【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: E$ W( K; x& qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 D( x# N6 t8 `: h- `Making the sky glitter like gold,
  i; ]% {' E# a+ Z6 ~, h4 e, kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 K$ B: u& x# g( l1 }8 h4 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% S0 z* s4 m2 e. X$ M( mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 q: u1 `. p8 F; {& OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. a' k' V# t- L0 a& HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. ~) N! {4 z- ~7 r% c* vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# h9 h8 r1 _. `- q+ lI love you I love you with all my heart
! H! n& \# S8 _$ b. bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: K1 g9 \3 v9 x& f0 p# J! DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& ]% C5 [) j3 V! J4 @7 ^% @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ @! U3 r) d. }4 B4 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 Q& F$ s, J. ~2 ^4 Y1 S% WI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 F) H& M" ~- H; bWith such a tongue as yours,
7 g; ]& o+ J* u- Z& }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- a0 a6 N7 l7 b6 Q' n2 h' r8 r9 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. H0 ~" C+ k0 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 j9 H; ?) J- N8 R, C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 e8 g7 _$ \9 \2 R: V! }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# q7 b  p3 P5 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! H: A; B! B2 l# J& ?- ?+ O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 l% z: F, ?8 C4 B7 \/ |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' `! m6 \4 I# c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 P. ^3 @  x% I! K) t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# Q0 ]' s& Z$ H0 O( x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 H4 V5 p9 K4 A& _. M! p<P>你无需担心</P>
* s' a) F( y7 C/ x$ a9 T4 M! q- a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ a/ n$ h: V" u; H) v: g3 F4 W5 N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 D3 L: P4 \/ [( V, [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 r$ Y& G: e, E# V4 E0 x( \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 k& t9 V( r0 ?! O1 u! I1 L4 J' T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ X3 Q" c1 I  u* a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! B3 @8 N8 F2 [2 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  t5 ~# W4 |3 h( n1 d  Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; V0 \9 ]$ c9 \9 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ h( j0 a  y4 t0 z" w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 v; j* }" K: X! r% w- d+ l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 [/ R9 x% y8 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
) y5 v  k) d- Y" K& f( C, h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, h7 R) l& w! q7 d2 Y4 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% h8 d8 v) \' y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 ]( r6 G8 `' o3 s2 W; O7 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 P, Y' t0 U* e* A" C. A9 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

5 W% O# m9 f4 t3 |- ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>