【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 l& q/ ]1 c+ }1 h' xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! {0 _( @  l+ @4 r" g, IThe sky is happy down to its soul
  P8 p' I. d# ~% n  uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- [% h/ h& c8 i2 z8 F9 g) [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ O! O! [/ z% q) Z% f6 Z' z8 q& SEvery other word you utter is love
, \  ?6 \9 X, D$ O5 _' rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 d/ o* p7 {- D, J& oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 a( l8 K+ m5 @* C: q% u  \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 N. Q" }% s, P( JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 t& ]# M0 Y/ n7 S% J8 N1 vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! [' p' ~1 b; T9 m6 @0 j; Y& aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' Q0 g. Y& n! n- yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ A* k, j6 S+ A  rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 {2 D" _. I" z) {- r! `; ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 s* a1 `" o* i! x2 p8 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 ?3 k: R4 [9 s, t8 i- B. O" X- o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ k5 ], V& e5 e7 T6 G% E1 `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; h/ C" ?1 m2 I# x, G: k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) l# i8 P0 N$ I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. m# r: M/ X$ t/ b9 z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 m" Z. `3 h* ^7 R$ a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. O9 X  f0 A6 s/ n! M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" a. v0 W+ P+ X7 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 s! A/ }6 h- S" G9 i# [$ R3 C& |# d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ u! r! N, O3 w. {<P>你无需担心</P>
# y& y5 D; \* |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 _, R; o1 q! V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# b; H# q$ {0 w8 I# ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% a" H& L# ^$ h1 S% M0 |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 ~" t  s! i, {/ W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 c$ M& E" R/ o6 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 B) B' r) [& E' Y. j4 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, \3 |4 s5 Q1 Z3 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 Q" X/ D/ h0 E; |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 v! u3 P, D4 p/ `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 D' \5 a' W) Z7 P1 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' A8 A5 D1 L% l8 L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: M- }% c) f( g3 e3 }- ]6 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 }4 d7 l$ u; t& j! F8 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; C4 @; ~6 w; A+ C4 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- F! T( i! M4 R, q- p; q: C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' Z" {4 R' \( ^* z0 Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 g$ l. x( Y* U& s; O# A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 Z& @2 E) l! j. N9 \3 d: k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>