【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( Y, X2 F7 k: ~0 v" o2 Y: B6 [" q& qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' V5 ?6 c: G( s, F9 \* x  yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 U5 D6 P# N& E7 y  J: l4 l% lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, {0 A( p( ~% g7 n$ hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ N' X+ W3 \4 N3 r) A9 bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' D5 G* p1 \  S3 P6 N9 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; e0 j1 b5 E2 [! s* iI regret not dying
" z3 G0 ]4 S& p6 ~- hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" D( H3 {' X: w! K$ |, s8 V7 yWith such a tongue as yours,
0 h4 @+ X' {  g! A3 c: uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 O( I6 o6 j, X2 N8 k3 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( ~5 m: c' v" sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% w2 H$ k( z7 o0 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* j7 |  Y+ [6 B) t+ d& i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( I, G* |+ L9 ?& {: q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  h6 F+ U: b3 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 `4 V9 p2 Q6 X2 n4 ^  b% {( `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! @- Z4 ^+ Q+ H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 z: j3 i. B# I9 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! q) \& I6 U5 N9 d/ o) x1 Q2 p, Y* V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" ~, s! P6 b  l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  \- j3 b. v3 E, ]2 q8 R/ c5 o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 H  v5 h) V7 R$ ?; d5 D  |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& e8 o, o' }5 y" a9 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ K/ s* r8 D% P+ W4 i$ |# {' [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ N1 e7 ^( W  s( `# b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ u7 Q% @7 G4 F% u& ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( N8 o0 \% y+ b: d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! ]5 p+ S- c' y! p* e8 C- {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, t) M7 }  [* P' e2 V9 d. Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* g  p! R6 I0 c: F$ V5 h! {" e* e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) M0 J% d" G. F; I  N+ ^9 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: _# U& p; i4 l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ _9 {7 T: U& l1 c/ m, D) A. g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 y6 ]* T- S; `+ A$ C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 _. ?, V/ P4 l2 M- k/ g<P>I regret not dying</P>
. V9 y/ m( [+ ~6 K+ ?% F# f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 o* d. h( k# f  E' c9 i' G1 a  ]" n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- m. Z5 S% b& G0 d7 G" J) ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! u+ L6 H, g' \9 W* u1 p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 Y- Q1 @7 Y" y* b* K0 C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 N, G) `* u& k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 k+ [. v) z# `# C2 e+ T2 h* \我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>