9 l' p- k: C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) `9 m$ K$ c4 A! ~' B1 C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 U' E1 _/ Y2 M& s7 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 w/ W/ M/ Q- X2 q, u1 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  y) x9 o" J  \) i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' @& x. H( z: r8 S; u, |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 ~) W/ U" D" f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  O& \! e; V8 |; E0 m7 c& W0 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: m* t. y' h: Z5 x4 M" J6 E; M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ f6 b- g% @/ Y! o1 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- s* _/ D+ N& g8 B; A! ]+ F9 z<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 ^8 \. D) A0 D' v- Q- @. ?8 f/ d4 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 V) K- t0 U2 q7 w- i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ L2 g' a4 m6 Y( I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 Z, r8 I3 m6 F; \* j9 F, Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. p! a% M+ A, _) b3 S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ D- Z5 w5 i% ]- R7 r我请你剖开它
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0 ^) x# }0 ?, J% ~' t. b  R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>