【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 J/ e- s/ I; g/ `6 m; P1 g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% s/ e! O8 X- fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 ]; y& j( D/ j/ gWith the moon kissing it every night
$ B% K( I% [7 k# _Seeing the sky content with its love
. k* z1 r2 z$ N7 L- n+ c% n4 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 C7 w- `  a5 T# [/ P4 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 W, K8 I; K5 z' ~Every other word you utter is love
( a8 o) j) j  D3 f; L; g$ GI really want to know just how much you love me
8 D/ b- N( P4 l9 j, d/ [I love you I love you with all my heart
( q( I" e; W: \, {7 b; s' L& LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ f9 V, K% z5 t1 g7 MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% X* z. x' r/ U# ?8 c$ h, }I’m still filled with fear
, }. {6 I7 h) @* Y9 f3 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% M8 n3 Z, Q* j. CI regret not dying
+ e( \8 L" e& c) HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- h3 n2 }9 l5 D/ H/ _With such a tongue as yours,
/ P: X' p+ E' C% a" HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 x* r8 R1 h/ RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 A; i/ Z; g9 J. ~" ~& PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) Q: E/ J, x1 K9 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 U5 _- v5 o/ `% Z1 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# ~) h3 \9 p' z6 b# q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- p& y' R* M" \: e9 \# T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 ^9 D( a1 s/ a+ E7 C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 ^4 E; R. F0 |* H( |2 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 T& F+ y9 Z" j) q% t. w+ p$ R" T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 I* |2 _0 C# S1 c% k0 }+ W8 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 @0 d$ x9 R" B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 N5 d( [! P2 U0 J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" s& R4 h1 U! I% I1 P; ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ^3 Y$ g) [) f! f0 d. M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 ^3 _9 x; `' ^! S4 K- Z, [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 z9 a6 J7 H+ V7 M( @2 u9 S1 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ x! M3 v6 p; {2 J4 d# K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  A$ K9 ~4 F" u" r2 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 b0 `+ s5 e& ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, _! i  t/ D: m# W7 X2 e5 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- f! n5 P+ a4 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; M& y0 P9 d5 ], v3 g% _. i1 Q0 c8 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  z+ e* Q& U. c, _( x3 h% D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( t' |& K2 T4 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& F" T& P4 h" t# O, d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# ^* G# \. F5 U" E- d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# \4 M9 ?: f7 r- X" q$ T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ ~0 u$ s" X( [5 Z2 K8 y+ t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! M* N6 ]1 c/ n0 g& i( `4 ]; v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 c, E8 n# Q) |8 a我请你剖开它

$ d" U2 }6 H. b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. o: B0 ~$ x: p/ o" V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>