【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, i: E% k/ @! @' A' V1 m6 a$ d- RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ k6 [1 K0 Y: T+ QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. P1 t8 o" c. W# N1 GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" k$ z; N4 Z4 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# k% ?* @: t# t* D5 C6 T5 sEvery other word you utter is love
( l: r4 `* g# ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! D( w# g0 N% B( F' ONothing can compare to my love
" X1 G0 L7 m: `$ i; s9 E6 h! DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 V' c6 P' R7 {" X/ aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 ?; [: M# y! x- RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 g2 }! }  i- y  `I regret not dying
7 i1 o8 a3 P( L! j% ^( ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 e5 J! `9 d' b# O8 V3 lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) X: c' {5 c' T  y* h% w5 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) D0 F: O" ~/ C% J2 u& i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 f$ F; R7 x" V5 p( D! k: M/ ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 s( l# \7 ]  |5 K/ U* T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! R, G1 i( {" T" M# h- G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! _9 r; c1 [: A& m8 `$ T1 \) s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ b2 d0 r  b- Q7 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( c- n/ `0 C6 B7 J+ X# k0 {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# Y/ L% A1 N  X' J5 v' \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; ?" D/ J) ^# H3 u1 v- |( X8 N+ ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 ~7 P4 [  w+ j7 b; [5 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& R. u$ u1 B+ q+ r# {3 I9 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- s: i0 c, M$ B: y  `, r) m0 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( j' J' L7 X6 i! G; R& w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ ^0 o$ J$ I& E) B8 g% n7 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 f+ _( `  g$ ?3 d7 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 J- \% s8 u+ K) A9 I! Z3 \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  G% E6 V" v8 t( e8 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 s! x: ^; n3 L. [% J3 u' Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& m1 h4 ]" q7 a2 }6 G8 l0 \5 @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 q- L2 `  _1 w* V) j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 _4 f4 e/ ^* l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 ~) M+ w* z! f' C* x; i( ~$ [. _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% ^1 h$ t4 ~5 w6 ]6 k& g0 L$ b' P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 h; h) t5 b1 q! X1 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 s1 o0 D/ m- V" a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( h3 `2 P5 I$ _6 Z0 e. b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 o% ^8 E% T! b  \9 `' J: a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% i3 R! B' X2 {9 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- d( |- b5 C: @9 _9 S" f3 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& V0 m: K7 N0 ?- I% K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& G7 M. [+ {: a1 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- e; k3 Y. H  x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

' t' r9 q* y' G/ M1 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" r+ {. ^/ N. f* u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>