【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ @8 u; R; J- T' i% PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ @" @- l* O6 I2 f9 b4 j+ m7 L: HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: |. [8 n3 v' B4 Y' A$ wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) W' g# o; g" }9 w' ^  l; {You needn’t fear anything
0 X  }  W5 S/ }3 P, m0 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* X: s. N0 d: ]/ }' X7 JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! |3 s* F' s- K; |- A' G& m8 LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: f' l6 f( H; b/ [. iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 M+ f2 z) c, X6 y: UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 {- {3 N2 m5 {6 F, V4 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ j9 k/ L; v3 m% }' x' T7 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) n/ W9 C4 ?  G& F# e- JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" l) V7 z, \& p0 E2 W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 X' h8 Z' F$ I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( \+ ]7 N/ t& o5 |" y( [9 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; `6 d/ @1 K/ {' C5 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 a8 }  v) \" Q# {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 o' w4 \" {4 I0 [) P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& E7 n; n9 ]5 G4 h/ w: j( k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, Y- C. q& S* B5 P4 n, y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( \6 s" J9 q8 p/ S& H/ h2 k8 z+ N2 l& R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  l' W: o: K. G. u! w- y: y% B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- u1 l4 Y8 _: E8 u" g( \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ c0 s# `" G! K3 b0 H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 S& V9 K$ E9 m% Z6 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 G% j4 v; g6 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  S. @( L9 ?/ G$ o. g2 Z; x4 @. k8 B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 x# Q0 x; x* G0 O5 K1 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' u/ c& ]) R; _* \; {0 G# s; Z' z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 u+ ]* y% g1 R. G3 ?3 {( J( Z: A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. ^* D% m8 n! D9 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# j( {7 |6 B( |' F" ~, B! b1 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* Q) W7 g% x! _2 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ s1 ]7 ~4 R! o* L1 |8 E5 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  {1 c. \0 P5 d& ~; b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 g2 q9 l9 i+ h: ?! {% j% X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  g! y) _8 v, Z. x! I" |# h9 ~; q, ?  @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& w9 L; K, o4 _& ~% K/ w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>