【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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" a+ i+ ?2 u+ ~9 c) ~8 {: w我想我從未表露出
; G* m# _. j, w1 ^" ^深藏在我心底的那句
% J+ c/ `. W5 S& _: e2 ~我愛你  

6 |4 K8 `" ?6 Y1 a) }From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

4 \8 a* `* ~/ D9 {) S6 x# c! _在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
" ~6 M2 P# s9 P( t# B6 M5 ?$ P我的心

  R; |+ s/ l1 H+ ?- `We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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' G0 J6 {: k- o縱然朝夕相處
, t% M( g, `! o! C6 z/ h還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( |8 C( n. x# g: OI would probably know how you feel
. ~# v. i; U2 u' c$ {2 \- d7 F5 \凝視著你的眼
- n; \) [; K8 C1 M3 g搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情

! k3 G0 J+ _; R6 v% i" NLove… just the word love
! m/ c) C& R& ^, n; ~' f- N( jWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
如此難以表白?
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5 E3 l$ q; C) t1 c- g# i% MI want to confess that I love you,
! X6 G, V- g- b" m; gBut I never did
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) `3 L7 ?" ~, Y6 a" _, ?愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
2 m3 z: X: E9 q5 \你將從我指間滑漏

4 M& ]6 V1 I. C* ]) l  h0 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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9 A; ]$ G: S* j* X# N- j希望今天還不會太晚
. n) Z8 u7 V! }4 Y讓我向你表白
5 @- J2 C" f: ?6 p我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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$ B& I' O$ A6 l# m* c( h$ T! Q) `不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
1 U8 O# m4 w7 V9 n9 [" x托付我的愛
收在你心裡

) E3 ~4 n; C: A2 M! A  |Love… just the word love
, u  D( d" w* \4 S5 I; ^% xWhy is it so difficult to express?

+ W5 x; s! h( u3 V3 ~9 L1 a4 l) Q愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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% M8 m6 d; [, YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
' x5 ?' I0 L' B9 X卻還是說不出來
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6 t8 w3 U* o5 B- C+ w3 w! bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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$ M/ J: E4 [- G( O6 o) V也許有一天
3 I3 y6 G( a9 _( K7 U8 G9 f你將從我指間滑漏
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, F, d, j* e1 ?. d4 iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

& }3 U4 Q7 w/ y/ v+ ^$ U1 s. N. q% r  A希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
. _$ d% ^/ t3 }! j1 X我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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% R9 x; c) c) [: Z5 s不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

1 f' r$ b) |' S# TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! w) {! n0 X1 H可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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1 i( `- p/ F3 M9 w: p6 y- E- J# ~: W可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ O/ v9 N* w4 @3 `; M* cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ D0 _$ W- }1 z9 N. BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
. T! E1 {- ]- {0 f+ l- I凝視著星空
5 K2 O* B1 \0 [0 T* }0 w我心充滿快樂

5 @8 d" B) r% V4 H) JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# K$ r  f( v; \* X( `. F* h$ T) kSeeing the sky content with its love

% x! k$ I0 p: a$ o! k/ ^% E$ n2 L月光映在我的眼底
  X6 B& W/ z- p) i. f月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
3 S/ p. p2 Y6 x6 H星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
5 P" N6 i- F4 |6 g  o害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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; }7 `' `* u8 M6 w& C) ]% W4 T! k/ q你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝

0 f3 i6 z2 T0 J7 d; XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

8 \* j; ]1 C- Z- _0 n; F3 d  E你的一言一語都是愛
! o8 v, Q  z! o( k1 b+ C我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
2 F7 u" P/ ^1 A& ^& I你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

) Z3 Q) M+ c9 i/ E  ]I want so much to see inside your heart
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* z4 q5 T5 a6 c8 F6 [2 j我想看透你的心

" ^( X5 l& O, h8 {# V- TI invite you to rip it out
: v5 b6 C" t, NTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

! E" d9 @. B7 C$ h8 ]0 G8 l我歡迎你將它打開
/ u( f9 N9 m! ~  f6 k3 ~我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
" x6 H; F8 ~; h3 c你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
; N4 W/ p- {' F" V1 E- tIt’s nothing close to 100,000

/ B  i5 ]1 X* d' e; v) i可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

& V+ x/ Y( K" f' V, o9 j  j% bWith such a tongue as yours,
0 }( I2 y5 h. B# n6 Q3 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
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$ Q8 X) j  C3 W) S# [/ u- S# i1 E: B這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

4 \# x, S& A! m  IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) M* r+ k% h+ N# d! v- q  M2 p如果我真有千百張口
" V+ C5 g' ]/ G2 D4 A& Q! \我將對你訴說
, Z/ m& n  t4 ~1 V9 [$ J4 N0 l" n千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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) w) M6 X* q9 J0 A訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

( F" u& a" b2 e是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒