【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- O: F! U" S  w3 |# I* Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% Z' S; d$ q$ e6 `  S5 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. ~' n& p4 _8 e( b4 }: i3 }The sky is happy down to its soul
& r2 `+ c6 W8 ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, B" \  {. M- H9 \# z: `( d  yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 H$ ]4 v9 P" _I really want to know just how much you love me
/ z! j7 }! D$ eI love you I love you with all my heart
' Q- c' W- i8 P/ iNothing can compare to my love
/ ~1 W+ y" N6 d7 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: ^3 g- h8 F. }5 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# J; h/ x( X; S5 A% Z1 {I want so much to see inside your heart
9 h6 `! G5 C% Z5 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# s: H* C* P4 K$ _- I4 H  s" pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: b1 U, T" ~5 D; Q- Q! q9 f8 Q/ l" lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; P3 _8 u7 P; I# ^5 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 s2 k: m: B1 \! q! j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# E0 F$ Q+ s; w- n: ?  l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 _0 M: K  U2 y: U+ w. `! p  N7 N5 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 H) D) w3 c. V) }( T7 X( P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) u: u. M& r3 y2 I& u4 u. Z+ `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& W% a/ Q' ^( S. w4 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 J% _8 K% N. N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; q( [9 y; p' _# S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. y$ w* ?; P% g8 Y# f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 W) p" q% `; }! ?" I; H4 y$ @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% K- d% s3 M9 d+ A/ _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 _: ~% G0 u% \2 Z' c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: ?# ?- T+ ]4 a6 i* @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' n% B7 O* ]% f' v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 I6 E0 d# x2 H: p7 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! }. c# M" i# R4 H. [: C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ b3 O1 H" B" b- g8 x6 [. Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! y3 F7 f! \5 X9 z( _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  l3 c( \4 I/ Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# P3 N7 }% |9 u; I  Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- u. |! E7 [% T5 S% W. O6 c3 `9 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 H$ D, J+ R9 _" j( ^; p; d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" I0 J; M, P, }: x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 W- k0 V- @3 m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 j. T/ |0 |9 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  T  z3 W1 L6 z& g( w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: E. s- `5 F3 e( c4 ^4 m4 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>