【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& H* c" x# I; J' j' w0 LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 c* y* M6 v2 i1 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 w* d# `6 D* _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, ?6 }' O$ n; K. @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" O: l  f9 Z9 t6 L$ f* d( p9 _Seeing the sky content with its love
$ ?4 `, W. B! C$ g1 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- U5 e% k& C" N/ T6 |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* ^9 `# g2 d2 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 x8 r2 A+ g% O9 a6 R) y' A: |  eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% q; ]6 h' E% y' V6 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, z: K5 P5 E( K3 A3 `3 X5 OI want so much to see inside your heart
  c  W& n) E7 o' X! E4 J5 L3 TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) ?: i" H! U' V- r& W% V$ HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ m( E8 u3 [- Z/ E5 B/ E8 vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. q/ p0 z6 p. [9 i, tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 k1 U* I! a7 K. J) J. V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 M4 L( j; `4 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# \' N& m$ [: r# l" m6 X* |2 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 p. M7 u, Y, m8 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) P6 t# G5 N0 @6 T: w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* l$ w/ k8 ?, z0 K4 p; @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 Z0 b3 @% P$ i; R5 X4 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 v" E: v) j0 s0 M3 O- e/ f% o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 _" c9 G: M: k8 s) K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! n* O7 X: f9 t8 W; i) ?$ S6 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 Q9 M% M& @4 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 R( Z8 \. R" l: R2 M2 q! g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- \0 R) C% u8 W% Y- s: x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 n1 z& b8 u4 p- W8 S( ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% R  w: F( c; f7 p/ W, C$ w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' p: l+ d( l- p' i* y; S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 u/ }; E0 O- A% z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 B1 p# v. T2 }, @7 V# l4 {$ N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 Y( \6 I# I6 z0 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 D, h% ^3 h* h* M" J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) m3 L9 r2 b5 ]% E3 X9 o& e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; S+ w3 ~" H2 U% I( ~4 E5 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 u: K" w! o" W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ?- {& |! t0 X& U( A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ c% p0 m2 c6 v1 W5 U9 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ b* o1 }8 J" j/ `& ^+ k4 w& E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. D6 R7 O1 K2 p8 N) X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ n8 W  T! c$ U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
. d6 {7 o3 D& h8 v9 H# k4 U* u9 N
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- L3 g; r0 k5 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>