【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

2 `6 I6 Q  F6 f4 tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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8 n2 \% s! y) C我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
& \/ N4 a% A# K( a4 K我愛你  
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From the first moment we met,
* E! R/ y$ o5 E0 K! Z6 h4 F- ^, JI already loved you with all my heart
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5 C1 e3 l  H& ~1 ]: |2 w在遇見你的第一刻
1 @3 u- ~6 _2 h  X1 t' u0 [你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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$ _) ?1 G8 Z, ~4 M3 [0 H7 JWe meet and talk everyday,
! i8 f8 l" c! `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

& N9 n3 F/ x5 E  m  _( r. L+ c縱然朝夕相處
& c  q. E) K; f+ S7 k& z1 d2 r還是不能肯定你的心意
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. `. Z; J/ c3 p& T0 ?  zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- ^6 i- M/ T5 r  |. u6 G" kI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
+ g: l" b! {8 A搜尋著你的魂
1 f' G/ E6 N" w3 l' y9 Q我也許就能了解
你的心情
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Love… just the word love
7 B* b7 T" x7 A  @Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
# s' e9 V) r0 K$ y; v如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
: \9 r& x8 \4 i2 T7 E' j2 K# eBut I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

  [) G/ \" W* JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

$ Z0 @- r# M" u* i: \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
0 p4 j+ W6 d" ~2 [讓我向你表白
2 v% t- L/ [, F我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

' f- F5 q2 X: T: A! p( RCan I entrust it to you?
) k* Q1 F3 s/ W5 s0 [4 IEntrust my love within your heart
* n: x! L- B: Q可否讓我托付給你?
. I! r/ W7 C1 w8 z托付我的愛
* `* y+ H0 |- y3 f. D" r收在你心裡
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& m3 G3 A( P+ Z- u' |4 ?* v1 q1 BLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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# n2 g7 U& C' n3 V, s愛  簡單一句愛
# J3 J* [2 S  C8 m% {9 k為什麼如此難以表白?

3 _$ c) e) N1 `  A8 ?I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
( t0 H$ N$ t/ k+ f/ e卻還是說不出來
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( m$ ]% B$ w/ N% X  x) \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

" e! j3 t% I$ Y# {9 J5 YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
" G1 E) x9 u- z讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

7 B% o8 ?& T  @  i/ p/ C2 VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Can I entrust it to you?
  [" j% l) D1 ~: K& c1 GEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
' l7 ^& i9 b$ N: S; \9 g托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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- |1 ^" U/ F# [对唱曲参赛译稿

- ^; r7 d9 K0 @3 T' ~& I( V0 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

+ ?* C: t0 {; S5 `8 D5 L皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
5 Z& T: p$ r4 s8 S8 [凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂
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0 f% `( r% g7 `: C5 T" ?$ qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 l7 F1 |$ U" S- HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love

  R5 U( @* n3 N. X月光映在我的眼底
8 w- b7 `2 O5 o6 |/ [0 S3 X月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
6 m0 d+ ^5 g( B  x% e6 f2 W星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
  g, j4 H( d% _7 m( v害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

  f& V) ^0 T) }$ B3 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝

. `& y' R9 U9 e. U# H( O3 H  vEvery other word you utter is love
' w8 D; W2 y% w0 _$ a+ F* oI really want to know just how much you love me
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- e; K0 z' H2 X! ]; I3 x你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

/ M3 j- |& S4 t我的愛 全心全意
0 ~! ~$ k( L( \$ G# u你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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5 h$ l( w+ i2 N! V7 p% H! qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

  x( u5 R% m6 `7 o. }" Q; @能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

8 x7 Q+ v$ t' b* MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, u) T( @  x) Y1 Z0 {/ {整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

1 N6 m7 f5 x% t! q8 rI want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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& `5 m9 N, s- {3 E+ b8 SI invite you to rip it out
& U# l) X! x! {+ \) A1 WTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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; P+ X4 r: j# f0 x) e# r我歡迎你將它打開
  Q' L( {: b0 S4 \( i' d我願意用生命
, o6 L+ o: R  d* l8 n* S8 d  G1 N來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

4 j9 ], X7 v5 Z* B7 b1 _, |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

- ]' [9 B! [# ?/ k可惜我未能以死證明
, O3 d6 `3 \9 V3 T0 \6 E& t( W, u我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
7 L  P) \! I$ U6 l& TYour speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
! B& h0 W+ w* W. o& l' r4 i我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love

% y" B! k- R- h( U- |訴說千萬個
# k% w! f  Q& m0 [愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
5 S3 A% y( |. N( f4 Sxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒