【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 e; O% b, c& V, l* [* E, ?' }歌词我附在后面。
8 |' f7 a/ e, f* q1 P( y$ K) PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 N4 H' P: q9 N, u1 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 U& H9 p# g% ^' E' V, oThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 b$ _& h: p6 I8 y& Y5 X! E. KWith the moon kissing it every night
: W, O/ C: S, A- vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 a6 @; Y' h3 O' {( B2 m( oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( m! N* E5 W5 @1 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ H2 V7 Y* T2 e( W" H% RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 A1 @' r$ \3 Y4 D/ H" z+ VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, \( s7 \2 t1 [" RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 b7 h4 d0 P5 R* A% o! B5 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% O$ h; K# k) j" o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 y+ W+ e& ^7 b7 @  l' V1 |/ C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" T+ X: j$ E" [! a$ _% f/ R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ Q* d$ P( D9 b, c  c/ v$ d0 {; y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 }$ {! M! d$ o' E9 r" a$ t0 D$ q4 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& e! k  Y; y' k/ ?. f- o# r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% i) q6 ^/ M* r% U' ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( L$ ~' B! F: E* x" J* m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 ~4 I  o0 z, X4 s6 \& ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ t  ~8 B0 f+ e) R6 G. l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( ~5 j1 ?/ P0 t! K3 L" v% `$ O8 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( C9 v: B4 {) z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" b# L3 c) o1 k- F; ]+ A- I- F: X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ _* R" x7 c% V2 C) u6 k$ o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ g/ R6 F! E$ G* q$ v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. B3 J; U0 H0 r3 I8 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) ]; I) B# I5 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- U/ ^& B: g( x) Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 P, a  u0 Z& r7 ^0 a+ x% [/ t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( J' Z! |5 q2 ^( M/ ?1 N7 I. a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 H  W8 m2 ^* Q8 z: i0 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 T+ z9 k' {1 I; S, f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 q0 w& q! b$ e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* o- l! e& v) {+ |% m- F8 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 z6 p, B0 ?4 V! F) I; Y我请你剖开它

7 S4 J0 R' h/ _) k& A- l6 O& `3 Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>