【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 v8 U4 T, B6 K( Y8 t: W. N* A歌词我附在后面。
0 p4 i2 J/ G, {! j, ?4 F) X0 |* uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ v8 B* u; K2 _1 Q# w5 ?" }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 K/ D, b, I( K* S( ~; V. jThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ V9 z! Z. U' Y* e8 CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# t/ C5 f- v1 R8 N4 ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 n2 _( ?) g6 _& ]* y# H' pI love you I love you with all my heart
! ]7 L3 g3 p6 m) J; o& Y7 wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' b. a4 g  f( y% V6 p2 W& UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) m0 h( P$ T4 @# E9 \+ eI’m still filled with fear
+ ~0 {1 D: ^7 X/ Y; y( FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# e, p" \$ S- @( ]* Q$ U6 K1 JI regret not dying
6 L/ R' U( Z) d2 H) iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* {% z! x: E8 `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# B: x+ E) K. Q% a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! A: H# [1 M4 g3 O- [( m, J; D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 A& T; X. i& G6 f* ?) ^+ k& Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 z, k7 a, q6 {% j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 a; v! k( C5 i9 Q( P5 @2 v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 L% g$ d3 b! B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ U1 u: o) j$ E, k1 x8 t* i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ w$ |% n* j! z/ n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& p  w; h7 P# p3 d* D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) ]- u9 v$ d& a+ j2 B, ^<P>你无需担心</P>
- S/ o8 D, q: Y- J6 A. i0 }* j/ ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 g7 {0 ~$ v  r' C6 [0 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  ~  X$ V9 ~5 E$ @+ N  }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 E" m2 a6 r+ ?" ]+ i/ r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 Z6 L$ Y7 O; W* p3 ~2 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ @6 o0 P) V; ]. A7 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) [% h7 _% j) _3 O9 ?& |; `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 y4 U$ j: U- h0 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& X; s/ [( j. ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 v+ y7 z4 ?' I: }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" \, G/ \' I% Q1 @4 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% [$ g) d. j" [5 z% Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 D5 v- n. Q  u! E6 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 k; {* [3 R0 ]/ Y- O7 t* M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ t& W0 ]0 A7 w) m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 S& h" O& `& W' q5 m: R<P>I regret not dying</P>
, Y2 L5 ~4 P8 A0 h  _0 q# q4 ?2 u# m' B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ @! ]% |  e+ v; q/ P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 F: x. {# O3 Q* d6 j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 x0 L& P. k$ W4 I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 [% w7 V) l4 m0 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 j0 G% }. x% v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 {( B, w" q# y" j. J: F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 D8 L7 G6 B8 l1 u* o, \) U+ q* D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 N) J* k% }3 @; i5 b我请你剖开它

5 w  Y0 x$ Z% o: X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>