【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 s/ G+ ]- F4 Z: WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 S. ^) H+ {, C% Q% fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 p0 z3 c  {# i5 ?9 Z& Y, HThe sky is happy down to its soul
! _8 W! g' ]7 _6 S7 D2 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 J4 @; w' _- WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ O, ?- L( A4 ]# S: LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* O! T' e1 J& _/ E# {/ X. _1 B1 UI love you I love you with all my heart
- N7 u* [/ ~- M7 e2 ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 n% u0 O7 u# G1 f- v0 q7 @( xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- H& f" k  J5 G6 hI regret not dying
+ C$ W6 {, a- Q% W. p  y9 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 d: ?2 P8 X+ D; K2 @# m, S6 fWith such a tongue as yours,
+ F; H; Q+ R. L, UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% o' d% a( j  Q* zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. `  j9 ]9 Q+ h+ `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 }! f. ~' w2 m: Y% |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! `# x- ^" s( R: r  o; G: H9 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 k3 G, `. @; a+ }  X& ?/ [7 u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; L6 @- D% o5 ~+ _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 z' E, x) M! X, r1 q+ X9 J5 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, c8 G8 _1 L: z; {3 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& @9 R$ o, y& ]7 v, K- b7 X) m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, J5 u3 \+ C# e" m1 V3 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- W* Q) Y: ?. M' q. n; W1 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 e: L# [; }" b" \<P>你无需担心</P>
6 m, d$ G, I& z: W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' p5 y. z0 A1 I2 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 @. c7 r9 W2 _, [' P& F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) _1 S6 r4 ?# s3 E6 e. h& Z% Y9 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 ^% {2 \4 t: K! _/ c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" {" Z7 h: U% Z1 |6 y: `  ^8 b% P( c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 \. D0 B5 d* h2 ]. h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 \0 N7 K2 `; t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 T" K7 V( Q; O/ {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. y" N* K9 B. |1 c. K0 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ [' f9 u3 l% X% h: N5 J* T% w  Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ w% i' C4 {% O) h' S& l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( }' J( t7 G% W; ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 e8 a" r5 o" S0 `4 S4 L4 ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" R. q# y+ c$ t+ G0 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, W6 K* z8 g8 B' e' ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 @3 K+ ~% B! }& u" h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- G0 `+ `# F) `* E8 w- d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 @/ c& `# d6 j' b7 e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 W) t% f& \% p: o' k7 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) g" }4 E( t8 d+ o) @. A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 I  H# v" s4 r/ D9 s' W0 _3 V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! t1 i! j" n* m& V! ?5 |9 K9 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ n; _0 o" K, A# f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>