【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! |1 \: U0 \" {. l$ Y歌词我附在后面。
- b- n/ |' u' [( H9 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 ~9 x. i; y7 K" R0 Y; dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) }3 x1 A" Q8 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& k* T$ Y/ C$ z7 L5 ]) QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 M5 Q9 ~2 ^1 L  C1 `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; q% p5 D- i5 c+ O& C0 L4 JI really want to know just how much you love me
1 }. j* w9 O7 LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 C  f; @6 D$ N) i5 F; T; lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' b) a) W1 E1 p9 P2 |+ gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ `4 q+ h# W; {# ?7 r* jWith such a tongue as yours,
# V7 f+ c  d3 x5 }, N0 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& [  D: ^+ k3 k; K! U2 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! B; [/ x7 y4 D8 y8 S( B8 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# M' y. a  }8 P8 Q2 A8 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 T: {' P' b: S6 t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: N# }1 ^2 r9 Y$ C" x' j2 @' [2 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" Z3 c9 @$ g0 j8 K& Z# {& {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 q) [& D; i4 R* L, s/ [: u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 f3 z% W% M2 O( z" E9 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 L9 @1 S/ e4 `3 U/ P1 D& G9 Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 H) ^8 |  w. f+ X5 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% ~* x& H4 p$ [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* `9 T) t" ?1 ^( l6 d8 `1 k/ d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 n2 v+ L( H: B; m) `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' P! z9 V1 M: Z: P/ G$ o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" o+ c- I, S5 R# n# M0 q+ u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- R( t/ U5 r- D* ]/ C5 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ M8 B$ ?0 G+ Q' [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" t  d% }$ `! O1 `' ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; H+ d; m  P- u% [3 `+ F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ u% c7 |+ X5 F( m. X# R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 Z1 O. ~. g( G% u$ a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 `, @) B' A9 ]6 T) f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 V/ ?2 w" W, c  G7 Z" c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ p" w8 z5 ?# A9 B我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 i) t4 w, O/ h, h/ |3 h7 h( R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>