【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 d3 E9 S7 A+ U. P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! m0 `( T& F6 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# l8 l* P. y5 S& BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( o3 \+ ~) P: e* t! z* dSeeing the sky content with its love
3 }7 l9 l# O0 ]! F: t( SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) E# ]; e* a! ~, IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ q7 f9 C# O# r! X5 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 M9 f. o. X0 P7 O- H  ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ _$ u2 C6 p% P& e" v' o* SI want so much to see inside your heart
* j- D+ c% K1 G0 N5 SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 y2 D8 [! p  I' P+ z4 G3 yI’m still filled with fear
: T& o* v& [. W' J0 n  }7 tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ y- L* T1 J9 |' q' PI regret not dying
) R1 i4 T6 a' `7 p; Q5 M5 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 Z  z. _- Y# l$ c1 zWith such a tongue as yours,
5 {6 t6 t' j# |' \6 Q* H) FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; C8 f2 M# Q, h8 H  [  ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 u& A: s" ?& ?; R" y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* o7 z3 v8 G' J$ T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 I2 I) ~) _, \3 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 G$ T/ I& f3 k; v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# X* w" o7 a9 f8 G1 Y/ B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 @4 I% Q' m8 [5 D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- g& I7 T! G) \$ q8 f" r& R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ P$ I$ w" \- }3 [0 a5 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  d! \3 {/ |. ]  C5 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 z# `+ w1 m! |+ w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( N. ]/ L5 Y6 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 w, g3 g* ?. N, w! [+ ?; u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( P- ^6 H$ [. R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 \- ]' g4 ~4 W" f  p4 h- X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 R/ _, m' n- O% X' y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( Y2 A) w+ a5 ~2 c- \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" a1 F8 l, i" B* R; q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* d' y' G+ L$ q9 V% g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! g: j  I4 ?9 Q% q1 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 \) q0 n& t+ w1 N& e8 ?2 i" {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 F2 p" ]5 Y9 A; ?8 v  Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 [& d: ?+ a! ~2 j0 B7 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, c2 f: I- F# r6 C8 _, s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& z# T2 ?, a4 P. {+ _: ~' @5 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. E4 a+ r) V; H3 c( |4 W% G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 ~  f8 `4 E+ u7 v8 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# n* x3 v, M& v) n: y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ G  g/ m) a0 \6 a: s* [* }我请你剖开它
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! |/ q0 y& h9 f4 a% S2 B/ l3 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ ]. l; g; j  Z9 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>