【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 `0 d4 Z- w7 a7 zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# K8 t7 a& I; m0 M8 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ b3 X/ W4 r# rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- S; G8 G4 E2 A. S: o" b4 I2 HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" ?# |# V) e! v+ c2 l) L" q1 }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ b+ T6 g/ S3 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 t: q- v* h1 B+ a0 N3 zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- O; x- l* |" J9 QWith such a tongue as yours,
( |1 E9 [( b. c- k; {, L! aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; u& w/ D* ^' n$ ^/ uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 M( h. x/ J. l' V9 a/ {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; }4 L2 h; K, W; e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 E+ t, p! h7 H  x3 V6 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ p2 x2 i6 h. r0 Y7 B; W& O6 M4 m' d4 A<P>你无需担心</P>
+ f  F9 s8 l/ X2 @, N7 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# f; b: V3 n: s6 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% B" s" A4 h) G  R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- \$ K* c8 c  ^6 z5 i) m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 s- v, u  R6 a1 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 }1 [9 K6 q/ ]' ?9 Q: r) U) s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: N+ M/ l" s, C8 J, \2 _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# C: C4 j* O. W& r* B% Z: K1 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ }% ?3 ]* |0 Y( p- Z, S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( [8 w9 N8 R) y' x: G  k* }" i/ g& h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 n0 `" M" m2 T+ g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ W) c: o1 b& r. ~0 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ Y9 @$ q3 w- q$ T2 Z4 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 V& ?7 L7 x! a- Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ y2 [6 M5 l6 _4 `1 v1 k  v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 O' U) r  a; F! G0 E, j% z8 w5 u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 H% ?5 s2 I$ U8 i4 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 u% Q! F% f# G4 C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; U- j  H. U0 p7 \1 P, ?' E* {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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& h& N! c7 M9 A# g5 v( m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# F1 L: m* K8 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>