【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 P! y/ k" k7 |  h; g+ w' D$ P) h" f歌词我附在后面。
6 X" e1 i2 P3 {+ K& x# b7 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 Z3 [' i  o7 [/ f8 c* V3 vWith the moon kissing it every night
# f: ^9 s8 k, qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 n1 e6 N7 d, z" }( oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! P2 F! I6 G; `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 e: [8 @) T2 j! f# ^I love you I love you with all my heart
2 c6 m5 C! A+ F  y/ |0 L3 l; U& pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* d6 n6 l; V1 {1 z: p5 \/ ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 K7 T  e% K6 |9 R' B  E* R7 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 Y4 Q/ I7 U1 `5 L2 P6 Y4 V2 iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 y, m6 o- I5 ?With such a tongue as yours,
- q, T  v: [. t) \* `& AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* \5 k. K1 f) `/ dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- ~2 f  U' y' U) W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( J$ N* f7 ?; T- ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( O$ r1 I( s* J* O0 v: p; ?/ g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- M6 _/ ~$ U# d8 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: l. M. \) j/ f1 ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# S7 @6 ^# ~, O8 B% ?/ p# S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 X2 ]7 f6 `7 E7 i* H7 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 M5 C' p3 t- X# I7 K* v6 z# A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! q! T: n2 h6 C- ~6 d/ I* R& y+ `: ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: [) A  c( E  X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" `& H+ [" ?1 {) R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ c# R, C# q0 I! _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 f) \0 C5 }$ b" |- H, e( p4 _2 w) j/ q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 J% _% y) M8 t1 p6 w- k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 ^! n7 Z0 t& W7 h6 x# C( P9 b7 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; g# Z* B5 \8 |$ C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 s( o( O. h/ e: x8 y5 r7 ?; J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" }4 v4 l1 q, N" `9 B2 f6 q& Q4 Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  |, y' C$ W& ]; d2 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 j# ^% {+ u& V$ ^7 v/ I1 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ [. Y1 U' K4 l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# }0 r5 l5 x2 l! N3 L. M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' o/ n+ N1 z' ^/ k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  @+ B8 L- A( u4 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  ?2 `( o, h5 y' w  w0 S. O- E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( @( ?# }/ |8 X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 G$ w6 b" j5 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 {+ a! I$ t- L* c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, _" Z0 n& j0 q, |( ~/ ]( ^) u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# q; I) d; m5 L# G2 s0 _2 D! F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>