【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" T* X( C: ^. l- f5 t$ P* |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& w8 z+ q! a7 a, a! {; N; CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& ?8 T' M; L% b) ^- z6 D. J9 V9 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
) ^$ D8 _& m& M. o% u0 H2 BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ X; H/ J; |- o9 K( q/ ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% w. a  J% h# m+ C: Q" SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& a3 d0 e: N- YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: i+ S( k, @+ R# p6 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ V" G3 L1 z- H9 @2 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 ?4 g( I( l% u  _6 }4 z- }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 F3 F3 [( r+ w( cI regret not dying
* A; I, K& p+ DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 B/ K+ _2 ^! M2 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* M4 N: c  u6 z0 r2 V" _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ j( N% K7 ?2 ?$ \$ [4 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( ~: F# P2 C8 |6 F0 \1 t: G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' ~; P1 p9 e# S0 M/ L) t: l/ x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 n, K* g  i* v& d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 U; a) b9 F0 C' }2 k, b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 W2 N1 X% j, Z0 Y5 c; t& N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* D2 C; V, a: O* k9 b. |8 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, x% N) D  n. Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, ?1 E! j" g7 Z# ?9 g- P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' Q- t( C5 Y- [: G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  V# J- `4 @% h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* W! N! t( N, H3 Z: e, i! J/ ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" g: U1 |8 x+ X& j) m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 w& q, y, b% L+ u" i& q* k<P>I regret not dying</P>
- E4 ^% ~2 s' Q' W5 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, z6 S4 J0 P5 p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ x8 M4 P; ?6 ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! c( S/ \* K. {3 e2 F- @& R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% [6 a- Y6 B) m1 b; u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# ^* R# G$ d- ~/ J- w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( ]3 A: e" k& J+ j$ q0 l1 E+ `; q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 b% T; p! H( e7 Y6 j! Y6 ?; Q我请你剖开它

& Y& z% T) f$ {, ^$ `6 i& t9 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>