【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ F7 {" L8 k- ~! b1 ?歌词我附在后面。
& A. X% {, @- k7 L* _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 P& D& Q4 C& U" {! ]4 M8 m; e+ d- cThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 c. i1 q3 M% i* cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 x$ f" q7 Q! dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( f4 c/ w) n) J9 y, sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; c0 o9 s# `  W# A4 AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ z5 k( {# K( y" ~" mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 k  Z' y; q* pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ J. h. [1 P6 U/ kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! g' C, ?4 b# v4 {- k$ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; |  p) s0 b# Q" G, I7 L3 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 n8 E8 P- J, l! s/ J& d, b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 g5 X% o9 C% |" @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 x, H7 Y$ K  K) D. z8 _$ H0 A- D% B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 t1 L/ @  D( h8 T$ F2 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 E# m' l4 K  `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: {/ ?( }9 q4 @2 c1 s, y9 o2 d6 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; ?) ]2 D% P: U: _3 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- Y. J3 ?$ O" W* S1 N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" j( H& t, Y+ s0 A5 @& _" m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* z2 C" L# Q: V/ ?0 l- g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  k$ f# D* X; n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% u  X: l$ h) h. w$ t9 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; @0 Q1 r. r7 e' J+ G' p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, E6 o" N5 p2 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  ~5 M( C0 T, e8 J4 U3 m2 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' q3 X( k% P# z8 W$ x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. D* X; `' X6 @) b  o# ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' ^  C2 L/ v) v8 f% {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" p+ x$ i% I2 e$ x+ v0 c9 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# R3 d( P% c6 N& Y  F# T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) f4 U5 _) T6 c, G$ q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 y6 U3 m% @8 P9 X* J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  j! w3 \# b! a, |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 x9 a8 R6 C3 D8 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# b* i0 I3 N9 F4 }! k; k$ Q我请你剖开它
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, C% x4 u1 b' R$ B3 }- H# z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 x5 ?& U+ M4 M" `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>