【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
$ Z, |9 Q5 y5 G5 M4 e# y# Z) {袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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4 {5 D6 ]8 [1 n) T+ ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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" L3 i" N2 n" j1 ~& X5 g/ }% H我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
. x2 |3 O* ~$ U/ Y; b8 r我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
. a: ]9 X) ?5 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

$ \# v7 J2 Y" b8 Q  ~& n6 @縱然朝夕相處
# M+ h6 u& Z4 h$ j" t還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 y* z; G6 h, Z1 |  S1 oI would probably know how you feel
# ]( j1 c$ [- V8 J$ T凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情
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. E- R+ x- R: v, aLove… just the word love
2 F" ?1 E  r8 |, vWhy is it so difficult to express?

5 H7 I; v9 J! R7 v& L" F4 _# \愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
% f; P7 Q3 c- LBut I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

7 L3 p; e# {( T& h# A! ZIf today isn’t too late,
, k" @! n6 p" I- U& S/ SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
" N+ F3 O7 U$ ^/ i7 v# h/ d8 {讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

- @: f" ~8 X  z5 D. ]' QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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2 t0 b8 ?4 ]) q* F不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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& h: n9 o# Q& }4 M; FCan I entrust it to you?
+ n; K' M& w0 F' E" G* bEntrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
( }) Y# m( {! k6 d. [1 A托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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7 S, Q% j2 D4 g5 G& _: O& _( ILove… just the word love
6 L6 B1 m5 N" _; y; jWhy is it so difficult to express?
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' S+ e3 I6 _# e* q愛  簡單一句愛
2 M2 _0 N- M9 k9 f為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
- M0 q8 s+ `3 U- k卻還是說不出來

: }3 X  g$ d# k* a, aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
- E  S; Z8 O& o- ^* d% S# l8 {你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

3 j0 \2 \" o3 s! a希望今天還不會太晚
. E8 ]1 x% [1 `3 n, d- L讓我向你表白
  ^' I8 N2 Q  J$ C我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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$ s* L/ R2 N( z& _% d* YCan I entrust it to you?
) D7 ?6 F& N, y. \Entrust my love within your heart

! Y% W- m- Z( q5 N可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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4 A7 C" F! C% }$ gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
9 k" k) M1 \- P& \托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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+ w# o' ]6 B9 y1 ^" ?- ~对唱曲参赛译稿

' J$ H/ k' Q7 t: C; _9 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 s' M6 r# F& B8 D1 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- E) `; a' X' U% m* ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
. M3 x- G/ u% k  i, q0 L7 ~凝視著星空
$ Q2 }+ \* s6 T5 M# ]6 k我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ?* `0 T5 S0 z; \& E! nThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 Z' E& I0 p* I  b5 s& PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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( }# b2 i8 B% Q9 Z月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
- A: C. ^% {4 n+ P; f5 K) i& e月光輕吻著夜幕
  I9 G3 H3 P" K星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
! B  J" d9 J7 S0 Q" }) k害怕我們的愛
7 n( c/ `& V3 h終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

) W& K/ M0 Q; V& N8 y. N( h你勿須擔心憂鬱
; m9 W; c" g7 g+ b# z: n我心充滿著歡欣
: A6 f: u9 ?: }2 }6 o( R  Q愛你
% z2 Z6 W( F. |/ h! n堅定不渝

; F) Y1 o8 Y/ c( i7 O9 h- Y- V7 kEvery other word you utter is love
/ [1 R% F3 [  H2 @+ o8 h6 s: i2 q0 k, KI really want to know just how much you love me

: c' E6 p1 R7 R# g$ S& q" z# i你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
" j9 w; j% Y4 N' R3 TNothing can compare to my love

8 ]( o5 E' |6 Z7 U7 y2 R3 z) o# }我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 M. q0 G4 _# D5 S整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

. I' h4 a3 B2 t" I6 ?6 f1 Q# S3 m我歡迎你將它打開
& K% {- j4 a/ z# K' {% @: W% {: w5 b# s' C我願意用生命
2 G1 M% i" T) l& v來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
5 F2 }" d  P. g  dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

% U: f  I% v# H; T! Y. I+ w7 a1 Q9 ~我依然滿心憂鬱
/ ^& L9 x0 o0 E& b* |* t你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
( w( e( c/ C  N* ?It’s nothing close to 100,000

+ `9 g$ H9 m$ ?5 k) ]3 ^4 M可惜我未能以死證明
6 _1 n8 c8 H, d3 A+ H) o我只有一張口
4 c2 D! e# `/ P8 T; Q遠遠不及千萬

/ J4 y: M8 u$ b+ E' o5 ?( FWith such a tongue as yours,
' L4 p/ a1 ], ]* h" Y) H( CYour speech can’t even keep up with it

: o* T1 `2 C5 V  D, R這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
8 ^% C( [. X* k# G* S: X7 w0 s我將對你訴說
千萬個心思

& Q; N) Q, S0 xRambling on about a thousand words of love
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- @" t0 @( f- G6 T訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

" g* B7 P$ J) d9 `% b; |, R是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒